From the description of the women, I’m getting Penthouse Forum vibes. And the intense detail on their clothing is too much, I thought this was going be a modeling shoot. Nope. And their weapons detail too? You can easily use far too many adjectives, this is an example.
So apparently this is the author's first story. I understand that a lot of writers (both new and experienced) can fall into pitfalls that can put off the reader. Writing skills like pacing, character developments, plot arcs, and level of details can be tricky things to balance, especially when you're new. However the racist/misogynistic undertones are unexcusable. Other people's cultures are not vehicles you can bastardize for entertainment. If you are not knowledgeable regarding culture/folklore, don't write about it. Also, women (or at least the ones I know) have personalities beyond their "voluptuous" chests jfc. I hope the author has someone proofread his work next time.
@@TaylerBootz SaraJane & Hamza Assam I’m glad to not be the only one that saw that as too much, and truly in a “worse than just bad” light. The author had also made some comments on replies to others saying the same, so I always try to give positive feedback and not just shut him down. Not that either of you are at all wrong! Not a bit, you nailed my point home if anything! It’s just true, young and aspiring writers will have to face as many setbacks and criticism as any artist in the beginning. This one was just too sexualized.
@@dhavalchheda1626 you’re right, at first I only thought it would be the clothing, nope. Now the weapons also? Goodbye imagination. No need for you now.
Just after the 5min mark a character says "let's get the hell on with this before we all die of old age".. so y'all are saying it just goes on and on like this for more than an hour?
1. Describe human charcuters, 2. Describe Cassie, 3. Describe native American dudes, 4. Describe Wendy, 5. Describe multiple monsters, 6. Describe monsters outside, 7. Describe humans now that they have their weapons out - this author loves describing characters (not complaining doc you rock)
uh, describe the clothes as fashion they’re wearing by brand name. don’t forget, lest it be droll, the cut of their bodies, the depth of their tans, the hairstyle said what? honestly, if that’s how it was then it just left me wondering what cassies footwear was when she had her pink riding outfit on.
I still listen to every story you read even when I don't write a comment about it just know that you're still my number 1narrator and I will always love the way you read. Loves to you and yours.
Kind of a decent story till they spent like 30 minutes describing their gear while every monster in the NA folklore pulled up on the characters. Love your narration Doc, always have, but this author needs a lot of work in regards to balancing their stories out so its not 90% fashion show descriptions and 10% plot.
yes. in a way i’m just choosing to see it as they were all meant to be slaughtered. no redeeming qualities and you weren’t made to be invested in any one of them. you’re not really rooting for any one of them. it was hard to keep listening to . the only reason i did stick it out is obvious. dr. creepen is rad.
I’m 14 minutes in and now I’m curious. Why, did everyones outfits need to be explained in detail??? Is the writer obsessed with fashion or does it play a role? I guess I’ll find out
Yeah I don't know why you guys think this is a bad thing as any good author fully describes the scenes going on from what they're wearing the weapons they're carrying two descriptions of the windigo to what the cabin facade could have looked like and I couldn't even gone farther it's all about creating a picture in your mind whether it's being narrated or read by yourself. It's called making of a truly visible story LOL. Don't get me wrong everyone has their own taste and critiques but this is why stories like fight club are so good. It makes you feel like you're a member of the group without you ever being mentioned
@@KP-vy9ro Hi. Editor here. " as any good author fully describes the scenes, escribes the scenes going on from what they're wearing the weapons they're carrying " That is not even close to true. At all. A good story gives initially gives the reader exactly what they need to build a framework in their mind over which they can drape their imagination and that's all. This allows the story's pacing to be uninterrupted and pacing is absolutely a key. Other details can be worked in here and there as the story progresses, but you absolutely do not want a wall of text to grind everything to a screeching halt. This rule regarding the expenditure of words in places which do not affect the story is especially important to keep in mind when an author has a limit on the number of words they're allowed (as is VERY often the case when trying to get a story published).
Thanks for my daily check-up being the only Doctor I trust. Fantastic narration as always and I appreciate the author's knowledge on hand-to-hand weapons and firearms.
I think this is an original and creative premise for a storyline, but I just have one criticism that I cannot suppress: slow down on the character descriptions....the readers don't need to know exactly what each character looks like and is wearing. Unless it is important to the plot, let the reader infer most of it. It just starts to sound repetitive after awhile and it gets ridiculous and distracting. Not trying to be a dick.....just constructive criticism....to whoever wrote this.
So happy to be able to enjoy my favorite narrator again and feel so lucky that this one is a long one ! Life is good ! Thanks Doc ! Hoping you and yours are all well and staying safe ! ♥️😊 I had yet another surgery this past December that really wrecked me for a while and the pain and rehab was such that I lost interest in everything including listening To all my doc Creepen posts but I’m back now and making up for lost time 😃
I don't feel like this story was bad. The author needs some polishing, which will come with time, but the potential is there. The concept was pretty cool. Different spin on the wendigo story. I do wish we didn't have a spoiler as the title though because I figured it out pretty quick, the descriptions were a little distracting, and I also saw a few undertones that could be bordering on offensive. Hoping that the author reads these comments and takes the constructive criticism to clean up some things for the next story. I truly appreciate the author putting himself out there for the internet to pick apart because that's a hard thing to do. I also appreciate the creativity that can blossom into really awesome writing. Keep at it, Saint!
