Me fr bruh I literally just converted this one japanese myth of a moon princess coming down to earth to a full on high tier novel with a shit load ton of backstory and shit, even has time travel because since the main character and the love interest’s fate were never meant to be so eventually the mc was flung far into the future as the two are seperated by time. And guess what, I CANT WRITE IT BECAUSE IM TOO LAZY AND THATS GONNA TAKE A LOT OF TIME
Even if you don’t remember this comment, that character page thing at the start really helps. So does the map. Also.. bored car rides or when eating out.
Honestly I can’t do one thing at a time, I have to be doing at least two things while writing so I don’t feel useless so my writing is all over the place that’s why proof reading and editing is a nice things to do that I don’t do because I procrastinate more then I breathe
I somehow was able to plan for like hours, but it has sapped A LOT of energy. And I have to write it in my notebook now. I don't have the energy. My room on the other hand? A mess.
5:30 “And although their hearts beat in sync, and they knew each other’s favorite songs, and their favorite place to eat, no one could deny: together they held a two-sided sword, ready to destroy the one thing they sought to protect.”
I’m probably going to cry when I hold my book for the first time. I started it when I was only 15; this book has come of age with me. No matter what I went through, it was still there. It gave me a sense of stability. Without it, I would feel so lost.
I 10000% will do that. I’ve been working on mine since 12 and it’s been four years working on it with my series I promised a friend who graduated last year whom i also may not see again just because of distances and relation that I’d publish and it’s been my biggest motivator to bring all my books to their best states possible and make it perfect to put out there in the world This is for you Tyler!✊
I’m 13 years old with a pencil in my room, writing a novel about a corrupt government. We’ll see if we succeed. Currently it’s called “Where Canaries Sing” and I’m on chapter 1. Claim your seats if this ever gets published!
5:30 I stared at her, in a crimson mess on the floor, and felt excitement spread up my spine. My hands trembled with joy, and I thought to myself, she was so naive. I won the game.
5:30 she had always been told she couldn’t change fate. But she could escape it. Her eyes locked on his one last time and she plunged the dagger through her chest.
5:30 "When it seems your world is crumbling you always have your lover to lean on; but what happens if your lover /is/ your world?" 6:30 "I hate goodbyes, so promise me this isn't the end? Alright? Promise me, that even if your memory erases my face, you'll remember the venture we went on. Promise me that you won't forget me, cause I /promise/ I won't forget you." Then the next book is where the character who promised to never forget has memory loss :)
5:43 bruh this is so relatable. I was writing the first 2 chapter of one of my books and it was exciting since I had such a CLEAR idea what I was going to do for those chapters but when I came to the part where I had no idea where to take the story:
5:29 Two lovebirds stick together forever, but when their forever turns into a short-term feeling, you find out your sword had two ends and one of them is pointing at you.
5:36 She stared up at me, resigned but hurt. We both knew it was coming. “You know, I really did mean it, on our wedding day.” She smiled. “Till death do us part.” Her head fell limp on the ground, the knife still deep inside of her. I had won.
OK but like why would this be perfect for a character dying idk WHOOOO but like I thought of this just now- "I never thought we would reach this part of the story. I just hope you can keep going without me in it." He said weakly, releasing a shuddering breath before his eyes drifted shut. "NO!" (idk what to name her) screamed, pain in her scream showing and making the others around her feel it. "No.." She whispered as tears dripped onto the bloody grass. "I don't want to turn the page if you won't be there."
5:29 "Though fate seemed to bring these two shinning stars together, when stars collide everything goes up in flames.... sometimes that can create a spark, igniting something even more beautiful and in others it can shed light to something that was never meant to be found, though we may try our best to be in control, destiny always prevails" ooop- that was a bit longer than intended -v-
5:30 "After all this time, I believed that two people who care deeply about one another would fix each other" she spoke as a tear ran down her cheek. They both stood on opposite sides of the room, neither of them having the courage to look the other in the eye. "But you and I.." her voice cracked as she started to let out more uncontrollable sobs. And for the first time in a long time, they both looked each other in the eye "We shatter each other"
For the two lovers "They were gone. My two best friends in the entire world. The two who were destined for each other. I suppose I was right Love truly is a Curse"
5:35 they looked at each other then blooded smiles drawn on their faces as the life drain out of them when she spoke telling her in the only way she could that she loved her "we always knew it would end like this and even if I saw this exactly ended, I would still reach for your hand over and over again."
"You could have fixed me." She lowered his limp head to the ground. "You were supposed to fix me." Sliding the dagger, still slick with blood, into her pocket, she began the long walk home.
5:30 - "It had to be this way." (Also I am not a writer so I'm sorry for what you're about to read, just got bored) Love: "They set their weapons down by their sides, tears filling their eyes. The both of them knew fate had drawn them together, even if it was for worse, but they couldn't let fate win. Running to each other, and welcoming the other into their arms, they just knew, it had to be this way." Fate: "It was unfortunate, really. The two rivals, though filled with love for the other, knew how this would end. They knew it couldn't last. As (#1) held their sword to (#2)'s throat, (#1) couldn't stop the flow of tears going down their face. In a sorrowful tone, slowly moving the sword closer to (#2), (#1) cried, "It had to be this way."
