Hi!! Apparently Puffy played this on her stream ! So if you're coming to check it out from there thank you so much for coming! I've written other Dream SMP songs so I hope you'll check those out too!! P.S: Apparently I sound like Puffy while I'm singing? I'm very honored
I won't be posting a video of me singing it, but do you mind if I use this as a base for a Puffy sea shanty she would sing with her crew? Even though I won't be posting it I thought I should still ask.
@@pumpkinpopstar8648 Hey! I'm sorry I'm not really comfortable with that since I own the rights to the original composition and lyrics of the song. You can definitely use it as inspiration ! Just as long as you don't take anything from the lyrics or melody
@@HatorBee Okay, Thank you for telling me! I will keep the same idea, but change the lyrics and melody. Who knows maybe I'll sing my version when I do a voice reveal, credit of course to you!
Hello there! I was wondering if it was alright to make an animatic using this song? There's a 90% chance I won't finish it because of motivation issues, and if it does get done pribably no one will see it but it's still worth asking :> Edit: of course full credit for the music will be given to you
I just kinda realized this after the second bit with Puffy finding Tommy as her ‘new duckling’, pretty much being that she abandoned Dream for Tommy instead of trying to give him proper therapy and rehabilitate him to become more mentally stable and sane due to her motherly nature, but she instead went against it after hearing of Tommy’s death. The thing I wanted her to do the most was to try and reason with Dream on his actions, or at least try to convince the others to give him better conditions and give him proper therapy, but she decided not to visit him and instead abandon him on his most weakened point; next to, or already in, complete and utter insanity with no hope of ever returning because nobody’s on his side and helping him get better Now I’m sad at the lyrics and AT MYSELF FOR THINKING THIS DAMNIT-
THIS IS SO GOOD! Also my headcannon is that Puffy was a Pirate/sailor, and docked on the Dream SMP to settle down, but she knew a lot of people there since they were her old past friends. Dream was either her biological son that she left behind when she want traveling, or an adopted son whom she felt compassion for when she came back from her journey.
Omigosh okay I tried to stick to strictly canon for this song (but I totally agree with your head canon, my friends and I talk about it all the time! )
STOP SOMEONE ELSE COMMENTED ABOUT THAT LAST VERSE TODAY AND I'VE BEEN DEVASTATED ABOUT IT..... Thank you so much tho!! I'm sorry I couldn't comfort much lol!
I almost started bawling my eyes out. That last verse really hit me. Puffy just wanted to protect what she loved and do right by the people she cared for. Ugh I cant do this I'm in class dang it haha
Damn, the quality is getting better and better with each upload. I remember your first song blue about Ghostbur, and the audio quality, multi-layered voices, and lyrics have gotten so much better since then. Managing to summarize the L'manburg story from Puffy's perspective with lines and a melody befitting a true shanty (even got some whistling in there!) is pretty impressive. Also, good work on crediting the artist in the description, that's always appreciated! c:
Ah thank you!! I've been working hard to try and make better content for you guys! And don't worry I always ask the artist before putting their stuff in my video! I'd hate to do it without their permission lol.
Thank you!! Puffy's mentioned she considers her character to be one that supports others so I really wanted to highlight her relationships in the shanty!
@@realfinder942 Thank you so much!! If I can be candid it took me and entire weekend of mixing but I couldn't be happier with the end result!! Thank you so much for the support!
Fudge what-- I thought it was premiering today-- FMSHDLSI NO! I AM DISSAPOINTED AT MYSELF FOR MISSING A TALENTED ARTIST'S PREMIER *proceeds to put the song in one of my playlist for a future animatic*
AH !! Thank you !! She did actually!! She saw it sometime during her 24 hour livestream! She didn't watch it all the way to the end but she seemed to like it a lot !!
@@HatorBee Something about the duck thing and motherly care only for that thing to become evil. Like damn that shit must be hard to go through yeah, but harder to watch. Like how does one even stop that child whom has killed and done some other f'ed up shit without hurting them and feeling like your forgoing the motherly duties you have. My soul is in a constant state of pain, thank you.
I think this would sound really good if it had a little more backing it up it’s still good just a little under whelming maybe a guitar or some base voices in the back
The last bit where it's said she'd fight for and protect her new ducklings hurts my chest with Tommy's latest stream
BARBARA NOOOO THAT HURT ME SO MUCH OMG
Hi!! Apparently Puffy played this on her stream ! So if you're coming to check it out from there thank you so much for coming! I've written other Dream SMP songs so I hope you'll check those out too!!
P.S: Apparently I sound like Puffy while I'm singing? I'm very honored
I won't be posting a video of me singing it, but do you mind if I use this as a base for a Puffy sea shanty she would sing with her crew? Even though I won't be posting it I thought I should still ask.