To the author Exile Saint 180, this was a good start to a growing writer. You know your words, you just need to find the correct balance of a few things. I am fairly sure those are outlined in the comments. Still, a good beginning! As I did stay for the entire ride! So, I’m waiting for your next work, and so on and so on....👍
Quarter Million subs Doc. I remember stumbling into your channel via a Michael Whitehouse story suggestion probably 4ish years ago and it's awesome to see it grow like this. Neat to see your collaborations with G.M Danielson and Nature's Temper too as I've held them both in similar standing with you.
I’m laying here disgruntled in my plaid sheets, down comforter, wearing nothing but my American Eagle undies with the 8” inseam, because I’m feeling Randy. Chiseled chest heaving, wondering what the author was wearing when they wrote this story.
@@cathypebeahsy2765 Did you listen to the story? There is an obvious reason for the OP to comment this. This is a jab at the author's writing style, how do you not get that? Damn....
Well doc i got a bone to pick with u 🤔i cant listen to anything apart from your voice now 💎 me and u gota work on communication skills cuz im addicted to your voice my friend ❤💎💎your a gem so glad i found your youtube channel . Be well be safe be happy cuz your awesome doc x
I bailed out after the author wasted too much of my time describing clothing and figure of a character, followed by immediately insulting her. Especially when it's the first notable thing in the story, that doesn't make me dislike the character, that makes me think the author's got a misogynist and incel streak that I'm uninterested in dealing with, let alone being a part of.
I agree, it leaves virtually no room for imagination. The picture is painted far too much to the point that you really don’t care about what happens to the guy wearing the A&F short sleeve button down cotton blend Henley.
@@chrism4008 I feel like they basically dressed up cardboard cut outs and threw them in an encyclopedia on NA folklore. It wasn't the best story but Doc's narration was fantastic
Agree. I am 5 minutes in and am bailing. I've listened to a fashion show for 5 minutes and am bored/unimpressed. Very confused about the whole "dumb valley girl" trope. Feels gross.
Over a quarter in from when this dropped and I gotta say, I'd be alot more into this story if the author wasn't so hell bent on specifically describing the women's bodies in vivid details and making everyone else swoon over how hot they are. I'm here for cryptid stories not to listen to overly detailed character descriptions about how hot they are and how the guys lust after them.
@@matthewdevictor1442 I will say now that I'm deeper into the story barring the gripes I had earlier it actually picked up to be a very fun and interesting story. I have more good things to say than negatives(partially because I'm a sucker for cryptid descriptions and you delivered really well).
@@notamtfagent2597 after hearing it myself is so bad i am so embarrassed about it hopefully i can make the nexy one is better the next will be better and less cringy
@@matthewdevictor1442 I fully believe you, tbh this one wasn't too bad because you know how to describe things really well, the only issue I found was the overly sexy descriptions(don't get me wrong, it's absolutely fine to describe a hot character but don't dwell on it too long). The creature backstories and descriptions were right on the mark and all around the story was fun. Don't beat yourself up too much because it's an opportunity to improve and make it even better, I'll be looking forward to your next story.
@@notamtfagent2597 thank you for the kind words the next one will be better and i won't over do it on the over sexualize the girls or try to the next one will ne mermaids
I’m still waiting for the wendigos to invade a werewolf village, and then the vampires help them fight off the wendigos. Lol I love these stories. I do like hearing the stories of the military meeting supernaturals. And they still find a way to bring up scps lol
@@abigoreternal7537 nothing I mentioned in my comments are related to twilight at all. So maybe read a little better and comprehend just a little more before typing.
I just want to let you know, that when things get bad with my boyfriend and me, and the verbal abuse gets to its worst, you, Doctor Creepen, and all the other narrators I listen to, are my only friends. Please never stop what you do. I love you and all the other narrators I listen to. You guys are the only kernle of life, light, and sanity I have when the verbal assault is too much to bear.
Then get out if your soo unhappy an get verbal abuse, your the only one that can make it stop, he isnt the only man youll ever meet or could be with... This world is Huge you can leave anytime you finally decide youve had enough of the Abuse... Theres the Courts you could use to get him away from you or the police to start a record of his abuse that would show the courts how he is, evidence Write down each incident of verbal abuce date time what he did etc.. Your not a victim let him become someone elses problem for reals
@@cathypebeahsy2765 Easier said than done. Especially with nowhere to go. And all I said was when the verbal abuse gets bad. I guess some people don't understand what it's like to have feelings for someone, then get abused, and feel lost and confused because you still have feelings for that person.
@@brandywebster8409 I know how you must feel, I've been there too. I hope you will find happiness, and find the strength to get away from your boyfriend, he does not deserve you if he makes you feel unhappy. Words really do hurt. If you ever need to vent to someone, I'll listen. I wish you all the best.
@@jaanasiren4558 Awe thank you! It really is a painful situation. Words hurt but there's the attachment to him and comfortableness in the chaos, as crazy and it sounds. Thank you for being a friend!
Half an hour into the story, and I give up on the fashion show. Author, please: detailed descriptions of clothes items whenever someone enters the scene or changes clothes are unnecessary and bog down the flow of the narrative. It might also be a good idea not to give descriptions in huge introductory chunks but intersperse them with conversation or action. I will probably finish the story later as I would like to see certain characters shredded, but I've had enough so far. Edit: Nah, sorry. A snoozefest of a lecture on monster types (I wonder if someone is showing off their knowledge of native folklore, or if it's completely made up), followed by the most anticlimactic monster reveal that I can recall, and then the group of fashion models starts sprouting all kinds of weaponry all over...no, just no. I like the idea but the narration is severely lacking, sorry.
