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  • @IVOLUKE
    @IVOLUKE 3 роки тому +43

    This story is basically a Venom story. Like a symbiote went into the body of this kid and were the causes of the voices of his head. The symbiote guided/controlled him his entire life, giving him a chance to do bad things but the kid never did. He was always good at heart trying his best to resist the powers of the symbiote. Eventually he let the symbiote take full control of him due to the influence and agonizing pain the symbiote was causing and being pushed to rage by idiots. Those jocks at the end deserved what they got. My favorite part was when he fully embraced the dark power. Even the last line "We are everything" sounds a lot like "We are Venom". Great story!

    • @munkin8144
      @munkin8144 2 роки тому +4

      I wouldn't say they 'deserved' what they got, but they definitely needed sense knocked into them.

  • @greatgallade
    @greatgallade 3 роки тому +134

    Not going to lie the story came off a little as the quiet kid harboring a demon becomes it what the typical douchiest type of people surrounded him. A good story

    • @samsmith0303
      @samsmith0303 3 роки тому +13

      Yeah, went a little on the cringe side in the second half, personally I think a more subtle takeover would have been scarier but I still liked it.

    • @beegojeeson1834
      @beegojeeson1834 Рік тому +7

      I had a fucking stroke reading this

  • @koretechx1
    @koretechx1 3 роки тому +88

    I feel bad for the person who was bullied so badly that they wrote this. That it they've watched a lot of the CW. Great performance MCP, as always!

    • @cryptic_nightmares561
      @cryptic_nightmares561 3 роки тому +12

      @EliT lol actually the idea for this particular story came from a co-worker who wanted me to write a story where the main character gets tormented to the point he becomes the demon. So releasing control was the plan from the get go. Shout out to my co-worker Otto for the awesome story idea.

    • @davidmorningway6025
      @davidmorningway6025 3 роки тому +5

      @cryptic_nightmares, Great story, reminds me of a "Void" person from im a guard at a secret government prison by mr outlaw, like an origin story. I thought you were going to say for we are many instead of we are everything but it worked out great, it needs a sequel bro, like "The demon in the forest" even have it where he encounters evil cryptids and fight em, like a pack of wendigos or something and hikers walk into the middle of this skirmish....ya, that would be freakin narly!!!
      😈😎😇

    • @shadowstar7388
      @shadowstar7388 2 роки тому +1

      What's CW?

    • @jessicaklosek9849
      @jessicaklosek9849 Рік тому +1

      Lol the CW is a cable channel with a lot of "tweener" tv shows with super heros or supernatural stuff. Actually I think the series Supernatural was actually on CW. It used to have a different 2 lettered name when I was a kid, I believe it was WB but I'm getting old and not too sure. I LOVED this story! I love almost ALL the stories ive heard on creepypasta! It's my new "escape"! My 8 yr old lil girl LOVES it now too! We listen to at least 1 or 2 of these shorter ones in the car when we have busier days of errands and running around to do! I so wish I had come apon this kinda thing a LONG time ago! I save the longer stories 1 hour or more for my work week! My shifts fly by when I get lost in the amazing story telling!! B4 I know it im punching out and racing to my car to finish off the longer ones on commute from there!! 😊

  • @rachelknightonline
    @rachelknightonline 3 роки тому +24

    What have I become...
    Now that I've betrayed...
    Everyone I've ever loved...
    I pushed them all away...

  • @spencerryan4359
    @spencerryan4359 3 роки тому +62

    Proceeds to say "Hit it" for 3 Minutes.
    Me: How slow was the car going that they had Time for an Entire Argument about it?

    • @davidmorningway6025
      @davidmorningway6025 3 роки тому +4

      THANK YOU!! Like did the demon slow down time or something?! I barely have time to get out an aww f $%k when almost/actually hitting something 😈😎😇

    • @JustAFriendlySatanWorshipper
      @JustAFriendlySatanWorshipper 3 роки тому +1

      @@davidmorningway6025 for real I see people yelling or giving the finger or honking horn & I'm like barely able to do anything besides avoid being hit or something can't think to yell or do anything besides not get hit or avoid doing the hitting lmao

    • @seankeller1560
      @seankeller1560 3 роки тому

      Not to mention the dog seemed to just sit down and have a picnic

  • @robertomoore289
    @robertomoore289 3 роки тому +28

    MrCreepyPasta: *Begins premier*
    Me: M U S T G E T I N N O W

  • @DiscipleOfHeavyMeta1
    @DiscipleOfHeavyMeta1 3 роки тому +11

    ...my sweetest friend...

