A Guide To Writing A Poem

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  • @daniellawu1580
    @daniellawu1580 8 років тому +2146

    "Roses are red,
    Violets are blue,
    I can't rhyme.
    Microwave"

    • @Kryx-wc1gz
      @Kryx-wc1gz 8 років тому +54

      Roses are red, violets are blue, i hate this, and i bet you do to.

    • @DarkPeter
      @DarkPeter 8 років тому +83

      Roses are wet,
      violets are too,
      my face is red,
      my blood is blue.

    • @Kryx-wc1gz
      @Kryx-wc1gz 8 років тому +50

      UA-cam is red, my name is blue, I saw your comment, its cool to.

    • @jcsm2000
      @jcsm2000 7 років тому +28

      Roses are red
      Violets are blue
      Slanderman is skinny
      So are you .

    • @theycallmesomething4532
      @theycallmesomething4532 7 років тому +95

      Roses are red,
      I have a phone,
      Nobody texts me,
      Forever alone.

  • @ND-iz6dd
    @ND-iz6dd 8 років тому +2071

    The sausage of happiness

  • @Invalid200
    @Invalid200 7 років тому +663

    "I miss the old you"
    Your words cut like a knife,
    But if you really missed me,
    You would not leave my life.
    You tell me i've changed,
    Cause i can't show a smile,
    I can't make you happy,
    So i'm not worth your while.
    If you do miss the old me,
    And now find me strange,
    Stand in front of the mirror,
    See who really needs change.
    You choose not to help me,
    You just hurt me more,
    But all i need is the friendship,
    That we had before.

    • @Invalid200
      @Invalid200 7 років тому +35

      My first poem ever :p

    • @chanshine__528
      @chanshine__528 7 років тому +8

      Great work fam! I used to have that experience tho....but keep on going with your poems!!!

    • @lukelyons7255
      @lukelyons7255 7 років тому +6

      Invalid200 honestly I think that's incredible.

    • @aliyanaowens2164
      @aliyanaowens2164 6 років тому

      Invalid200 OMG THIS IS SO GOOD!! do you mind if I use some of your lines in my poem? I’m struggling to find something and you are really inspiring!🙂

    • @lukelyons7255
      @lukelyons7255 6 років тому +9

      Create your own material, poetry isn't about copying, even if you have the permission of the writer. Use his writing as inspiration, and use other works as inspiration. It takes from your poetry if it's not at least original.

  • @ewanoxborrow1024
    @ewanoxborrow1024 8 років тому +332

    "The sausage of happiness" - We've all had a few of those in our time...

  • @canozano
    @canozano 10 років тому +548

    i will go ahead and write a poem about the sausage of happiness

  • @maham_rubab
    @maham_rubab 6 років тому +165

    I wrote this for my mom when she was sick ..
    I am nothing without you,
    I am glad that I realized that soon
    I never appreciate whatever you do
    All I have tears whenever I think of losing you
    My prayers are with you, get well soon because I am nothing without you
    I sorry for every time when I judged you 'cause I am a part of you
    I should have realized that before,
    Because to the heaven you are the only door
    LOVE YOU MOM❤

  • @SebSharma
    @SebSharma 8 років тому +938

    Went to china town
    There were too many bright lights
    Asked them to dim sum

  • @BangzHaus
    @BangzHaus 9 років тому +217

    The Happy Sausage
    by
    Mr Bangz
    A memory deep and strange
    How once upon a time I roamed free range
    Twas a pristine crystal morning
    When the angry man snatched me without warning
    Then came the swift cut of the Butcher's cleaver
    I remembered my mother's bloody face and how I had to leave her
    "To the plate" I heard as the paper wrapped around me
    And the prodding of the fork the memory always surrounds me
    I became someone's happy meal
    The sadness of their happy sausage they would never feel

  • @juannunez5767
    @juannunez5767 9 років тому +379

    "A sausage of happiness"(I giggle like a teenage girl)

    • @infamousgreed8144
      @infamousgreed8144 8 років тому +2

      Wasn't only me! I thought I was just immature...

    • @ewanoxborrow1024
      @ewanoxborrow1024 8 років тому

      Same haha

    • @agnesmantsch4725
      @agnesmantsch4725 8 років тому +3

      OK good we all laughed 😂

    • @TheToneBender
      @TheToneBender 7 років тому

      Not alone XD Also if she hadn't said it, I would have commented it :-P

    • @noemigonzalez8575
      @noemigonzalez8575 5 років тому +1

      jesus said his story was put to the eyes of his people because of his love for us. how about a true friend.

  • @shuzennn
    @shuzennn 6 років тому +154

    I still have no clue
    How to write a poem
    Yet here I am,
    Giving my best,
    Trying and failing,
    Always towards improvement.
    Better days.
    Happy days.
    Happiness.
    Sausage.

  • @talmcgee3315
    @talmcgee3315 9 років тому +110

    Oh lonely day,
    Oh, sleepless night,
    Forever are
    You in my sight.
    My life moves on
    Yet you remain.
    It is so hard
    To not be slain.
    Be struck with pain,
    Be killed by guilt.
    Even the mighty
    Would start to wilt.
    But one must move,
    Never be caught.
    As life is never
    What you thought.

    • @NoahDaBoa
      @NoahDaBoa 7 років тому +18

      tal mcgee can I use that for homework?

    • @aliyanaowens2164
      @aliyanaowens2164 6 років тому +1

      This is so good! Do you mind if I use some lines of your in my poem?

    • @thebigcheesee
      @thebigcheesee 6 років тому +15

      tal mcgee: *creates an amazing poem*
      Other commenters: Can I steal this?

    • @stamatissavvanis5862
      @stamatissavvanis5862 6 років тому +6

      My life moves on
      Yet you remain.
      It is so hard
      To not be slain?
      How about:
      My life moves on
      Yet you remain.
      It is so hard
      to be in vain
      Be struck with pain,
      Be killed by guilt.
      Even the mighty? (Makes the rhythm wither and sounds weird)
      How about:
      even the strong
      would start to wilt
      But one must move
      never be caught? /It would actually make more sense if:
      one must move
      it's all he's got/
      as life is never
      what you thought
      - happy new year!