Was on Coosa river in Central AL when I was attacked by a coondigo. Little bastard was less than 3ft tall with spiked deer horns. Mean little bastard. I swear
@@shangothunder1055 is a reddit where people post writers who are super weirdly descriptive or odd about the way they write women. It's really funny. You should look it up.
uh, describe the clothes as fashion their wearing by brand name. don’t forget, lest it be droll, the cut of their bodies, the depth of their tans, the hairstyle said what? honestly, if that’s how it was then it just left me wondering what cassies footwear was when she had her pink riding outfit on i love you dr. creepen, you’re rad. as always. you even made me keep listening to this. although i admit when it was over i just listened to isla sirena again for the eleventh time🤍
Good to see you here. I've been working on carving a chuck of time away for the camp manager series so I can binge without having to wait for new ones. 😏
This could have been much shorter. Way too much unnecessary descriptions. I don't care what the people are wearing.And describing the weapons ended up totally useless....
I love how the taller guys are in this story the buffer not taking into account the fact that taller people have a harder time appearing as jacked as a shorter person
Does anyone else feel the moments in exposition which name absolutely every single weapon feels contrived? I often get that feeling when I read or listen to stories like this, but in this instance it felt really thick.
I really liked this story. It was predictable but a good story. And the detailed descriptions didn’t bother me at all. I’m not sure if you were doing a live read and that’s why the hiccups were included but if you were not then some editing was needed. All in all very entertaining 🍺😎👍🏾
I'm really trying to get into this but every single time I think the story will finally advance, yet another character is introduced with an extremely long physical description of them and what they're wearing. I'm not quite 20 minutes in and nothing of substance has occurred except physical descriptions of characters. The author needs to whittle that down so the story can move along and keep the reader/listener engaged. I'm going to give it 10 more minutes out of respect for the good Doctor, if not for him I'd have shut it off after 10 minutes and not looked back. Hopefully the author can gain my attention again and keep it because this is such a dry and slow moving story so far. Please let the scene in the bar/lodge contain something other than an overly descriptive account of yet another character in the story! Here's to hoping!!! Edit: well, f*ck. Sorry doc, this one is a stinker. Tried to give it another shot and so far, just another dry and drawn out physical description of yet several other characters. The author seems to rely on filler material instead of advancing the story line in a timely fashion to keep us engaged. It's rare for me to turn off a story you've narrated because you almost always choose excellent ones. And in case anyone is wondering why I've went on such a long rant, it's because I love wendigos so this was such a letdown. Wendigos aren't as popular as other mythical creatures so stories are few and far between comparatively.
Getting sting My Immortal vibes with the “do do dododo do” music playing every time a character changes outfits. Sorry doc, love ya but this one was ruff 🐶.
I love wendigo stories, but couldn’t get into this one😬. I’m so sorry to the author for the small chance they’ll read this comment. Not trying to be mean at all, just honest. Hopefully the feedback can help you next time. Definitely talented- & I love the cryptid stories! Edit- tried again a couple months later, & I actually enjoyed it! Only thing was the over description like I said originally, & the infatuation with the women & their bodies. Kind of objectifying, just kind of odd. But I did end up enjoying the overall plot. Would of made a great hrrR series!
Hunters who leave there weapons unguarded and then not check them not even the guns they had been carrying. Must be beginners. I hope they get avenged by expert hunters.
I've heard of interview with a vampire. Now? Interview with a Wendigo. Coolski! 😎 Have a wonderful evening all and sit back and relax with your favorite drink and listen. 😊 Thank you, Dear Doctor! 💜💙💚💛❤
Wow what a twist... A little disappointed in the hunters.... They were not prepared for what they got.... Their Intel must have been tampered with otherwise they would have known what they were heading into.... Great story plot....
♡Damn fine job. You got this! Great concept, and a surprise twist! Excellent first go~ especially with Doc narrating!♡ As already mentioned, less 'hot bods' and the 6mins of weapons detail lost me before it even hit half~way... probably just me blanking out on the weapons though...
@@barkingbunny2928 thank you for the kind words but i still have a long way to go in my story telling. Its a work in progress so hopefully the next one in the series will be better
You did a pretty good job and definetly did a lot of research and paid attention to detail. Although, the excessive descriptions of everything the characters wear is a little much. You gotta spread it all out evenly so the reader doesn't get lost in the descriptions and forget about the actions that are happening around said characters. Keep it up my g
I didn't realize Benedict Cumberbatch(or maybe Jeremy Irons😆) had a UA-cam channel narrating creepypasta stories 😆(this is a joke btw)I loved the story btw 😊❤️
Cool story, and beautifully read, as always. However, the writer constantly uses (I lost count) the word “cannibalistic” when he should say man-eater. Otherwise, if a Wendigo was really cannibalistic, it would feed off other Wendigos. A little bit of research could have solved that. :)
Wendigos are supposed to be originally humans who succumb to cannibalistic urges due to spirit possession that twists them into monsters, so describing them as "cannibals" still makes some sense in this case, since it describes their origins
I am glad you like the story thank you so much it not my best story and its my first one i hope to improve and make something better i am glad to hear not all the comment are on how bad and cringy the girls are
@@matthewdevictor1442 I really liked the story. It was good escapism and was very cleverly done. I even liked the characters … except Wendy. I didn’t like her from the start. But that’s actually a good thing. It means that the characters weren’t all one block, without any dimensionality. Some were supposed to be likable and some weren’t. I say job well done.