    • @chgreene9848
      @chgreene9848 3 роки тому +5

      everyone I know goes away in the end

    • @damesoumbi
      @damesoumbi 3 роки тому +1

      @@chgreene9848 and you could have it all...

  • @deadhookerundermybed
    @deadhookerundermybed 3 роки тому +22

    My sweetest friend?
    Everyone I know
    Goes away in the end.

    • @dragonlady3852
      @dragonlady3852 3 роки тому +3

      I wear this crown of thorns
      Upon my liar's chair
      Full of broken thoughts
      I can not repair

    • @crumbledcookie27
      @crumbledcookie27 3 роки тому

      @@dragonlady3852 i thought it was crown of sh*t

    • @notforsaletoday1895
      @notforsaletoday1895 3 роки тому +2

      I know it was a NIN song, but goddamn Johnny Cash made it his own.

    • @christyarellano2187
      @christyarellano2187 3 роки тому

      @@crumbledcookie27 it is

    • @GennipherKrabzree
      @GennipherKrabzree 3 місяці тому

      Sevendust does a good acoustic cover too!

  • @robustcrab5047
    @robustcrab5047 3 роки тому +32

    This just turned into an anime

    • @shadowstar7388
      @shadowstar7388 2 роки тому +1

      That would be an awesome anime. I would love an anime like that.

  • @crispykornflakes5990
    @crispykornflakes5990 3 роки тому +41

    24:24 of course the guys name is Chad lol. The other guys must be Brock, Brett, and Mark or something like that.
    But no for real this story was great. I love the “delusions that turn out to actually be real” stories.

  • @Strife5342
    @Strife5342 3 роки тому +6

    When he was the finishing the sentence saying we are, I legit said Venom. This is like a story of them if it came from hell. Great Story!

  • @maryjanerhoades3651
    @maryjanerhoades3651 3 роки тому +42

    Always with thee perfect timing tho

  • @cryptic_nightmares561
    @cryptic_nightmares561 3 роки тому +5

    Once again @mrcreepypasta amazing narration. And again thank you so much for choosing another of my stories. I cant express how much it means to me.

    • @CD-he5kc
      @CD-he5kc 3 роки тому +1

      This was really good I hope I get to hear more of your stories.

    • @cryptic_nightmares561
      @cryptic_nightmares561 3 роки тому +3

      @@CD-he5kc lol well you are in luck. Mcp has also narrated my stories:
      Theres something wring with my daughters treehouse
      My tiny town just got put on lockdown
      Im addicted to visitin other dimensions

    • @CD-he5kc
      @CD-he5kc 3 роки тому

      Thank you for listing them. I look forward to listening

    • @madzombiemusician5765
      @madzombiemusician5765 3 роки тому +1

      Holy crap this was incredible, I was hooked right from the beginning. Amazing talent to be totally emersed into the story ❤️

  • @Beka_Rex
    @Beka_Rex 3 роки тому +116

    The Chad part started to sound like a neckbeard/incel fantasy

  • @darrencampos3441
    @darrencampos3441 Рік тому +5

    The murder scenes were a masterpiece not just because of how violent but also just so fierce n also very descriptive
    Like how he had his hand inside her n gripped her spine to slam her into tree n also the decapitation twas pretty gnarly :)

  • @shyanneleecarlile9291
    @shyanneleecarlile9291 3 роки тому +14

    Kills dog: Noooo god no!!!
    Kills bearded douche: YES!! DO IT DO IT haha

  • @jamsandwichjesse8831
    @jamsandwichjesse8831 3 роки тому +15

    Do you plan to make a vid on ‘my summer as a security guard for a disturbing carnival’ you’ve already done part one a few months back

  • @gengar6666
    @gengar6666 3 роки тому +43

    Of all the victims.. The jocks had it coming. Just saying...

    • @toadflaxflower
      @toadflaxflower 3 роки тому +5

      I'd normally argue but I have no objection here

  • @jessicatran2539
    @jessicatran2539 3 роки тому +15

    I can't listen to this, finding another video on your channel. Best narrating that soothes my anxiety. Thank you.

  • @GmodPlusWoW
    @GmodPlusWoW 3 роки тому +6

    "You are an ant caught in the afterbirth, and you call ME insane."

  • @randomsimpson
    @randomsimpson Рік тому +1

    "What the fuck are you?"
    "My name is Legion...for we are many."

  • @MrOnepiece14
    @MrOnepiece14 3 роки тому +88

    "I... am... Everything."
    Wait, is the demon Legion? "For we are many?"
    Edit: Just finished. Great story and narration, but that poor bastard needs Jesus.