5:30 "She sobbed and screamed, cradling her love, her wife's body in her arms, knowing it was her own blade that did this, not anyone else's." 6:30 "The stars will shine on us again, my darling. I swear it to you." Two lovers in a forbidden relationship, one promising the other that they'll find each other again.
If anyone was wondering the template at the time 0:11 it’s made by Capparistart I searched up character template and it popped up for me but you might need the name
5:30 Their love burned bright, like a blazing fire, but like a moth drawn to flame, it ended in disaster. (This is kinda terrible, I don’t write this kinda stuff)
🚨HELP🚨 I have an English writing task due in later today and I currently have ONE SENTENCE!!! I do love that sentence tho “As she opened the door, she had wished for an adventure, well as least she got that” Basically this girl lives on an open-air museum and she finds an undiscovered building/bunker thing and explores it. The task is that I have to write the first chapter
5:36 perhaps this was what love was, and what it had always been; a ticking time bomb, an inhale without an exhale, something that had never been theirs to have.
Okay so I’m writing a dystopian novel called “Zone of Totality” but I don’t have any writer friends so I’m telling y’all, but the amount of deaths I just wrote is insane 😭 the villain arc after one of the MC’s realizes one of her friends has been murdered by their friend?? 🧑🍳💋 I’m in love with everything about this novel and I really hope O can finish it soon and publish it
5:31 It never mattered that they would end each other. At least not to them. The only thing that mattered to them were these final moments, holding each other as the world started to fade. They looked into each other’s eyes, knowing that the other’s face was the last thing they would ever see, and they both smiled. Never before had death tasted so sweet.
6:30 His pov: our creation is over, firefly. please dont ever think you weren't worth it. on the contrary, i loved you with my entire soul. Her pov: i dropped to my knees, as he walked out the door. "i have to let him go" i said out-loud. so delicate as if saying the words would cause an earthquake.
5:30 "I... I've made a mistake..." she spoke in stutters as her one true loved layed on the ground, lifeless. Crimson blood leaked from his head and a single tear falls from his deathly gaze. She grabbed his cold, limp hand. With his final breath he whispered the three words that haunted her forever... "I Love you..." hahahahahaha I'm not sad, you see its 3:42 in the f**king morning and I feel f**king emotionless. lmao.
5:30 This is my best shot idk how it would come to this but... And like even the most beautiful stars, they imploded. But like brilliant stardust, they created something even more beautiful doing so.
5:30 Main Characacter's POV: Cruel crossroads of fate. Save his life and bask in his affection, or prove him wrong and revel in his anguish. It was hardly a choice. I was destined for greatness. Love Interest's POV: Wilful little pet. You ask why I keep you sequestered away? Don't you recall having abandoned me so many years ago? Having cast me aside upon cold stone steps on a winter morning? Why - I simply act as I was taught. You're better off *mine* than happy.
5:30 - "With the same confidence I had once naively thought we were fated for love and happiness til the end of time, I now knew that wasn't true, and what we *were* fated for was but obsession and hate." (Hope that inspires someone lol)
5:25 He looked at me, his gun in hand, facing me, his finger on the trigger, yet he didn’t shoot, instead he brought his arm down back to his side and dropped the weapon. I was sitting on the ground, I still hadn’t gotten up from when his friend pushed me to the ground and knocked me out. He started walking closer and closer, until he was standing right in front of me, everyone was looking at each other in confusion, then their looks turned to surprise as he knelt down in front of me, grabbed my chin, looked deep into my eyes, and kissed me, then and there, not worrying about a single thing. It was perfect, I couldn’t help but sink into the kiss, melting in his arms as mine found their way around his neck. But nothing could last this perfect forever.
5:28 "And the only promises we both fulfilled where the ones who ended us. But love, just for you I'll make on last promise. Just for you. Time will show if I can fulfill it, you know how bad I'm at it." he says while tears run down his cheeks, trying to smile but agony in his eyes give him away. She smirk, taking the knife he stabbed her with from her stomach. "I'd bet, love. But I'm afraid I won't be able to hear it. 'cause I might faint to my eternal sleep." she says and before he could react, she faints as she fall to her knees, one tear shedding from her right eye. She wasn't actually heartbroken, she died in piece. And that what broke him the most. -GIRL! I do wonders when I don't think much.
5:25 “ I thought we could make it work…” she said in a chocked sob “I did too…” tears streamed down both of their cheeks as the sun rose for the last time.
5:29 Just because we were meant to be together doesn't mean we were meant to be forever. All I can pray is that she's happier without me. As I look her dead in the eyes, she plunges the knife into my heart piercing it one last times-with her beauty and her dagger.