@@vanessaashford9203 So then why not describe other “converted” beings as cannibals, like vampires? :) Because, just as with Wendigos, calling a monster a “cannibal” still means that the monster eats its own kind. Not that it eats regular humans.
@@dartmart9263 I think you're kind of missing the point on getting caught up on semantics. The whole point of the wendigo myth is a cautionary tale against breaking the taboo and resorting to cannibalism in desperate situations (or at least that's the most prevalent interpretation). Regardless of whether or not they currently eat "their own kind" or not, wendigos traditionally arise *because* of a human cannibalism taboo, and therefore they originate specifically as human cannibals. Vampires aren't usually referred to as cannibals because their origins traditionally have nothing to do with the practice of cannibalism directly, traditionally in Roma folklore (which is where the dominant Western vision of the vampire mostly comes from) vampires get "turned" by a random curse from not properly engaging in strict Roma cultural codes of conduct/hygiene/etc., or from the improper handling of a corpse, or from contact with pre-existing vampires, not specifically from breaking a cannibalism taboo (and in the modern version of the folklore, they tend to if anything be even more far removed from being a cautionary tale about breaking taboos and are just "turned" unwillingly or willingly by another vampire, more like werewolves)
I don't know if you heard of Sexy Grandma Darkness' niece but she passed. I haven't seen her in a minute, but I've been praying for her. I didn't know if you knew, but I thought you should. I'm sure in not the only one who misses her comments.
From the description of the women, I’m getting Penthouse Forum vibes. And the intense detail on their clothing is too much, I thought this was going be a modeling shoot. Nope.
And their weapons detail too? You can easily use far too many adjectives, this is an example.
So apparently this is the author's first story. I understand that a lot of writers (both new and experienced) can fall into pitfalls that can put off the reader. Writing skills like pacing, character developments, plot arcs, and level of details can be tricky things to balance, especially when you're new.
However the racist/misogynistic undertones are unexcusable. Other people's cultures are not vehicles you can bastardize for entertainment. If you are not knowledgeable regarding culture/folklore, don't write about it. Also, women (or at least the ones I know) have personalities beyond their "voluptuous" chests jfc. I hope the author has someone proofread his work next time.
@@Hamza-rd6jk I agree. The men were disgusting. I also almost turned off the video also due to the excessive descriptions.
@@Hamza-rd6jk Oof, brilliant observations. The story was pervy and inappropriate on so many levels.
@@TaylerBootz the distaste of rape by Wendy seems forgettable, an aside compared to the sickeningly detailed descriptions. EW!
@@TaylerBootz SaraJane & Hamza Assam I’m glad to not be the only one that saw that as too much, and truly in a “worse than just bad” light. The author had also made some comments on replies to others saying the same, so I always try to give positive feedback and not just shut him down. Not that either of you are at all wrong! Not a bit, you nailed my point home if anything! It’s just true, young and aspiring writers will have to face as many setbacks and criticism as any artist in the beginning. This one was just too sexualized.
I liked the story honestly the descriptions did not bother me it was good to see who we are rooting for lol I know I'm strange but I liked it.
The only thing scary about this story so far is the amount of time the author soends on describing attire.
More like describing the weapons. I wonder if author is preparing for Zombie apocalypse.
Too much exposition
Thank You! I made a similar comment, the author must be highly into fashion.
@@dhavalchheda1626 you’re right, at first I only thought it would be the clothing, nope. Now the weapons also? Goodbye imagination. No need for you now.
Just after the 5min mark a character says "let's get the hell on with this before we all die of old age".. so y'all are saying it just goes on and on like this for more than an hour?
1. Describe human charcuters, 2. Describe Cassie, 3. Describe native American dudes, 4. Describe Wendy, 5. Describe multiple monsters, 6. Describe monsters outside, 7. Describe humans now that they have their weapons out - this author loves describing characters (not complaining doc you rock)
Holy shit you're right writer will literally not stop describing the women like every chance they get
uh, describe the clothes as fashion they’re wearing by brand name. don’t forget, lest it be droll, the cut of their bodies, the depth of their tans, the hairstyle said what? honestly, if that’s how it was then it just left me wondering what cassies footwear was when she had her pink riding outfit on.
@@hollyhobby2763 lmao
Holy shite!!!!! A writer did exactly what they are supposed to do.
@@robb1442 it was perversely excessive tho.
Half this god damn story is describing peoples clothing
😳 Oh dear. I happened upon this comment in less than a minute into the hour plus long story.
Literally couldn’t finish after 10 mins because it’s been nothing but descriptions of everything to the smallest detail. I’m glad it’s not just me
I still listen to every story you read even when I don't write a comment about it just know that you're still my number 1narrator and I will always love the way you read. Loves to you and yours.
Kind of a decent story till they spent like 30 minutes describing their gear while every monster in the NA folklore pulled up on the characters. Love your narration Doc, always have, but this author needs a lot of work in regards to balancing their stories out so its not 90% fashion show descriptions and 10% plot.
the absurd description of the girl ruined it for me
that's /k/ for you
30 minutes in and im very curious about the person who wrote this.
Fantastic reading as ever Doctor
Literally every character in this story is down so bad
Thank you, i thought it was just me
yes. in a way i’m just choosing to see it as they were all meant to be slaughtered. no redeeming qualities and you weren’t made to be invested in any one of them. you’re not really rooting for any one of them. it was hard to keep listening to . the only reason i did stick it out is obvious.
dr. creepen is rad.
