Smudger and the Magic Mirror
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- Опубліковано 12 вер 2024
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Smudger had been abandoned to rot when the MSR closed, but one day a magic mirror falls into his possession, becoming his friend. but little does smudger know, many partiers hunt the mirror, some worse than others...
Misty Island Origins
This story starts with a kid who gets bullied at school for his mechanical genius and neglected at home because his parents are alcoholics. But one day after a very bad day at school, he would run away after his parents started abusing him, so that night when they started using drugs and drinking even more. He packs a bag of clothes, a pocket knife, a flashlight with some extra batteries and some food. He sneaks outside through his window and walks to the garden shed his parents never use gets out a rough looking bike he's been hiding from his parents so they wouldn’t sell it for more money to get more booze and now drugs. He got on and rode all night until he found a long-forgotten railroad that was very overgrown. He decides to take a ride down the old line and see what he can find and to his surprise he finds an old ghost town and a very old shed with an old but decently conditioned locomotive that was asleep. He climbed into the cab and would fall asleep and when he woke up, he heard the locomotive singing an old mining song. So he climbed out of the cab and slowly walked up to the front of the engine while listening to the song until the engine finished the song and said hello. The boy said hello back and they started talking until the old engine asked what the boy's name was. They said his name is Burdett (no last name) and the engine said his name was Ferdinand, and he was left in the town after the lead and silver mines dried up and the logging mill caught fire due to faulty safety equipment. Burdett soon went to explore the abandoned town to look for supplies, and he soon stumbled upon the abandoned supply store and found an old radio and a three months' supply worth of batteries, food and some clothes in his size. After he got all the supplies he needed He walked back to Ferdinand and turned the radio on and tunes into the news station and they're talking about the NWR, and how they were in need of a logging goods locomotive and two logging shunting engines. Ferdinand asked Burdett to try and get him working again so they could try for a new life on sodor. So Burdett tried his absolute best to fix him up, but Ferdinand still needed a lot more work, and as night time fell across the woods the flashlight was dying and the radio played a soft and slow song that lulled Burdett and Ferdinand to sleep. Burdett worked on Ferdinand nonstop until he got him to finally steam. But Ferdinand could only move at 25 miles an hour because of the worn out state he was in, but he still was strong enough to climb up the steep hills and move some heavy loads blocking the tracks. They used every forgotten back wood's railroad track they could find for the next several days until one night after almost getting caught they were at a crossroads one said to the engine sheds and the other said to the dock yards. They decided to sleep in the sheds that night and where they soon found a massive surprise, two more old logging engines named Bashford and Dashmen. Who woke up when the doors creaked open loudly, and they saw the two back into the shed to rest and hide for the night. The two engines asked who they were to get to know their story before they told them that they were two of three experimental logging engines designed with steam powered gears to run logging equipment, and their sister gypsy was the prototype and was bought by another railroad because of it and they were just left there to rust and rust away. They then told them they dreamed of being saved and restored to full functioning order so they could be useful again. Burdett told them he would at least try to help in the morning but he needed to get some sleep first he started work once he woke up and by the time he was done it was evening and he only got their wheels able to move again. So, he used Ferdinand to shunt them together and was able to hook them up together and then Ferdinand coupled up after turning him around on the turntable and coupled up to them and he slowly pulled them out of the sheds and brought them down the line to the points and Burdett switched the points and brought them to the dock yards. Where they found an abandoned cargo ship and a functional crane, after Burdett inspected the gears and controls he used the crane to load the three engines onto the ship. Burdett tried starting the ship but to no avail he went to the engine room and worked on the boat engine for two hours and then finally started the engine and headed down river. They went undetected for three days until the river finally passed through a very popular tourist town. Everyone saw the rusty old cargo ship cruising down the river with a boy and three locomotives. They saw people taking pictures and even news reporters were there reporting the tourists and the new attractions, but when they heard of the current situation, they started reporting them instead. The police soon started chasing them until they saw Burdett's bullies and parents looking at him with anger and hate in their eyes once they saw him and his adventures and his discoveries. Once they yelled out his name he ran into the cargo ship's control room and slammed opened the throttle and set the engines at full speed and power. They fought against the raging river and once they reached the mouth of the river connecting to the ocean, they were Scott free until they soon hit the stormy seas. They were almost to sodor when they heard that the sodor logging industry had finally/already gotten their new logging engines. By then they were nearly too sodor but due to the sea’s current they soon found Misty Island instead. When they finally docked into port the locals there were kind and happy and even gave them all a home and a place to belong. But after a few weeks went by another terrible storm hit both Sodor and Misty Island, and only Burdett, the three engines and two other boys named John and Peter became Bash and Dash's new drivers. They had their fun until an engine came drifting into port and he said his name was Thomas soon found the only way off the island and got across the sea to sodor. modify where you need to, to make it fit.