    • @lizmama928
      @lizmama928 5 років тому

      I’m using is for homework lol thx

  • @matthewgomez371
    @matthewgomez371 7 років тому +118

    Shall I wither and fall like an autumn leaf,
    From this deep sorrow - from this painful grief?
    How can I go on or find a way to be strong?
    Will I ever again enjoy life's sweet song?
    Sometimes a warm memory sheds light in the dark
    And eases the pain like the song of a Meadow Lark.
    Then it flits away on silent wings and I'm alone;
    Hungering for more of the light it had shone.
    Shall grief's bitter cold sadness consume me,
    Like a winter storm on the vast angry sea?
    How can I fill the void and deep desperate need
    To replant my heart with hope's lovely seed?
    Then I look at a photo of your playful smiling face
    And for a moment I escape to a serene happy place;
    Remembering the laughter and all you would do,
    Cherishing the honest, caring, loving spirit of you.
    Shall spring's cheerful flowers bring life anew
    And allow me to forget the agony of missing you?
    Will spring's burst of new life bring fresh hope
    And teach my grieving soul how to cope?
    Sometimes I'll read a treasured card you had given me
    And each word's special meaning makes me see,
    The precious gift of love I was fortunate to receive,
    And I realize you'd never want to see me grieve.
    Shall summer's warm brilliant sun bring new light,
    And free my anguished mind of its terrible plight?
    Will its gentle breezes chase grief's dark clouds away,
    And show me a clear path towards a better day?
    When I visit the grave where you lie in eternal peace,
    I know that death and heaven brought you release;
    I try to envision your joy on that shore across the sea,
    And, until I join you, that'll have to be enough for me.
    For all the remaining seasons of my life on earth,
    There'll be days I'll miss your merriment and mirth,
    And sometimes I'll sadly long for all the yesterdays;
    Missing our chats and your gentle understanding ways.
    Yet, the lessons of kindness and love you taught me,
    And the good things in life you've helped me to see;
    Linger as lasting gifts that comfort and will sustain,
    Until I journey to that peaceful shore and see you again...

    • @sameerkharade7750
      @sameerkharade7750 6 років тому +5

      Beautiful ♥️

    • @goldenbadger4570
      @goldenbadger4570 5 років тому +6

      its delicate, yet stern and fruitful

    • @jessicajungibanez480
      @jessicajungibanez480 5 років тому +8

      Its a nice poem and I love how you play with the words.

    • @WolfwalkerRSC
      @WolfwalkerRSC 4 роки тому +5

      Amazing job. I could never write something like that. This is beautiful. Props to you on that.

    • @anthonysosa6616
      @anthonysosa6616 4 роки тому +2

      Loser just copied some one else Search Results
      Web results
      Seasons Of Grief, Grief Poem
      www.familyfriendpoems.com › Poems › Death Poems › Grief Poems
      Rating: 4.6 - ‎1,197 votes
      Belinda Stotler more by Belinda Stotler. Published: February 2012. Shall I wither and fall like an autumn leaf, From this deep sorrow - from this painful grief? How can I go on or find a way to be strong? Will I ever again enjoy life's sweet song?

  • @MuhammadAli-jd2ut
    @MuhammadAli-jd2ut 7 років тому +27

    “Empty Pen”
    Like an empty pen
    The world threw me out
    That’s exactly when
    A flowery angel sprout
    And just later then
    I saw her out and about
    My spirit awoken
    But my eyes had doubt
    How could you, Glen
    Have delight throughout
    Knew you since ten
    You’re all I write about
    “Fading of the Light”
    I know you are far
    But you're here
    When it is dark
    And the light fades
    Fast as a spark
    Don't you dare
    Think to disappear
    I left out a tear
    Making a mark
    Reminding of here
    At the embark
    You were a dear
    But now I daily fear
    How’d I bear
    All that’s dark
    Without you here
    “Delicacy”
    The delicacy of the heart
    Is a nonsensical creation
    Right at the start
    It breaks by separation
    Nothing is understood
    And its frustration
    Get over and it’s all good
    Being a common notation
    I have done my part
    With complete dedication
    These are three poems written by me. How are they?

    • @prativanaik6633
      @prativanaik6633 6 років тому +2

      Superb

    • @MuhammadAli-jd2ut
      @MuhammadAli-jd2ut 3 роки тому +3

      @@johnherba1168 I wrote these "peoms" 3 years ago when I was 15 years old. I didn't know much about poetry at that time so I just wrote whatever came in my mind. I completely agree with you. This cannot be considered as a poem because it does not comply with the laws of poetry. I understand now.

    • @luffytaro3307
      @luffytaro3307 2 роки тому +2

      @@MuhammadAli-jd2ut hey!? Can you teach me how to write a poem? Ik you can't teach someone but still i wanna give it a try

    • @genekendrick679
      @genekendrick679 Рік тому

      They're great, I hope you are still writing bro

  • @ShoutingParalized
    @ShoutingParalized 11 років тому +66

    The cat
    Sat on
    The mat
    xD

    • @thesitdowncomedian8162
      @thesitdowncomedian8162 7 років тому +9

      ShoutingParalized *Cries* That's beautiful 🙏🏼😌😓

    • @zararara841
      @zararara841 7 років тому +8

      A rat went by
      The rat was fat
      The cat caught the rat

    • @danxie9176
      @danxie9176 6 років тому +1

      Iconic

  • @joshray2117
    @joshray2117 9 років тому +232

    A sausage of happiness.

    • @TheBri656
      @TheBri656 8 років тому +9

      I wouldn't mind if this lady ate my sausage if you know what I mean

    • @mayoadeniyi7469
      @mayoadeniyi7469 7 років тому +4

      TheBri656 ewwwww gross

    • @TenshinhanIsKing
      @TenshinhanIsKing 6 років тому +1

      TheBri656 nasty ass nigga

  • @elijah8251
    @elijah8251 6 років тому +19

    In the day of war
    I shall rise.
    The day I rise
    Is the day I fall.
    All will march
    Into the land of ash.
    Here we fight
    And here we die.
    The sight of victory
    Is a distant memory.
    The sight of defeat
    Is the enemy’s dream.
    The time is near
    For the army of ash.
    Today is the day
    I shall be remembered.