@@incandescent- LMAO I WAS GONNA SAY WHAT A CHARACTER SAYS GOODBYE IN!! The game is Your turn to die btw it's also not for children but it's very good 🧍
judging by your pfp and username, im guessing this is about a certain holder of the sacrifice card? in which case I am sobbing and crying why would you remind me
5:24 If anyone is interested in a book like this, you should read ‘The Night Circus.’ It’s incredible! It’s about two young magicians that were forced into a duel, but they fall in love. It’s definitely a magical book, and it’s very fun to imagine the scenery because of how unique it is. There are two different story lines in the book, that eventually merge together as well, so if you like books like that, you’d love this one. Seriously my favorite book. I read it when I was 12, but I honestly should’ve waited a few more years. It had a short scene where they got to the point where they were starting to do something more than just kissing, but it wasn’t too descriptive, and the chapter ended by that point. I was fine reading it, personally, but my mom would probably not have agreed to let me read it if she had known about that scene.
5:28 "i was so fiercely in love with him it destroyed me. Even though we eventually knew our fates we couldn't stay away. I am his and he is mine. Forever more"
5:30 Her lover stares into her eyes but she just looks away. No one has ever cared about either of them, she knows that. No one will care if they're dead. But they'll be gone. She cries on his shoulder. "Hey, you know we have to do this, they'll kill us either way. Better each other than them." He grabs her face and makes her look at him. "I'd rather die in your arms than in their hands. I love you" "I'll love you forever" she replies. "We're doing it together, like always." "On 3." "1..." "2..." Boom.
5:30 They were stars that found each other when they were alone in the universe. But what everyone seems to forget, is that when two stars get too close together, one of them will eventually consume the other entirely.
Binary systems are created from the beginning, it would be very improbable for 2 lone stars to come together close enough to become binary system. For example closest star to Sun is few *light years* away
Lol I do that sometimes. Sometimes I just need to get the ideas down asap and I leave it untitled. Then I end up frantically searching Google Docs for random keywords that I'm hoping I've mentioned.
5:32 We were different people, with different minds. People say that opposites attract-but in really, opposites neutralize each other, or maybe we were just ment to destroy not to build
5:30 "but even through the rose-tinted lenses, neither of them could've filtered their crimson bloodlust out." "it was one last masquerade. it was either kill him now, or allow many to die. =fighting scene ensues or whatever= i only had one last chance to save myself, and i wasted it. it was already too late. i was pinned, his weapon in hand, ready to kill. 'any last words?' he said. i had nothing to say. i slipped my mask off, and he did as well. and as my eyes stared back at that familiar face, both of us registering who we were really fighting all this time, i realized something. my last moments on this earth are not going to be spent sweetly in my lover's arms, but instead spent bitterly, dying by his hands. "alas, there is a very fine line between loving and loathing, and we've danced upon it gracefully."
5:27 "Her hands coated in crimson, her eyes pooled with shock, her mouth agape; tears streamed down her face. She was staring at the dead body of her lover; the woman couldn't look away but say, 'See you on the other side, my love.' Once she moved away, she grabbed the knife that fell and plunged it into the heart that made her feel love."
5:29 He smiled at her for what would be the last time, the stars glittering over the reddened grass, her breathing growing shallow and weak. His wish on the night they fell in love was not granted by the stars falling from the sky, if it was, they would not have to be this way, they would not have to say goodbye.
5:30 "he trembled as he held the gun up to her chest. How could you fall in love with someone you had to kill? 'I'm sorry, my love.' He started 'But we both knew it was going to have to come down to this eventually. It was inevitable. Eat or get eaten as they say. I love you so much. I pray you forgive me for this' he whispered the last part Squeezing his eyes shut he pulled the trigger. He fell to the ground in a weeping mess. Because no matter how much you want something, you can't change your fate"
5:30 When their pawns fell with their court, the two met far from the aftermath. To the left, the Ruler of Beasts. To the right, the Chosen of Mankind. They were the pinnacle of their people, paragons for monsters and humanity respectively. By being with each other, one learned what it meant to hate while one learned peace. One became human. One became a beast. What were two lonely people in the world became a pair. They both died, reborn as the other, realizing that true love came by understanding one another.
5:36 As I watched the two become one, I realized with sudden and utter despair why the tribes--the tribes I had helped bring together, away from their fighting--never intermixed, never allowed each other to stay in such close proximity. For as the two became one, she melted him as he put her out... The End.
5:30 "the sun and moon are made for each other, they both shine in their realm, chasing each other from day to day. they too were like the sun and moon. But I suppose we all know what happens when both the sun and moon meet each other; The sky erupts in flames and they were no different..."
5:30 “It’s impossible” he muttered. “No it’s not! I love you!” I snapped in response. That was the last thing he said to me before he attacked. He swung his sword at me and I blocked it, piercing his heart in the process. I destroyed him physically. He ruined me mentally.
5:30 They say "All things end as they begin". With my sword at her throat and her sword at mine, I understood the whispers of the old wives and widows in the streets, "Love is the making and undoing of all things."
5:30 There, the two lovers, one the city's hero, and one the villain, stand at a cliffs edge. The city is below, cheering on their hero. The two lovers lock eyes, feeling sorrowful, that this is their destiny. The hero, pain in his eyes, takes a shakey breath in. He hugs his lover, and as he lets go, he ever so slightly pushes him off the edge. "Till death do us part.."
