Critiquing Your Design Projects YGR 14

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  • @visuallyaya
    @visuallyaya 6 років тому +172

    My problem with peony sunset is that the peony looks like a cabbage? I know it's hard to draw peonies but it could be too confusing . . . Maybe there is a way for Ira to create the peony like shape but with only gradient, no outline, and make that gradient similar to the original sunset color?

    • @thedeafgenius
      @thedeafgenius 6 років тому +2

      Thats why you sketch things out and try to simplify it instead of tracing it from a photo.

    • @irazee2611
      @irazee2611 6 років тому +7

      Hey!
      Yeah I realised after putting the shape into illustrator that it looked like a cabbage.... that's why I made the name of the company Peopny so you could kinda see it at least XD it was a school project, so it didn't have to be perfect

    • @irazee2611
      @irazee2611 6 років тому +7

      I.... didn't? I sketched the flower out on paper and then traced it in illustrator??

  • @jenalei1222
    @jenalei1222 5 років тому +21

    I need Zim's happiness and positivity in my life

  • @TheGabrieleandrade
    @TheGabrieleandrade 5 років тому +39

    I love how sweet and positive you are ❤️

  • @Inhibiti0ns
    @Inhibiti0ns 6 років тому +15

    watching your videos is quickly becoming something I really look forward to in my day, thanks for a great one Zimri!

  • @Optimistig
    @Optimistig 6 років тому +50

    That little message on the end screen made me work on a project I had in mind for a couple of weeks now. Thanks for the inspiration and motivation Zimri! You're vids are awesome, possom!

  • @sravyasudha1559
    @sravyasudha1559 6 років тому +152

    -Ira's : You made drastic changes. The organic, handrawn touch was awesome awesome awesome. But, the pink hues and the peony don't yell food. I think giving the peony (or the bg) a rather orangish hue, pretty much like the previous colour would've done the job.
    -Isaac's : You NAILED it. The Venue lost emphasis though. Probably should colour it a more vibrant red.
    -Louis' : I think the layout's great but getting rid of the gradient did, as you mentioned, did result in a loss of energy. Plus, it also makes the bottom half look pretty empty. Probably should have a (less opaque) gradient.
    -Kushagra's : Filling in the Cs = Cool! But the bg should've been more Cobalt bluish. That would've complemented it better cause the chrome yellow in the bg doesn't place emphasis on 'CRUNCH'.
    Anddddddd Awesome Haircut! Totally nailed it! XD

    • @awsometomable
      @awsometomable 5 років тому

      Sravya Sudha C

    •  5 років тому

      They gradients useless it’s a tech company he’s not training to insight hunger out of anybody it just takes away from the presentation

  • @belleuxi
    @belleuxi 5 років тому +60

    That uneven hexagon is killing meee💀

    • @billo770
      @billo770 4 роки тому +4

      And IIIIii!, i must confess, I DO BELIVEE! ᵈᵒ ᵇᵉˡᶦᵛᵉ

  • @feralferret
    @feralferret 5 років тому +5

    That improvement on Crunch is really, really great.

  • @BLRtactics
    @BLRtactics 6 років тому +36

    This video contained a lack of snaps.

  • @DinomiteDOM
    @DinomiteDOM 6 років тому +3

    I know you've been doing the polls for awhile, but I just wanted to say keep it up! It's super fun/interesting to vote on which project is better and to see how my opinion compares the others.

  • @pnutbro497
    @pnutbro497 5 років тому +2

    First off, you rule, i found you popping out of nowhere and in love with this channel. Second, for the cco i think maybe move the C a bit to prevent tangents overlaying each other. But then again you did very well

  • @flowersafeheart
    @flowersafeheart 2 роки тому

    Oh my gosh, the peony sunset looks 10 million times better and more appropriate to nature-friendly healthy snacks and the name "peony sunset" which is a whole mood. A mood I like.🦋🕯️🐿️🌻🌿

  • @TheEx77
    @TheEx77 6 років тому +5

    your videos always cheer me up and help me have a better day.
    thank you.

  • @tcenturion12
    @tcenturion12 5 років тому

    The crunch logo is absolute bomb! With the gradient and the background you tottaly get the snack idea and feeling, i can see yellow packaging with that logo and pattern!

  • @PiginaCage
    @PiginaCage 6 років тому +6

    Love the new look Zimri , you look great man.