  • @rheashah5270
    @rheashah5270 5 років тому +16

    Me: *how do you write a poem*
    She answers: *the sausage of happiness*

  • @husnabasheer7783
    @husnabasheer7783 6 років тому +11

    My first attempt :)
    she is literally a rose
    along with thorns she arose
    with all her difficulties enclose
    only her smile being expose
    with all the deep sorrows she grows
    only the light of her character glows

  • @zacherylewis2820
    @zacherylewis2820 6 років тому +13

    “The Room With Two Beds”
    The light poured blue
    over the stark steel,
    Lighting upon the magic
    liquids in there sacks
    Dr
    Ipp
    Ing out of plastic veins.
    They hold her, but only
    for a fleeting moment.
    The white paleness is not
    foreign to me.
    She lies etherized-
    A slight woman in a bloated facade
    Clinging and clawing at the edge of a great precipice.
    But who then has farther to fall?

  • @Tht1kidYouKnw
    @Tht1kidYouKnw 10 років тому +146

    why did she have to use sasuage as an example.... smh

    • @bingieboi
      @bingieboi 7 років тому +5

      she want some kinky poems

  • @nally206
    @nally206 7 років тому +34

    A connection through the ink,
    Bleeding through the thin tree skin,
    A piece of me sink,
    Into a world without a sin,
    Judge me today,
    Oh! judge me tomorrow,
    My journey to self-healing...
    ...begins with these words of sorrow.

  • @MinnieHarris3
    @MinnieHarris3 5 років тому +13

    I'm bored an alone so wrote this poem about how quiet it is please dont nick it, hear you go -
    Quiet.
    The lights hum and the wind whispers
    But it's so unbelievably quiet.
    No noise no sound no movement no...
    No Nothing.
    The clock waves in silence, barely ticking
    Half the speed, calm, gentle clicking.
    This goes on for hours, or many a few seconds.
    Rain gently pumels the ground creating a thin layer of hope.
    Quiet.
    Peacefully, the wind seems to hammer at the houses.
    The light seams to hide behind the branches
    But its quiet.
    No planes, no machines no talking, no...
    Absolutely nothing.
    Empty?
    Perhaps, with the day so busy, the morning so bright
    The night is now lonesome, no proof of anything.
    Quiet.
    I really feel it.
    Dainty taps of the leaves on the window panes, distant voices in sleepy houses.
    Bus still.
    It's so, so quiet.

  • @noahlunberry
    @noahlunberry 8 років тому +71

    I have to write a poem for homework.

    • @spicylumpia2138
      @spicylumpia2138 8 років тому +1

      lol me too

    • @Entertainment-ev6ob
      @Entertainment-ev6ob 8 років тому +2

      Noah Now same we have to talk about something social or political like Donald trump or civil rights and I don't even know where to start I haven't wrote a poem in my entire life

    • @mayoadeniyi7469
      @mayoadeniyi7469 7 років тому +1

      Noah Now yh me to I've got to do 8 in one night

    • @Hexainferorum
      @Hexainferorum 7 років тому +1

      Noah Now same i have to write 4-5

    • @lepoptm1187
      @lepoptm1187 7 років тому

      How did it go? Will you give us an update??

  • @cardinalximenez4505
    @cardinalximenez4505 9 років тому +37

    I started writing a poem about a feeling of rejection, and it turned into a really long, theatric narrative.

  • @theycallmesomething4532
    @theycallmesomething4532 7 років тому +51

    The cups in my room tend to stay, it's okay, I've never tried to get rid of them anyway.
    The cups in my room tend to pile. Guess I hadn't really washed them in a while.
    I tend to push the cups in the corner. That's how I got the nickname, "Cup Hoarder".
    Only once or twice a year, I'd make someone wash them. The fear in their eyes used to be funny, just watch them.
    Sometimes I'd actually wash them on my own, I'd put them back into the cupboard, a place they can actually call home.
    The cups are never gone for long, I'd get thirst and forget to put them back. Drinking from them feels good, it lets me forget everything I lack.
    I'd mostly put the cups in my backpack and bring them to school. Seeing the fear in the student's eyes as they wash them always made me feel cool.
    My former classmates to beg to differ. I used to find it funny when I made them wash, as if their bodies couldn't get any stiffer.
    They used to be scared of me because of the amount of cups I made them wash. If they didn't wash them right, the would be a cost.
    I still have cups in my room, obviously. Now I know the only one that can correctly was them is me.
    At this point you may think the cups are a metaphor for some kind of depression I'm casting. In reality, they're about my anger, bottled up and everlasting.

    • @ainvestmentbanker
      @ainvestmentbanker 6 років тому +6

      this was soo good idk why it wasnt at the top i really enjoyed it you're awesome ( btw would like to read some more if you have written others than this)

    • @yanguanghua8606
      @yanguanghua8606 5 років тому +5

      Love it! this on has strongest storyline!!

    • @daliladalo2521
      @daliladalo2521 5 років тому +1

      I liked that

    • @vaisriv
      @vaisriv 4 роки тому +1

      Loved it

    • @humandog3240
      @humandog3240 4 роки тому +2

      Tbh I tought cups were a metaphor of dead bodies or slaves or something

  • @albertpringle3397
    @albertpringle3397 8 років тому +23

    and this poetry !
    this is my life !
    if that all
    and it's the end
    then tell me
    how does it
    all begin?
    at the bottom
    of the surface?
    or
    at a dead-end
    rainbow?
    how i hate
    spoken word poetry
    but i love to speak
    these words
    yes this is poetry
    where it all begins
    spoken words
    shared among
    friends

    • @abdulbasit5619
      @abdulbasit5619 6 років тому

      Albert Pringle ua-cam.com/video/JXe9UOLMfOw/v-deo.html please have a review on this, thanks

  • @YURFAT28
    @YURFAT28 4 роки тому +17

    Birds, Breeze, Beautiful Things
    A bright sunflower up above
    A chemistry of cells flickering in between
    Cursed with prohibited love
    A butterfly with a sacred past
    And a moth with the presence of hope
    A connection that was meant to last
    With anxiety that could cope
    But all this was just a fantasy
    While the beautiful night starts to cry
    The light starts going down the drain
    The soothing voice begins to lie
    And time slowly starts filling with pain
    While sleep is just death being shy
    Misery will over take love
    Loves easy to say goodbye
    Until a butterfly comes by again So I’ve been working on this for a while now, any thoughts?

    • @DaylightDetective
      @DaylightDetective 2 роки тому

      Since nobody has shared their thoughts and it's been 2 years.. might as well share mine because I feel bad.
      ITS ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC! YOU'RE REALLY GOOD! (no type of exaggeration, I really do think you're really good.)