I like the idea of a retelling of the logging locos origins. It adds much depth to why there would be American loggers on a British island. I can’t guarantee I will have time to adapt this, but It is one of the most interesting fan stories I have read. It captures an adventurous tone better than some of my own. I really liked it, thank you for sharing.
@@daylight39 you are the only person who actually liked it. thank you, you've have helped make my day. and i am giving you the story to use and what was your favorite parent of the story if i can ask?
@@daylight39 and if you want to add in jack sparrows' campus please do and here is why. i was thinking when the boy was running, he found the compas with a note attached on the riverbed and it reads this compas will guide you to what you desire most do not betray it or you worst nightmare will become reality.
@@daylight39 and I have been thinking of a story behind heroes abandonment.
@@daylight39 i was originally going to add a fourth engine named Leroy a 1920s logging loco but i fell that would be pushing the limit. what do you think?
damn i was expecting this to be a cringe creepypasta, but actually watching this made me realise how well smudger/stanley was characterised. His relationship with duncan is well written, and the reveal of how duke slandered his name was quite the twist. Stellar work.
From most scary to least scary
1. Missing 411
2. Stanley and the Magic Mirror
3. Our Worst Days at Sea
4. Henry’s Forest
Scariest thing in this was probably the manager/Duke.
"Sand indeed! Is this a railway or a playground?!"
"Reindeer aren't DARK CHARTREUSE!!"
"What kind of engine needs jewelry?"
Best TTTE fan episode quotes.
The friendship between Duncan and Stanley is really sweet
I’ll say it was
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rush EEEEEEE!
First time ive seen Ducan being so kind. So wholesome
I feel so bad for smudger. Not being re-guaged properly and being blamed for derailments is just so depressing :/
"Some of their equipment is 30 years old." Laughes in marine corps. There are still some 30 - to 40 year old humvees running around
Smudger being friends with duncan is natural. Also... Lady is evil(?) and Toad is DEAD
Also, the voices were a bit too quiet.
And proteus is a good guy...i think
Poor Smudger. That last accident he had really wasn't his fault.
Yeah. Glad the railway closed
I feel so bad and sorry for Smudger
Yeah, I noticed they give Stanley a lot of shit because he de rails, which isn’t entirely his fault because his wheelbase isn’t designed for the rails he runs on.
Don’t forget the manager lying to Duke and Duke kept falsely accusing him
@@blazemaster1149 that’s so unfair of Duke to keep wrongly accusing him
Scotsman is a class act for taking his brother’s place.
I really like how Smudger takes on Stanley's name due to Stanley being the first engine big engine he talks with who gives him encouragement, really sweet thing to do.
Although I will say I was partly wondering if he was going to say "Ivo Hugh" considering how similar they look lol
I'm honestly fascinated how this will all play out, I like that you keep bringning in some of the more obscure Thomas characters and giving them mysterious yet seemingly important roles within this saga.
Tbat's not even mentioning the very well done blend of the RWS, TVS, TATMR _and_ CGI versions of the show, this is one of the few creepy Thomas fan creations that I take a genuine interest in because it's a saga that makes you as question, then answers some while simultaneously giving you another dozen to ponder.
You have a very incredible way of writing stories and I'm all here for it.
The friendship between Duncan and Stanley is really so sweet 😊
I feel like every single fan invested in Thomas has written a story starring Smudger, myself included.
I only did it because I thought lapis and Smudger had a similar character arc
@@daylight39 How did Oliver and Gordon came back alive after their mysterious disappearance?
It’s ambiguous
@@daylight39 And by that,you mean?
@@jimmymccartney2049 i purposefully leaving you in the dark
This series is taking some really interesting turns. The "forest series" is fast becoming my favourite fanmade ttte series.
maybe some things should be touched up
Love the Continuation of “The Missing 411” story. Didn’t expect it.
Also, what a cute and novel ending, I hope we see Duncan, lapis, and Stanley again in another story.
This was gentle, intense but gentle, this is possibly the best Thomas Film I’ve seen as of late, I would request a sequel, I want to find out when Duke finds Stanley’s identity
I do have to say I never thought of smudger/Stanley this way and that post credit scene has me on the edge of my seat. Brilliant work and can’t wait for the next
I came here from watching The Missing 411 and now I’m invested. The fact you included a crossover between this and the Steven Universe series is both fascinating and really nice! Also, here’s a theory I have.
