CSS Essay Introduction and Thesis Statement by Essay Topper Zariya Mushtaq (80 Marks)

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  • @SelfStudyinPakistan
    @SelfStudyinPakistan  4 роки тому +13

    If anyone can afford and want to get his/her Essay checked in detail from Mam Zariya Mushtaq can contact us at Facebook Page of Self Study in Pakistan "facebook.com/selfstudyinpakistan"

  • @accapakistan2630
    @accapakistan2630 3 роки тому +54

    One thing i noted that every topper has different attitude toward study approach, writing answer and many more. I think its better to adopt own approach.

  • @shahidagull2456
    @shahidagull2456 4 роки тому +10

    I really appreciates self study pakistan, whose brings these kind of videos. Sir i want to also ask a request plz share full written essays of csps thank u

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      @safwanmalik4573 4 роки тому

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  • @positivemuslim8101
    @positivemuslim8101 Рік тому

    Css essay.
    Zariya mushtaq.
    Start introduction from quotation.
    Try to add quotation relevance in intro .
    Try to add stats in intro.
    Thesis.
    In the end of intro
    Must be subtle. Avoid making sweeping statement.
    Substantiate your argument with facts.
    Try to complete on a positive note.

  • @inshakhan7218
    @inshakhan7218 2 роки тому

    I m from mansehra. Here there is the concept for writing essay is that Teri batoon mn Meri batoon mn sabki batoon mn unki batoon mn .... I got the real concept in this video thanks mam... I will come isl. To learn more

  • @Anab_Khan
    @Anab_Khan 4 місяці тому

    I like her confidence, like she saying, "Ap darmyan main lekain gain; Ap ye nahi karain gain; Thesis statement must be 2nd" It's like she is teaching: 1+1 must equal 2, or two objects always attract each other. However, I've seen some of the top essayists like George Orwell or Virginia Woolf write that language (and certainly the topic under discussion) is a subjective reality.

    • @Anab_Khan
      @Anab_Khan 4 місяці тому

      We do have a range of leverage in any language. And that's the beauty of any language. If that DID work for you doesn't mean that it is a MUST for others. That must may constrain their writing. What do you think?

  • @safariac5032
    @safariac5032 4 роки тому +5

    Self study pak iI applaud ur genuine efforts, may u rise and shine than ever before.. And hatts off to zariya mushtaq as well cuz no body explain things this well.. Brightest future mile apko ameen

  • @javedmalik4801
    @javedmalik4801 3 роки тому +4

    American Interests in the Middle East
    1. Introduction
    Thesis statement : Growing socio-economic and security agreements among China, Russia and Iran are fundamental elements to keep the America interested in Middle East affairs.
    2. Why Middle East is important for USA
    a. It is one of the biggest market for American trade.
    b. Geographical location and existence of American backed Israel have been proved to counter Russian hegemony in the region
    c. Kingdom of Saudi Arabia a major ally to USA has adverse relationships with Iran
    d. Iranian government nuclear weapons program and its growing relationships with China and Russia
    3. American Interests in the Middle East
    a. It is need of the hour for America to win diplomatic war in the Middle East as influence of world second largest economy making its feet deep in the region
    b. Iran is a serious threat to American backed Israel; losing Asrael is death trap for American economy
    c. To stop Chaina and Russia's influence in the region is major concern and it is worthy importance for USA to make good relationships with other muslim countries of Middle East
    d. America has to stop growing socioeconomic activities of Chinese as they are prevailing world economy rapidly especially in Middle East and Europe
    4. Conclusion

  • @shaharyarkhan4834
    @shaharyarkhan4834 3 роки тому +4

    You have used first person pronoun (we) in your thesis statement. Are u sure that it is allowed in formal writing ?

  • @sheerazhussain2996
    @sheerazhussain2996 3 роки тому +2

    Good job madam may Allah keep you more strength thanks...

  • @anshgupta2121
    @anshgupta2121 2 роки тому +1

    Wow really nyc u have css and we have upsc in india

  • @rahatsaleem3948
    @rahatsaleem3948 2 роки тому

    Thank you so much! I really appreciate your help.