    • @fredrickanele5563
      @fredrickanele5563 2 роки тому

      Damn! That is very good. Please don't stop writing.

    • @zedreirevelo82
      @zedreirevelo82 Рік тому +1

      Ohh so it doesn't need to rhyme sometimes

    • @Madchemist002
      @Madchemist002 Рік тому

      "While sleep is just death being shy" is such a nice line, though I feel like the main idea of the poem is disjunct and not entirely present. Good use of language, however.

  • @shubhambali7297
    @shubhambali7297 4 роки тому +1

    She was so simple and yet so majestic.

  • @amreenfatima6398
    @amreenfatima6398 6 років тому +5

    "It's the past"
    It's the past that holds me back from the future I dream for
    It's the past that doesn't let me forget my fears
    It's the past that makes me drown into the pool of emptiness
    It's past that brings back memories
    It's the past that I hate
    It's the past that reminds me of the old me
    It's the past where it all started
    It's the past that made me what I'm today

  • @mrfunnybones7198
    @mrfunnybones7198 7 років тому +40

    I am alone here
    Rich yet poor
    I have nothing to fear
    For ive seen the roof and the floor
    I am a laughing stock
    Laughing outside dead inside
    My heart is really broke
    For i have no one to sit beside
    Many friend in social media
    Yet I am alone
    Every news in wikipedia
    Yet I am naive as a stone
    Free me from the curse
    Help me hence
    Avoid filling my purse
    Help me jump the fence

  • @MaiqTheLiarProductions
    @MaiqTheLiarProductions 4 роки тому +1

    A raincloud never goes
    it only grows
    it grows bigger
    and even bigger
    but in the raincloud
    there is a happy cloud

  • @11pandaprincess
    @11pandaprincess 6 років тому +6

    MY BEAUTIFUL BROKEN BUTTERFLY 🦋
    oh butterfly,
    my beautiful butterfly,
    why must you be so sad?
    i see it in your eyes
    you hold a lot in, which is not very wise
    oh anxiety, i know the feeling
    it’s uncontrollable
    when you have a lot on your mind
    you hope others don’t see,
    but i’m not blind
    you are my butterfly,
    my beautiful butterfly,
    your wings are your beauty
    but yet, you can’t see them
    please open your eyes
    oh my poor butterfly,
    i know how this feels
    I wish to help you,
    but you have a wall up to help you deal
    oh my poor butterfly,
    my beautiful broken butterfly,
    i hate this is what you feel
    i sure hope you heal

  • @mariat5134
    @mariat5134 6 років тому +4

    “Moses” by Estephanie
    The sound of a river
    Now slowly I’m drowning
    The sound of wind
    Now the whistles have spoken
    The sweet whispers of sorrow
    The pain of everything has now followed
    Running away I take it all in
    The pain cannot compare to the tranquility of your win
    You crushed it all up and still expect me to film your torture
    Nothing can compare to the sickness that swallowed me
    I take you in like a sunset in June
    But I don’t use you like you did
    I forgive you and all is right within

  • @mamaobama7132
    @mamaobama7132 9 років тому +45

    What?? sausage of h- never mind, you already know what I'm gonna say

  • @dutchvanderlinde2484
    @dutchvanderlinde2484 5 років тому +2

    Self-Pity is a sentiment that is felt
    When an agonizing delay arises
    It is like an unfathomable mental pelt
    That engulfs the soul, and it all comprises
    Of one’s incapacitation to push through all the dilemmas
    But once a slight comfort is reached, that one moment can be enough
    To break through the phycological hindrance of productivity
    And re-awaken the being as a recipient
    To the gift to surmount
    What before they could not expound

  • @Spencerspeaksss
    @Spencerspeaksss 6 років тому +11

    Heroes we never forgot.
    Our heroes fought
    Our heroes strived
    Our heroes rot
    Our heroes died
    Be struck with pain
    Be struck with guilt
    Even the mighty
    Would start to wilt
    I love my country
    For what we endured
    Our heroes made sure
    Our survival was ensured
    Now we have freedom
    After the war we fought
    But it’s all because
    Of the heroes we never forgot

  • @kurdish570
    @kurdish570 3 роки тому +3

    My first poem
    . To my friend.
    I don't know if you remember me
    But I do
    I miss you
    I feel empty standing on my knees
    Waiting for you to come
    Or maby I'm to dumb
    Cuz you may never come
    Are you happy with your New friend
    I hope your friendship never end
    Cuz I just wante you to be happy
    I don't care what will happen to me
    I heard you were crying last night
    so I woke up at the midnight
    I talked to the moon
    Couldn't sleep until noon
    But them someone called me
    They said they are worried about me
    But I didn't care
    Cuz they will forget me too
    Just like you
    Just tell me you are not alright
    I promise to listen to you all night
    You can lean on my shoulder
    I will be there for you
    And walk though the darkness with you
    But I know when we reached the light
    You will leave me and I will be alright
    Cuz I'm used to loneliness
    I'm used to walking alone in the darkness
    You forgot me to soon
    Don't you remember when we werw looking at the moon
    And you said I miss you
    You forgot me to soon
    Don't you remember hugging me
    Or fighting over me
    I miss the old days
    When we were together
    We thought our friendship will las forever
    But it was just a dream
    A sweet dream
    but it's alright
    It's not a dream actually it's called life
    And Life is a roller coaster
    One day you will reach the sky
    And one day you will fall in the ground
    Whatever thanks for making a best memories in life
    But please I need you so don't hide

  • @riezelreyes8568
    @riezelreyes8568 5 років тому +3

    I wrote this poem for you to read
    To beseech your wisdom to be freed
    From the shackles of fear that should be depose
    So you can run where you suppose
    Shut those illusions whispered in your ear
    For the rawness of you psyche should be bare
    Sing the words that you once resist
    Let your voice be heard as I insist
    I wish this poem reach your soul
    Spread like a wildfire through your wall
    To let it warm even the coldest abyss
    How I wish the sense shall not miss

  • @cielange1712
    @cielange1712 8 років тому +7

    the night is so dark
    like my mind for the law
    i think about the world
    and know i only get hurt
    ~I AM A SUPERSTAR!

