Redesigning Your Logos! (Bad To Good) 🔥 Ep10

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  • Опубліковано 1 чер 2024
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    In this exciting video, I'll be redesigning the logos of some of my awesome subscribers. Get ready for a journey through the creative process as I transform their existing logos into stunning, modern designs.
    Whether you're a business owner, a content creator, or simply passionate about aesthetics, this video is packed with valuable insights into logo design. Join me as I demonstrate the power of thoughtful branding and showcase my skills in creating visually captivating logos.
    If there's anything you would like me to cover in a video, then let me know by commenting down below!
    Timestamps:
    0:00 Introduction to the Redesigning Subscribers' Logos
    0:07 The Problem With The Original Logo
    0:48 Sketching and Mind Mapping The Logo
    2:03 Digitising The Logo Using A Grid
    2:34 Refining The Design
    3:10 Designing Variations of The Logo and Balancing the Design
    4:30 Designing The Logotype
    5:56 Mocking Up The Logo - I failed
    7:10 Squarespace!
    8:38 The Good and Bad of the second Logo
    9:13 Drawing The Logotype
    10:33 Designing a better logotype
    11:22 Digitising the Logotype in Glyphs
    12:26 Mocking Up The Logotype
    12:50 Adding Drips to the T-Shirt Mockup
    13:29 Side By Side Comparison
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  • @willpatersondesign
    @willpatersondesign  5 місяців тому +10

    🚀 Thanks for watching! If you enjoyed the video and would like to learn Logotype Design then check out Logo Launch! www.logo-launch.com

    • @tg2104
      @tg2104 5 місяців тому +1

      Sincere question, why not replace the 'h' in Bauhause with your new logo? To cheese and cringe?

    • @willpatersondesign
      @willpatersondesign  5 місяців тому +1

      I didn't try it! However, it would probably not be as legible. Saying that, I spelt it wrong haha. @@tg2104

  • @shellingford9861
    @shellingford9861 5 місяців тому +21

    I don't know why, but the 2nd one reads 'Retzo Pzints' to me.
    Can't unsee it.

    • @willpatersondesign
      @willpatersondesign  5 місяців тому +4

      Yeah, I recon the cursive R's could be refined more

    • @TheTameeey
      @TheTameeey 5 місяців тому +1

      Definitely.
      I think the 2nd 'R' is more forgiving though!
      For me it reads like 'Retzo Prints'. Even if I try hard, my brain won't process the first 'R' and it'll automatically turn it into 'Z'...
      The more I stare at it it could also read like RetLo Prints... I just can't see it as an actual 'R' lol

  • @manankanani321
    @manankanani321 5 місяців тому +38

    Personally I liked the original logo more than yours in the 1st one. & For the second one i guess it looks like 'Retzo' rather than 'Retro' so I don't think that's a good thing as a brand identity

    • @RakynCZE
      @RakynCZE 5 місяців тому +3

      Yeah, Unfortunately I am feeling now like unwanted hater, but I've read it too as "RetZo"... didn't like the Bauhaus redesign neither 😥

  • @malikbaratov2010
    @malikbaratov2010 5 місяців тому +67

    I feel like the original Bauhaus felt much cozier and it looks like a B flipped sideways. The Retro Prints was awesome though! Keep it up!👍

    • @willpatersondesign
      @willpatersondesign  5 місяців тому +9

      I love that word "cozy", I totally agree :)

    • @Sald8Trin
      @Sald8Trin 5 місяців тому +5

      And I feel like it followed bauhaus idea much better

    • @yukimorandini9215
      @yukimorandini9215 5 місяців тому +5

      I feel the same, the original makes more sense to me

    • @malikbaratov2010
      @malikbaratov2010 5 місяців тому +2

      Same

    • @jayneshpatel7925
      @jayneshpatel7925 5 місяців тому +2

      ya, i feel the same way. and the font is good too.

  • @ZEMNI-23
    @ZEMNI-23 5 місяців тому +17

    It is always interesting to watch your process. I will only revisit that R in your Retro logo given that I can't stop reading it as a Z not a cursive R. Just a thought! Thank you

    • @dannyr2976
      @dannyr2976 5 місяців тому

      Thought the exact same thing, but within the context of a funky squidgy logotype it works imo...

  • @chidubemokey-ngene4693
    @chidubemokey-ngene4693 5 місяців тому +4

    The Retro prints gives a huggable feeling ngl

  • @sidettildem
    @sidettildem 5 місяців тому +16

    Always a good feeling when you post.
    As you pointed out, i reckon the bauhaus icon is a bit on the generic side, the vertical B looked nice in my opinion. Retro prints was a massive upgrade, solid redirection. R looks like Z but you know that already haha
    Cheers Will

  • @peoplecallmepeechez
    @peoplecallmepeechez 5 місяців тому +6

    Only issue i have with the retro print is the lower case r. Even though i know what it says I kept reading the second r in retro as a z. For some reason didnt have an issue with it in Print

  • @madartzgraphics2019
    @madartzgraphics2019 5 місяців тому +2

    Good pointers right here. That overshooting, horizontal and vertical will greatly improve my logos even more!

