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  • Опубліковано 9 лют 2025

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  • @DragonJohn
    @DragonJohn Місяць тому +29

    Yesterday there was a story whose moral was "Never mess with a momma bear." Today we see what happens when you mess with papa bear.

    • @Wastelandman7000
      @Wastelandman7000 Місяць тому +9

      Yep, and pappa bear is bigger, stronger, and more adept at carnage. (we've been killing for a very very very long time)

    • @thegamingmuder2398
      @thegamingmuder2398 Місяць тому +4

      @@Wastelandman7000my thoughts exactly

    • @artyd42
      @artyd42 26 днів тому +1

      This wasn't a papa bear. This was the entire wolf population. We can be very effective when you get enough wolves together.

  • @Wastelandman7000
    @Wastelandman7000 Місяць тому +7

    And yes, if the rest of the galaxy is like this we're probably better off instituting a no contact under any circumstances policy.
    And building even bigger fleets and armies. Because I suspect these xenos are so dense they won't take the hint.

  • @valtiel2589
    @valtiel2589 Місяць тому +51

    OOOOOooo i was in a VERY odd mood when i scribbled this one.
    i have no idea what i was up to before but GOD i was pissed off. but anyway

    • @TheIclandicViking
      @TheIclandicViking Місяць тому +7

      So I'll take a drop for every hour shе'll never dance
      Hidе a piece in every city she'll never see
      I know that this won't make it better
      But I don't want to live without her
      So the last drop, the last drop is for me

    • @kingcaragious
      @kingcaragious Місяць тому +14

      If you're the author, good story. Art isn't necessarily pretty. That applies to writing too. Thank you for sharing. It was powerful.

    • @Terran.Marine.2
      @Terran.Marine.2 Місяць тому +6

      ​@@TheIclandicVikingThat's beautiful in a terrible sort of way.

    • @Terran.Marine.2
      @Terran.Marine.2 Місяць тому

      I do enjoy your tales @valtie2589.

    • @TheIclandicViking
      @TheIclandicViking Місяць тому +3

      @@Terran.Marine.2 Drop for Every Hour
      by Amigo the Devil
      album: Born Against

  • @Alex.H.B.1970something
    @Alex.H.B.1970something Місяць тому +18

    Now That is a Blinder of a story! Never piss off a parent.
    Bravo Sir Encore and well done to the writer!

  • @andrewerickson6690
    @andrewerickson6690 Місяць тому +12

    Squirrel,You said dark. you delivered holy shite

  • @ArronRatliff
    @ArronRatliff Місяць тому +17

    And the F.A.F.O Award of the century goes to.....

  • @merlinathrawes746
    @merlinathrawes746 Місяць тому +22

    You do not mess with the children. I think humanity chose isolation because they were scared of their own response to the deliberate torture of children. And the remainder of the galaxy should be thankful.

  • @bf6159
    @bf6159 Місяць тому +8

    They were introduced to the concept of Scorched Earth.

    • @merlinathrawes746
      @merlinathrawes746 Місяць тому +2

      Scorched Earth? No. You can recover from Scorched Earth. Vaporized Earth on the other hand...

  • @Mikakarot23
    @Mikakarot23 Місяць тому +7

    Start of story me: oh, its one about human war brutality.
    End of story mr: oh, its a nice little story of genocide avenging a child.

  • @MarrockV
    @MarrockV Місяць тому +8

    I found this to be quite entertaining... and I just happen to have a pipe wrench right here, feels like I may be needing it for the foreseeable future as things stand.

  • @PyroMancer2k
    @PyroMancer2k Місяць тому +4

    This is how you get the Warhammer 40K Universe. One thing new people to the franchise and lore don't realize is humanity is Xenophobic because this is the kinda BS they encountered when entering the wider galaxy. They had their Star Trek peace and high tech prosperity phase but hostile aliens and AI uprisings turned them into tech fearing xenophobes we know and love today. ;)

  • @allenmorgan1007
    @allenmorgan1007 Місяць тому +5

    For the Algorithm, for the Author(s), for the Disembodied Voice!

  • @lappesjl1
    @lappesjl1 Місяць тому +2

    Excellent story.

  • @khazdor
    @khazdor Місяць тому +7

    Love this Story. I didn't find it Dark at all. As the Klingon would say" Revenge is a Dish Best Served Cold." There is nothing in that story, I wouldn't do if it was my Children.

    • @Wastelandman7000
      @Wastelandman7000 Місяць тому +2

      Or worse. I know myself, I'm capable of worse under those circumstances.

    • @lrmackmcbride7498
      @lrmackmcbride7498 Місяць тому +1

      Much longer slower and it would last weeks

  • @arbiteramon
    @arbiteramon Місяць тому +9

    Seems like a reasonable reaction, maybe a little on the light side. Hfy!

    • @Wastelandman7000
      @Wastelandman7000 Місяць тому +1

      Yeah, he didn't set him on fire. Must have been a serious temptation.

    • @sysbofh
      @sysbofh Місяць тому

      He really had a lot of restraint. With the Inquisition and all to draw ideas from, he went to the pipe. Amateurs.

  • @mattbrown5511
    @mattbrown5511 Місяць тому +2

    When one needs to make an example ... Do as the humans would do.