  • @milkshakes7758
    @milkshakes7758 7 років тому +39

    Roses are red
    Violet are blue
    I can't write poems
    No matter what I do

    • @stamatissavvanis5862
      @stamatissavvanis5862 6 років тому

      Roses are red
      violets are blue
      and if you can't
      who cares what you do? :P

    • @Jeffrey.__.
      @Jeffrey.__. 6 років тому +1

      @@stamatissavvanis5862 i care 👌

    • @stamatissavvanis5862
      @stamatissavvanis5862 6 років тому

      @@Jeffrey.__. I give you an F for supporting dull poetry :P

    • @Ladyblue7620
      @Ladyblue7620 5 років тому

      I thought u just did it.

    • @doyoubelieveinmagic4244
      @doyoubelieveinmagic4244 4 роки тому +1

      Roses are red
      Violet are blue
      You should still try
      Till you slay
      Cuz neither i am, cant
      But still do what i lack

  • @idunoh1902
    @idunoh1902 4 роки тому +1

    Oh the loneliness, oh the pain.
    All the constant emotion with no gain.
    Always questioning if you are enough.
    Always wishing you were a bit more tough.
    Knowing you are not alone.
    Yet feeling alone in every bone.
    Surrounded by those that say they care.
    Yet feeling almost too unworthy to bear
    They give you the kindest of words with the purest of intention. Yet your dark and twisted mind denies them with its constant intervention.
    Deep down you know hope can be found. But you are always left wondering when it will come around.
    But then it comes, sudden and surprising. You can finally see the sun rising.
    The problems of old are washed away. Again you can see the light of day.
    The psyche of the brain abandons it’s once destructive views. It finally sees through its own dark ruse.
    You allow yourself into happiness’ embrace. In the end you can find the joy in knowing you have run your race.

  • @febijaimon7466
    @febijaimon7466 10 років тому +18

    Sausage of happiness!

  • @chloebaras1874
    @chloebaras1874 7 років тому +1

    I have been a poet for six months and i enjoy it (: Here are some poems i write, some are depressing, some are joyful.
    Looking up to the sky
    What is life, and why?
    Why do we lie?
    Why should we try?
    Then comes pouring rain
    Which swiftly ends up down the drain
    Like tears that don't stain
    But come soon and later again.
    Little know depression
    An unpleasent dimension.
    Of a dark Earth
    A cold burning hearth.
    The Weight and pain on your mind
    There is no action that says kind.
    There is a bluebird
    Which is often heard
    Singing a sweet tune
    As beautiful as a full moon
    It sings all morning
    Joys the mourning
    You can never be alone
    And she is not a clone.

    • @venus8784
      @venus8784 2 роки тому +1

      That's lovely..

    • @venus8784
      @venus8784 2 роки тому +1

      Can you write a poem for me? If I give you a topic pleaseee? ?

  • @covereddonuts1279
    @covereddonuts1279 4 роки тому +2

    Human conditions
    A moral conscience always seeks the “right” way
    Whether it be in actions or thoughts or words to say
    One thing is certain throughout it all
    Not everything will be precise moral call
    A Loving heart will always choose
    And give up all the things it has to lose
    Whether it be a love for one or even a materialize thing
    It will give in for a lick hope for the unrealistic means
    A broken mind will always feel pain
    The hope of losing its trauma is always in vain
    Maybe it will see the bright light up above
    Or the dark depths of nothing, will it succumb
    A curious eye is always to blame
    For all the things that was dealt through serious pain
    May a locked mouth be unable to do much
    To collect all the filth and dirt left unable to discuss
    All theses things may be an allusion
    To all of our human thought and or confusion
    May it be known that these feelings are brief and inconsequential
    As everything matters not, nothingness is inevitable
    * I just fixed this up but it’s my favorite poem even if it is boring*

  • @abaxis-olathe4387
    @abaxis-olathe4387 6 років тому +4

    Just finished up a poem do ya’ll like it?
    Perfect story is a story achieved by mistakes
    Perfect humans cannot express their feelings
    Perfect people are people filled with pain
    Perfect intelligence is only a myth
    Perfect score on a test is a statistic of lies that will change
    Perfect fire cannot burn
    Perfect lie cannot last
    Perfect friend is your future enemy
    Perfect emotion is not an emotion
    Perfect picture is a picture drawn by grief and sadness
    Perfect is a word to describe what is unachievable
    Perfection cant change your life
    But mistakes can

    • @venus8784
      @venus8784 2 роки тому +1

      I loveee it .

    • @josephinemateo2553
      @josephinemateo2553 2 роки тому

      This is one of the best I’ve read in this comment section.

  • @valentinadoloeras7564
    @valentinadoloeras7564 10 років тому +6

    Thx for the advice I really need it for school :D

  • @arushimalhotra3165
    @arushimalhotra3165 6 років тому +2

    I wrote this some months back:
    *WHY JUST WHY?*
    My brain orders me to get over him
    My heart laughs
    My brain says it's a just a phase, you'll eventually forget him.
    My heart laughs even louder
    My brain says you don't care about him
    My heart laughs louder and louder and falls, for him.
    I shatter into pieces. I cry my heart out.
    My brain says he's taken
    My heart says I am happy for him then.
    My brain repeats HE'S TAKEN, this time louder and clearer
    My heart says I don't want him to be ours. But can he not pretend to care.
    Then my heart shouts
    If he cares, he won't ignore us.
    If he doesn't, WHY DOES HE LIE? WHY? JUST WHY?
    Oh my brain!
    How can I forget him?
    Even if he doesn't think about me even once,
    I can never stop thinking about him.
    HE IS MY EVERYTHING,
    MY EVERYTHING

  • @coltranewashere
    @coltranewashere 9 років тому +13

    Sausage of happiness lol. Good video, simple, and well executed. The womens a poet, shes expressive about her love of the sausage

  • @nemo_cc
    @nemo_cc 6 років тому +2

    I watched them grow
    As I stood below
    No courage was left
    No courage to show
    I hear them talk
    I heard them speak
    About the things
    That make me, me
    I tried to stop
    I saw no end
    I finally found
    The root to them
    I pulled and pulled
    Tired I grew
    This didn’t slow me
    Not this time it would

  • @bazzarecords6683
    @bazzarecords6683 8 років тому +27

    i know when my sausage feels happiness ahaha

  • @eszmeraldajazminkovacs4418
    @eszmeraldajazminkovacs4418 6 років тому +2

    "The sausage of happiness." I am laughing so hard on this sentence. XD
    Best poem idea ever