  • @emanuelnolden
    @emanuelnolden 5 місяців тому +3

    Hey Will, thanks for another brilliant video! Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!

  • @logotronix.
    @logotronix. 5 місяців тому

    As always fascinating and practical, keep up the good work

  • @satyakidasgupta6860
    @satyakidasgupta6860 5 місяців тому +2

    🍏 great video, I really like the concept of Bauhaus ❤️

  • @soulfulsatyam
    @soulfulsatyam 5 місяців тому +4

    Following you for my designs.... Thank you for such content... Loved it ❤

  • @chibatundu1914
    @chibatundu1914 5 місяців тому +2

    Your process changed my perspective on the importance of creating synergy between a logo mark and a typed logo. Definitely the sort of perspective I want to carry into the new business year. Thanks and 🍏²

  • @andrewarmstrong5266
    @andrewarmstrong5266 5 місяців тому +1

    Apples! I love these redesign videos, but I also love the subscriber reviews too, I just need more vids man!!!

  • @declan_franklin
    @declan_franklin 5 місяців тому +3

    I did a similar logo design of the first logo for a start up interior and exterior design company.

  • @MathiasNewberry
    @MathiasNewberry 5 місяців тому +5

    I definitely want that retro prints tee 👀🔥

  • @user-be6uc7zw1p
    @user-be6uc7zw1p 5 місяців тому +1

    Отличные получились логотипы! Ретро печать - вообще крутая)

  • @sticcostile
    @sticcostile 4 місяці тому

    Nice episode, i redesigned some football logos, your advice is precious

  • @user-rn5tq9rc9h
    @user-rn5tq9rc9h 5 місяців тому

    always shinning

  • @naomipaterson1097
    @naomipaterson1097 5 місяців тому +6

    Love the Retro Prints one 🎨

  • @p4thum
    @p4thum 5 місяців тому

    🍏Great video!, Love the Retro Prints logo

  • @Hordebarraged
    @Hordebarraged 5 місяців тому +2

    As a founder of the "H" Police I thank you for correctly pronouncing "aitch", citizen.

  • @mirsoliz1864
    @mirsoliz1864 5 місяців тому +2

    Top video as usual! Thanks Will! BTW, are we all agree that it is harder to do hand lettering (calligraphy essentially) when left handed? 😑😅

  • @ranchoo5444
    @ranchoo5444 4 місяці тому

    Hey will,I like the way to play with letter "r" in Retro Prints logo redesign..💖😍

  • @dannyr2976
    @dannyr2976 5 місяців тому

    Really liked the Bauhaus redesign (though sure I've seen a similar shape design as just an 'h'), also thinking to myself, why is there an 'e' added on the end? Retro Prints, wasn't feeling the initial redesign, looked too thin, the squidgy version was better but didn't appreciate it until the thick offset was added, looks great on the t-shirt mockup too. Apple!

  • @holographic80s
    @holographic80s Місяць тому

    Retzo Pzints lol
    very neat font though. Reminds me of when everyone tried drawing bubble letters for their posters in grade school lol good times

  • @sketchbook.05
    @sketchbook.05 5 місяців тому +5

    Sometimes when I think of retro, I think of halftones and lots of textures, although that might be more on the pop side but I guess outlining the typeface works too! 🍏

    • @willpatersondesign
      @willpatersondesign  5 місяців тому +4

      Halftone would be great to add onto the design in the mockups stage! I need to make a new video taking everyone's suggestions :)

  • @SoThisExists
    @SoThisExists 5 місяців тому +4

    For someone who doesn't like the word "Vibe", you use it pretty often 😂

  • @chubbista
    @chubbista 5 місяців тому +2

    They would never hinge it on the „H“, because their biggest competitors are „Hornbach“ and „Hagebaumarkt“

  • @siddartkumar6749
    @siddartkumar6749 5 місяців тому +2

    Hey! doesn't the second r in retro looks like a z? like Rretzo prints? it looks great though.

    • @willpatersondesign
      @willpatersondesign  5 місяців тому

      It does! It definitely needs more refinement. Stick around for part two! :)

  • @ememel9983
    @ememel9983 5 місяців тому

    Love those "apple"s

  • @amgtsyr1475
    @amgtsyr1475 5 місяців тому

    Apple, many thanks for the video

  • @DesignWho
    @DesignWho 5 місяців тому +4

    Hi Will

  • @KeMcCaL
    @KeMcCaL 5 місяців тому

    I actually like the original Bauhaus (with the correct spelling!) better than your imagining. Nice work on Retro, but I agree with others that the lowercase script r’s look like z’s and distract from the rest of the design.

  • @PhtevenTheDuck
    @PhtevenTheDuck 5 місяців тому

    I wish you would've checked out the actual, current BAUHAUS logo and tried to go from there. That would've been interesting, cause that is very out of date, but I really like it for some reason.