  • @Shah66666
    @Shah66666 Місяць тому

    much helpful

  • @Brainwise889
    @Brainwise889 Рік тому +1

    Great mam

  • @UnveilingRealityOfficial
    @UnveilingRealityOfficial 4 роки тому +4

    Using quotation in the start or at the end of Essay is absolutely wrong. Many English professors have mentioned this.

    • @abdulbaseerpk5182
      @abdulbaseerpk5182 3 роки тому

      Irrelevant quotations are not acceptable. She is talking about relevant quotations.

  • @wazirasdairy6188
    @wazirasdairy6188 4 роки тому +8

    "We need " how you can use we, I kind of things in essay ? Should not we avoid first person pronoun?

    • @yusufkazmi7883
      @yusufkazmi7883 4 роки тому

      I was raising the same concern.. And then she writes " this essay deals with...." waaao..

    • @alir3495
      @alir3495 4 роки тому

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  • @inshaullahmarwat9759
    @inshaullahmarwat9759 2 роки тому

    very well explained Thanks

  • @umehaani4103
    @umehaani4103 4 роки тому +1

    Thankyou!

  • @kholedahmed4702
    @kholedahmed4702 4 роки тому

    Thank you Ma'am for your sincere concern

  • @abidakhan8832
    @abidakhan8832 10 місяців тому

    i still have a one question, i am having difficulty in creating an outline for such essays, i dont know where to refuse or agree with the topic? should i putmy statement after introduction?

  • @safiullahleghari735
    @safiullahleghari735 3 роки тому +2

    she has used the first person in her intro which means she might have used the prohibited first-person thing and still managed to secure 80 this is really confusing can anyone confirm?

  • @MuhammadUsman-et8xr
    @MuhammadUsman-et8xr 4 роки тому

    Thanks ☑️ very authentic

  • @khannnnnn1471
    @khannnnnn1471 4 роки тому +1

    Outstanding work

  • @hamzaabbasi4333
    @hamzaabbasi4333 4 роки тому

    Kya Outline Kay bullet points as a heading use karnay hoty hain Analysis Kay douran? Yah humey har bullet point per simply Ek ek paragraph likhna hota hai ?

  • @aftabahmad6602
    @aftabahmad6602 Рік тому

    Very well said. so much impressed

  • @uroobayousuf
    @uroobayousuf 3 роки тому

    great work appreciated.

  • @happyvlogs4064
    @happyvlogs4064 2 роки тому

    Maam shuru me 3 quotes likh skte hain?

  • @ShafiqKhan-nu5jk
    @ShafiqKhan-nu5jk 2 роки тому

    Salute you madam ,you are Academia

  • @iftijaana4360
    @iftijaana4360 4 роки тому +1

    Thanks 😊
    It's really helpful.....

    • @safwanmalik4573
      @safwanmalik4573 4 роки тому +1

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    • @iftijaana4360
      @iftijaana4360 4 роки тому

      @@safwanmalik4573
      Thanks 😊 for your concern ❤️❣️

  • @Faateh-the-Solotraveller
    @Faateh-the-Solotraveller 4 роки тому +8

    Sorry but it seems as if she doesn't know the meaning of "certainly"

  • @zaheeruddinbaber6762
    @zaheeruddinbaber6762 4 роки тому +2

    Mam, the outline is for rough work or we need to draw it before elaborating the topic in form of paragraphs?
    ThanksYou.

    • @mariamgul3655
      @mariamgul3655 4 роки тому +1

      its damn necessary to write outline first then start writing each n every paragraph in the essay according to the outline phraese.

    • @zaheeruddinbaber6762
      @zaheeruddinbaber6762 4 роки тому +1

      @@mariamgul3655 Thank You for replying.
      JazakAllah Khair.

    • @safwanmalik4573
      @safwanmalik4573 4 роки тому

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  • @bilawalali9511
    @bilawalali9511 4 роки тому

    Waiting

  • @rabiamalik7774
    @rabiamalik7774 2 роки тому

    Which topics we should cover in essay?

  • @Rx-gt4nb
    @Rx-gt4nb 4 роки тому +4

    Her method is difference than what experienced teachers used to teach....
    For example starting with qoute is highly non recommended...
    However, she has secured excellent marks. She confused me

    • @Rx-gt4nb
      @Rx-gt4nb 4 роки тому

      Yes. Her method seems out of box and CSS teachers strictly prohibit specially the addition of quotes in the introduction.