  • @rainbowpoems443
    @rainbowpoems443 4 роки тому +1

    This is one of the poem on rain and a conversation with the earthly man….
    And here is the poem-
    *Address to the Rain God*
    I sat gravely before the window,
    watching the dark that laid before me
    profoundly thinking for a moment or so,
    about the Showery world that I could see.
    And up the heaven, I looked henceforth
    Towards the paradise, till the eye's sought
    'What makes him rain such?'
    'Brutish he is' is what I thought.
    Above the world I looked far end
    And beneath came the God of Rain
    Thundering the skies and the heart of men
    stiffening the shower that had went insane.
    I stood there aquivering with fear
    for he stood in front of me
    and asked me for my remembrance
    knowing well that it is he who caused it.
    Politely I said with tongue no less,
    "This world is beautiful with creations unparallel"
    But the unstoppable rains have made such mess
    Why don't you stop that you shall!
    'It is you the humans', replied he 'who pray for rain'
    The rain that quenches the Earth's thirst
    Deepening the swift streams that long last
    And then calling for it to return to the den.
    And Oh! the inner me felt deafeated
    But I stood there losing no faith
    But that was prime, this is subordinate
    "Has the thirst, vanished not yet!"
    The rain has caused havoc on crust
    The temporary world is biting the dust
    Fields overflowed by the tyrant rain
    'Floods and rain', are they same?
    The king of splashes was pleased with me,
    At least what I thought from what I saw
    And replied with a strong voice
    With the winds added to his draw.
    Glad are you, jolly are all,
    Happy are you when the rains do fall.
    Irrigating the fields," the mother earth weeps
    For the joy, that water beneath seeps.
    The joy lasts shorter do remember,
    For nothing lasts Forever
    and sorrow after joy is a chain of cycle
    Each in it's time is completely great
    So he told and so he went
    Leaving an impression that long lasted
    Shaken was I and ended up in faint
    Oh the conversation was just what I dreamt.
    The story still doesn't end here and I ain't,
    For it teaches that nothing is permanent.
    Time heals everything, just wait for the day
    For joy and sorrow both are great.
    Joy comes after Sorrow, misery after happiness
    Just don't look behind the eternal fence.
    Life is not a bed of thorns, wise men say,
    For a man on alms is a king next day
    Here is the link ua-cam.com/video/kTBUKLOasr8/v-deo.html

  • @rararaka2348
    @rararaka2348 6 років тому

    at times.
    he made me feel so sick that
    i didn’t know what it was like to just be happy with myself.
    showed him every aspect of the universe
    and all he showed me were emotions that i didn’t need
    like guilt and anger and sadness to high a degree.
    its like
    the more i fell in love
    the more and more i hated time.
    the first cut to my wrist
    was sucked up by a black hole called his mind.
    im flattered that i can’t fix him but
    can he even fix himself.

  • @johnmarkaunario3803
    @johnmarkaunario3803 6 років тому +3

    water of loneliness
    flowing all over my veins,
    thinking of how to get rid of it,
    finding someone to help,
    but no one can.
    you might drown if you take it seriously,
    but you might float if you find someone to make you happy,
    if you wanna fight loneliness,
    you need to find some happiness.
    ps. this is my first time, i need some tips

  • @thecoffeetable8420
    @thecoffeetable8420 6 років тому

    It was nice listening to you mam. I necessarily don't write my poems in rhymes... What I learnt from your video is, poem is all about sound. I don't recite my poems loudly and clearly. I read it fast and not recite it rhythmically... Thank you so much

  • @taetaetata9106
    @taetaetata9106 5 років тому +2

    This is helpful for us who wants to write a poem, thanks a lot😍😂✨

  • @alyssabest1804
    @alyssabest1804 11 років тому +3

    I

  • @mrdarky3377
    @mrdarky3377 6 років тому

    Here it comes to the petal of mind,
    it jumps ahead whenever it climbs,
    it all ends with humongous disobedience,
    but seldom to know it starts with skepticism.

  • @maryam-vj7ho
    @maryam-vj7ho 5 років тому +2

    HOW I FEEL
    Can't explain how I feel
    It's like I'm choking on my words
    Drowning in my feelings
    My body feeling numb
    I can't handle this feeling
    Your words repeating in my mind
    Why am I like this
    Why do I ruin the best thig I have
    Why am I to blame for all our fights
    AND why am I so scared
    Sacred of loosing
    Scared of letting go
    Scared of being my self
    And scared of my past
    See I was always put down
    I was never enough
    I was never too perfect
    I can't stop this feeling
    I can't stop beating my self up
    Calling my self names
    But I am not to blame
    When it was always the same
    I need someone to except me
    Except me as I am
    When I can't except myself
    Love the true me
    When I can't love myself
    I know there's nothing wrong
    But my mind won't stop
    Telling me u will leave
    Because I'm all messed up
    I know I am your pair
    I know I am yours
    But please understand
    That I am in so much pain
    And I don't know why
    So please hold my hand
    Show me that your here
    Through all my struggles
    Show me good i near
    Because I can't heal alone...
    Maryam c.

  • @juanapalacios4045
    @juanapalacios4045 5 років тому

    Thanks for the tips,I hope to put them to good use and do my best.

  • @nurhusna1407
    @nurhusna1407 4 роки тому +5

    *Flower of jealousy*
    It was suppose to be you and me
    Through dark and light
    Through day and night
    But yet you sow on another seed
    Water and shine it
    While letting me go unattended
    Like a weed on the street
    Oh I have bloom certainly
    But instead of love
    It was jealousy.

  • @run4fun682
    @run4fun682 11 років тому +22

    Happy saussage was angry that morning

  • @asadpuppy1259
    @asadpuppy1259 4 роки тому +1

    I chuckled at " the sausage of happiness".

  • @KINGBoRiCuA51
    @KINGBoRiCuA51 10 років тому

    she has a good explanation yo look around and start with wat ever u see thats cool n keep on from there helped me a shit load thx

  • @venus8784
    @venus8784 2 роки тому +1

    A day you laughed through tears. Can y'all please give me some lines to write on this topic?

  • @SarahCrookall
    @SarahCrookall 7 років тому

    Great guide. Completely agree about writing by hand. It also activates more parts of the brain!