I just randomly do this thing where I think of characters who’d be awesome for my story like mid way but then I realize I’m trying to create a love triangle and I stop
1:01 Okay, so I just base them off of myself and my past? Seriously, though, I’m worried. I’ve had therapy once a week for over two years and I still lose touch from reality (usually due to emotional flashbacks) relatively frequently. Like, at the airport today, I, a 19 y/o, yelled at my mom that I wanted to finally be a good kid instead of blatantly defying her all the time, leading a few actual kids nearby to give me weird looks. I want to be sane, but I don’t even remember what sanity feels like anymore. Just to be clear, I never had any issues with my parents; that mindset came from authoritarian teachers and somehow got projected onto my mom earlier, probably due to a combination of agoraphobia and jet-lag-induced exhaustion.
8:01 like her notes are so beautiful and organised... And mine look like they are written by 6 year old child and i am the only person that understands them
5:24 She stared. He walked away with her heart in his hands. But she was alive. She could still feel. And in a daze, she thought: "he should have left me free for real". 6:25 She looked into his eyes for as long as it didn't hurt, then looked away as the first tear fell down to the wooden floor. "I hate to say goodbye" she whispered. "So don't." And he kissed her.
5:39 “I love you… and I’m so sorry!” I pull [character’s name] close to my chest as their muscles become limp, “Sleep well darling.” A single tear rolls down my cheek as the sun dips below the horizon and the world becomes a darker place.
5:30 I lay there on the ground, feeling the blood flow from my body, yet I can’t fight it. It is too far into death for me to turn back. I turn my head to look at them, for they too have a crimson river leaving their body. I reach out my hand to them and they grab it, neither of us wanting to let go. I see them smile, to which I immediately return. I give they hand one last squeeze as I feel the life from me leave my body behind. My vision goes blurry, then dark. I’m glad the last thing I saw was their face. For many, it is till death do they part, but for us? May not even the strongest of gravity’s tear me away from you, my love.
Who else can make a good storyline but not write it out into 400 pages
Me 🖐Same with word count. People are like, "I wrote 3k words, so that's pretty good." and I'm like "Oh my gosh! This is 700 words that's so long!!"
I have great story ideas but I can’t write it out into like 1,000 words!
I feel ya. I get a great idea and then get stuck on chapter one.
Me fr bruh I literally just converted this one japanese myth of a moon princess coming down to earth to a full on high tier novel with a shit load ton of backstory and shit, even has time travel because since the main character and the love interest’s fate were never meant to be so eventually the mc was flung far into the future as the two are seperated by time. And guess what, I CANT WRITE IT BECAUSE IM TOO LAZY AND THATS GONNA TAKE A LOT OF TIME
ME!!!
Bro some of these writers are so organized, and im over here like
📝💨
Same! How do these people have the motivation to plan this much?
Even if you don’t remember this comment, that character page thing at the start really helps. So does the map. Also..
bored car rides or when eating out.
Honestly I can’t do one thing at a time, I have to be doing at least two things while writing so I don’t feel useless so my writing is all over the place that’s why proof reading and editing is a nice things to do that I don’t do because I procrastinate more then I breathe
im over here like not writing
I somehow was able to plan for like hours, but it has sapped A LOT of energy. And I have to write it in my notebook now. I don't have the energy. My room on the other hand? A mess.
5:29 “They were star-crossed lovers, no one could deny that. But when stars cross paths, the universe goes up in flames.”
HOLY FFFFFFFUAHGHUH I LOVE THIS ??? FULL BOOK PLS AND TY LMFAO
OK that's genius-
Can I use that
@@sanrioisfuckinawesome of course!
ALBERT ENISTIEN HELLO?
It's just. About. Choosing. A. Theme. For. A. Chapter. And. Breaking. It. Into. Smaller. Potions
5:30
“And although their hearts beat in sync, and they knew each other’s favorite songs, and their favorite place to eat, no one could deny: together they held a two-sided sword, ready to destroy the one thing they sought to protect.”
5:35 two stars can shine just as brightly, but they're never going to be able to hide the darkness between them.
stop that’s so good?? i would definitely read that!!
@@incandescent- thank you!!! that's a quote from a book I'm writing haha
@@reminiscence7676 it sounds so good! i want to read it when it‘s out!
@@reminiscence7676Omg that sounds so good when ur done can u tell me the name I wanna buy it
The interstellar matter is what "hides" darkness (whatever it means). But it also shines so I'm not sure if it's so good at hiding darkness
I’m probably going to cry when I hold my book for the first time. I started it when I was only 15; this book has come of age with me. No matter what I went through, it was still there. It gave me a sense of stability. Without it, I would feel so lost.
I. Think. I LL. Do. The. Same. Too
I 10000% will do that. I’ve been working on mine since 12 and it’s been four years working on it with my series
I promised a friend who graduated last year whom i also may not see again just because of distances and relation that I’d publish and it’s been my biggest motivator to bring all my books to their best states possible and make it perfect to put out there in the world
This is for you Tyler!✊
I've only been working on mine for two months and I'm 14.. hopefully mine will stick with me that long!!
@@The_Xutsiders Good luck!
I’m 13 years old with a pencil in my room, writing a novel about a corrupt government. We’ll see if we succeed. Currently it’s called “Where Canaries Sing” and I’m on chapter 1. Claim your seats if this ever gets published!
