An HFY Story : One Taken, One Gathered | 2386 | ~Deathworld, War, Terran and Humans

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  • Опубліковано 9 лис 2024

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  • @CaptainShield
    @CaptainShield 6 місяців тому +26

    May we all strive to be greeted with the Mask of Grace when our time comes.

  • @randyl8979
    @randyl8979 6 місяців тому +36

    My wife has the nerve to claim she is not cutting up onions but I know better.

  • @deathbedquestion
    @deathbedquestion 6 місяців тому +33

    Geez a couple minutes in and the onion ninjas are kicking my butt! ❤

  • @jgkitarel
    @jgkitarel 6 місяців тому +66

    The mask Death wears is one that reflects the soul of one who will pass. An interesting take on things, isn't it? Death is neither cruel, not is it benevolent. It simply is. It carries out a grim duty and does so as quickly, cleanly, and with as little fuss as can be managed. And in Kerin's case, his smile is a mask as well. For he has carried out this grim, and at times heartbreaking, duty many a time. Though there are some times when he can find himself.... satisfied at the result, especially when he can choose.

    • @Snipergoat1
      @Snipergoat1 6 місяців тому

      Sure but why did he directly intervene like that. A collector of the dead who takes time to create a few more dead seems to have a conflict of interests. Like an ambulance driver while rushing back to save a gravely injured man runs a few more over so he can save A few more while on the way.

    • @HenshinFanatic
      @HenshinFanatic 6 місяців тому +4

      ​@@Snipergoat1 "he got to choose" think about what the implication is with events occuring in the story. For a refresher and a hint the biological son had pulled a dagger on Nok and was in close quarters combat when Koren made his choice.

    • @oscarphillips3654
      @oscarphillips3654 6 місяців тому +7

      @@Snipergoat1
      One could say that Korin did his job as an Advocate one who speaks for others or in this case for the dead or soon to die. In this case, he advocated for the soul of a good man about to be killed and was granted the choice to take the soul of the evil man who was meant to kill him that night instead. the raven on his shoulder is the one who is the actual collector of souls all Korin did was change whose soul was collected that night.

    • @DubiousFIN
      @DubiousFIN 6 місяців тому +1

      Where did the idea that death is grim come from?

    • @merlinathrawes746
      @merlinathrawes746 6 місяців тому +4

      @@Snipergoat1 One was going to die regardless, Nok or Artek. Koren in this instance was simply allowed to choose which it would be. Not to create a death since a death was already mandated, but to choose which of the two would die. Not exactly the same as creating extra business for himself.

  • @randomstranger9674
    @randomstranger9674 6 місяців тому +20

    An excellent story, given the narration it deserved. Thank you MyNameMeansBentNose and ASN.

  • @DanJones-np8xb
    @DanJones-np8xb Місяць тому +1

    "... A smile, that was a mask, of it's own."
    Is a pretty damn raw line.
    That was nice. I liked that.

  • @mackenziedrake
    @mackenziedrake 6 місяців тому +15

    That is wonderful, and wonderfully performed. Thank you so much!

  • @lupaswolfshead9971
    @lupaswolfshead9971 6 місяців тому +10

    an intriguing take compliments to the author.

  • @jamesmartin1865
    @jamesmartin1865 6 місяців тому +9

    Absolutely Awesome story vocal performance was stellar. Thank you good Sir.

  • @ninahigh2027
    @ninahigh2027 6 місяців тому +2

    Why am I crying? I haven’t been cutting onions.

  • @merlinathrawes746
    @merlinathrawes746 6 місяців тому +4

    An interesting, compelling and thought-provoking story throughout. And left a young girl with much knowledge about life and death.

  • @mikestarke1216
    @mikestarke1216 6 місяців тому +4

    nice one and i gotta say scify is a LOT MORE THAN SIMPLY "HUMANS WIN THE WAR, BEING CLEVER".

  • @WingManFang1
    @WingManFang1 6 місяців тому +1

    This was beautiful and terrifying in a way. Probably the most relaxed story about death/the grim reaper I’ve heard.

  • @mikecoatsworth6048
    @mikecoatsworth6048 6 місяців тому +3

    For the narration, for the algo, and ofc the nest

  • @MrGoesBoom
    @MrGoesBoom 6 місяців тому +4

    Excellent story with some great world building in it. Hope we get more stories in this world

    • @jamesmartin1865
      @jamesmartin1865 6 місяців тому +1

      Here here i concur, many many more, yes please Sir, two books full.

  • @victortahlor4038
    @victortahlor4038 6 місяців тому

    Thank you for the reading

  • @Acirno
    @Acirno 6 місяців тому +1

    I have always liked the stories you Sir have told. Some funny, some sad, but as of late I can't help but feel deeper meaning. Kudos to the ones who write, and an even bigger Kudos to you who tells. I truly cherish the time spent here.

  • @jeanannd
    @jeanannd 6 місяців тому +4

    A good story, touching and with humanity.

  • @GregoryHarrisSr
    @GregoryHarrisSr 3 місяці тому

    That was deep.

  • @marksmith2001
    @marksmith2001 День тому +1

    Dont kill our squirrel family like new york!

  • @Dragonbear13-k2r
    @Dragonbear13-k2r 6 місяців тому

    A story well chosen and well told. Thumbs up.

  • @sirpubert8728
    @sirpubert8728 6 місяців тому

    Thank you for making this morning waaaayyyy better.....

  • @666stonewall
    @666stonewall 6 місяців тому

    Beautiful story. And very well narrated.