  • @chandraschannel6166
    @chandraschannel6166 4 роки тому +2

    Here’s my first poem
    Hope you enjoy
    “Sitting under the sunshine
    Staring at what could’ve been mine
    Thinking about what i had lost
    Telling myself that it’ll be ok
    but also blaming myself for it
    It wouldn’t change anything anyway
    It Feels like a grief
    Of a loved one
    Doesn’t feel real
    It feels like a dream that i cant escape
    It doesn’t feel right
    But i try to convince myself that it will be.
    I keep blaming myself for it
    For everything
    I tried everything
    All that i could
    It still wasn’t enough
    The memories haunt me
    Everything reminds me of that day
    Every step that i take reminds of what i fear most
    I should’ve known better
    Done better
    So it would be different
    So that none of this would happen
    Hoping that telling myself this would make me feel better
    That the guilt would suddenly go away
    But it doesn’t
    My dreams follow me everywhere i go
    It’s a daily struggle
    ,That never ends
    Thinking to myself that none of this will worth all the
    Pain
    Suffering
    And the Guilt
    That if it could all end peacefully
    I would
    But I know i have to keep fighting
    I know I can’t make it like how it used to be
    I know that it wont ever be the same
    It never will be
    But i have to do the least that i can
    I hope one day i wont have to like with the guilt anymore
    And be set free from my constant nightmares
    Even though i know i don’t deserve to
    I hope i can move on
    Live my life how i used to to.....
    When my life was normal and boring
    But at least i was happy
    I wasn’t under constant fear
    Feeling unsafe
    Or being chased by my nightmares
    I just hope that I’ll have what I’ve lost
    No matter the time or effort
    I’ll find it ”
    - Sakura

  • @yeeeety6730
    @yeeeety6730 5 років тому +3

    Running down the same road
    Being stopped at the end
    No matter how fast I go
    I never get too far
    They always catch me at the bend
    He tells me to get in the car
    Then the tapping of her shoes
    The smell of a home cooked meal
    Movement in her wrinkles
    As she's explaining how I feel
    I feel a lecture coming
    I try my best to zone out
    But I'm never too convincing
    She can tell I'm not really listening
    So she begins to shout
    The cat will run outside
    The dog won't wag his tail
    And I'll keeping hoping to hear what's fair
    But I know that never happens
    And on the the other side of the house
    My father will sit in his chair
    Looking out the window
    Turning up the TV
    To drown out all her screaming
    And from the street my house looks grey
    Inside it's full of dreaming
    Finally I'll won't have to blend
    Dreaming of how
    Just one day
    They won't catch me at the bend

  • @pradeeptandon9817
    @pradeeptandon9817 2 роки тому

    I liked the way you explained the things.

  • @promeni9132
    @promeni9132 2 роки тому

    Wall to wall, the concrete climbed.
    Highs and lows
    that which flows
    bricked to my mind.

  • @Rimurishorts
    @Rimurishorts 6 років тому +1

    love you
    Give me a clue
    To love you
    Express in art
    That you are my heart
    All sky are blue
    I wanna love you
    Don't look back
    Don't let you take
    If it is I will be death
    You're all mine
    I'm all yours.......
    You should dare
    To love me again
    Actually this is the first thing I wrote myself .......bt still I Love it very much and I think it is the good poet or writing of my own

  • @mirror2738
    @mirror2738 5 років тому

    Great thanks for your big advice. Yes You're right, I have to follow my feeling, mood first, not logic, pattern..

  • @Mr-Gh0stYourPalTillTheEnd.
    @Mr-Gh0stYourPalTillTheEnd. 6 місяців тому +1

    I tried so I apologize if this is badxd
    Secrets’ that were untold never thought it would be told.
    Holding your hand with a gentle little squeeze though you were holding another hand that was never mine
    I kept it slow, slowly but surely wasting my time.
    I thought and thought every little day that passed by.
    Each time when I remember that day, it brings back the memories that we both made.
    We met once again after years of remaining on this earth because I felt the one to blame.
    I said my words to you, reaching for your forgiveness.
    You already know that I left you with no remorse.
    You're too kind to this world.
    So why do I still feel ashamed to this day?

  • @glittervlogs6023
    @glittervlogs6023 6 років тому +3

    *MADE*
    she was broken,
    For the choices she MADE.
    here hands were beautiful,
    Enough to create and destroy,
    But She forgot,
    Here hands weren't canvas,
    For the scars she MADE.
    she wasn't perfect,
    But She tried everyday,
    And she became responsible,
    For the disaster She MADE.
    She alone to herself,
    Cried everyday,
    So that something would change,
    For the conclusion She MADE.
    forgiving was her principle,
    Love was her nature,
    She died there in sorrows,
    And lived never once,
    For the life she MADE.

  • @starsubliminals630
    @starsubliminals630 6 років тому +1

    I volunteered to participate the poem writing competition. I am finding ways to get better .

  • @ezrawings5613
    @ezrawings5613 7 років тому

    "A sausage of happiness", 😂😂 It was the funniest thing I heard today.

  • @bradmiller3396
    @bradmiller3396 6 років тому

    The happiness of the kettle was shattered by it’s jealousy of my sausage.
    Yours.Truly

  • @rudyolfschiermeister8167
    @rudyolfschiermeister8167 5 років тому +2

    Roses are red
    a word is masses
    YOU MADE COOKIES FROM GRANDPAS ASHES

  • @anuradhaagrawal1656
    @anuradhaagrawal1656 7 років тому

    wow! This was really very helpful. thank you so much

  • @diegovera1353
    @diegovera1353 5 років тому +1

    And the end of the tunel it lies
    It feels so hard to reach and my I feel mi skin falling a part
    It breaks and cracks as I run
    The air starts to sharpen
    In my hands I notice the weakness
    And I feel like I can see it far away
    Just standing there, the sausage of happiness

