Friend, I sometimes cry listening to this one at the end. It's just such a beautifully written story and the relief the reader/listener has to hear these dumb, sweet, innocent kids have a chance in this world still is just a gift the writer gives us and them.
Hey! Thank you!! It's so funny posting these stories and seeing which ones have explosions of views and which ones never seem to get traction. I say this about a lot of these stories but this is one of my favorites.
I get it. It's such a compelling story but on the page it's just a daunting amount of text to decipher. I'm always a fan of hearing short stories aloud.
Thank you for narrating this. I cried at the end as you narrated the part about Allison's parents. Great job.
Friend, I sometimes cry listening to this one at the end. It's just such a beautifully written story and the relief the reader/listener has to hear these dumb, sweet, innocent kids have a chance in this world still is just a gift the writer gives us and them.
This is an incredible performance. There's so much care and emotion put into this reading, I am shocked it doesn't have more attention. Fantastic job.
Hey! Thank you!! It's so funny posting these stories and seeing which ones have explosions of views and which ones never seem to get traction. I say this about a lot of these stories but this is one of my favorites.
This is amazing! Definitely fun and helped so much when reading it for my class
So glad it helped!!
Thank you this short story is so boring to read
I get it. It's such a compelling story but on the page it's just a daunting amount of text to decipher. I'm always a fan of hearing short stories aloud.
I think that this story does not five anything to the reader.
Ooh, I'd love to hear more about this! Do you mean there's no payoff to the reader?