  • @johnfairhurstReviews
    @johnfairhurstReviews 6 місяців тому

    Excellent story, beautifully delivered

  • @Druidor
    @Druidor 2 місяці тому

    A true Onion Ninja story there, well narrated as always.

  • @kurtismiller9544
    @kurtismiller9544 6 місяців тому +2

    For DA SKWERL and his Nest.

  • @MidnightSmoke
    @MidnightSmoke 6 місяців тому +1

    Here is a like and comment for the wonderful story, for entertaining me, to help your channel grow, to appease the great and powerful UA-cam algorithm demon, and get you the recognition you deserve.

  • @waltergolston6187
    @waltergolston6187 6 місяців тому

    a good story of love and compassion

  • @mariokajin
    @mariokajin 6 місяців тому

    Great quality, story and narration.

  • @Shadow.Dragon
    @Shadow.Dragon 6 місяців тому

    Great story; Excellent narration! Thank you!

  • @peteranderson3390
    @peteranderson3390 6 місяців тому

    I really liked this one mate. I've listened to hundreds of stories you've read and this is one of my favourites. I can see myself coming back to hear it many times in the future. Thank you.

  • @mattbrown5511
    @mattbrown5511 6 місяців тому +1

    Are you trying to make an old, broken soldier feel like a human again?

  • @UnitedArmsOrganization
    @UnitedArmsOrganization 6 місяців тому

    Thank you for what you do, you make my day better.

  • @allenmorgan1007
    @allenmorgan1007 6 місяців тому

    For the Algorithm, for the Author(s), for the Holographic Voice!

  • @erictoncray966
    @erictoncray966 5 місяців тому

    This makes me want to make a Dnd character cleric based on this. A servant of Death.

  • @lrmackmcbride7498
    @lrmackmcbride7498 6 місяців тому +1

    The onion nijas are real.

  • @nerovalquel1844
    @nerovalquel1844 6 місяців тому

    My we all welcome her smiling

  • @xunheilvsnipezx3324
    @xunheilvsnipezx3324 6 місяців тому

    Howdy howdy from Tucson

  • @robertstoneking7916
    @robertstoneking7916 6 місяців тому

    It is said in the old tales that only human advocates are given a choice. It is more that only humans defy the fates such that it is easier to let us intervene at times than for even a god to maintain control.

  • @seanbolster7603
    @seanbolster7603 6 місяців тому +2

    Humans be stubborn af. Lol.

  • @Snipergoat1
    @Snipergoat1 6 місяців тому +3

    Nice story but I can't understand why he would care much about the soul turned evil, or why he would involve himself with saving Nok. Psychopomps (Beings who take the newly dead from the land of living to the places of the dead. The Grim Reaper and Valkyries are particularly well known examples) are notoriously aloof as to the specific nature on any given death (out side of their duties of course.) I suppose that they see so many it is routine for them. So why the intervention?

    • @Terran.Marine.2
      @Terran.Marine.2 6 місяців тому +3

      Try the "On a pale horse series" by Piers Anthony

    • @zuzax1656
      @zuzax1656 6 місяців тому +2

      Why the intervention? Because it was Arket's time, not Nok's. Death came to the village for two souls, Arket's and Elly's.
      You seem to be under the impression that Death is simply a gatherer of the souls of the recently departed. If such were the case, it would be known as the Gatherer, or the Guide, or something. But it is not, it is Death, the snuffer of the spark of life. Death is the cause, not a bystander. Only then can Death take the soul to the next realm.

    • @lrmackmcbride7498
      @lrmackmcbride7498 6 місяців тому +2

      There was a choice to be had. A flip of the coin and the advocate chose perhaps just as an agent of not death but karma.

    • @TheMariusDarkwolf
      @TheMariusDarkwolf 6 місяців тому +2

      Also as he basically states, he's human, a person that was so in love with his partner, that he basically made a deal with Death herself, to become one of her 'helpers' to stay with his partner. So this isn't just an incarnation of death, or a psychopomp, but a person doing a job basically. And a person doing a job can make a choice. Two people had to die in that town. The 'split' as they called it, meant that depending on a number of factors, either Nok or Arket could have died in that scuffle that Arket was planning. Koren decided that it was going to be Arket, and ensured THAT was the outcome, and that random chance didn't get a look in. Ellie was a different story

    • @Immoralbites
      @Immoralbites 6 місяців тому

      @@zuzax1656 true, Death wields a scythe, an instrument of cutting, not a fork, an implement of lift and leverage.

  • @machstormer
    @machstormer 6 місяців тому

    🎭

  • @genericuser984
    @genericuser984 6 місяців тому

    cool

  • @talyn3932
    @talyn3932 6 місяців тому

    I wish you had a spoiler for fantasy. Im way more interested in the sci fi.

  • @TheRealInscrutable
    @TheRealInscrutable 6 місяців тому

    200K

  • @ArchonSG1
    @ArchonSG1 6 місяців тому

    such a sad and poignant tale

  • @oldbutnotdead1
    @oldbutnotdead1 6 місяців тому

    algorithm

  • @Terran.Marine.2
    @Terran.Marine.2 6 місяців тому

    2024.05.05 13:34

  • @Terran.Marine.2
    @Terran.Marine.2 6 місяців тому

    77th 👍

  • @merlinwizard1000
    @merlinwizard1000 6 місяців тому +1

    5th, 5 May 2024

  • @gprivat812_my_selection6
    @gprivat812_my_selection6 4 місяці тому

    The mannerism in speaking this text is hard to bear!
    I can't stand it anymore! Bye bye!