Are you still writing this or did you give up? I'm just wondering what chapter your up to.
Soo did you finish it?
claiming my seat!
My seat is claimeddd
update?
5:30 I stared at her, in a crimson mess on the floor, and felt excitement spread up my spine. My hands trembled with joy, and I thought to myself, she was so naive. I won the game.
5:30 “All lovers breakup at some point, right?” She said as she placed flowers on her lover’s grave.
5:30 she had always been told she couldn’t change fate. But she could escape it. Her eyes locked on his one last time and she plunged the dagger through her chest.
5:30
"When it seems your world is crumbling you always have your lover to lean on; but what happens if your lover /is/ your world?"
6:30
"I hate goodbyes, so promise me this isn't the end? Alright? Promise me, that even if your memory erases my face, you'll remember the venture we went on. Promise me that you won't forget me, cause I /promise/ I won't forget you." Then the next book is where the character who promised to never forget has memory loss :)
these are so beautiful but so painful and sad 🥺
WHAT IS THE WEBSITE AT 4:11 I NEED TO KNOW
@@dippedinsilver_music I know you probably don’t need this anymore but I think it’s Inkarnate
@@TheQueenEliana ok ty!
i love amnesia tropes and i feel like THERE ISN'T ENOUGH BOOKS OF IT😭
5:30 Because even the light of love couldn't save them from the darkness of their fate.
that’s upsetting but i would sooo read it
5:30 “Everything now seemed clearer than it ever had before. They were two worlds apart, and now, they clashed.”
THIS IS BEAUTIFUL I LOVE IT
I HAVE TO READ THIS
5:37
"And as his limp hand slipped from her grip, she froze up and began to cry. She had never gotten the chance to say "I love you"."
5:43 bruh this is so relatable. I was writing the first 2 chapter of one of my books and it was exciting since I had such a CLEAR idea what I was going to do for those chapters but when I came to the part where I had no idea where to take the story:
5:29 Two lovebirds stick together forever, but when their forever turns into a short-term feeling, you find out your sword had two ends and one of them is pointing at you.
5:36 She stared up at me, resigned but hurt. We both knew it was coming.
“You know, I really did mean it, on our wedding day.” She smiled.
“Till death do us part.” Her head fell limp on the ground, the knife still deep inside of her. I had won.
OMG I WANT TO READ THIS BOOK SOOO BAD
OK but like why would this be perfect for a character dying idk WHOOOO but like I thought of this just now-
"I never thought we would reach this part of the story. I just hope you can keep going without me in it." He said weakly, releasing a shuddering breath before his eyes drifted shut. "NO!" (idk what to name her) screamed, pain in her scream showing and making the others around her feel it. "No.." She whispered as tears dripped onto the bloody grass. "I don't want to turn the page if you won't be there."
😭😭😭😭 (your book is gonna be great)
5:29
"Though fate seemed to bring these two shinning stars together, when stars collide everything goes up in flames.... sometimes that can create a spark, igniting something even more beautiful and in others it can shed light to something that was never meant to be found, though we may try our best to be in control, destiny always prevails"
ooop- that was a bit longer than intended -v-
5:30
"After all this time, I believed that two people who care deeply about one another would fix each other" she spoke as a tear ran down her cheek.
They both stood on opposite sides of the room, neither of them having the courage to look the other in the eye.
"But you and I.." her voice cracked as she started to let out more uncontrollable sobs. And for the first time in a long time, they both looked each other in the eye
"We shatter each other"
5:31 We both tried to win, but we both ended up losing.
this is something i would read
Shut up that is so good?? How are yall so creative 😭❤️
For the two lovers "They were gone. My two best friends in the entire world. The two who were destined for each other. I suppose I was right Love truly is a Curse"
5:30 We where two for eternity, but then we where one. We barely got to know what it felt like to be one before we were zero.
5:35 they looked at each other then blooded smiles drawn on their faces as the life drain out of them when she spoke telling her in the only way she could that she loved her "we always knew it would end like this and even if I saw this exactly ended, I would still reach for your hand over and over again."
'names that mean wisdom'
Solomon
Me: *he can't cook* 🧍
sophie was right there???? and athena
"You could have fixed me." She lowered his limp head to the ground. "You were supposed to fix me."
Sliding the dagger, still slick with blood, into her pocket, she began the long walk home.
5:30 - "It had to be this way."
(Also I am not a writer so I'm sorry for what you're about to read, just got bored)
Love: "They set their weapons down by their sides, tears filling their eyes. The both of them knew fate had drawn them together, even if it was for worse, but they couldn't let fate win. Running to each other, and welcoming the other into their arms, they just knew, it had to be this way."
Fate: "It was unfortunate, really. The two rivals, though filled with love for the other, knew how this would end. They knew it couldn't last. As (#1) held their sword to (#2)'s throat, (#1) couldn't stop the flow of tears going down their face. In a sorrowful tone, slowly moving the sword closer to (#2), (#1) cried, "It had to be this way."
5:33 “Oh darling, I wonder if in the next life, our lives will be just as tragic.”
2:40
i envy her ability.
5:35
“And it was that spark between us- the dwindling, confusing flame and obsession- that left us burnt.”
