Predaking Deku | Episode 1: Playing God | Shipless

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  • @mhastoryteller694
    @mhastoryteller694  Рік тому +12

    Hope everyone enjoys!!

    • @Reverse_slenderman
      @Reverse_slenderman Рік тому +2

      Will he have a robot form or js the predaking

    • @mhastoryteller694
      @mhastoryteller694  Рік тому +2

      @@Reverse_slenderman oh he’ll DEFFO have the robot mode

    • @jacobdubois7940
      @jacobdubois7940 Рік тому +2

      Hey I sure did and anyway here is the last ronin deku (context the last ronin is mikey whos now alot more serious and has his brothers weapons after they were killed by the foot clan and he has a black ninja mask I think a cloak aswell I don't know) here as izuku was growing up he felt he was different from everyone else because he looked like a turtle and not a normal person so he grew curious that's when he found out the truth his real name was Michaelangelo and he figured out who his real family is inko found him as a baby and when splinter arrived to get him inko was already gone with him izuku/Michaelangelo assuming inko kidnapped him attacked her and demanded answers she explained but izuku/Michaelangelo said you stole me from my REAL FAMILY!! He punched her square in the face breaking her nose and knocking her out cold he went to a Martial arts store and purchased nunchucks to ninjaken swords sais and a bo staff along with a black ninja mask and a cloak he saw and izuku/Michaelangelo taking his real name and became a vigilante known as the last ronin as he believed his family is dead when in reality their alive searching for him and a turtle with a red ninja mask approached female turtle with a cyan blue ninja mask and sat next to her saying we'll find him Venus she looks at him and said raph tell me how do you know that raph said Venus we can't lose hope mikey has to be out there somewhere a turtle in a purple came running yelling GUYS!! Immediately raph Venus and to others run to him and one in a dark blue mask said what's wrong Donnie Donnie said this and reports of a giant turtle in dark clothing attacked and killed some human traffickers and raph said leo sensei you think that's mikey's doing splinter said one way to find out go now and splinter said Venus I know how much mikey means to you Venus said ever since we were babies I had hoped he was out there and this can be our only shot splinter said Karai Casey and April will join you soon go now Venus goes with the others (in this Venus was actually found by splinter when she was little and he took her as babies she and izuku/Michaelangelo were inseparable and as they grew up and were really close) they get to Japan with karai casey and April in the shell raiser and look around raph almost pukes of the sight of the bodies and Donnie said this was the work of certain martial art weapons katanas nunchucks sais and a bo staff raph said did mikey purchase his own gear leo said probably April said I still don't understand what's going on casey said yeah why are we here karai said from the way leo seemed it was personal leo sighed and said karai casey April Donnie raph and I had one more brother they are shocked and casey sais there were 4 of you Venus said yes his names Michaelangelo but we called him mikey leo said he was honestly the goof out of the four of us (I forgot to mention the versions of April karai casey leo raph Donnie and splinter are their 2012 versions for Venus I couldn't think of one) casey said yeah I'm not so sure about him being a goof because of this suddenly rocks fall and they look up to someone looking at the with serious white eyes (I don't know how to describe it but it's when their in combat) before running they immediately grapple up and see him running and leo said mikey wait before chasing after him with the others izuku/Michaelangelo eventually stops at the edge of a building and raph said little bro come on its me raph remember (izuku hardly remembers his past and he dosen't believe him) he just coldly looks over his shoulder and April uses her powers and said he hardly remembers Venus was close to tearing up hearing that leo said mikey it's me leo we're brothers and izuku/Michaelangelo said my family is dead this shocks them as he thinks their dead izuku/Michaelangelo unsheathe his ninjaken and raph said don't make us do this izuku/Michaelangelo gets into a fighting stance and Donnie said mikey please don't make us do this izuku/Michaelangelo yelled STOP TALKING LIKE YOU KNOW ME!!!! He attacks them and surprisingly wins and Venus with the last bit of conscious grabs his leg and he looks at her and she said mikey please don't leave me I can't lose you again izuku/Michaelangelo takes his foot out of her grip and walks away as she lost consciousness in the sewers izuku looks at himself in a reflection and said how do they know me who are they why do they claim to he my true family their dead back at New York leo raph Donnie April Venus karai and Casey returned bruised and splinter ran to them and said what happened and love said we found mikey but he hardly remembers us and he believes we're dead