Lady is satan. Gordon and Oliver have either been brainwashed or corrupted to be her slaves. The red lights, present in Henry’s Forest (which is canon to this series) are a lure of sorts, to bring in engines that Lady puppets. Toad, given the fact he isn’t a engine was killed, or heavily damaged. A company (or a foundation) is trying to find her and kill her. Given the fact that she’s satan, this will be extremely hard to do.
Really looking forward to seeing the next part of this series!!!
where you get that idea of satan lady from?
@@railfandepotproductions Missing 411 has her show up between Gordon and Oliver during the dream sequence.
@@MasterSwo-MK ok, but lady showing up between gordon and oilver doesnt mean shes satan
@@railfandepotproductions No... but her presence there was... unusually unsettling.
@@MasterSwo-MKthat is true, but it could also mean something has her, and is using het and the magic railroad to grab victims
Never expected an SU & TTTE crossover. Love it. Imagine how pearl would freak over a talking engine
weenus: talkign trains?
Never expected lapis becoming friends with stanley
@@camerontdb697 feels natural along with Duncan.
Ive noticed one inaccuracy, Falcon, (later on Sir Handel), was around when Smudger/Stanley was still running, but in this, he was already a generator ehen both Stewart and Falcon arrived. But toher than that, nice work.
The controller is just a dick over all, bc I feel bad for Smudger, I also started crying when Stanley reminded of what happened to Gordon 😭
I love how you combined the green smudger but with Stanley's 590 body!
Wow, I thought that mirror was familiar, now knowing it was the one from steven universe lapis lazuli was in and she's friends with stanley/smudger. Now this series is getting interesting. I get the feeling this is why diesel 10 in this au wants to destroy lady and the buffers, this stop lady from taking others.
That mirror looked so familiar to me aswell,and knowing that it was indeed from steven universe made me pretty dang shocked,I didn't think it was from that show for sure until I watched the full video lol
Wow in this world diesel 10 is trying to destroy evil
Im so glad you are expanding the lore of this universe, I am super excited to see what you make next!
I do like how this smudger is a combination of both engines that became a generator/pumping engine he’s got the name and green colour scheme of the one from the television series on the basis/backstory of being from America of Stanley
okay, my only complaint about this is that some of the Narration is rather quiet, and some of the darker scenes are REALLY Dark, but aside from that, you did damn good on this :3
I support this. The first scene for example is almost impossible to hear over the music. And sound effects. Really should boost the voices or cut back the background sound effects. Maybe upload an audio enhanced version?
I liked how you combined smudger and NO.2 from the books and made a supreme smudger
I am not a Steven Universe fan, but I will say that I am interested in where the story with Stanley and Lapis will go.
This was amazing, I hope to see more of smudger and lapis being friends may the other crystal gems may visit sodor
I like how you made Duke exaggerate his version of Smudger's story, it's an interesting subversion of his character as a wise and honest old engine.
edit: that ending though... that totally came out of left field.
You've made me so invested, a steven universe character? SCP foundation? All wrapped up into Thomas?? And the plot just keeps on making me want to find out more answers! I can't wait to watch more!
Yeah i was thinking of steven universe too. They even have the mirror from the show
the steven universe part ruins the entire thing, its like some deviantart fan fic now
@@Kashi-K I don't mind it, and besides, this was on the narrow gauge line so I doubt we'll be seeing lapis much. And I agree it's fanfic-y but I think that it's done well, nothing felt like it was in marry sue territory.
Yeah don’t worry, it won’t have a big part to play in the overall story, she may make a few cameos and minor parts of a few episodes to come.
@@daylight39 51:27 What’s that under the Sodor Suspension Bridge?
One thing i would love to see is lapis shapeshift into a "human" and be stanley's driver
That sounds interesting
24:06 lol the goofy horn made me die
laughing
Maybe I’m thinking about this too deeply but were duke and Stanley found at the same time or was it an illusion cause of the whole “sleeping beauty” comment but Stanley told Duncan and lapis he been gone for over 10+ years, sorry I’m kinda dumb but I adore this story so much I love how fluid their relationships are ☺️😊
I chalked it down to Duke being on the skr longer because Stanley had to be completely rebuilt. My idea is that Duke was already fixed up and done by the time Stanley arrived to be restored since he was just really dusty. Stanley was just in the repair shop for a few months while Duke was up at skarloey lake.