I’m 14 minutes in and now I’m curious. Why, did everyones outfits need to be explained in detail??? Is the writer obsessed with fashion or does it play a role? I guess I’ll find out
Wait till you get to the 45 min mark. It's 8 straight minutes of describing weapons in intricate detail haha
I noticed the same thing. But it did help with the visualizations.
its giving me dnd vibes and am lovin it
Yeah I don't know why you guys think this is a bad thing as any good author fully describes the scenes going on from what they're wearing the weapons they're carrying two descriptions of the windigo to what the cabin facade could have looked like and I couldn't even gone farther it's all about creating a picture in your mind whether it's being narrated or read by yourself. It's called making of a truly visible story LOL. Don't get me wrong everyone has their own taste and critiques but this is why stories like fight club are so good. It makes you feel like you're a member of the group without you ever being mentioned
@@KP-vy9ro Hi. Editor here. " as any good author fully describes the scenes, escribes the scenes going on from what they're wearing the weapons they're carrying "
That is not even close to true. At all.
A good story gives initially gives the reader exactly what they need to build a framework in their mind over which they can drape their imagination and that's all.
This allows the story's pacing to be uninterrupted and pacing is absolutely a key. Other details can be worked in here and there as the story progresses, but you absolutely do not want a wall of text to grind everything to a screeching halt.
This rule regarding the expenditure of words in places which do not affect the story is especially important to keep in mind when an author has a limit on the number of words they're allowed (as is VERY often the case when trying to get a story published).
Thanks for my daily check-up being the only Doctor I trust. Fantastic narration as always and I appreciate the author's knowledge on hand-to-hand weapons and firearms.
I think this is an original and creative premise for a storyline, but I just have one criticism that I cannot suppress: slow down on the character descriptions....the readers don't need to know exactly what each character looks like and is wearing. Unless it is important to the plot, let the reader infer most of it. It just starts to sound repetitive after awhile and it gets ridiculous and distracting. Not trying to be a dick.....just constructive criticism....to whoever wrote this.
Couldn't agree more
So happy to be able to enjoy my favorite narrator again and feel so lucky that this one is a long one ! Life is good ! Thanks Doc ! Hoping you and yours are all well and staying safe ! ♥️😊
I had yet another surgery this past December that really wrecked me for a while and the pain and rehab was such that I lost interest in everything including listening To all my doc Creepen posts but I’m back now and making up for lost time 😃
Hopefully you're doing a lot better now and not in pain! Stay safe, healthy and happy my friend c:
@@SpaceDuckQuack ty ! Coming along ! Thanks for replying! Made my day 😃
Stay safe and healthy!
Not too fond of this one Doc, brilliant reading as ever, story just a bit mediocre
The characters, imo, the male ones in particular, are written poorly 25 minutes in, and i dont think im gonna finish it
@@chrism4008 would you like a spoiler of the end just in case you didn't make it
@@Rambogner Throw it in, I couldn't make it.
@@irena4545 All the "film crew" were hunters and they die because the woman in the bar (and the while.tribe apparently) were a type of monster.
I don't feel like this story was bad. The author needs some polishing, which will come with time, but the potential is there. The concept was pretty cool. Different spin on the wendigo story. I do wish we didn't have a spoiler as the title though because I figured it out pretty quick, the descriptions were a little distracting, and I also saw a few undertones that could be bordering on offensive. Hoping that the author reads these comments and takes the constructive criticism to clean up some things for the next story.
I truly appreciate the author putting himself out there for the internet to pick apart because that's a hard thing to do. I also appreciate the creativity that can blossom into really awesome writing. Keep at it, Saint!
Well said
To the author Exile Saint 180, this was a good start to a growing writer. You know your words, you just need to find the correct balance of a few things. I am fairly sure those are outlined in the comments. Still, a good beginning! As I did stay for the entire ride! So, I’m waiting for your next work, and so on and so on....👍
You forgot to praise him for his ability to write sexist stuff that would be better off in a real adult magazine.
Quarter Million subs Doc. I remember stumbling into your channel via a Michael Whitehouse story suggestion probably 4ish years ago and it's awesome to see it grow like this.
Neat to see your collaborations with G.M Danielson and Nature's Temper too as I've held them both in similar standing with you.
12:34 , "Cassie's eyes were on her right ring finger. " Wedding rings go on the left hand.
I’m laying here disgruntled in my plaid sheets, down comforter, wearing nothing but my American Eagle undies with the 8” inseam, because I’m feeling Randy. Chiseled chest heaving, wondering what the author was wearing when they wrote this story.
Your Sick an need help
Who cares how you feel or what youre wearing
This isnt a porn site what so ever!!
@@cathypebeahsy2765 *You're
@@cathypebeahsy2765 it’s “and” not an.
@@cathypebeahsy2765 Did you listen to the story? There is an obvious reason for the OP to comment this. This is a jab at the author's writing style, how do you not get that? Damn....
Finally another Wendigo horror story. I love Wendigos, and I hope this won’t disappoint
That was one of my favorites
Thankyou. Really well written.. great narration as always. Appreciate you
It would make a good sequel if the team of hunters that were slaughtered had another team to come in and exact some "pay-back". Just a thought.