5:30
"She sobbed and screamed, cradling her love, her wife's body in her arms, knowing it was her own blade that did this, not anyone else's."
6:30
"The stars will shine on us again, my darling. I swear it to you." Two lovers in a forbidden relationship, one promising the other that they'll find each other again.
If anyone was wondering the template at the time 0:11 it’s made by Capparistart I searched up character template and it popped up for me but you might need the name
5:30 Their love burned bright, like a blazing fire, but like a moth drawn to flame, it ended in disaster. (This is kinda terrible, I don’t write this kinda stuff)
5:30 “She looked into his lifeless eyes, those eyes that held a spark of admiration and love. But, she had just extinguished that brightful candle.”
as someone with adhd sticking to one storyline/book im writing is soooo difficult
Same, I always have several ideas I want to work on, but I can’t choose which to focus on most :/
🚨HELP🚨 I have an English writing task due in later today and I currently have ONE SENTENCE!!!
I do love that sentence tho
“As she opened the door, she had wished for an adventure, well as least she got that”
Basically this girl lives on an open-air museum and she finds an undiscovered building/bunker thing and explores it. The task is that I have to write the first chapter
Sorry lol it takes me a month to write a chapter 😂
Did you finish it?
@@benmemon I must’ve done but I can remember what I did
Anyone else more excited for your book's movie adaptation and fandom than actually getting the book done?
5:36 The flames of his love had burned bright. But hers had burned brighter.
6:30 "I hate goodbyes, so let's just say see you next time."
5:36 perhaps this was what love was, and what it had always been; a ticking time bomb, an inhale without an exhale, something that had never been theirs to have.
This one is my favorite!!
5:35 “And suddenly, it was over, and she felt herself begin to forget.”
5:37 “I always knew it would have to be me…” I muttered, before walking away from his lifeless body.
5:32 and so we slayed each other in the light of the full moon. Periodt
i love it but this would hurt me
Okay so I’m writing a dystopian novel called “Zone of Totality” but I don’t have any writer friends so I’m telling y’all, but the amount of deaths I just wrote is insane 😭 the villain arc after one of the MC’s realizes one of her friends has been murdered by their friend?? 🧑🍳💋 I’m in love with everything about this novel and I really hope O can finish it soon and publish it
I* sorry for any typos I’m a fast typer 😭
5:29 „In the end the ones who can hurt you the most are the ones you love, huh?“
5:30
“Until our next lives, let’s pray our destinies will change.”
5:31 "The night swallows each of her sobs, her grief white-hot and burning as the stars they had once gazed up at together."
5:34
"I love you, so that's why we're gonna die together."
Saving.
6:28
5:29 ; I love you, but sometimes love isn't enough.
5:31 It never mattered that they would end each other. At least not to them. The only thing that mattered to them were these final moments, holding each other as the world started to fade. They looked into each other’s eyes, knowing that the other’s face was the last thing they would ever see, and they both smiled. Never before had death tasted so sweet.
6:30
His pov:
our creation is over, firefly. please dont ever think you weren't worth it. on the contrary, i loved you with my entire soul.
Her pov:
i dropped to my knees, as he walked out the door. "i have to let him go" i said out-loud. so delicate as if saying the words would cause an earthquake.
5:31
We said: " until the end of eternity!" My friend-
I reached the end of mine and you will need to continue your own.
5:30: We lit that spark inside each other, not realizing we fueled an explosion til it all came crumbling down.
This one is sooo good
@@sylviaisafoot6570 thank you!
Ooh yes I love this
I’m def gonna use “I was hoping we wouldn’t get to this part” for when one of my characters has to go to a space station :,)
5:30 "I... I've made a mistake..." she spoke in stutters as her one true loved layed on the ground, lifeless. Crimson blood leaked from his head and a single tear falls from his deathly gaze. She grabbed his cold, limp hand. With his final breath he whispered the three words that haunted her forever... "I Love you..."
hahahahahaha I'm not sad, you see its 3:42 in the f**king morning and I feel f**king emotionless. lmao.
5:30
This is my best shot idk how it would come to this but...
And like even the most beautiful stars, they imploded. But like brilliant stardust, they created something even more beautiful doing so.
2:33 YASSS GIRL YOU GO FOR IT!!!!!!!! I"M HERE FOR YOU AND WHEN YOUR DONE!
5:30
Main Characacter's POV:
Cruel crossroads of fate. Save his life and bask in his affection, or prove him wrong and revel in his anguish. It was hardly a choice.
I was destined for greatness.
Love Interest's POV:
Wilful little pet. You ask why I keep you sequestered away? Don't you recall having abandoned me so many years ago? Having cast me aside upon cold stone steps on a winter morning?
Why - I simply act as I was taught. You're better off *mine* than happy.
5:30
"you love me, vice versa. done. but the thing is, the word 'love' doesn't quite fit. its more like 'destroyed' "
5:30 - "With the same confidence I had once naively thought we were fated for love and happiness til the end of time, I now knew that wasn't true, and what we *were* fated for was but obsession and hate." (Hope that inspires someone lol)
5:25
He looked at me, his gun in hand, facing me, his finger on the trigger, yet he didn’t shoot, instead he brought his arm down back to his side and dropped the weapon.
