"Crownsfall" - Storyboard Animatic Scene

An animatic of the opening scene in The River Saints Vol. 1 by Matthew Westacott
(Both characters' lines read by me... because it was either that or forcing everyone to rely on the panel text lol)
FINALLY DONE. Is it a perfectly storyboarded scene with impeccable audio? Absolutely not, lol. But hey, gotta start somewhere and go up. In all seriousness, I really want to improve my storyboarding skills, so if anyone has experience working as a storyboard artist (or storyboarding for fun), please hit me with your critiques and comments. THANKS GUYS.
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[@westacottmd]

This actually had me on the verge of tears 🥲

[@Leewheeee]

:'(((((

[@julee779]

*standing ovation by me* WOOOO GO NAHEE SO GOOD!!!

[@yk2k_illustrations]

Bruh this is hella inspiring . I’ve legit been browsing through UA-cam too find smaller artists on this platforms . Super glad I stumbled upon your page keep it up !!!🙌💯🤩🥳🥳🥳 defo deserve more subs

[@Leewheeee]

Aww thank you!

[@also_known_as_whitecrow]

"describe what you see."
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"Stars"
-_- great description, kid. You get an A+ on that.

[@julee779]

also, that first chapter makes a lot more sense to me now. What a genius writer and storyboard-er

[@Leewheeee]

Did... did it not make sense before?? JUHEE WHAT

[@_graymatters]

wow nahee this was so nice 🥺

[@shivv06]

omg this... this is so awesome..!!

[@Leewheeee]

thank youu!

[@fuzzydragons]

nicely done!

[@anabell7184]

this is nice

[@Leewheeee]

ty!

[@taco.2651]

👏👏👏👏
very noice

[@Leewheeee]

ty!