  • @mmorris2830
    @mmorris2830 Місяць тому +3

    Sounds about right

  • @shaunford8529
    @shaunford8529 Місяць тому +1

    dont mess with kids .

  • @joseph7471
    @joseph7471 Місяць тому +1

    Thanks for the warning. I won't listen, but I'll comment: for the algorithm!

  • @Clutchshot1
    @Clutchshot1 Місяць тому +3

    At last, no more Geneva.

    • @SoManyDogs
      @SoManyDogs Місяць тому +1

      It’s a checklist. Consider them all…checked.

    • @Wastelandman7000
      @Wastelandman7000 Місяць тому

      You torture our young, the Geneva checklist is too mild.

  • @Deathbecomesme3
    @Deathbecomesme3 Місяць тому +3

    Not a bad story but I'd only give it about a 2 out of 10 on the Darkness scale.

  • @frankmoore3598
    @frankmoore3598 Місяць тому

    When all you have left is rage

  • @bluefalconssuck5881
    @bluefalconssuck5881 Місяць тому

    The Admiral got off easy.

  • @evilgasm5320
    @evilgasm5320 Місяць тому

    Great story, thanks

  • @Jakes3130
    @Jakes3130 Місяць тому +1

    Retribution comes in many forms

  • @theloniousmunk7113
    @theloniousmunk7113 Місяць тому +1

    Here! Here! More like this please?

  • @steambub
    @steambub Місяць тому

    A dark forest future.

  • @dsloop969
    @dsloop969 Місяць тому +1

    wowowowowom wowow good one.

  • @robertstoneking7916
    @robertstoneking7916 Місяць тому

    There is a reason for war crime prohibitions. It is to try to keep this part of us from awakening. Break the rules, especially with children, and you learn the side of us we hide from ourselves.

  • @einyv
    @einyv Місяць тому

    Great story

  • @coaffeee
    @coaffeee Місяць тому +1

    The Reddit link still leads to the previous story

  • @jamiescott1062
    @jamiescott1062 28 днів тому

    I enjoyed that 1 a lot as a single dad!

  • @rlbadger1698
    @rlbadger1698 Місяць тому

    dark

  • @peterhall8572
    @peterhall8572 Місяць тому +1

    I would have done far worse

  • @GobrinSansOtherAccount
    @GobrinSansOtherAccount Місяць тому

    No one likes Elves, seems fair

  • @lupaswolfshead9971
    @lupaswolfshead9971 Місяць тому

  • @bf-696
    @bf-696 Місяць тому

    Not so dark. Understandable.

  • @shammes95
    @shammes95 Місяць тому

    Suffer not the xenos.

  • @stephenaustin142
    @stephenaustin142 Місяць тому +11

    I really don't understand why the warning on this story . Humans do much worse things to each other every single day .

    • @Adiscretefirm
      @Adiscretefirm Місяць тому +5

      Life's grim and ugly most of the time. People that grew up after the internet went public can't handle that.

    • @mariesalias
      @mariesalias Місяць тому +2

      I’m glad the warning was there. My son and I listen to these stories together.

    • @SpitfiretheCat16
      @SpitfiretheCat16 Місяць тому +1

      the intimacy and graphic descriptions

    • @Wastelandman7000
      @Wastelandman7000 Місяць тому

      You got all ages on here. That and some are too sentimental and;or soft to hear such a tale.

    • @Adiscretefirm
      @Adiscretefirm Місяць тому

      @Wastelandman7000 supposed to be all ages over 13

  • @CCKinnison
    @CCKinnison Місяць тому +1

    Very Dark. Good, but...
    Look, I love the story until the Aliens flat out don't know about immature humans. Would have been better if they were insects, or some race who has many many children and a huge mortality rate, so they didn't CARE about children.
    Not getting "civilians", I can see in some contexts. Or one or two heartless races. Not 17, who know neither Civilians nor Children. The story fails at the final hurdle for me. :(
    Narration, as always, great.

    • @HammarPwnsYourFace
      @HammarPwnsYourFace Місяць тому

      Slaving empires do not deserve to exist …

    • @Wastelandman7000
      @Wastelandman7000 Місяць тому

      Oh, I can see 17 such races. Or more. There is no reason to expect other species to share human sensibilities or moral qualms. Besides, I can point to several points in human history where conquering armies saw the people they were conquering as animals. If we did this to ourselves because of national, or racial prejudices, why would we think a totally alien species would be better? Besides, everything this elf said was attempts to deflect blame, guilt trip, or justify himself with the "Everyone else does it too so I'm not guilty". It doesn't mean what he's saying is how he really sees things. He probably got his jollies off torturing the women and children. He seems like the type. So he's just trying to BS his way out.
      Look at how Romans saw everyone else in the world as illiterate, brainless barbarians that needed to be beaten into submission and given the "benefits" of Roman law. Only people they half respected were the Greeks. And when the Greeks were having their little conquest spree they had the same feeling of being innately superior. And the Greeks and Romans were the same species they were conquering. Throw in old empires that have no respect or concern for "barbarian" races and a totally different species and I can absolutely see 17 such empires. Easily.

  • @Kirsten2933
    @Kirsten2933 Місяць тому

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  • @merlinwizard1000
    @merlinwizard1000 Місяць тому

    10th, 3 January 2025

  • @071badboi
    @071badboi Місяць тому

    Daek