@@pumpkinpopstar8648 Hey! I'm sorry I'm not really comfortable with that since I own the rights to the original composition and lyrics of the song. You can definitely use it as inspiration ! Just as long as you don't take anything from the lyrics or melody
@@HatorBee Okay, Thank you for telling me! I will keep the same idea, but change the lyrics and melody. Who knows maybe I'll sing my version when I do a voice reveal, credit of course to you!
Hello there! I was wondering if it was alright to make an animatic using this song? There's a 90% chance I won't finish it because of motivation issues, and if it does get done pribably no one will see it but it's still worth asking :>
Edit: of course full credit for the music will be given to you
@@liangailm.ilagan4153 Ofc !! Go ahead I’d be honored! :3
I just kinda realized this after the second bit with Puffy finding Tommy as her ‘new duckling’, pretty much being that she abandoned Dream for Tommy instead of trying to give him proper therapy and rehabilitate him to become more mentally stable and sane due to her motherly nature, but she instead went against it after hearing of Tommy’s death. The thing I wanted her to do the most was to try and reason with Dream on his actions, or at least try to convince the others to give him better conditions and give him proper therapy, but she decided not to visit him and instead abandon him on his most weakened point; next to, or already in, complete and utter insanity with no hope of ever returning because nobody’s on his side and helping him get better
Now I’m sad at the lyrics and AT MYSELF FOR THINKING THIS DAMNIT-
you know....I would like to say that was my intention....but NOPE I CAN'T LIE BC THAT MAKES ME SO SAD BC UR NOT EVEN WRONG OH GOSH :,(
TIME TO GET #DUCKSINAROW TRENDING ON TWITTER
Haha, thank you!! I don't think we can get it trending but I still definitely appreciate the support!!
More original songs! Bring on the songwriting juices!
OH BOY i hope ur ready for an influx of SAD, JOHN
This song hits different after Tommy.... After he... Yeah
Ye a ...
HATOR THIS WAS SO GOOD!! no more ducks in a row i-
my heart 🥺
(NO IT'S OKAY SHE GOT NEW DUCKS ITS FINE!!) And thank u for coming Ali!! I'm really glad u enjoyed it!
@@HatorBee -the new duck died and nobody even knew he was alive for like a week after he was revived-
@@Ensorp1 OW?????
3:24 this aged.. well it aged
O U C H TRUST ME IK
:’(
THIS IS SO GOOD!
Also my headcannon is that Puffy was a Pirate/sailor, and docked on the Dream SMP to settle down, but she knew a lot of people there since they were her old past friends. Dream was either her biological son that she left behind when she want traveling, or an adopted son whom she felt compassion for when she came back from her journey.
Omigosh okay I tried to stick to strictly canon for this song (but I totally agree with your head canon, my friends and I talk about it all the time! )
this aged well
@@nicoquinns558 Well, I don't think any of us can really predict the future now can we? :3
@@nicoquinns558 Lol although I never imagined it to be so dark. Tho I have a new theory now lmao
Ahhh Puffy is next? I've never seen any songs about her before, this will be nice.
Same!! I kind of just wanted to write another dream SMP sea shanty and Puffy seemed like a natural fit for it!!
@@HatorBee Exactly! She is a sea captain after all, has the hat for it and everything.
I came here for comfort from the latest streams but then the last verse eye-
ANYWAYS THE SHANTY IS SO GOOD I LOVED IT
STOP SOMEONE ELSE COMMENTED ABOUT THAT LAST VERSE TODAY AND I'VE BEEN DEVASTATED ABOUT IT.....
Thank you so much tho!! I'm sorry I couldn't comfort much lol!
**GASP** I didn't know how much I needed this until I stumbled across it. Sea shanties + Puffy? Yesgood.
Ah, thank you so much!! It seemed like a natural connection so I just had to write it!
"but it seems like my heartbreak was just status up" A. My Heart. Ow. Cri
Haha, thank you !! That whole chorus rlly hurt lol
.... Is she talking about Dream? Why do I feel she is talking about Dream.
she was for the first three verses! And in the end she's talking about her new ducks!
Gotta say it again, somebody fetch me some GROG for this!
AYE AYE CAPTAIN!!
I almost started bawling my eyes out. That last verse really hit me. Puffy just wanted to protect what she loved and do right by the people she cared for. Ugh I cant do this I'm in class dang it haha
LOL I'm sorry!! But I hope you still enjoyed !! :D
@@HatorBee
Oh take my tears as a compliment haha! I love the song, it's very well written and powerful.