    • @alisonali1
      @alisonali1 4 роки тому

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  • @sirajbaloch4482
    @sirajbaloch4482 3 роки тому +2

    Kindly , avoid exaggeration and baffling the naive students .essay is easy just u need to have content and grip on English

  • @sanarafique7312
    @sanarafique7312 3 роки тому

    Kya ye better nhe hai k quotations essay k beech mein likh diyay jaein? I mean paper khultay hi quotations ajeeb lgta hai

  • @azazali7127
    @azazali7127 4 роки тому +1

    mam discuss essay of the paragraph and conclusion

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      @safwanmalik4573 4 роки тому

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  • @aliraahim1583
    @aliraahim1583 3 роки тому

    if i am not wrong, climate change is a terrible problem not globe warming madam, my question is that do we change the quotations?

  • @ShoaibKhan-hx2om
    @ShoaibKhan-hx2om 2 роки тому

    From where to get data and prepare for globalization?

  • @kamranali4971
    @kamranali4971 11 місяців тому

    Madam, how to write strong thesis statement while writing English essay !

  • @factsandentertainment5446
    @factsandentertainment5446 4 роки тому

    Mashahallah acha guide krte ha css ka hwala sa aap

    • @safwanmalik4573
      @safwanmalik4573 4 роки тому

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  • @MuhammadHassan-dk9eq
    @MuhammadHassan-dk9eq 4 роки тому

    Very helpful

  • @nimratalib3836
    @nimratalib3836 3 роки тому

    Slam mam , there is no outlines u use in your essay , I ever listen that an essay can't complete without outline

  • @parttimewithaaqibrind693
    @parttimewithaaqibrind693 4 роки тому +2

    Please Share attempted essay in CSS exam and got 80 marks

    • @Zoeee93
      @Zoeee93 4 роки тому

      Ya i also want it

    • @naveedqureshi4729
      @naveedqureshi4729 2 роки тому

      Choroo chorooo 80 Mark kis nay liye essay main

  • @zeshanahmad22
    @zeshanahmad22 4 роки тому +1

    Ma'am kindly guide us about indentation lines. And is it allowed to underline important things in the essay?

    • @mariamgul3655
      @mariamgul3655 4 роки тому

      indentation is necessary in any type of formal or academic writing it means to give an half of inch space before each paragraph n yes u can highlight the most imp. states with black or blue marker with keeping in mind punctuation rules.

    • @safwanmalik4573
      @safwanmalik4573 4 роки тому

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    • @janshermalik5440
      @janshermalik5440 3 роки тому

      @@mariamgul3655 do you teach/ give tips for essay writing?

  • @Lahori369
    @Lahori369 4 роки тому

    Kis kis sources sy tiyari ki he woh batao plz

  • @fatimatahir1332
    @fatimatahir1332 4 роки тому +1

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  • @ShafiqKhan-nu5jk
    @ShafiqKhan-nu5jk 2 роки тому

    A complete model essay on current affairs

  • @satisfayingfactory1969
    @satisfayingfactory1969 2 роки тому

    i cannot understand the difference between thesis statement and introduction

    • @fjbeingherself
      @fjbeingherself Рік тому +1

      Introduction is starting of essay and thesis statement is to summarise the title of the essay or thesis
      You mention thesis statement in the Introduction depending on what kind of essay you're writing

  • @sadiasafdar1487
    @sadiasafdar1487 3 роки тому

    i want to evaluate my essay to maam zariya....how can i approach her

  • @javedmalik4801
    @javedmalik4801 3 роки тому

    Mam please meri outline dekh len aik nazar, kia mn css mn beth sakta hon witb this piece of work?

  • @zeshanali6287
    @zeshanali6287 4 роки тому +1

    CSS ma Essay maximum kitnay pages ka hona chahiya or kitne heading hon ap na kitnay pages ka likha tha

  • @muhammadhaider7579
    @muhammadhaider7579 4 роки тому +1

    4:25 length of line
    how !
    how to measure!

    • @alir3495
      @alir3495 4 роки тому

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  • @nazeemfatima9522
    @nazeemfatima9522 4 роки тому

    Good bro

  • @suaadwadan8500
    @suaadwadan8500 2 роки тому

    So nice . I want to become DC.

