There are so many people seeking complete and total power over their kind. I totally belief in parallel universes , that aliens live with us, and the ones to be terrified of is humans. We are very far from becoming our bests. Thank you, wonderful story.
Lots of simple but wonderful Jems in this Story Sir. A few creepy nursery rhymes were running through my head with the creepy old lady. Fun fact many of the dark rhymes have more verses than most know about.
"I guess I shouldn't have...." The famous last words of a fool!! Great story Jordan!! You are a master of your craft, and I greedily await your next adventure!!
Thank you for all you do Jordan. I adore your writing and your narrations are always so engaging and entertaining (obvi or we wouldn't be here, duh)! We love you. 💜💋💜
@lindaarrington9397 the haunted house he inherited with the rules that were all just flagrantly ignored omfg, not going to lie, I came reeeeaaaaally close to making a puddle under me on that one. Several times. I think what we're trying to convey here, Jordan, is ummm... keep it up sir. (Gigglesnort, different meaning out of context bwahaahahaa)
Yeah, he's go a good deep voice. As a court reporter who takes numerous testimonies of witnesses and attorneys, who can't speak normal English, we appreciate that, Jason. Thank You!
Another fantastic story! Thank you for all the work and time you put into the narration. It really makes a difference. You do such a wonderful job, keep it up!!
After listening to all of the Hollow's End series and now catching up on all your older stuff, I'm amazed at how many stories connect together, like you mentioned. I'm guessing this was connected to the "tour bus" that showed up at Hollow's End, and where Marc from Earth got abducted. Crimson Muse was also in that episode and probably a few others. These stories are becoming amazing classics in my memories.
So wait, I just listened to this, but isnt Proteon the company from the newest hollows end story. I may be mistaking and honestly to lazy rn to go back and check 😂
This is an extreme case but this is why I always carry a weapon...especially if I'm told not to. If I'm going to be screened for metal i have strong plastic weapons. But its also why I read NDA's no matter what. Ive been pressured twice to just sign it. I would think you would want an employee to read everything before signing. It shows a lot of character.
I would love for the author to flesh this out more into an expansion. It would be an amazing story to tell backwards from our realm being a shadow realm all the way back to the shadow realm originally being like our realm. Like a cyclical story; from end to beginning actually turning into a beginning to end.
Okay, good story, right up until he said, "I'm begging you, please can we get out of here".... so much for finding his sister. A grown man looking for his sister, doesn't chump out. That's my take on it.
Sorry I missed the live read but I was transcribing this weeks ‘Hollows End Digest’ in our Patron page. Same old, same old really. At least it’s not another one of those unsettling ‘Total Hollows End News Blackout’ situations. I love me one of these horribly reckless and irresponsible scientific experiments gone predictably awry stories. I like stories which are at least an hour long even better. But why always a cat ? Why not a rabbit ? Why not a duck ?
As a CreepyCat… I have to make the argument for the cat in Shrodinger’s box here.. does the cat’s experience count for nothing? Why can’t it be a dog? Why not a person?! If it WERE a person… doesn’t their own observation muck up the woowoo waveform?
This is kinda silly lol. Enjoyable enough, but silly nonetheless. I mean the bus is just a bus, there's a giant tree that nobody else on earth knows about? Idk man there's just a lot that's left unexplained/unexplored and we're just so supposed to accept these things. It's kinda like the magic in Irish mythology, like it just "is". Putting the word "quantum" in front of something is often used as a crutch to avoid further world-building and/or explaining certain aspects of sci-fi technology, and it drives me nuts because most of the writers who do this barely understand what it means in the first place. Also why is Ramone made to sound like a woman???
There are so many people seeking complete and total power over their kind. I totally belief in parallel universes , that aliens live with us, and the ones to be terrified of is humans. We are very far from becoming our bests.
Thank you, wonderful story.
I’m ready just got out of work and I need this!!!!!
By the way you knocked this story out of the park. Very immersive and fun to listen to!
Lots of simple but wonderful Jems in this Story Sir. A few creepy nursery rhymes were running through my head with the creepy old lady. Fun fact many of the dark rhymes have more verses than most know about.
"I guess I shouldn't have...." The famous last words of a fool!! Great story Jordan!! You are a master of your craft, and I greedily await your next adventure!!
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This is a great story,,,very well narrated, can't wait for more,,,,,,,,
'Smoke and mirrors, one's and zeros',,,,brilliant 👌👌
quite enjoyable story..i hope to hear further tales of this.
👍👍 Fascinatingly captivating and thrilling. I loved every minute. Thanks Jordan. 😇💖
Thank you for all you do Jordan. I adore your writing and your narrations are always so engaging and entertaining (obvi or we wouldn't be here, duh)! We love you. 💜💋💜
Lol some are just gluttony 4 punishment
Naw I really like Jordan. When he writes he has me laughing so hard.
@lindaarrington9397 the haunted house he inherited with the rules that were all just flagrantly ignored omfg, not going to lie, I came reeeeaaaaally close to making a puddle under me on that one. Several times.
I think what we're trying to convey here, Jordan, is ummm... keep it up sir. (Gigglesnort, different meaning out of context bwahaahahaa)
Anything that I have learned about guards in creepypasta's is, it's better off if you just kill them and take their guns for yourself.
Good story! The MC must have a thing for his cousin cause that would be the only reason he would want to find such a horrible person.