splinter couldn't believe what he heard and said had i found him the day he was taken none of this would've happened leo said father the trail went cold because it started raining it's not your fault splinter said yet it feels like it is izuku/Michaelangelo then kills a few robbers fake heroes villains ect and news catches wind of it and news of inko about him going missing and leo in his head said you have alot of explaining to do ms midoriya splinter said that she does my son they head out to inkos house and sneak in through the window and when she goes to check it out splinter said ms midoriya inko spins around terrified seeing a giant talking rat infront of her and inko starts panicking and splinter said you might want to sit down she sits down calming down a little and splinter sits next to her and said why did you kidnap my son inko said who leo unable to stay hidden said Michaelangelo or as you call him izuku splinter sighs as inko got scared and splinter said boys leo raph and Donnie jump down and raph sais well what gave you the reason to kidnap my brother inko said I found him in that alleyway crying and I thought he was thrown out then I heard something coming from the rooftops so I left with him splinter said that was me on my way to retrieve my son we were attacked and he was almost taken by the krang inko said krang Donnie explained the krang to her and inko said splinter I am so sorry for this I didn't know but he really believed I kidnapped him I understand if he never wants to see me splinter said that is up to him and I thank you for saving my son they leave and karai calls them and leo answers and said karai what's going on she said shinigomi and venus spotted mikey walk into a bar not to far from us leo said mikey walked into a bar karai said yeah I'm sending you my location she sends them her location and head there and leo said that bar karai said yes raph said why would he go in there pretty sure he's under age to drink Venus said wait I just looked up this bar and it's abandoned look she shows them and said it was abandoned months ago Donnie said must be his hideout then suddenly a van pulls up and leo said purple dragons Venus said what would they want splinter said they want the bar for themselves leo said we gotta get in there they get inside and see no sign of izuku/Michaelangelo anywhere until he appears behind the purple dragons and said bars closed and attacks taking them on then someone appears at the doorway and izuku/Michaelangelo said who are you a recruit haha the leader must really hate you to send you the man said not a recruit I am the leader he then strikes a stance and said my names hun izuku/Michaelangelo said that's the dumbest name I heard ever they fight which is one sided and izuku/Michaelangelo loses and leo Donnie raph splinter Venus karai and shinigomi stand infront of him to protect him and hun said hiding behind backup izuku/Michaelangelo gets back up to his feet and said I should ask you that karai said shini get mikey out of here she grabs him and izuku/Michaelangelo said no I can still fight shinigomi said save that for next time big boy the turtles + splinter and karai fight hun to give shinigomi time to get izuku/Michaelangelo to the shell raiser they retreat when shinigomi informs them and Donnie patches him up and said you okay little brother izuku/Michaelangelo said stop calling me that splinter said Michaelangelo your family stands before you we never died we searched for you for years inko never kidnapped you she found you in that alley and when she heard me coming she assumed I was there to hurt you splinter went on and explained everything and izuku/Michaelangelo said I believed my true family was dead only to find out they were infront of my face the entire time I'm sorry guys leo said don't sweat it mikey and besides I'm kinda surprised you took us on with little to no training he looks at leo and said I trained my self in ninjutsu leo how do ya think I managed to take you on raph said that explains it and did you actually buy your gear from a martial arts store izuku/Michaelangelo said yeah karai said and the shop keeper didn't think about that a giant turtle purchased that stuff izuku/Michaelangelo said well there are these things called quirks so i guess he thought I was a mutation quirk user leo sais what are quirks Donnie said apparently their like these superpowers that some people are able to get when they got back to New York as the days progressed izuku/Michaelangelo and shinigomi have gotten close and she has shown and made some flirty remarks towards him which didn't take long for the others to notice but izuku m/Michaelangelo continued his work as the last ronin ship shinigomi (2012 shinigomi by the way.)

    • @Ultramarine61
      @Ultramarine61 Рік тому +2

      I love it i can't wait for part 2

    • @muhammadfauzan1432
      @muhammadfauzan1432 Рік тому +2

      ​@@mhastoryteller694when dino charge deku

  • @dracodragneel1237
    @dracodragneel1237 Рік тому +3

    Please episode 2

  • @Kthah00dcracked
    @Kthah00dcracked 9 місяців тому +2

    Part 2 forget the ships I need more of this!!