  • @PPSCJobs
    @PPSCJobs 4 роки тому

    Thesis statement ki heading Deni chahye keh nahin

  • @mahamayaz7026
    @mahamayaz7026 4 роки тому +1

    Mam is essay me start me outines nae hn, hmny outline kaha likhni phir

    • @SelfStudyinPakistan
      @SelfStudyinPakistan  4 роки тому

      Essay ic sy pechli video ma show karwae thy apko. Kindly watch that video

    • @alir3495
      @alir3495 4 роки тому

      explained better here: ua-cam.com/video/ou3NmuejS1Y/v-deo.html

  • @NOOBTEAM-b6k
    @NOOBTEAM-b6k 2 роки тому

    Complete picture of essay please

  • @Sunny123816
    @Sunny123816 2 роки тому

    Remaining parts?

  • @zohaibjadran4617
    @zohaibjadran4617 2 роки тому

    Essay kitny pages pr consist hona chiye?

  • @allentrancetest6294
    @allentrancetest6294 4 роки тому

    Picture is not clear madam

  • @alir3495
    @alir3495 4 роки тому +1

    explained better here: ua-cam.com/video/ou3NmuejS1Y/v-deo.html

  • @AdilAli-yd7dx
    @AdilAli-yd7dx 4 роки тому +1

    Is she taking classes of english essay?

  • @ahmedasif581
    @ahmedasif581 Рік тому

    You are confusing aspirants because many qualified professors always support a firm stance over the topic either you are agreeing or disagreeing. Your opinion in thesis statement should not be like stringing in between both the opinions.

  • @shamsaqamar
    @shamsaqamar 4 роки тому

    Mam share eassy on covid 19 plz

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      @safwanmalik4573 4 роки тому

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  • @ShoaibKhan-th5fr
    @ShoaibKhan-th5fr 4 роки тому

    Mam kindly Pakistan and the future of Kashmir Cause pe essay likhein. Ye CSS 2020 mein aya tha. I have attempted it. I shall be very thankful to you

    • @safwanmalik4573
      @safwanmalik4573 4 роки тому +1

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    • @ShoaibKhan-th5fr
      @ShoaibKhan-th5fr 4 роки тому

      @@safwanmalik4573 dear this essay is not about Kashmir issue balke its very specific & related to the future of Kashmir Cause & role of Pakistan regarding the future of Kashmir Cause ...

  • @hirazaidi2316
    @hirazaidi2316 4 роки тому

    Please tell k essay at least kitne pages ka hona chahiye.

    • @SelfStudyinPakistan
      @SelfStudyinPakistan  4 роки тому

      Words puray krnay hotay. Ap k 2500-3000 words. If one page covers 250 words than 10-12 pages.

  • @ujalanaseer9373
    @ujalanaseer9373 4 роки тому +2

    Picture Ni clear 😔

    • @SelfStudyinPakistan
      @SelfStudyinPakistan  4 роки тому +1

      Uploaded also. Check description for link

    • @ujalanaseer9373
      @ujalanaseer9373 4 роки тому

      @@SelfStudyinPakistan thank you... Sir Essay checking charges ?

  • @emmanikhan1983
    @emmanikhan1983 4 роки тому

    Share screenshot of essay

  • @sehrishfatima5142
    @sehrishfatima5142 3 роки тому

    Mam can you please send this piece of essay for us

  • @mamoonyousuf4896
    @mamoonyousuf4896 4 роки тому

    Outline rough work mai bnani hen ?

  • @arqamkhan7166
    @arqamkhan7166 3 роки тому

    Sister I need checking of my essay..Can u Check it please sister?
    It would be an honour

  • @nazeemfatima9522
    @nazeemfatima9522 4 роки тому

    Here mic problem also

  • @emmanikhan1983
    @emmanikhan1983 4 роки тому

    Read whole essay

  • @zeshanali6287
    @zeshanali6287 4 роки тому +1

    Ma'am please answer my question?

    • @safwanmalik4573
      @safwanmalik4573 4 роки тому

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  • @angelstar8063
    @angelstar8063 4 роки тому +1

    please ye starting tone change kren boht buri ha

  • @shakirkhan6298
    @shakirkhan6298 4 роки тому

    Plz Sir gade meee plz