Thanks for inviting me in for the premiere. I think you have a single typo in the lyrics (the word "because"). You seem to use art as a metaphor/story-"platform" for two people, that did not match/a broken relationship. The frame, you carry in the video, is interesting and may serve as inspiration for another song - not fit into a frame, framework, break out of the frame, emptiness, the work of art itself missing ... You could consider a concept "album" (or a couple of connected songs), where each song describes a phase of this relationship. A timeline, development - from love and devotion to loss and despair. There is some drama in "I ruined myself falling for the artist" ... how is the "I" ruined? Any hope for the future? It makes me curious. You even want to run away when faced with Van Gogh or Banksy - must have been tough being together with him. How did the relationship start, where was the breaking point before you ended up where you are now, in this song? One phrase/word stick out a bit and that is "acrylic (paint)". Your voice/style of expression reminds me a bit of a Taylor Swift song - I can't tell exactly which one or why, but maybe it is just this calm, floating, sensitive, female sort of storytelling. Greetings from Denmark 🇩🇰
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Thanks for inviting me in for the premiere. I think you have a single typo in the lyrics (the word "because").
You seem to use art as a metaphor/story-"platform" for two people, that did not match/a broken relationship. The frame, you carry in the video, is interesting and may serve as inspiration for another song - not fit into a frame, framework, break out of the frame, emptiness, the work of art itself missing ... You could consider a concept "album" (or a couple of connected songs), where each song describes a phase of this relationship. A timeline, development - from love and devotion to loss and despair. There is some drama in "I ruined myself falling for the artist" ... how is the "I" ruined? Any hope for the future? It makes me curious. You even want to run away when faced with Van Gogh or Banksy - must have been tough being together with him. How did the relationship start, where was the breaking point before you ended up where you are now, in this song?
One phrase/word stick out a bit and that is "acrylic (paint)". Your voice/style of expression reminds me a bit of a Taylor Swift song - I can't tell exactly which one or why, but maybe it is just this calm, floating, sensitive, female sort of storytelling.
Greetings from Denmark 🇩🇰
WHOO ‼️ I get to be the 10th Like 🙌🏼 Let's collab sometime!