    • @davidmorningway6025
      @davidmorningway6025 3 роки тому +8

      RIGHT!!! I so thought he was gonna say "I am the demon, he is me, for WE are many! Glad im not the only one who caught that 😈😎😇

  • @Tacticalbacon666
    @Tacticalbacon666 3 роки тому +16

    I thought Mr creepypasta was gonna sing Hurt because of the title

    • @waltbriggs1821
      @waltbriggs1821 3 роки тому

      That would have been nice

    • @gabeblackburn8036
      @gabeblackburn8036 3 роки тому

      Took me a second haha

    • @davidmorningway6025
      @davidmorningway6025 3 роки тому

      He would need permission to do that or give all the money he made to the owner of the song rights. It would have been VERY cool to hear Trent or Johnny playing at the end as he gives in 😈😎😇

    • @fella_named_smokey
      @fella_named_smokey 3 роки тому

      🎶 ive tried but, i dont think so,
      maybe it was me who was fucking up,
      i gave all i could give but, it seems like it never really was enough 🎶

  • @loxyloafcake5184
    @loxyloafcake5184 3 роки тому +3

    I'm not saying this is the male version of a mary-sue story.
    But this is the male version of a mary-sue story.

  • @xxholicxxclover7413
    @xxholicxxclover7413 3 роки тому +5

    Had to stop midway through. Too much animal abuse and nonsensical violence. Guy should of talked to a therapist at some point.

  • @rosewilliford4855
    @rosewilliford4855 3 роки тому +6

    Angsty version of Casper's uncle's

  • @chrisfreese8713
    @chrisfreese8713 3 роки тому +3

    I loved it! I listen to creepy pasta mostly for d and d campaigns. Mr Creepy pasta thank you for your show and thank you author you inspired me lol

  • @mads4674
    @mads4674 3 роки тому +4

    I would love to hear you narrate I Am Nightmare!! :)

  • @Texas613
    @Texas613 3 роки тому +4

    ✨Demons✨or ✨schizophrenia✨

  • @SageNasty
    @SageNasty 3 роки тому +3

    you know, we definitely have enough audio to make a sensual mcp x mcp fanfic or something. that "hit it" he was saying was very aggressive and passionate.

  • @nessrodriguez2460
    @nessrodriguez2460 3 роки тому +4

    WHAT A GREAT STORY!!!!!

  • @justcallmeacar1426
    @justcallmeacar1426 3 роки тому +2

    WE ARE ...VENOM

  • @rikudo282
    @rikudo282 3 роки тому +2

    17:56 king arthur.... You became the legend XD

  • @gregmatic2861
    @gregmatic2861 3 роки тому +2

    I used to have voices in my head too but they got new jobs in another town and moved away. I miss them.

  • @qwik4755
    @qwik4755 3 роки тому +4

    "We are venom"

  • @ShazyShaze
    @ShazyShaze 3 роки тому +3

    The chad demon versus the incel chad

  • @lilxfreshh4769
    @lilxfreshh4769 Рік тому +1

    Is it just me who had a smile listening to this … I’m not crazy I swear but good video

  • @wearelegion5533
    @wearelegion5533 3 роки тому +1

    Brilliantly executed. Great VID as usual

  • @KnightsLantern
    @KnightsLantern 3 роки тому +1

    When Eugene reaches for his inner demons, it's time to run.

  • @frozztie7511
    @frozztie7511 Рік тому +1

    This came off as your typical schizophrenia story in the beginning, then it got real. Loved it, even though it was uncomfortable in the start

  • @Lovely-yg7ie
    @Lovely-yg7ie 3 роки тому

    I love the way you say "Its Me"

  • @corvid1926
    @corvid1926 3 роки тому +2

    "We are Venom."

  • @HuffleWolfT
    @HuffleWolfT Рік тому

    Did anyone else notice the way his voice got a little distorted when he said 'Invincible'. I had restarted that part more than once when I first listened to this story. It such a good story. And the narrating works beautifully

  • @rare1667
    @rare1667 3 роки тому +1

    I am so making a warlock barbarian for my next pc with this tail as my backstory 😈

  • @richiecostner5845
    @richiecostner5845 3 роки тому +1

    That was so flippin dope man that was awesome. Hooe theres a part 2

    • @CD-he5kc
      @CD-he5kc 3 роки тому

      I really do hooe so too bro lol

  • @DarkSektori
    @DarkSektori 3 роки тому +16

    Great another "the voices in my head made me do it" type story. I particularly enjoyed the part where he was worried about the voices driving him insane, um just a heads up, if you're to the point of hearing voices in your head then you're already insane.