  • @cofa4011
    @cofa4011 5 років тому +5

    "This is like a map of Europe right now... Need a little UN intervention ..." xDD

  • @xlmax999
    @xlmax999 6 років тому

    your way of simplifying things is wonderful >>

  • @dhruvin-dave
    @dhruvin-dave 6 років тому +1

    I love the way how you simplify things. Keep doing what you do ! Love your work 😍

  • @Waynimations
    @Waynimations 6 років тому

    Watching your videos really makes coursework much more bearable

  • @angelosa.3178
    @angelosa.3178 6 років тому

    That little message at the end was all i needed to get out of my procrastination bubble. Thanks lol

  • @meeshmunch643
    @meeshmunch643 6 років тому

    So stoked to see you're uploading way more often! Just try not to burn out. Can't wait to see tomorrows video :)

  • @Afeelion
    @Afeelion 5 років тому

    Love your attitude, and you nailed all of those designs

  • @Ivory_Schmetterling
    @Ivory_Schmetterling 6 років тому +1

    Oh man, how did you manage to keep working with those clothespins on your ears??? jajajajaj
    *Peony sunset:* I do agree with the changes, it needed to feel more organic and a lil less rigid/stiff, so good call on that! Although, I can't really see the color correlation with food/snacks, maybe it needs some more tweaking :)
    *MACBETH:* I feel like removing the dripping text was a smart choice, and I really liked the torn paper idea!!! I would've kept the crown and the title's position as it was, I think it created a lot more tension.
    *E-Ruche:* I think both versions work just fine! Yours is a lot cleaner to the eye, but I feel like Louis' had more visual strength.
    *Crunch:* It seems to me like there could be some changes with the positioning of the letters to give more emphasis to the "crunch" concept.
    PS: I still wanna send you something but I can't really decide what to send ahhhhh I'm shy D: jajajajajaj

  • @dancomerford204
    @dancomerford204 5 років тому

    Macbeth looks great! Good job !

  • @yeast4529
    @yeast4529 5 років тому

    Regarding the peony sunset design, I think it may be an option to thicken the lines and further reduce the flower complexity

  • @meganward3072
    @meganward3072 6 років тому

    You are so talented and really inspirational, you make me want to be a great designer! Thank you so much Zimri, also you have a kick ass name!
    Also, the fact that you make it so effortless makes it so fun to watch!
    "Will they ever puff up again?" XD

  • @jacobp2751
    @jacobp2751 5 років тому

    Those are some awesome earrings, where did you get them?

  • @xXbananaXxist
    @xXbananaXxist 6 років тому +1

    Ok why do you look so cute with those things on your ears tho 😩💕

  • @PomPorree
    @PomPorree 5 років тому

    If you use a handwritten type maybe try the opentype features.
    Most handwritten fonts have alternate letters, which leads to an even more organic feel to the font.

  • @bnwo
    @bnwo 6 років тому

    That sunset one was a really nice redo.

  • @gamingfoxib5506
    @gamingfoxib5506 5 років тому +22

    Louis' Bee hive: I would add a little bee.

    • @arpilclark1
      @arpilclark1 5 років тому +7

      You don't want bugs in your technology 😂

    • @bije277
      @bije277 4 роки тому

      April Lydia lol

  • @harddecoder5860
    @harddecoder5860 5 років тому +2

    It took me a long long tym to realize but..u r talented bruh💝

  • @isabeladesa649
    @isabeladesa649 6 років тому

    i love watching YGR! there were a couple videos a while ago in which you would show some designs that you thought didn't need any changes and talk about their qualities. i thought that was very helpful, would you consider doing it again?
    you look great with the new haircut btw

  • @andriyprvdn1777
    @andriyprvdn1777 3 роки тому

    Cool video, you’re true pro of design.

  • @filipagomes9982
    @filipagomes9982 6 років тому

    7:55 you should do asmr of this! ahah😅
    love the changes on this designs, good job zimri!

  • @Aonemancult
    @Aonemancult 5 років тому +1

    what do you use to recreate the logos?

  • @GerrixAndroid
    @GerrixAndroid 6 років тому +3

    Hey, Zimri design Master! 😁 I was wondering will you have time to take a look at app logo that I have sent you on email a few days ago. I am not a designer, actually I'm an Android developer so I could really use some tips. Thanks in advance!
    P.S. Love your videos! 😊

  • @Oryon44
    @Oryon44 6 років тому

    I think you should add an option for inbetween in the polls, cuz' some of the things you add are really good but some are better left as they were in the original project (:

  • @Caraxou
    @Caraxou 6 років тому

    I’m so happy to see French in YGR ! 👌🏻

  • @kwalityhairstudio8079
    @kwalityhairstudio8079 6 років тому

    Pertaining to that MC Beth logo/illustration, Zim I think that you could of made minor touches, for example, adding the torn paper effect to the crown alone and also, adjusting the position of the white typography at the base.
    The red typography gave a nice contrast of colors, which added to the visual effect.
    Another great addition were the blood stain/pattern you added at the back...
    GREAT JOB otherwise!!
    Blessings man!

