kxiong_proj2_passeri

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  • Опубліковано 16 гру 2024

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  • @courtneymariewilson1
    @courtneymariewilson1 12 років тому

    You did a good job of matching the sound with the movement of the head. You should use white as the text color because it's hard to read the black on the dark blue background. The drawing of the bird is a great idea instead of using an image. Go back and shorten the video so that it stops around 6 or 7 seconds. The final layout is good, the title is big and legible and everything seems to be within the title and action safe box.

  • @courtneymariewilson1
    @courtneymariewilson1 12 років тому

    Also maybe add more movement to the body along with the bobbing of the head, just so the audience gets a better idea of it's characteristics.