    • @christopheraaron1255
      @christopheraaron1255 Рік тому +2

      Not necessarily

    • @Cstanek666
      @Cstanek666 Рік тому +2

      For real I agree with other dude,
      Totally not necessary my guy. That's a heavy subject for a lot of pepole, and that type of energy isn't welcome here. Please an thankyou bro..

    • @saetiller1849
      @saetiller1849 11 місяців тому

      Nah man not everyone who hears voices is crazy or wants to harm people

  • @darrickhill1650
    @darrickhill1650 3 роки тому +1

    Michael Myers as a child.

  • @joshlay447
    @joshlay447 3 роки тому +1

    Must train to find and end this monstrosity’s existence.

  • @mrslasher1064
    @mrslasher1064 3 роки тому +1

    The origins of the Lad

  • @MajesticWolfsx
    @MajesticWolfsx 3 роки тому +7

    This story started out strong but lost me in the middle. It just turned into an "ouch-the-edge" Three Days Grace fueled incel fantasy cringefest towards the end. MCP though is pretty awesome per usual.

    • @shitneyb5562
      @shitneyb5562 Рік тому

      The comment section is so emo I feel like I'm on Myspace

  • @Cheshire5174
    @Cheshire5174 2 роки тому

    "What are you!"
    "We are everything."
    sound familiar?
    Venom references aside, really cool story.

  • @albertouthere102
    @albertouthere102 Рік тому

    "what have i become, my sweetest friend"

  • @maxwellglover4880
    @maxwellglover4880 3 роки тому +1

    My sweetest friend....

  • @vocondus9585
    @vocondus9585 3 роки тому

    My sweetest frame

  • @rachelwakerley8617
    @rachelwakerley8617 3 роки тому +1

    Feck it, I'll start from the beginning 🤣🤣🤣

  • @christopheraaron1255
    @christopheraaron1255 3 роки тому +1

    Your parents fed you to stop the Department of Homeland Security showing up?!?

  • @chefkagedauntless4242
    @chefkagedauntless4242 3 роки тому +1

    Ok demonic Escanor 😭💪🏾😈

  • @matthewnations501
    @matthewnations501 3 роки тому +1

    My sweetest friend, everyone I know....

  • @laurasohn8332
    @laurasohn8332 3 роки тому +4

    I'll face myself to cross out what I've become
    Erase myself
    And let go of what I've done

  • @Terraraven
    @Terraraven 3 роки тому

    The writer missed out on having him say "we... are legion" 😩

  • @adrian.rollner
    @adrian.rollner 3 роки тому

    Well that escalated quickly

  • @cæci-o
    @cæci-o 3 роки тому +1

    7:45
    Nooooo frogs are my favorite animal Q.Q

  • @tysonhughes165
    @tysonhughes165 3 роки тому

    I crave videos like this

  • @vladtepesdragulia686
    @vladtepesdragulia686 2 роки тому +1

    You know.....as horrible,or traumatizing as it may seem or sound....this one....it mirrors what I've been through....what I am currently battling with inside my mind and my daily life. There's random points throughout my day when the entity that lives inside me takes complete control and I'll black out,coming back to my senses only when the deed is done and it's bloodlust and thirst and need for violence is finally quelled

    • @shitneyb5562
      @shitneyb5562 Рік тому

      Jesus christ, repress it like an adult.

  • @samaelazazel8994
    @samaelazazel8994 3 роки тому +3

    Hail MCP 💀

  • @thrakerzad5874
    @thrakerzad5874 3 роки тому

    this is one of my favorite short stories

  • @ozzy9226
    @ozzy9226 3 роки тому +1

    Hulk Jr. Having an identity crisis he should have just told Chad that he wouldn't like him when hes angry 😠

  • @genericname9994
    @genericname9994 3 роки тому

    “I don’t need friends, I’m part of the darkness”.

  • @rockspoon6528
    @rockspoon6528 3 роки тому +3

    I am legion, *for we are many.*

  • @samherrick5920
    @samherrick5920 3 роки тому

    My sweetest friend

  • @altamiecespell6838
    @altamiecespell6838 3 роки тому +1

    Me:waiting for live series ...

