Jose - These essays are absolutely wonderful. They do what admissions committee members hope for, which is to creatively convey who you really are as a person. As a Yale grad, I'm bummed you didn't choose my school, but Stanford is awesome as well. :) Best of luck, and have an amazing four years!
These essays were geneuity the only ones I "wowed." When I see others' videos, I'm always like "why him?" "why her?" (and "why me" when I proofread mine). Yours definitely showed why Yale chose you; any school will.
:) THIS is aMaZinG! I wish I’d see this sooner, it’s very helpful. It gave me a creative and different outlook (because you wrote really well and gave us your essay) on how to answer vague overreaching prompts! 👍🏽👍🏽
You have helped me so much! Yale’s questions are quite “deep” and it rlly gets you thinking. That’s why I like Yale. They aren’t just looking at your academics, they want to see you as a person. If that makes sense?
I'm not sure about Jose but I did some summer research in a biophysics lab and uploaded a recommendation from my supervising professor. If you have the chance to do so too it would greatly help your app if it comes from a respected individual (ie professor, mentor of research, etc)
woah. I found my male twin. (Expect I’m 14). I love cross country (running in general), sustainability, and politics. I’m also from Mexico. I’ve been thinking about college and I always liked Harvard and Princeton because I visited there. But honestly Yale sounds so much better. However I probably won’t get into either.
Hello. I am in middle school currently and hope to one day attend Yale. It is a dream of mine. I don’t yet know what I want to do there. All I know is that I really want to get into that school. One question I do have, is do you have to restate the question or just give an answer?
Hey Jose I'm applying to Yale fall 2020 session and I had a question regarding your "why these topics interest u"...So u said u selected 3 majors u were interested in but why didn't u write anything regarding ur interest in architecture? Is it because of the concise word limit
Out of all the Harvard/Yale essays I have seen on UA-cam, these were the best. Congrats on your admission!
Jose - These essays are absolutely wonderful. They do what admissions committee members hope for, which is to creatively convey who you really are as a person. As a Yale grad, I'm bummed you didn't choose my school, but Stanford is awesome as well. :) Best of luck, and have an amazing four years!
Omg I wish I could write like him. Its literal art.
your essays are so beautiful it makes me want to cry, thank you this video helps so much/ makes me excited to write!!
My jaw dropped at the John Winthrop essay! Thank you so much for this; it's good inspiration for my own Yale essays :))
Those essays are literally works of art. You should be super proud of them!
I am in literal awe. You write powerful, poetic, and articulated essays.
Your story about the sandbox.....so beautiful like wow your writing is amazing
These essays were geneuity the only ones I "wowed." When I see others' videos, I'm always like "why him?" "why her?" (and "why me" when I proofread mine). Yours definitely showed why Yale chose you; any school will.
im only in 9th grade, yale and Columbia are my dream schools. you’re truly inspiring.
Let me get this straight, your essays are not cut and dry. They are amazing ❤️❤️❤️
Eeeh, I’m shook. I need to improve my writing ASAP!! These were absolutely amazing essays.
I liked learning about Yale's short essay questions! Congratulations on your application.
My gaydar didn't work for the first time
what
@@thiagogregory1 did he stutter?
Haha ,
These are one of the best essays I have read so far.
:) THIS is aMaZinG! I wish I’d see this sooner, it’s very helpful. It gave me a creative and different outlook (because you wrote really well and gave us your essay) on how to answer vague overreaching prompts! 👍🏽👍🏽
WOW. I legit have no words, this is art.
These essays are poems, holy shit. Looks like I'm not getting in.
that's how im feeling right now :(
@@willcoomans9674 don’t feel this way, work hard to improve your skills and I am sure that you will be accepted to Yale.
You have helped me so much! Yale’s questions are quite “deep” and it rlly gets you thinking. That’s why I like Yale. They aren’t just looking at your academics, they want to see you as a person. If that makes sense?
Only if ur oppressed.
These are the best essays I have ever read.
I'm on the verge of breakdown because I feel so dumb reading your essays. I don't think I'd stop feeling miserable if I start crying now.
Oh my gosh you're a genius. So cool. You're an amazing writer
your essays are amazing and are an inspiration to me during the application process!
Nice. I liked how you articulate your points.
Did you add a supplement? Like a letter of recommendation from a mentor who you were working with in your research of sustainable development?
I'm not sure about Jose but I did some summer research in a biophysics lab and uploaded a recommendation from my supervising professor. If you have the chance to do so too it would greatly help your app if it comes from a respected individual (ie professor, mentor of research, etc)
Your essays are amazing! Thanks for sharing :)
I loved your essays... I'm also latino, and I just definitely love Yale (hope I get in).
woah. I found my male twin. (Expect I’m 14). I love cross country (running in general), sustainability, and politics. I’m also from Mexico.
I’ve been thinking about college and I always liked Harvard and Princeton because I visited there. But honestly Yale sounds so much better. However I probably won’t get into either.
Omg i just checked my sat scores and got a 1510 , 790 in math and 720 in Reading and writing...can I still get into harvard
In am very proud of you!
a what in the venn diagram?? this dude is next level..
Hello. I am in middle school currently and hope to one day attend Yale. It is a dream of mine. I don’t yet know what I want to do there. All I know is that I really want to get into that school. One question I do have, is do you have to restate the question or just give an answer?
Wow you’re so incredibly handsome!
Hey Jose I'm applying to Yale fall 2020 session and I had a question regarding your "why these topics interest u"...So u said u selected 3 majors u were interested in but why didn't u write anything regarding ur interest in architecture? Is it because of the concise
word limit
Hey man !
Just wondering...
Did you get selected in ?
wow....and that’s how you show not tell..
Your essays are really awesome! Thanks for sharing.
this is the first time my gaydar failed me
Looks like Blake Mitchell lol 😁
Congratulations? Did you get interviewed by Yale alum?
Which websites or books should we follow for writing poem type essays like you?
Please reply
thanks for sharing!
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Thank you!
Nice video
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Hi ...can u help me in essays
How to put your 'pest' foot forward? I'm appalled.