Yo ho yo ho The duck's Gone. oh woe :') Gosh I love your songs so much
Thank you so much !! (but omg that hurt me so so much ahahAHAHA)
I saw this on r/CaptainPuffy and this is so GOOD
Ah thank you!! I really appreciate it!!
I'm listening to this after March 1st and the ending hurts
LISTEN IT HURTS SO BAD
it hurts so much
Damn, the quality is getting better and better with each upload. I remember your first song blue about Ghostbur, and the audio quality, multi-layered voices, and lyrics have gotten so much better since then. Managing to summarize the L'manburg story from Puffy's perspective with lines and a melody befitting a true shanty (even got some whistling in there!) is pretty impressive. Also, good work on crediting the artist in the description, that's always appreciated! c:
Ah thank you!! I've been working hard to try and make better content for you guys! And don't worry I always ask the artist before putting their stuff in my video! I'd hate to do it without their permission lol.
Amazing
Thank you !!
@@HatorBee I'm not crying, nah. My eyes are just well trained waterfalls
This is adorable and such a whirlwind of emotions!
screams and cries and cries some more man u love puffy so much you did amazing
UR AMAZING
Time for a reprise given March 1st events-
NOOO it'll hurt too bad :(
I love this style of music. I’m uneducated on what it’s called but I love the layered voices that sort of replace instrumentals. this is super good!
Thank you! Songs without instruments are acapella songs! This song in particular was made to be a sea shanty though!
THIS IS SO SWEET AWEE
AH THANKS! Puffy herself is the sweetest, it was the best I could do to bring justice to her character!
This is amazing and ties so well to the relationships on the smp
Thank you!! Puffy's mentioned she considers her character to be one that supports others so I really wanted to highlight her relationships in the shanty!
This song was great!!!!
Thank you so much!! I'm so glad you liked it!!
I saw Puffy and I saw shanty and I clicked faster than Ghostbur offering you blue.
HAHA thank you !! I'm glad you enjoyed it !! :D
Please release this to spotify-
It's currently being uploaded !! You can presave it here at this link ! distrokid.com/hyperfollow/hator1/ducks-in-a-row
Yessss a puffy song!! I love this!!
Thank you!! I kinda made this because it seemed so obvious but nobody else had made it! So I'm glad people are enjoying it!!
THIS SO SO GOOD
THANK YOU!!
Aahh im so excited
Thank you!! Me too!!
This is song is so good! Gave me absolute chills!
Thank you so much for the support!! (and also tbh I'd love for her to see it but also I think I would pass out if she actually saw it lol)
Eyy this is you?! I've listened to this during class but I couldn't find afterwards! It is so fricking catchy >:D
Yea that's me lol! Thank you!! :,3
9 hours to wait
Now it's only 3! I think? Lol !
Wow! This is great!
Thank you so so much!!
ITS SO COOL AAAAAA
AH thank you !! :D
this is amazing!! :D it sounds so beautiful, and the lyrics blend so well?? it's never choppy or anything. good job :)
Thank you so much!!
I cant choose between Captains call Or ducks in row they are both so good
Why not both!! :D
AYYYYYYYYY
AYYYYYY TOAST
1000/10. This is great!
Thank you !! :DD
This is super underrated! This is defiantly going in my playlist!
Ah! Thank you!! I'm honored! I should be getting my three songs on spotify soon hopefully!!
@@HatorBee oh! I wondering if I could use this song in a video and credit you. it gave me a burst of inspiration!
@@aryannatheartist Oh I'd be honored!! As long as I'm credited plz feel free!!
@@HatorBee Thank you! :D
This is so sad considering what happened
(it really is i'm so sad, this was supposed to be MY ONE HAPPY SONG)
Cant wait to hear how this sounds
Thank you! I'm so excited for everyone to see it!!
After hearing this, all expectations were blown out of the water. Excellent work, you should be proud
@@realfinder942 Thank you so much!! If I can be candid it took me and entire weekend of mixing but I couldn't be happier with the end result!! Thank you so much for the support!
Sadly I was busy during the premier :(
But still this was incredible!!!
Ah! Thank u Blu!
@@HatorBee :))
beautiful
Thank you !! I'm glad you enjoyed it !! :D
someone show this to puffy!!!
She's actually seen it!! I dont have the vod saved but she liked it !! (she cut it off before the bridge tho which made me a little sad lol)
my goodness this was so so so lovely aaaa,, amazing job!!
Ah! Thank you so much!!
These are so good!
Thank you so much! I've got a couple more on the way if you'd like to subscribe!! :D
Hey!! I’m ur 1000th subscriber!! This is so neat lmao the shanty slaps
AH THANK YOU! I'm so hype !!
I'm so glad you enjoyed it !! And I hope you enjoy my future content too!! :D
POG?!