Yeah, he's go a good deep voice. As a court reporter who takes numerous testimonies of witnesses and attorneys, who can't speak normal English, we appreciate that, Jason. Thank You!
Jason? I thought the narrator's name was Jordan?
This is so good I’m hooked!!!
This really needs to be made into a book!
The author def took a page out of the Left Right Game! Love it
You have the best stories on UA-cam and your narration is pretty good too 😉😍 I don't share many but you're top of my list ❤❤ Thank you ❤️
Awesome Story! Can’t wait to hear the new hollows end.
The magic Bus from Hell
Awesome! As always Jordan!
Another fantastic story! Thank you for all the work and time you put into the narration. It really makes a difference. You do such a wonderful job, keep it up!!
Thank you very much!
After listening to all of the Hollow's End series and now catching up on all your older stuff, I'm amazed at how many stories connect together, like you mentioned. I'm guessing this was connected to the "tour bus" that showed up at Hollow's End, and where Marc from Earth got abducted. Crimson Muse was also in that episode and probably a few others.
These stories are becoming amazing classics in my memories.
Thank you so much! It makes me very happy when people notice those little Easter eggs 😄
This was excellent. Let's go!
Truly bizarre! Thank you, Jordan... 🤯⚘️🙋♀️
This is a really cool one, it makes me think of Yggdrasil.
Thanks a lot Jordan for another great story. 👍🏻
Glad you enjoyed it!
Great job Jordan awesome
Woah this is very deep ! Love it, love the principles. Proteon Inc is a bad place, right ?
This sounds like its going to be another really good one
Almost got the Schrodinger's cat experiment correct, radioactive element randomly decays and trigger a deadly poison to release.
Thanks!
Thank you so much!
So wait, I just listened to this, but isnt Proteon the company from the newest hollows end story. I may be mistaking and honestly to lazy rn to go back and check 😂
You caught it, yes!
@@JordanGrupe This makes me very excited........there is a Hollows End universe being created
This is an extreme case but this is why I always carry a weapon...especially if I'm told not to. If I'm going to be screened for metal i have strong plastic weapons. But its also why I read NDA's no matter what. Ive been pressured twice to just sign it. I would think you would want an employee to read everything before signing. It shows a lot of character.
Hello Jordan and Chat 👋✌️🦩
Hello!!
Whoopsie accidental apocalypse maybe
Could be our future
Watch the Terminator....😮
AI
I would love for the author to flesh this out more into an expansion. It would be an amazing story to tell backwards from our realm being a shadow realm all the way back to the shadow realm originally being like our realm. Like a cyclical story; from end to beginning actually turning into a beginning to end.
Great story. 💕
Thank you! 😊
I'm addicted to your voice 😍😚🌹
You should WIN AN OSKAR, Jordan!
"come along and ride on our, fantastic voyage"
Awesome❤❤❤
Fucking awesome, thank you for this.
The beginning sounds like how I imagine WaterGate went… 😳
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Connected to hollows end
Not thinking good things about that cousin right now 😕😡
Trying this gem next
Ted and Wayne excellent adventure
For the algorithm 🤘
Okay, good story, right up until he said, "I'm begging you, please can we get out of here".... so much for finding his sister. A grown man looking for his sister, doesn't chump out. That's my take on it.
Indeed
Sorry I missed the live read but I was transcribing this weeks ‘Hollows End Digest’ in our Patron page. Same old, same old really. At least it’s not another one of those unsettling ‘Total Hollows End News Blackout’ situations.
I love me one of these horribly reckless and irresponsible scientific experiments gone predictably awry stories. I like stories which are at least an hour long even better. But why always a cat ? Why not a rabbit ? Why not a duck ?
This story is a beautiful illustration of how all that ‘Terms and Conditions’ agreement we all partake in will be the death of us all.
As a CreepyCat… I have to make the argument for the cat in Shrodinger’s box here.. does the cat’s experience count for nothing? Why can’t it be a dog? Why not a person?! If it WERE a person… doesn’t their own observation muck up the woowoo waveform?
The cat doesn't even know if its dead or alive 😮
Welp. I used to love old people. Now im not so sure.
Are all the stories he reads connected😭, i just finished hollows end and it ends talking about proteon
This one is definitely connected but not all of them
Wait a minute! If he's a hologram how did he hand the camera back?!?
What if you can hear the cat drop dead?
So clever to work for quantum technologies but so dumb 😅😅😅.
If you minded your business you wouldn't be much of a journalist!!
is there two of you narrating that alternate? some story you sound like you have some type of accent. some you sound just like this or deeper voice.
is it just me, or does the company name sound familliar?
It's in a few of my other stories as well 😜
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Number#( not hashtag)900...
This is kinda silly lol. Enjoyable enough, but silly nonetheless. I mean the bus is just a bus, there's a giant tree that nobody else on earth knows about? Idk man there's just a lot that's left unexplained/unexplored and we're just so supposed to accept these things. It's kinda like the magic in Irish mythology, like it just "is". Putting the word "quantum" in front of something is often used as a crutch to avoid further world-building and/or explaining certain aspects of sci-fi technology, and it drives me nuts because most of the writers who do this barely understand what it means in the first place.
Also why is Ramone made to sound like a woman???
Thank you Jordan, hopefully I subscribe correctly, am listening to this story now,😊
Welcome!