  • @corbinengelman8854
    @corbinengelman8854 6 років тому

    Watch till the very very end. That's all you need to hear :)

  • @desertfoxxx
    @desertfoxxx 6 років тому

    Thanks for putting the font in the description. :)

  • @JacobPatrick1
    @JacobPatrick1 5 років тому

    Peony initial design was good. Yours is just different, I do like yours it more.
    Macbeth. Killed the King. Sorry, like the before more. (Blood Text and composition)
    E-Ruche: I was skeptical at first, but yes cleaner and simpler.
    I appreciate how efficient this video and respect how you can take something and look at it differently.

  • @ViaMargutta51Movies
    @ViaMargutta51Movies 6 років тому +2

    How did you do the "torn out" paper trick? (04:05)

    • @markb.8460
      @markb.8460 6 років тому +1

      I am intrested too!! How to paint outside of the selection?

    • @markb.8460
      @markb.8460 6 років тому +1

      ctrl+shift+I to invert the selection! thats how

    • @ViaMargutta51Movies
      @ViaMargutta51Movies 6 років тому +1

      @@markb.8460 oh, I get it, so you delete outside...very clever, thank you

  • @ihh2921
    @ihh2921 6 років тому

    Really energetic video as always, kind of comfusing with the earthingies but you do you.
    Also mever noticed but you got two different eye colours, very nice :o

  • @advancexz0
    @advancexz0 5 років тому

    I think the crunch logo looks like Run H brand or something, the moment you put color to those Pacmans they stand out to me not like letters.

  • @JTKatz07
    @JTKatz07 5 років тому

    Okay Minimalist DOES NOT EQUAL better. I think thats your entire motif in everyone of these videos.

    • @METTI1986LA
      @METTI1986LA 5 років тому

      I dont see anything wrong with minimalistic designs

    • @JTKatz07
      @JTKatz07 5 років тому

      METTI1986LA that’s fine but just cutting less on original designs doesn’t improve a design

  • @SuperPortista
    @SuperPortista 5 років тому

    Greatings from Portugal!

  • @byteappple
    @byteappple 6 років тому

    Awesome Zimri! Great vid

  • @FlogaHD
    @FlogaHD 6 років тому +3

    Which software does he use to make these changes?

    • @emilywright33
      @emilywright33 5 років тому

      FlogaHD he primarily uses Adobe Premier and Photoshop if I’m not mistaken :)

    • @iroastu2331
      @iroastu2331 5 років тому +3

      Illustrator

  • @felixtristanleo8043
    @felixtristanleo8043 6 років тому +1

    How can I submit my own personal logo? I'd like to get some feedback from you

  • @hetariko3119
    @hetariko3119 5 років тому

    zimri : " don't forget to *pop* the video "
    me : " oh yeah, i almost forgot ... oh wait, i've already done it "

  • @marionforge2769
    @marionforge2769 6 років тому +2

    Who's alligator?

  • @tobemehow
    @tobemehow 6 років тому +8

    Where can i send my project?

  • @picroger4510
    @picroger4510 5 років тому +2

    Man you're awesome.

  • @leventemolnar5866
    @leventemolnar5866 5 років тому

    How does he select and move things with the lasso tool?? (3:32)

  • @BlueFinch
    @BlueFinch 5 років тому

    Dude, you're bonkers. Completely bonkers.

  • @thelibrarian7193
    @thelibrarian7193 5 років тому

    I pick killed the king bcuz I love the wordplay that you used.

  • @cheriansatish
    @cheriansatish 6 років тому

    How can I get my design looked at, where should I upload @zimri

  • @kacreative22
    @kacreative22 6 років тому

    Hey how do we know when and where to upload our designs? Because i really need an opinion on something

  • @aucuarium25
    @aucuarium25 5 років тому

    louis' bee hive: maybe it would have a bit more energy if u put the wavy gradient shape at the big space at the bottom idk

  • @kensis2390
    @kensis2390 5 років тому

    What program is he using?

  • @celiap.1949
    @celiap.1949 6 років тому

    Where do we vote ? :-)

  • @chelzhamoud6055
    @chelzhamoud6055 6 років тому +1

    Zimri! I love watching your videos! I'm currently working on my Bachelor's in Graphic Design and your such an inspiration! I can only hope that I have as much talent as you do one day! Also if you weren't on the opposite side of the United States, I would totally want to be your best friend. Your energy is contagious! :D

  • @kinjuk15
    @kinjuk15 6 років тому

    Louis' logo on that design is awfully close if not the same to a very established surf brand Al Merrick - Channel Islands. I'd recommend him to change it to something else.

  • @HENEYY
    @HENEYY 6 років тому

    Great Video Crunchy Logo my fav. :)

  • @owenrensland3633
    @owenrensland3633 5 років тому

    Hey what program do you use?