POG!!
ahhhh I love this!!
Thank you!!
i love this song
This is very cool 👍❤️
omg your voice is amazing! im so happy i found this :D
this is so good!
Thank you!!
Omg!!! I can’t wait!!! I am sure it will be amazing!! :D
Thank you!! I'm glad you're excited!! I'm excited for you guys to see it!!
This is amazing!
Good job!
Thank you so much Jukebox!!
How on earth are you so under rated?
I'm a small content creator haha! But hopefully soon! Thank you for the support!
@@HatorBee awww no problem! this is honestly beautiful!
Fudge what-- I thought it was premiering today--
FMSHDLSI NO! I AM DISSAPOINTED AT MYSELF FOR MISSING A TALENTED ARTIST'S PREMIER
*proceeds to put the song in one of my playlist for a future animatic*
(AH I'd be so honored!!) and it's okay, I'm glad you still came back and commented now!!
@@HatorBee Sending virtual hugs and hoping for your channel to blow up
꒰⑅ᵕ༚ᵕ꒱˖♡
Ah yes the smell of underrated
Haha, thank you!! I'm a small creator rn but hopefully soon!
This is so bootiful, am I right chat?
Thank you Pup!! I'm really glad you guys liked it!
@@HatorBee np!
Wait why the hell doesnt this have more views wha-
I'm a small creator!! But apparently puffy played it on her stream yesterday!! So that's really exciting!!
as a pirate this is great
Thank you!!
Epic!
Thank you!!
THIS IS SO OGOD ROLWHOIWRHORWHBWR WE NEED PUFFY TO REACT TO THIS
AH !! Thank you !! She did actually!! She saw it sometime during her 24 hour livestream! She didn't watch it all the way to the end but she seemed to like it a lot !!
@@HatorBee :OOOO thats pog! Your so unnderrated like wtf
@@TheRevivedCrow Haha thank you!! I'm a really small creator who started recently but I'm doing my best to learn and grow !!
@@HatorBee Ofc! Your songs are awsome! :D
something told me to cry during the end
New ducks in a row? Could this be about Tommy and Tubbo?
Tommy, Tubbo and Foolish so yes!
wooo!!
Wooooo!!!
@@HatorBee 👉👈👀 when will we be getting your amazin songs on spotify
@@bearlyastar Soon hopefully!! I'm looking into it right now!!
@@HatorBee Awesome! Also in response to the desc,, a request: Your New Boyfriend, Golden Boy, and kinda any song by cavetown lol
HYPE HYPE HYPE
Thank you!
“They broke into factions but still gained no traction”, “But it seems that my heartbreak was just status quo”, just some quotes that I wrote down
I figured it out : D
Congrats buddy
F for New Duckling 1 ✌😔
F
*_F_*
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Thought this was edelgard till i read the title and now im sad
I would never
@@HatorBee I know
Your are so good with musique!!! Can We know with wich smp members your are gonna do à song.Anyway,Y like your style 😊
1:32
Something about this makes me really sad
You know same? It was written when the SMP was a bit more optimistic than it is now lol
@@HatorBee Something about the duck thing and motherly care only for that thing to become evil. Like damn that shit must be hard to go through yeah, but harder to watch. Like how does one even stop that child whom has killed and done some other f'ed up shit without hurting them and feeling like your forgoing the motherly duties you have.
My soul is in a constant state of pain, thank you.
Whoever that one person was that disliked..
Why? Just- just why? Now I have to clear my schedule..
Jk
LOL Thank you !! It's alright!!
the girl looks like technoblade-
Haha, that's captain Puffy!
Ohhhhhhhh sorry ;-;
Not really
your songwriting style is very nicee its acapella right?? cool!
This inspired me to write a puffy sea shanty lmao
it lays in my drafts until i get a better song editing program, what do you use?
For this song I used audacity! However, now I use FL studio.
200th to comment 😘
Hi can I use your song as background music for my video? I will credit you.
With credit go ahead!
@@HatorBee thanks☺️
Hello! Could I slow your song down and put it to my channel?
Hey! I’m sorry I’m not really comfortable with that. Thank you for asking but I’m afraid my answer is going to have to be no
@@HatorBee no worries thank you ^^
I think this would sound really good if it had a little more backing it up it’s still good just a little under whelming maybe a guitar or some base voices in the back
It's acapella by design but thank you for the feedback! :3
I think it would sound really good if you kept your comments to yourself
Capt. Puffy is adorable. I'd follow her to the Locker
Wha-?
This has aged poorly
I KNOW I KNOW OW
@@HatorBee Still, it's a great song. Besides, it's not like Tommy's PERMENANTLY dead
right...?
@@r.t.7288 m a n I HOPE NOT