Thankyou Doc , entertaining as always . I appreciate yours and the author’s efforts. Xo
That was so good. Thanks Doc
Somebody really really likes detailed descriptions of knives 😆
And clothes, and physiques, and guns...🤣🤣🤣🤣
Well doc i got a bone to pick with u 🤔i cant listen to anything apart from your voice now 💎 me and u gota work on communication skills cuz im addicted to your voice my friend ❤💎💎your a gem so glad i found your youtube channel . Be well be safe be happy cuz your awesome doc x
Mmm love the weapon smut there in the middle. 10/10 would listen to more.
I'm so happy to see a story from Doc that's over an hour! I'm recovering from a minor surgery today so this will keep me occupied for a while!🤗💜🐝
Great job as always dear Dr.
Greetings from Netherland
Hell yeah. I love wendigo stories. 😈can't wait to hear.
I do not understand how you post so much content.
It's nice to see the humans get checked for a change.
I bailed out after the author wasted too much of my time describing clothing and figure of a character, followed by immediately insulting her.
Especially when it's the first notable thing in the story, that doesn't make me dislike the character, that makes me think the author's got a misogynist and incel streak that I'm uninterested in dealing with, let alone being a part of.
I agree, it leaves virtually no room for imagination. The picture is painted far too much to the point that you really don’t care about what happens to the guy wearing the A&F short sleeve button down cotton blend Henley.
But they also qrite like a misandrist at some points too. Not a story for me, but intersting because of the mystery of the author, lol. To me at least
@@chrism4008 I feel like they basically dressed up cardboard cut outs and threw them in an encyclopedia on NA folklore. It wasn't the best story but Doc's narration was fantastic
@@SpaceDuckQuack The Doc could make a telephone book sound fantastic :D
Agree. I am 5 minutes in and am bailing. I've listened to a fashion show for 5 minutes and am bored/unimpressed. Very confused about the whole "dumb valley girl" trope. Feels gross.
Over a quarter in from when this dropped and I gotta say, I'd be alot more into this story if the author wasn't so hell bent on specifically describing the women's bodies in vivid details and making everyone else swoon over how hot they are. I'm here for cryptid stories not to listen to overly detailed character descriptions about how hot they are and how the guys lust after them.
I need to improve and yes i do need to easy up on that the next one will be better
@@matthewdevictor1442 I will say now that I'm deeper into the story barring the gripes I had earlier it actually picked up to be a very fun and interesting story. I have more good things to say than negatives(partially because I'm a sucker for cryptid descriptions and you delivered really well).
@@notamtfagent2597 after hearing it myself is so bad i am so embarrassed about it hopefully i can make the nexy one is better the next will be better and less cringy
@@matthewdevictor1442 I fully believe you, tbh this one wasn't too bad because you know how to describe things really well, the only issue I found was the overly sexy descriptions(don't get me wrong, it's absolutely fine to describe a hot character but don't dwell on it too long). The creature backstories and descriptions were right on the mark and all around the story was fun. Don't beat yourself up too much because it's an opportunity to improve and make it even better, I'll be looking forward to your next story.
@@notamtfagent2597 thank you for the kind words the next one will be better and i won't over do it on the over sexualize the girls or try to the next one will ne mermaids
I’m still waiting for the wendigos to invade a werewolf village, and then the vampires help them fight off the wendigos. Lol I love these stories. I do like hearing the stories of the military meeting supernaturals. And they still find a way to bring up scps lol
Stop trying to ruin real man stories with your twilight bullcrap
@@abigoreternal7537 nothing I mentioned in my comments are related to twilight at all. So maybe read a little better and comprehend just a little more before typing.
That was such a darn good story I enjoyed every minute of it great narration you're my favorite
I just want to let you know, that when things get bad with my boyfriend and me, and the verbal abuse gets to its worst, you, Doctor Creepen, and all the other narrators I listen to, are my only friends. Please never stop what you do. I love you and all the other narrators I listen to. You guys are the only kernle of life, light, and sanity I have when the verbal assault is too much to bear.
Then get out if your soo unhappy an get verbal abuse, your the only one that can make it stop, he isnt the only man youll ever meet or could be with...
This world is Huge you can leave anytime you finally decide youve had enough of the Abuse...
Theres the Courts you could use to get him away from you or the police to start a record of his abuse that would show the courts how he is, evidence
Write down each incident of verbal abuce date time what he did etc..
Your not a victim let him become someone elses problem for reals
@@cathypebeahsy2765 Easier said than done. Especially with nowhere to go. And all I said was when the verbal abuse gets bad. I guess some people don't understand what it's like to have feelings for someone, then get abused, and feel lost and confused because you still have feelings for that person.
@@brandywebster8409 I know how you must feel, I've been there too. I hope you will find happiness, and find the strength to get away from your boyfriend, he does not deserve you if he makes you feel unhappy. Words really do hurt. If you ever need to vent to someone, I'll listen. I wish you all the best.
@@jaanasiren4558 Awe thank you! It really is a painful situation. Words hurt but there's the attachment to him and comfortableness in the chaos, as crazy and it sounds. Thank you for being a friend!
I liked it!! Thanks Doc. You never fail to entertain. 💕
Half an hour into the story, and I give up on the fashion show. Author, please: detailed descriptions of clothes items whenever someone enters the scene or changes clothes are unnecessary and bog down the flow of the narrative. It might also be a good idea not to give descriptions in huge introductory chunks but intersperse them with conversation or action.