  • @joeljkb
    @joeljkb 6 років тому

    Very good episode man🤙🏼👌🏼

  • @thedeafgenius
    @thedeafgenius 6 років тому

    Also the last "pacman" in the Crunch logo looks like he has fangs so it needs to be erased so that the H is not tangent with the mouth.

  • @Emmyb
    @Emmyb 5 років тому

    Thanks for the motivation at the end ^_^

  • @SHAMIMAHMED-do4qw
    @SHAMIMAHMED-do4qw 6 років тому

    Yes & Thanks A lot

  • @wserenam
    @wserenam 6 років тому +1

    ......is anyone going to mention the clothespins on his ears?

  • @arebakken1702
    @arebakken1702 6 років тому

    I love the intro song

  • @viloriamarkjonel3028
    @viloriamarkjonel3028 6 років тому

    Good day 🙂 Can someone tell to me how to send logo for YGR? THANK YOU

  • @kasperstenbom
    @kasperstenbom 6 років тому

    I love your hair 😍

  • @michietube
    @michietube 6 років тому

    have you used the pattern feature on illustrator?? its so fuuuuunnn

  • @eladruby
    @eladruby 4 роки тому +1

    You killed the king

  • @phocus370
    @phocus370 5 років тому

    Can someone please tell what programm hes using?

  • @blakecrawford6168
    @blakecrawford6168 5 років тому

    are his eyes different colors

  • @tommylandrix6070
    @tommylandrix6070 3 роки тому

    The original Macbeth poster was much better. Had a much more epic feel. He only needed to make the dates a little more spaced apart.

  • @snehagiftcentre5841
    @snehagiftcentre5841 6 років тому +2

    Cool bro

  • @johnr7865
    @johnr7865 5 років тому

    What software is he using? 🤔

    • @EpicGamingNL
      @EpicGamingNL 5 років тому

      Adobe Illustrator and Adobe Photoshop

  • @RowanvanZijl
    @RowanvanZijl 6 років тому

    i wish i was as talented as all the designers around here

  • @algc19
    @algc19 6 років тому

    The Crunch logo felt too pointy. The way the tips of the Cs went above the next letter in the reduced version was too messy and spiky for me

  • @sayonara1390
    @sayonara1390 5 років тому +1

    Sorry, but the Peony logo was far better before the change.. :/ Personnaly, I don't like the new on at all.

  • @aidencullip6273
    @aidencullip6273 5 років тому

    Can someone pls tell me what software this is

    • @ken-yg6ob
      @ken-yg6ob 5 років тому

      Aiden Cullip Adobe Illustrator

  • @johnbautista9209
    @johnbautista9209 4 роки тому

    thanks

  • @aarond9563
    @aarond9563 6 років тому

    Am I the only one who still doesn't really know what "kutchered" means. I think Zimri does really well on most of them but I never know or if other people know if they're voting indicating their actual feelings.
    Macbeth'd the beth or killed the king? Like what does that really mean. Which one is made it better or worse. It's really frustrating. I know Zimri's silliness is part of his brand but too many times it gets in the way of the video and it's intended effect.

    • @CMTZ1
      @CMTZ1 6 років тому

      Aaron D kutchered means made it better. And although killed it is used in a positive connotation in slang, zimri uses it in a negative connotation.

  • @lucawch
    @lucawch 6 років тому

    Omg when i saw the "YGR 14" i thought my logo would be in this episode cuz im 14 years old and sent my logo to your email :c 😂

  • @rubama
    @rubama 5 років тому

    How can someone be so niiiiiice and enthusiast, I'm dying

  • @pakkn
    @pakkn 6 років тому

    that haircut thoooo 💯💯

  • @17Rasti
    @17Rasti 6 років тому

    My project would be included in YGR 153 probably :(

  • @madisonbrown3296
    @madisonbrown3296 5 років тому

    on the bee hive technology I thought it was a beehive with a noodle bowl on top, and a long noodle going into the hive....oops

  • @johann-space
    @johann-space 6 років тому

    You rule toooo :3

  • @ansiaaa
    @ansiaaa 5 років тому +2

    "... but you guys rule, with a house in a poo" ?

  • @Dvix-vg6vk
    @Dvix-vg6vk 5 років тому

    4:14 How ?:(

  • @rodrigomendonca5647
    @rodrigomendonca5647 6 років тому

    Será que sou o único BR que adora os vídeos dele? 🤔

  • @ZenrioBelieve
    @ZenrioBelieve 5 років тому

    2:34 wowwww

  • @wathah323
    @wathah323 5 років тому

    Do a logo of your hair

  • @SN-uk7lp
    @SN-uk7lp 6 років тому

    Zimri .. the votes are too complicated .. I don’t know what is good xD