7/10, enjoyed it very much actually, pretty good composition, idea and it's sound, but has a few things that bug me a lil bit. The drums are very repetetive and sound just a bit out of place and too i guess cheap? dunno how to put my thought into words. Synths on the other hand are great, and even though it's obvious you made it in garageband it does achieve the good uncomfortable feeling really well. very nice job, will definetely wait for album in january
don't know why this showed up in my recommended but I really dig the vibes. Im not sure the process of making the beats in garage band but the drumkit beats sound sort of... hesitant, like they're dragging notes in parts of the loop. The beat itself is very nice it just throws me off a tad. I believe it's around the "3 and", just some syncopation in between the 3rd beat and the and. Unless it was on purpose, since it made me feel "paranoid" lol
I didn’t mean to make it sound off beat, but I did want the feeling of the song to be somewhat uncomfortable in a good way. Like songs such as ain’t it funny by Danny brown
@@catod0_ i'd honestly like to hear why, i feel like the rating is a bit unfair and i wonder if rated more subjectively or tried to go for more objective things
I know it is a stupid question, but how long would it take to learn and compose this kind of music for a dummy? I.... Just have a wish to make a bgm alike for a 16bit retro game. Thanks for your advice.
What I would recommend is any melody you think of in your head hum it and record it, then turn that into a song with GarageBand or fl or whatever, then just keep doing it until you feel confident enough to release them on UA-cam. It took me about 3 months or so
@FunnyBeatBoxMan I appreciate your response mate! What you recommend is actually something that I can easily start with. So yes, 3 months of GB learning curve... I will put that into my 2025 resolutions lost for sure!
(apologies if it looks like i'm reposting my comment, youtube seemed to shadowban it on my end? idk) coming from a fellow garageband user, i'd say it's somewhere around a 6 and a 7 imo the song feels slightly off in a good way, and i do like the instrument choices. the main melody sounds unsafe and cautious, and i love whatever the echo effect is when the chorus comes in. it's solid, though i personally felt like there was a lack of change outside of the chorus. looking forward to seeing more of this though. keep up the work!
I'd get Paranoia too If I had to listen to this 😭😭😭
doesn't suck. you've got some good melody ideas. keep up the good work boy
TYSM FOR GIVING MY PARANOID A THEME SONG❤️❤️❤️
No problem lol
Feels like I'm stuck inside a haunted mansion. 8/10 🔥
I approve of the song
7/10, enjoyed it very much actually, pretty good composition, idea and it's sound, but has a few things that bug me a lil bit. The drums are very repetetive and sound just a bit out of place and too i guess cheap? dunno how to put my thought into words. Synths on the other hand are great, and even though it's obvious you made it in garageband it does achieve the good uncomfortable feeling really well. very nice job, will definetely wait for album in january
Thanks
@FunnyBeatBoxMan np mate
don't know why this showed up in my recommended but I really dig the vibes. Im not sure the process of making the beats in garage band but the drumkit beats sound sort of... hesitant, like they're dragging notes in parts of the loop. The beat itself is very nice it just throws me off a tad. I believe it's around the "3 and", just some syncopation in between the 3rd beat and the and. Unless it was on purpose, since it made me feel "paranoid" lol
I didn’t mean to make it sound off beat, but I did want the feeling of the song to be somewhat uncomfortable in a good way. Like songs such as ain’t it funny by Danny brown
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This is a "me" problem and not a "you" problem...
But I hear that drum beat and all I can hear is Billie Jean.
Now that you mention I can hear it a bit
What would you give this song out of 10? Be honest.
7/10 pretty good
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@@catod0_ i'd honestly like to hear why, i feel like the rating is a bit unfair and i wonder if rated more subjectively or tried to go for more objective things
6/10 i thought it was gonna give off scary vibes but the theme counts for sounding like getting chased and there will be traps, like it tho
I know it is a stupid question, but how long would it take to learn and compose this kind of music for a dummy? I.... Just have a wish to make a bgm alike for a 16bit retro game. Thanks for your advice.
What I would recommend is any melody you think of in your head hum it and record it, then turn that into a song with GarageBand or fl or whatever, then just keep doing it until you feel confident enough to release them on UA-cam. It took me about 3 months or so
@FunnyBeatBoxMan I appreciate your response mate! What you recommend is actually something that I can easily start with. So yes, 3 months of GB learning curve... I will put that into my 2025 resolutions lost for sure!
(apologies if it looks like i'm reposting my comment, youtube seemed to shadowban it on my end? idk)
coming from a fellow garageband user, i'd say it's somewhere around a 6 and a 7 imo
the song feels slightly off in a good way, and i do like the instrument choices. the main melody sounds unsafe and cautious, and i love whatever the echo effect is when the chorus comes in.
it's solid, though i personally felt like there was a lack of change outside of the chorus.
looking forward to seeing more of this though. keep up the work!
Thank you!
When is the Album Dropping lil bro?
Probs somewhere in January, it’s gonna have about 18 or so tracks
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And where is ur comment
Gimme a sec I’m at my grandparents house 😭
what’s the matter, boy? don’t you recognize your own girlfriend?
What???