I will probably finish the story later as I would like to see certain characters shredded, but I've had enough so far.
Edit: Nah, sorry. A snoozefest of a lecture on monster types (I wonder if someone is showing off their knowledge of native folklore, or if it's completely made up), followed by the most anticlimactic monster reveal that I can recall, and then the group of fashion models starts sprouting all kinds of weaponry all over...no, just no. I like the idea but the narration is severely lacking, sorry.
I could only get halfway
@@willgauvey8280 47 minutes, and that's it. I've edited the original post with some more observations.
...never trust a Wendigo!😱😱😱
Thanks for the story, doctor.
"liked before watching cuz I already this is gonna be 🔥"
Absolutely.
Was on Coosa river in Central AL when I was attacked by a coondigo. Little bastard was less than 3ft tall with spiked deer horns. Mean little bastard. I swear
It's a unique idea. I instantly thought Interview with A vampire when I saw the title. I would like to see what this writer comes up with next.
Excited for this one! 👀😏😉☺️ Dearest Doctor.. ✅👍👩🎤🌹
Thank you once again your perfect timing! Awesome job 👍
Title got me excited for this one. Thanks doc 👍
Think you have one of the best voices for this
Thanks for the story. It reads like a story of fashion though.
Great story. An interesting take on the wendigo.
Thanks!
Very kind of you!
Feels like this should be in men writing women
Gotta agree with that.
Same
What are you talking about.
@@shangothunder1055 is a reddit where people post writers who are super weirdly descriptive or odd about the way they write women. It's really funny. You should look it up.
Isn't that thread also painfully nitpicky? I don't disagree at all but that subreddit is odd at times if I remember it right
Awesome story
uh, describe the clothes as fashion their wearing by brand name. don’t forget, lest it be droll, the cut of their bodies, the depth of their tans, the hairstyle said what? honestly, if that’s how it was then it just left me wondering what cassies footwear was when she had her pink riding outfit on
i love you dr. creepen, you’re rad. as always. you even made me keep listening to this.
although i admit when it was over i just listened to isla sirena again for the eleventh time🤍
fashion week at Dr. Creepen's Vault
Time got away from me. Now I can relax and listen.
Good to see you here. I've been working on carving a chuck of time away for the camp manager series so I can binge without having to wait for new ones. 😏
Oh, and thank you for putting each chapter into a longer, single video to listen to. 👍
@@ZebraJenn well I’m into book 4 now. Book 3 was over 19 hours alone. 🤣
Nice to see you here, Jennifer!
Saving this for my 12hr return trip playlist
This could have been much shorter. Way too much unnecessary descriptions. I don't care what the people are wearing.And describing the weapons ended up totally useless....
If the author is in here do not get discouraged at the feedback, the story is entirely too descriptive, I had to stop about 25min in
I can't say it was all meh, I think the writer can put more flavor for sure. Great job and with your voice it gave it life.
first time ive been really engaged in a creepypasta in a long time :))
Was this story written by Jay Peterman?
I absolutely love Cryptoids stories. Tied right up there with military stories. Excellent story and great job
I love how the taller guys are in this story the buffer not taking into account the fact that taller people have a harder time appearing as jacked as a shorter person
🙄
Does anyone else feel the moments in exposition which name absolutely every single weapon feels contrived?
I often get that feeling when I read or listen to stories like this, but in this instance it felt really thick.
Next story should be: Interview with an Idiot. Starring me !
I really liked this story.
It was predictable but a good story.
And the detailed descriptions didn’t bother me at all.
I’m not sure if you were doing a live read and that’s why the hiccups were included but if you were not then some editing was needed.
All in all very entertaining 🍺😎👍🏾
I'm really trying to get into this but every single time I think the story will finally advance, yet another character is introduced with an extremely long physical description of them and what they're wearing. I'm not quite 20 minutes in and nothing of substance has occurred except physical descriptions of characters. The author needs to whittle that down so the story can move along and keep the reader/listener engaged. I'm going to give it 10 more minutes out of respect for the good Doctor, if not for him I'd have shut it off after 10 minutes and not looked back. Hopefully the author can gain my attention again and keep it because this is such a dry and slow moving story so far. Please let the scene in the bar/lodge contain something other than an overly descriptive account of yet another character in the story! Here's to hoping!!!
Edit: well, f*ck. Sorry doc, this one is a stinker. Tried to give it another shot and so far, just another dry and drawn out physical description of yet several other characters. The author seems to rely on filler material instead of advancing the story line in a timely fashion to keep us engaged. It's rare for me to turn off a story you've narrated because you almost always choose excellent ones. And in case anyone is wondering why I've went on such a long rant, it's because I love wendigos so this was such a letdown. Wendigos aren't as popular as other mythical creatures so stories are few and far between comparatively.
Getting sting My Immortal vibes with the “do do dododo do” music playing every time a character changes outfits. Sorry doc, love ya but this one was ruff 🐶.
I love wendigo stories, but couldn’t get into this one😬. I’m so sorry to the author for the small chance they’ll read this comment. Not trying to be mean at all, just honest. Hopefully the feedback can help you next time. Definitely talented- & I love the cryptid stories!
Edit- tried again a couple months later, & I actually enjoyed it! Only thing was the over description like I said originally, & the infatuation with the women & their bodies. Kind of objectifying, just kind of odd.
But I did end up enjoying the overall plot. Would of made a great hrrR series!
Hunters who leave there weapons unguarded and then not check them not even the guns they had been carrying. Must be beginners. I hope they get avenged by expert hunters.