I was sitting on the ground, I still hadn’t gotten up from when his friend pushed me to the ground and knocked me out. He started walking closer and closer, until he was standing right in front of me, everyone was looking at each other in confusion, then their looks turned to surprise as he knelt down in front of me, grabbed my chin, looked deep into my eyes, and kissed me, then and there, not worrying about a single thing.
It was perfect, I couldn’t help but sink into the kiss, melting in his arms as mine found their way around his neck.
But nothing could last this perfect forever.
5:28 "And the only promises we both fulfilled where the ones who ended us. But love, just for you I'll make on last promise. Just for you. Time will show if I can fulfill it, you know how bad I'm at it." he says while tears run down his cheeks, trying to smile but agony in his eyes give him away.
She smirk, taking the knife he stabbed her with from her stomach.
"I'd bet, love. But I'm afraid I won't be able to hear it. 'cause I might faint to my eternal sleep." she says and before he could react, she faints as she fall to her knees, one tear shedding from her right eye.
She wasn't actually heartbroken, she died in piece. And that what broke him the most.
-GIRL! I do wonders when I don't think much.
5:25 “ I thought we could make it work…” she said in a chocked sob “I did too…” tears streamed down both of their cheeks as the sun rose for the last time.
5:29 "Till death do us part" she whispered as she plunged the dagger through his heart
5:29 Just because we were meant to be together doesn't mean we were meant to be forever. All I can pray is that she's happier without me. As I look her dead in the eyes, she plunges the knife into my heart piercing it one last times-with her beauty and her dagger.
5:30
"I ruined him. He ruined me. Together, we ruined _everything_ "
Beautiful! Eloquent! Perfect!
'different ways to say goodbye'
*"I lo-"*
No.. I shouldn't spoil..
WHAT IS THAT SUPPOSED TO MEAN 😭
@@incandescent- LMAO I WAS GONNA SAY WHAT A CHARACTER SAYS GOODBYE IN!!
The game is Your turn to die btw it's also not for children but it's very good 🧍
judging by your pfp and username, im guessing this is about a certain holder of the sacrifice card? in which case I am sobbing and crying why would you remind me
@@pixeldragon7899 LMAO IM SORRY-
5:30 "Blood had been the foundation of their relationship, and so Fate had made it their end."
5:24 If anyone is interested in a book like this, you should read ‘The Night Circus.’ It’s incredible! It’s about two young magicians that were forced into a duel, but they fall in love. It’s definitely a magical book, and it’s very fun to imagine the scenery because of how unique it is. There are two different story lines in the book, that eventually merge together as well, so if you like books like that, you’d love this one. Seriously my favorite book. I read it when I was 12, but I honestly should’ve waited a few more years. It had a short scene where they got to the point where they were starting to do something more than just kissing, but it wasn’t too descriptive, and the chapter ended by that point. I was fine reading it, personally, but my mom would probably not have agreed to let me read it if she had known about that scene.
5:28 "i was so fiercely in love with him it destroyed me. Even though we eventually knew our fates we couldn't stay away. I am his and he is mine. Forever more"
5:30
Her lover stares into her eyes but she just looks away. No one has ever cared about either of them, she knows that. No one will care if they're dead. But they'll be gone. She cries on his shoulder.
"Hey, you know we have to do this, they'll kill us either way. Better each other than them." He grabs her face and makes her look at him. "I'd rather die in your arms than in their hands. I love you"
"I'll love you forever" she replies.
"We're doing it together, like always."
"On 3."
"1..."
"2..."
Boom.
5:30
They were stars that found each other when they were alone in the universe. But what everyone seems to forget, is that when two stars get too close together, one of them will eventually consume the other entirely.
Binary systems are created from the beginning, it would be very improbable for 2 lone stars to come together close enough to become binary system. For example closest star to Sun is few *light years* away
Does anyone else just ... not name their documents - and like scroll through dozens of documents looking for the one you wanted to work on?
Lol I do that sometimes. Sometimes I just need to get the ideas down asap and I leave it untitled. Then I end up frantically searching Google Docs for random keywords that I'm hoping I've mentioned.
5:32 We were different people, with different minds. People say that opposites attract-but in really, opposites neutralize each other, or maybe we were just ment to destroy not to build
5:30
"but even through the rose-tinted lenses, neither of them could've filtered their crimson bloodlust out."
"it was one last masquerade. it was either kill him now, or allow many to die. =fighting scene ensues or whatever= i only had one last chance to save myself, and i wasted it. it was already too late. i was pinned, his weapon in hand, ready to kill.
'any last words?' he said. i had nothing to say. i slipped my mask off, and he did as well. and as my eyes stared back at that familiar face, both of us registering who we were really fighting all this time, i realized something.
my last moments on this earth are not going to be spent sweetly in my lover's arms, but instead spent bitterly, dying by his hands.
"alas, there is a very fine line between loving and loathing, and we've danced upon it gracefully."
5:27 "Her hands coated in crimson, her eyes pooled with shock, her mouth agape; tears streamed down her face. She was staring at the dead body of her lover; the woman couldn't look away but say, 'See you on the other side, my love.' Once she moved away, she grabbed the knife that fell and plunged it into the heart that made her feel love."