@@daylight39 oh alrighty thank you ☺ 😄 That’s makes sense with all he went through I love that
This is an interesting part in your series so far. Especially with Smudger/Stanley having a role (or spotlight) here. Although I think you could use some work. Like the voice acting could be a bit more louder here.
Still this is an interesting and a good part here. Keep up the great work here.
I love it, especially the vibe of the end credits
Please make more videos with the trio Stanley,Duncan,and lapis,I would love to see more of those Characters^^
tbh the MS manager was kind off a psychopath.
yes.
@@daylight39 what was at the bottom of the ravine at 51:27
@@jacobwhittington2462 Gordon and toad’s remains
Culdee Fell manager was also pretty bad he cannibalized Godred for parts.
@@daylight39 So they fell down that ravine?
i love the mix of smudger and stanley (at start)
The way I am so invested in your series now
LITERALLY SAME
gosh it’s so sad how much the manager hate smudged 😭
Never expected to see a t&f and steven universe cross over,,
This is very interesting it feels like an alternate reality like it’s in a multiverse of some sorts. Doctor strange from the mcu would approve. And I’m down for it all. Keep it up can’t wait to see where this story goes next. Ps maybe you should put doctor strange in your Thomas au because it’s giving me doctor strange multiverse vibes lol. 😂
I kinda think this scream Flashpoint like the Flash comic which Barry Allen creates an alternate reality
whats next lupin the 3rd?
Ah I thought I recognized that mirror. Very clever.
I thought i recognised it but thought it was just a picture then when sir robert was in his car i saw a lapis lazuli gem on it and was just thinking "steven universe is cannon in this universe" until duncan was on the old iron bridge where we saw LAPIS LAZULI (after steven had healed her)😊
@@HugeGarnetFan I didn't noticed her gem. Also Steven wasn't mentioned, only that after she fell she got out.
This video had a continuation of The Missing 411 and Lapis Lazuli from Steven Universe. Amazing. I can't wait for the next one. I loved this video.
Just discovered this. I'm really interested in this series hope you continue
i loved it! and the only thing i can realistically complain about is that the Mirror/lapis's voice is very hard to hear over the music
Glad that “Smudger” is back with us. I didn’t know he was an American tank engine! And I saw a new side of Duncan!
So I have 2 things to what just happened after the credits
1: Gordon and Oliver ram from the shed and went to victorstown but the bridge was broken so they fell off and died with lady using there spirits to help her with god lows what
And 2: a demon took Gordon and olivers spirits and put them under the suspicion bridge while lady saved them from what I assumed to be hell and in return they can help with whatever she’s doing and it’s god knows what
Wait thats whats under the bridge? And i think your theory might hold ground but i think lady is also under the demon's control
@@ominimonzwartalterb5526 well it’s that or toads dead body cause toad disappeared several nights after Oliver and Gordon well as I said it turned into spirits
@@brentgibson8198 i couldn't tell, also i guess diesel ten may know something the others don't, considering how he was polite to stanley, he is taking a the prey of my enemy is my friend approach
Ah Stanley and Smudger, clever.
I shore hope that we find out what happened to Gordon and Oliver and hopefully get them back.
Heh a real happy ending for Stanley
MSR Log #1: Smudger/Stanley Verdict: Alive Occupancy: Unknown. Smudger is an american engine who rolled roughly along the tracks. This was because he wasn't gauged properly. In the story Duke told he was reckless and was turned into a generator. Later after Stuart and Falcon were sold to the aluminum works, and John was sold to an unknown buyer, possibly sold to the Corris Railway. Smudger was sent to the mines and was turned to a pumping engine. One fateful night the mines flooded due to a crack in his boiler. This turned out the events of the mine flooding was supposed make duncan less arrogant. (This is what maybe happened?)
I love how in this they made Diesel 10's goal atleast seem somewhat noble.
I'm so invested in this series. I need answers. This is great. And I like the friendship between Stanley and Duncan.
Does anyone know what the piece of piano music that plays near the start when Smudger goes to get the slate trucks and then while he's pulling them? Or that high pitched whistling track that you hear when Gordon, Oliver and Lady come and abduct Toad?
EDIT: Ah. There's a music list at the end of the video. Should have finished it before commenting lmao. A lot of it is by Kevin MacLeod, so I think I'll go peruse his music to see if there's anything from other TTTE fan stories that is there...
love the "huh?" ending
this is genius T&F original content
Is this a part 1 of a series, or is this a one off? I was really invested throughout, and I'd love to see more. Well done! 😁
It is episode 4 of forest horrors, I should have a playlist of the episodes in order.