I've heard of interview with a vampire. Now? Interview with a Wendigo. Coolski! 😎 Have a wonderful evening all and sit back and relax with your favorite drink and listen. 😊 Thank you, Dear Doctor! 💜💙💚💛❤
This story feels like it was written by someone just trying to hit a word count.
Wow what a twist... A little disappointed in the hunters.... They were not prepared for what they got.... Their Intel must have been tampered with otherwise they would have known what they were heading into.... Great story plot....
You should get in on that story the nightmare of winter by that new guy Mr.Savage
And here we go
Cool story
Awesome❤🖤🖤❤
Wendy go wild lol :)
"Let's get the LEAD out" lol
❤️❤️❤️ thank you so much Dr ☺️
Quite interesting indeed..😎💖😎
As a fellow Wendy, I am biased in enjoying this tale.😊
Ok at the 2/3s point with the gearing up moment feels very Quentin Tarantino
Thank you all for listening to the story hope you all like it and please be gentle with me it is my first story
♡Damn fine job. You got this! Great concept, and a surprise twist! Excellent first go~ especially with Doc narrating!♡
As already mentioned, less 'hot bods' and the 6mins of weapons detail lost me before it even hit half~way... probably just me blanking out on the weapons though...
@@barkingbunny2928 thank you for the kind words but i still have a long way to go in my story telling. Its a work in progress so hopefully the next one in the series will be better
You did a pretty good job and definetly did a lot of research and paid attention to detail. Although, the excessive descriptions of everything the characters wear is a little much. You gotta spread it all out evenly so the reader doesn't get lost in the descriptions and forget about the actions that are happening around said characters. Keep it up my g
@@SpaceDuckQuack thank you i hope itn the next one i can do that and show what i can really do lets see and find out
@@matthewdevictor1442 well, we look forward to your next story!
Which podcast episode is this one on? I can't find it on Spotify or audible 😢
I didn't realize Benedict Cumberbatch(or maybe Jeremy Irons😆) had a UA-cam channel narrating creepypasta stories 😆(this is a joke btw)I loved the story btw 😊❤️
Cool story, and beautifully read, as always. However, the writer constantly uses (I lost count) the word “cannibalistic” when he should say man-eater. Otherwise, if a Wendigo was really cannibalistic, it would feed off other Wendigos. A little bit of research could have solved that. :)
Wendigos are supposed to be originally humans who succumb to cannibalistic urges due to spirit possession that twists them into monsters, so describing them as "cannibals" still makes some sense in this case, since it describes their origins
I am glad you like the story thank you so much it not my best story and its my first one i hope to improve and make something better i am glad to hear not all the comment are on how bad and cringy the girls are
@@matthewdevictor1442 I really liked the story. It was good escapism and was very cleverly done. I even liked the characters … except Wendy. I didn’t like her from the start. But that’s actually a good thing. It means that the characters weren’t all one block, without any dimensionality. Some were supposed to be likable and some weren’t. I say job well done.
@@vanessaashford9203 So then why not describe other “converted” beings as cannibals, like vampires? :) Because, just as with Wendigos, calling a monster a “cannibal” still means that the monster eats its own kind. Not that it eats regular humans.
@@dartmart9263 I think you're kind of missing the point on getting caught up on semantics. The whole point of the wendigo myth is a cautionary tale against breaking the taboo and resorting to cannibalism in desperate situations (or at least that's the most prevalent interpretation). Regardless of whether or not they currently eat "their own kind" or not, wendigos traditionally arise *because* of a human cannibalism taboo, and therefore they originate specifically as human cannibals.
Vampires aren't usually referred to as cannibals because their origins traditionally have nothing to do with the practice of cannibalism directly, traditionally in Roma folklore (which is where the dominant Western vision of the vampire mostly comes from) vampires get "turned" by a random curse from not properly engaging in strict Roma cultural codes of conduct/hygiene/etc., or from the improper handling of a corpse, or from contact with pre-existing vampires, not specifically from breaking a cannibalism taboo (and in the modern version of the folklore, they tend to if anything be even more far removed from being a cautionary tale about breaking taboos and are just "turned" unwillingly or willingly by another vampire, more like werewolves)
Is that the same Wendy the wendigo from the nightmare fighting tournament on dark somniums channel?
I don't know if you heard of Sexy Grandma Darkness' niece but she passed. I haven't seen her in a minute, but I've been praying for her. I didn't know if you knew, but I thought you should. I'm sure in not the only one who misses her comments.
No, you aren’t the only one. That’s probably taking a toll on her. I’ll have to remember that when she returns.
Oh my gosh, I was looking for SGD's comment on this one. Condolences to her ;-;
Doc whatever happened with the dark web stories did you ever release the mat story if so could you help me find it
If you ever take a vacation i dont know what i will do. I use you to sleep every night you post for over 2 years.
that’s suprising
What that town needs is a visit from TASK FORCE VOID NOVA HAMMER....
I'm loving these stories , this one was a good one 👍I'm also loving ❤ the different thumb nails next to the credits 😍 keep item content
Ahhh. Pasamaquaddy, frim the petes dragon era..
Out in bumfuc* appalachia whistling my heart out.
I think the author and their dictionary finally consummated their marriage.
I am dying to hear the next installment of the werewolves are assholes universe.
Let’s do this! ❤️
I Love Wendigo stories!!!
Havent ever heard of a nice wendigo