  • @Amorebali
    @Amorebali 5 місяців тому +2

    Apple🍎I liked both of your designs better

  • @systemuser8701
    @systemuser8701 5 місяців тому +1

    It looks like a Doghouse with a chimney !!!

  • @cushiontwin
    @cushiontwin 5 місяців тому

    Personally I like the original logo for the first study. Feels more sophisticated and corporate, almost like a lawyers firm.

  • @CD-kc5op
    @CD-kc5op 5 місяців тому

    The new Retro looks like Retzo.

  • @annefresse404
    @annefresse404 5 місяців тому +7

    Bauhaus is spelled wrong
    And the retro logo looks like "retzo" to me
    Other than that, great work

    • @willpatersondesign
      @willpatersondesign  5 місяців тому +2

      :D

    • @metalbonsai
      @metalbonsai 5 місяців тому +1

      Maybe partly due to the slow death of cursive. 😢

    • @annefresse404
      @annefresse404 5 місяців тому +1

      @@metalbonsai I learned cursive in school. The "r" still looks like a "z", but doesn't in cursive. So I don't think that is the issue

  • @CaraxionSUB
    @CaraxionSUB 5 місяців тому

    Why didn't you round the corners more of the bauhause design?

    • @willpatersondesign
      @willpatersondesign  5 місяців тому

      Hey! I wanted the design to be clean - rounding corners can make the design look a little too much :)

  • @naomipaterson9300
    @naomipaterson9300 5 місяців тому

    ❤❤❤

  • @munezstudio8300
    @munezstudio8300 5 місяців тому

    Your one was good BAUHAUS

  • @davidnorman6348
    @davidnorman6348 5 місяців тому

    Well thought out and argued, Will, but to be frank, your Bauhaus (no e) improvement says "factory" to me. Sorry..

  • @cjbeall6471
    @cjbeall6471 5 місяців тому

    Apples! Lol

  • @elowynnbird
    @elowynnbird 5 місяців тому +3

    Hi.

  • @Nodsaibot
    @Nodsaibot 5 місяців тому

    for bauhaus you cannot fix what is not broken

  • @idkdude969
    @idkdude969 Місяць тому

    Like your vids, just wanted to say its Bauhaus not bauhause, its german as well as the architecture design and stuff yk

    • @willpatersondesign
      @willpatersondesign  Місяць тому

      Thanks! Spelling is really not my strongest attribute ahhah.

  • @treymix
    @treymix 5 місяців тому

    🍎

  • @Paige2
    @Paige2 4 місяці тому

    Apples

  • @Zzyyxx22
    @Zzyyxx22 5 місяців тому +1

    Apple squad.

  • @cushiontwin
    @cushiontwin 5 місяців тому +3

    I really don't like the the title of the video in reference of (Bad to Good). Judging how appealing a logo is, should be in the eye of the viewer. Saying the original logo is bad is off-putting and doesn't seem professional. As a creator you should know how much influence you have and understand that what you say affects people. You should let the viewer decide whether the transformation was good or bad. Do better.

  • @dvdpatrick
    @dvdpatrick 5 місяців тому

    that r looks like a z
    I don't know why you always show problems like this with letterings y know always a letter that is not very readable

  • @jasonnorman-hodges3471
    @jasonnorman-hodges3471 5 місяців тому +1

    Retzo P7ints

  • @mayajewel9073
    @mayajewel9073 2 місяці тому

    Thank you for the video. I'm here to request a video about how to practice graphic design as a begginner who's trying to improve but don't know where to start and what to do. When I search it for art I find like yearly plans that explains what to learn before and after what and what I need for certain jobs and occupations but I couldn't find anything close to it for design and I'm kinda lost. It'll be a life saver for me if you could make such a video. Thank you again 🤍🤍

  • @winnetouch
    @winnetouch 5 місяців тому +2

    I feel like the Bauhaus logo you designed was a total miss. Bauhaus is one single word. You can't just split the name of a company in two because it suits your idea for the design. That's basically ignoring corporate identity of the brand. The original design made much more sense all things considered. The mockup looked dope though.
    With the Retro Prints design I REALLY like thy style but there's only one issue. I kept reading the lower cap "r" as a "z".

    • @willpatersondesign
      @willpatersondesign  5 місяців тому

      I didn't split it - I accidentally added an E lol

    • @winnetouch
      @winnetouch 5 місяців тому +1

      @@willpatersondesign Correct me if I'm wrong but doesnt Bauhas start with a B not an H? Maybe it sounded harsher then I meant it, sorry if it sounded snarky :P

  • @mae2309
    @mae2309 5 місяців тому +1

    Perhaps lower the chimnney . it looks to good but the chimenny stick is bothering me.... amazing job mate

  • @felixeffects1
    @felixeffects1 5 місяців тому

    Apple

  • @kevynlevine
    @kevynlevine 5 місяців тому

    Hat.

  • @MartinDiscoo
    @MartinDiscoo 5 місяців тому

    BAUHAUS- nope.

  • @hankallgeier2685
    @hankallgeier2685 5 місяців тому +1

    Retzo ?