@@daylight39 Ah awesome, I'll check the others out.
@@daylight39will you continue the tale of smudger/stanley. Also its kinda weird that sir handel and peter sam are not on the skarloey
@@Where_is-it I might have an episode where he confronts Duke, but I haven’t decided. Also, Peter Sam and sir handle are on the skarloey, I just didn’t feature them much because I didn’t have a major role for them.
@@daylight39 okay thanks
This is a very good video. But could you please turn up the audio? The voice actors are speaking very quietly, and the sound is very drowned out by the ambient sound effects.
amazing episode! Loved it!
but why'd he still ask Stanley for his name after he said Thanks Stanley. Was it a mistake or did you forget about it?
bit of an inconsistency, smudger knew stanleys name and then asked what it was a bit later
Well, he was left alone for decades. Maybe he just wanted something to say?
The fact that this uses both the Steven Universe Soundtrack and Lapis Lazuli’s mirror is just amazing
I enjoy the new episode and that tied in to (the missing 411) episodes. A I can’t wait of the episode with lapis.
This is getting good. I hope everybody ends up ok.
Awww yesss reverse anti Steven universe and ttte?!!! My two fav ❤️♥️💙I’m glad that’s Duncan’s on the secret though (I think) John being used as the engine who fell off the bridge fitting I wonder how he got there though I think I know why and I loved everyone’s relationships here
I like the 3D lapis model
So Lady used Oliver to take Toad and end him. I'm also guessing since we heard Lady's Whistle before Duncan and the bridge as John was seen racing towards him... I guess this reveals what happened to John, Lady needed a vessel on the little engine's railway and she got him.
Something at first that I didn't like was Smudger being Stanley's class. But after seeing Duke's story, that old scrap colour shit made me believe in the wrong story! Ok I still don't like Smudger being Stanley, but atleast you made it work!
But I don't like he mirror becoming what ever knock-off smurf was that! I heard she was from Steven Universe or something which doesn't remind me of any character from that but I haven't watched in years.
Great work! I really enjoyed Stanley and Duncans dynamic
This was amazing! I hope to see more!
Maybe this is what happens when Lady turns rogue
maybe this time Thomas is going team up with D10 to stop lady like he did in magic railroad movie with lady
So Diesel 10 is good and Lady is bad? I like it.
You're a talented writer, way better than modern Thomas stuff and even from the S.U writers, nice job
It’s interesting that it was the track that was the problem, because the Baldwin 10-12-d’s were use on near the front line due WW1.
NEVER expected to hear Archibald Asparagus broadcasting news of murders, incredible work!
Oh this is getting good!!! Cant wait to see whats next!! Keep up the awesome work!! 👍👍
49:16 Well, I definitely wasn't expecting that.
I Like How Smudger Meet Lapis From Steven Universe
Dang the railway betrayed Smudger
28:24 - May god be with you!
That got me.
im loving the Steven universe theme song for thomas
19:57 Smudger: what about you
Stanley: Stanley, you just sad it
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Must be like the worst manager ever, because how do you not know when you have a damaged track you never see sir Topham Hatt blaming that on one of his engines
At least smudger or Stanley which is his new name lives a better railway that respects him unlike the manager who refuse to listen to him.
At least Stanley doesn’t kept derailing.
The energy of the video felt so weird. Idk why feels something out of digital horror.
And for once in Stanley’s life,he finally felt like he was……………….home
I hate these stories that make it his design instead of attitude bc it just makes the managers look like assholes
Me too, you're not the only one who thinks that.
So Gordon ended up coming back and trying to hide Lady from diesel 10,
I love how you combined other events happening with Smugers/Stanleys story, that was very creative
I love Stanley and Duncan’s relationship in this!
40:09 Duke doesn’t know smudger is renamed Stanley
“We need artillery guns for home defence?” LMAO
Smudger gets a waifu and other stories
Now this was bizarre Gordon & Oliver gone missing for a year there only to be spotted by Stanley, Dissel 10 which I spotted him in Missing 411 with I believe with Mr Perceval there couldn’t see it was dark looking for Lady & at the end of the video looked like an engine deep down
Godred Freeman rips the fabric of reality yet again, this time less deadly
I'm guessing Stanley is the face in the mirror
Ngl the Steven Universe camo is kinda weird.
This should be interesting!
Awesome adaptation