I think what she wrote was about trying to cope with this and made them more motivated to pursue becoming a Lawyer. Its was very Powerful and Placed a Sustainable way to move forward while dealing with a death in a family.
Yes, That Essay Flows with ease and Grace especially when expressing the Reasons why the Justice System needs to Stand up for Justice. The Capitol has a Duty to Protect our Lives this Demonstration was Horrific. I Hope and Pray for Justice so this type of Demonstration doesn't repeat itself. How can you not be Bothered by Such An injustice. Great Essay Also It Flows Greatly.
I think what she wrote was about trying to cope with this and made them more motivated to pursue becoming a Lawyer. Its was very Powerful and Placed a Sustainable way to move forward while dealing with a death in a family.
This is a Personal Statement so its Talking about Something Personal its all Acceptable to a Personal Statement it Catches the Readers Attention.
Yes, That Essay Flows with ease and Grace especially when expressing the Reasons why the Justice System needs to Stand up for Justice. The Capitol has a Duty to Protect our Lives this Demonstration was Horrific. I Hope and Pray for Justice so this type of Demonstration doesn't repeat itself. How can you not be Bothered by Such An injustice. Great Essay Also It Flows Greatly.
a lot of passive voice weakens all these essays