  • @rachelwakerley8617
    @rachelwakerley8617 3 роки тому

    Awww nooo, was having a lovely chat with Andrew xxx

  • @K3425
    @K3425 Рік тому

    Put it in a blender had me laughing so hard. I love these stories

  • @coffeezombie6032
    @coffeezombie6032 2 роки тому

    This is a really good story! Thanks

  • @anjalishukla314
    @anjalishukla314 3 роки тому

    idk why but for some reason when the girl asked "what the fuck are you?" and the guy replied with "i am everything", I imagined him saying "I am everything you're not".

  • @altamiecespell6838
    @altamiecespell6838 3 роки тому

    Me staring into my own soul waiting for mr creepy pastas next live chat

  • @marcuspotkato666
    @marcuspotkato666 3 роки тому

    This was soo nice!🖤🖤🖤

  • @Mark_87
    @Mark_87 3 роки тому

    John wick 4 is going to have him killing a demon with a pencil

  • @tentyone2149
    @tentyone2149 3 роки тому +1

    I am Legion, for we are many.

  • @ethereality1565
    @ethereality1565 3 роки тому

    it’s omni-man’s early life

  • @meditationwithsoundsofnatu2780
    @meditationwithsoundsofnatu2780 3 роки тому

    Amazing!!!!

  • @objectifymutahar1869
    @objectifymutahar1869 3 роки тому

    Lives in the woods. Doesn’t want to be around ppl. Has internet

  • @thegovermentmonitoringsyst1150
    @thegovermentmonitoringsyst1150 3 роки тому

    Another great story!!

  • @johngouin7716
    @johngouin7716 3 роки тому

    ohhhhhh... I'd love a sequel !

  • @jocelyn7264
    @jocelyn7264 2 роки тому +1

    Of course his name is Chad!😂

  • @susanhorn6401
    @susanhorn6401 2 роки тому

    This is so scary and sad 😭

  • @toadflaxflower
    @toadflaxflower 3 роки тому

    I- he has the evil version of the One For All quirk-

  • @shadowstar7388
    @shadowstar7388 2 роки тому

    Not gonna lie, I kindof really liked him killing the bullies, but I felt so bad for the poor innocent animals. But that was an amazing story. It reminds me of my drug addiction (which I'm healing from).

  • @madzombiemusician5765
    @madzombiemusician5765 3 роки тому

    That was incredible 👍❤️👍

  • @kooledice8831
    @kooledice8831 3 роки тому

    Dude I wish I was that guy like imagine he tried to make an agreement with the demon where there was 1 day a week they would kill anyone and in exchange the guy harboring the demon can use its power to help him, he'd be a demon hero and it'd be cool cuz he could use his enhanced strength to massacre criminals

  • @BWBParmwrestling
    @BWBParmwrestling 3 роки тому

    Impractical Jokers extended cut

  • @kirboskislowflo2270
    @kirboskislowflo2270 3 роки тому +1

    And yet the voices remain and yet they remain.. U said that already no that was you!! ahhh just put it in the blender bahahahaha

  • @nonamerandomman4494
    @nonamerandomman4494 3 роки тому +1

    Might be the best story I’ve heard this year

  • @TdawnT
    @TdawnT 3 роки тому

    Great story!

  • @Infinite.Worldz
    @Infinite.Worldz Рік тому

    Huh, so this is the origins of "the horde"

  • @newtfigton8795
    @newtfigton8795 11 місяців тому

    Whoever wrote this must be going through some struggles.

  • @roxycontinog69
    @roxycontinog69 3 роки тому

    The thumbnail looks like Robert Downey Jr.... like it's scary, mean, iron man!! Haha! Like Robert Downey/ A scanner darkly. Only... longer hair... just a cartoon iron man... I'm dumb. Anyhooooooo... great job MCP!! LAAAAVED IIIIT!!🤘🤘🤘🤘👏👏👏👏👻👻👻👻

  • @yozoplays0
    @yozoplays0 3 роки тому +1

    Legion?!

  • @Synthetic_Soul_CH
    @Synthetic_Soul_CH 3 роки тому +1

    We are Venom

  • @greywalker505
    @greywalker505 Рік тому +1

    Spoilers
    I couldn't take the story seriously. It sounded like something from r/iamverybadass. Granted, something from r/iamverybadass read well by MCP, but r/iamverybadass material all the same. I mean, I’m cool with the whole “demons-slowly-possessing-the-protagonist” thing, but why is it written like he still feels shame for his deeds? Logically, if he was possessed or whatever, he shouldn't be expressing guilt. And then there was the fact that everyone seemed to irrationally hate the protagonist. None of them acted like...well, people. Maybe that could be chalked up to the demons’ influence, but that feels like a cop-out. No hate on the author, let alone MCP.