5:30 They were beautiful together, it's true, but what was even more beautiful were the flames that consumed them
5:29
He smiled at her for what would be the last time, the stars glittering over the reddened grass, her breathing growing shallow and weak. His wish on the night they fell in love was not granted by the stars falling from the sky, if it was, they would not have to be this way, they would not have to say goodbye.
5:30
'Fate is the sword that slices love in half. If only I didn't have to wield it.'
5:24 "I knew I would break you. But you stayed anyway, and now we can break each other if you still want me"
5:30
"he trembled as he held the gun up to her chest. How could you fall in love with someone you had to kill? 'I'm sorry, my love.' He started 'But we both knew it was going to have to come down to this eventually. It was inevitable. Eat or get eaten as they say. I love you so much. I pray you forgive me for this' he whispered the last part
Squeezing his eyes shut he pulled the trigger. He fell to the ground in a weeping mess. Because no matter how much you want something, you can't change your fate"
5:30
When their pawns fell with their court, the two met far from the aftermath. To the left, the Ruler of Beasts. To the right, the Chosen of Mankind. They were the pinnacle of their people, paragons for monsters and humanity respectively. By being with each other, one learned what it meant to hate while one learned peace. One became human. One became a beast. What were two lonely people in the world became a pair. They both died, reborn as the other, realizing that true love came by understanding one another.
5:36
As I watched the two become one, I realized with sudden and utter despair why the tribes--the tribes I had helped bring together, away from their fighting--never intermixed, never allowed each other to stay in such close proximity. For as the two became one, she melted him as he put her out...
The End.
5:30 "the sun and moon are made for each other, they both shine in their realm, chasing each other from day to day. they too were like the sun and moon. But I suppose we all know what happens when both the sun and moon meet each other; The sky erupts in flames and they were no different..."
5:29
Her last thought, as the world fell all around her, was: Oh well. We were never meant to be.
5:35 “Sorry, fate got in between us.” Lianna said, covering her child’s ears before shooting the person before her.
5:30 “It’s impossible” he muttered. “No it’s not! I love you!” I snapped in response. That was the last thing he said to me before he attacked. He swung his sword at me and I blocked it, piercing his heart in the process. I destroyed him physically. He ruined me mentally.
5:32 “we first kissed in each others arms and now we will die in each others arms”
5:30 They say "All things end as they begin". With my sword at her throat and her sword at mine, I understood the whispers of the old wives and widows in the streets, "Love is the making and undoing of all things."
5:30
There, the two lovers, one the city's hero, and one the villain, stand at a cliffs edge. The city is below, cheering on their hero. The two lovers lock eyes, feeling sorrowful, that this is their destiny. The hero, pain in his eyes, takes a shakey breath in. He hugs his lover, and as he lets go, he ever so slightly pushes him off the edge.
"Till death do us part.."
I just randomly do this thing where I think of characters who’d be awesome for my story like mid way but then I realize I’m trying to create a love triangle and I stop
1:01 Okay, so I just base them off of myself and my past?
Seriously, though, I’m worried. I’ve had therapy once a week for over two years and I still lose touch from reality (usually due to emotional flashbacks) relatively frequently. Like, at the airport today, I, a 19 y/o, yelled at my mom that I wanted to finally be a good kid instead of blatantly defying her all the time, leading a few actual kids nearby to give me weird looks. I want to be sane, but I don’t even remember what sanity feels like anymore.
Just to be clear, I never had any issues with my parents; that mindset came from authoritarian teachers and somehow got projected onto my mom earlier, probably due to a combination of agoraphobia and jet-lag-induced exhaustion.
5:32 MY STANLEY PARABLE FANDOM WHERE YOU AT?!
8:01 like her notes are so beautiful and organised... And mine look like they are written by 6 year old child and i am the only person that understands them
5:24
She stared.
He walked away with her heart in his hands.
But she was alive. She could still feel. And in a daze, she thought: "he should have left me free for real".
6:25
She looked into his eyes for as long as it didn't hurt, then looked away as the first tear fell down to the wooden floor.
"I hate to say goodbye" she whispered.
"So don't."
And he kissed her.
5:25 " I knew youd be the death of me."
" Perhaps you misspoke, I am the death of us."
5:39 “I love you… and I’m so sorry!” I pull [character’s name] close to my chest as their muscles become limp, “Sleep well darling.” A single tear rolls down my cheek as the sun dips below the horizon and the world becomes a darker place.
5:29 they said love was the greatest weapon and evil was second. i guess the only reasonable step up was evil love.
5:30
I lay there on the ground, feeling the blood flow from my body, yet I can’t fight it. It is too far into death for me to turn back. I turn my head to look at them, for they too have a crimson river leaving their body. I reach out my hand to them and they grab it, neither of us wanting to let go. I see them smile, to which I immediately return. I give they hand one last squeeze as I feel the life from me leave my body behind. My vision goes blurry, then dark. I’m glad the last thing I saw was their face. For many, it is till death do they part, but for us? May not even the strongest of gravity’s tear me away from you, my love.