8 Ivy League gal critiques CHAT GPT-generated Common App Essay

I made ChatGPT write me a Common App Essay and critiqued it: I break it down, give ya tips for what to do and what not to do. And I rank it out of ten stars. Does ChatGPT essay pass the bar?
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What should I critique next? Should I ask ChatGPT to generate me essays on specific topics/experiences? Let me know in the comments below!
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[@esther.e.writer]

Unfortunately, it is a common occurrence. At the college I just graduated from there have been some instances of students submitting papers written by chatgpt. It wasn’t that many students from what I know but a few. Although AI isn’t out to take over our lives it seems like writing might be replaced by it, which as a fellow writer makes me said. I hope it doesn’t happen though. Good video as always!

[@CassandraHsiao]

yes... big topic of contention right now too with the writer's strike! hopefully this video proves that as good as it gets it'll never quite have the human touch...

[@shogun7107]

Hey I was wondering if you'd be interested in looking over my common app essay. My dream school is brown and I feel like its a good essay but Ive never done this before so I was wondering if you'd be able to. You can also make a video on it if you wanna

[@CassandraHsiao]

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