  • @POOTABEAR
    @POOTABEAR 5 місяців тому

    Poem name: Midnight Blue
    [Stanza]
    I don’t wanna die, but I don’t wanna live, but I do
    I don’t wanna fly, but I don’t wanna land either, but I do too
    I don’t know what it is whether it be the raging at nothing from Coke or whether it be the crying in my room for another chance to fly with the eagles and touch heaven again.
    I just don’t know and I’m afraid that someday I won’t even know myself anymore
    I’m afraid that one day every Bible verse I read like psalms, Corinthians, or Romans will one day fly my mind and escape out the door where all of the bygones may lay.
    I’m afraid that one day I will forget you and forget myself too
    [Stanza 2]
    There’s a wall with a man inside
    Aiden, Valentino, Acilia, Alice, Divine and I, all try to break the wall to figure out who this strange ethereal man is.
    The fireflies are crying as they’re trying harder and harder to forget it all
    Los Angeles is crying as he’s dying
    Meanwhile Aiden, Valentino, Acilia, Divine and I break the wall
    Only to realize that that man is me
    [Stanza 3]
    Everything that my rage sees is red
    Like the red wine, red Mercedes, and cherry lime that I cherish with all my heart
    Deep down I’m still that little boy that I used to be; sweet to the core but dull on the surface
    It’s just that now, the sun rises and covers it with a heavier blue that mankind has not ever put their hands on yet
    [Verse 4]
    Valentino, please, stand me on my tippy toes as the night covers up the woes
    Seal the sealed bruises even more and cherish them with pink bows
    Because as time and time goes on I realize I can’t do everything with one fist and will eventually have to use more fists
    To the crows, please don’t add me to your list of darkness
    Let the doves shine me so bright, ethereally, and angelically
    Let me be free, let me be a passion
    As I am a brother of two, a son of two, and a friend to who
    As I travel back to the heavens, I say farewell to my woes and breathe in the midnight blue

  • @sorrybro136
    @sorrybro136 6 років тому +22

    I am a boy
    I used to play with toy
    But now I like boys
    At night i still play with toys
    And what do i play ?
    Well u guessed it am gay

  • @abdhulhackul2620
    @abdhulhackul2620 5 років тому +1

    Roses are red
    Violet's are blue
    I have a sausage
    And it's my happiness too.
    Sometimes it's active
    Sometimes it dies
    But through patience
    It continues to survive

  • @p4vzyofficial924
    @p4vzyofficial924 6 років тому

    thank you for that wonderful advice 😊

  • @zorn1745
    @zorn1745 5 років тому +1

    A dark future is yet to come,
    Upon this earth, where we lay,
    A home for all, but not for long,
    As death will arrive, we fade away.
    With man made weapons and guns,
    And careless decisions we make,
    Our earth is edging near,
    To an end and deathly fate.
    Two thousand years of life and death,
    Of fights and battles and wars,
    All settled now, peace has shone,
    But too late we care, too late we warn.
    A problem shown, unable to change,
    Animals die, none left at all,
    We don’t care, we are the rulers,
    Unless there’s a human death toll.
    Our earth has peaked, no way but down,
    The bell will chime when all is gone,
    It’s clear to see, we are the cause,
    That words can’t change, not even a song.
    Actions speak louder than words,
    Although this poem won’t change anything,
    Our actions won’t do, our home is gone,
    We’ve lost it all, all and everything.

  • @roger.Rahul3
    @roger.Rahul3 4 роки тому +1

    I want to write
    No idea where to began
    It's just a piece of paper
    In which I'm losing again and again
    It's a cloudy day still hot as summer
    Beating my heart loud, this nasty drummer
    I felt so vulnerable inside
    When you caught my sight
    I can tell you everything I feel
    Everything I felt
    it was a Chilly morning
    When you stole my heart
    Without a warning
    I want to know
    Did you're heart also skipped a beat
    When you saw me with yourr brother
    Preet.

  • @peymansadeghian
    @peymansadeghian 6 років тому

    your conversation is like a poem !

  • @ronaldbell3788
    @ronaldbell3788 2 роки тому

    The best poetry IMHO is verse that naturally flows from one's mind, not that which is forced. But this is, of course, subjective and admittedly my particular view. My best poems (again, being subjective here) seem to flow from the ether and are somewhat mystical in a sense.

  • @antoniobasilanii5452
    @antoniobasilanii5452 5 років тому

    Nice video, it inspire me to write more.

  • @hopefullife5145
    @hopefullife5145 5 років тому

    You are brilliant, can you tell me what kind of word to use?

  • @nicoco2206
    @nicoco2206 4 роки тому +1

    I'm trying to encourage my sister to write poems

  • @PeacefullPath-8
    @PeacefullPath-8 5 років тому

    Writing is so magical

  • @childofolivares8754
    @childofolivares8754 6 років тому +1

    Lol why is the sausage of happiness so funny

  • @louiseybanez5519
    @louiseybanez5519 5 років тому

    The Dance Under the Lune and The Stars
    The effervescent lune shines upon us
    Hand out in invitation,
    "Shall we have the dance of the decade?"
    The stars create the dance floor;
    The lovely lune as the spotlight,
    And hands over hands,
    Two dance throughout the night.

  • @momcmahon397
    @momcmahon397 6 років тому +7

    *i am the author of creative writing for dummies* she said with no emotion

  • @animeobsessive7099
    @animeobsessive7099 7 років тому +1

    I look around
    Without a sound
    The silence filling my ears
    I hear water
    drowning my fears
    I can see others
    standing rightfully
    in place
    While I stand in
    an empty space
    They all have reasons
    They do as they do
    For I am stuck here to
    Never be like you
    .
    .
    .
    .
    Idk.....I'm bad at this.......

  • @Madchemist002
    @Madchemist002 Рік тому

    If I could fly
    I could reach mountaintops
    I would soar high into the heavens
    Past the clouds
    Past the sky as it forms a gradient to black
    Past the stars
    I would soar to the heavens
    But why stop there?
    The universe is ever-expanding
    Infinite void, with yet somehow a limited reach
    Everything drifts further apart
    But we don't have to
    If I could fly
    I would rise to the heavens
    But I would return
    From high above
    Because home
    Is where we can truly feel love

  • @cookiemonster3147
    @cookiemonster3147 7 років тому +2

    The flower of jealousy
    was bloomin in my heart
    when I thought I cought you lying.
    I adored you from the start.
    The kattle of rage
    was boiling in my soul.
    I grabbed my bags and drove away
    when we couldn't fix the hole.
    I bought me a bottle
    and took a firm shit.
    Along came the sausage of happiness,
    that was the end of it.
    .

  • @MrAjc44
    @MrAjc44 4 роки тому

    The Sausage of Happiness
    Keeps me up at night...

  • @talmcgee3315
    @talmcgee3315 9 років тому +2050

    Oh lonely day,
    Oh, sleepless night,
    Forever are
    You in my sight.
    My life moves on
    Yet you remain.
    It is so hard
    To not be slain.
    Be struck with pain,
    Be killed by guilt.
    Even the mighty
    Would start to wilt.
    But one must move,
    Never be caught.
    As life is never
    What you thought.