  • @nachosp7882
    @nachosp7882 Рік тому +2

    22:50 i love that you use sound desings

  • @T.F.T.A.T
    @T.F.T.A.T Рік тому +2

    1:10 him, I've actually had a couple of conversations with him aswell as putting in a few suggestions for him.

  • @loganbloom6191
    @loganbloom6191 Рік тому +4

    its good to know that a suggestion I gave to the youtuber you watched was used by other as i intended because it feels good.

  • @justincox897
    @justincox897 Рік тому +5

    I LOVE PREDAKING this is so cool 🤩

  • @fangtheowl7834
    @fangtheowl7834 Рік тому +3

    BRUH these hero’s is some dumb fools… if the villians who have A BEING THAT CAN LITERALLY BEAT ALL MIGHT!! Then you need to sound the alarm’s and call for back up CAUSE WITH IZUKU THE PREDAKING OUT THERE YOY HERO FOOLS ARE GONNA DIE HELL EVEN OTHER VILLIANS WILL BE BEATEN UP!! He’s gonna use them as his playthings probably even fake being defeated ONLY TO GET RIGHT BACK UP AND PLAY SOME MORE!!!
    If I was there IF I was there I’d just take a quick picture and a recording of the fight AND JUST RUN FOR THE NEAREST AIRPORT AND HEAD TO I-ISLAND AND WARN THEM WHATS TO COME AND GET THE DEFENCES UP TO 100000% POWER TO SAVE SOME ASSES!! but all in all this is gonna be a fun series

  • @Naruto_kurosaki
    @Naruto_kurosaki Рік тому +1

    Fantastico make part 2 i love this

  • @emo2828
    @emo2828 Рік тому +4

    Finnaly, ive been looking for a shipless deku au

  • @zhongli5689
    @zhongli5689 Рік тому +2

    Smart move with the disclaimer

  • @wolfie2079
    @wolfie2079 Рік тому +4

    I wanna see part 2 so bad now

  • @TovinChappell
    @TovinChappell Рік тому +2

    Man for some reason I thought I hate this and the feeling watch the video for nothing it was AMAZING video brooooo.❤ You did win of the day plus love covenant Izuku story🎉.

  • @nachosp7882
    @nachosp7882 Рік тому +1

    5:30 great reference to marvel3

  • @The_Watchful_Scribe
    @The_Watchful_Scribe Рік тому +3

    “Clapping” well done well done, I must say I like how you twisted it into your own idea. A++ you deserve that much

    • @mhastoryteller694
      @mhastoryteller694  Рік тому +1

      Thanks man, just having you watch it is making me happy since it’s based on how Inko created Izuku in yours

    • @The_Watchful_Scribe
      @The_Watchful_Scribe Рік тому +2

      @@mhastoryteller694 Your welcome and I was not prepared for a shoutout thanks I’ll probably have another series were I can return the favor

    • @mhastoryteller694
      @mhastoryteller694  Рік тому +1

      @@The_Watchful_Scribe 😅 you don’t have to but feel free if it makes you happy

    • @The_Watchful_Scribe
      @The_Watchful_Scribe Рік тому +1

      @@mhastoryteller694 Hey I wasn’t expecting one so I feel like I need to return the favor

  • @Camander930
    @Camander930 10 місяців тому +2

    When part 2?

  • @Scoutdoingadance
    @Scoutdoingadance Рік тому +1

    OOOHOHOH, NOW THIS IS A STORY!

  • @mc-maitrixgaming4330
    @mc-maitrixgaming4330 Рік тому +3

    Will there be a part 2
    I’m lovin the story

  • @antishadowbonnie_wolf886
    @antishadowbonnie_wolf886 Рік тому +3

    Part 2 pls

  • @Arzhaldoesramble
    @Arzhaldoesramble Рік тому +3

    Fantastic story dude! I don’t really leave comments on videos, but Holy crap this was amazing! Keep up the good work and I can’t wait for the next one! ❤

  • @captainvanghn
    @captainvanghn Рік тому +1

    I know you're good but I wasn't expecting this to be that good

  • @jasonharper2322
    @jasonharper2322 Рік тому +1

    Damn all might sorry to say this but my boi just dog walked ya😂😂😂

  • @primalryquaza
    @primalryquaza Рік тому +2

    Holy. Fucking. Shit. I love how you do your stories, but i was NOT prepared for this... I for once don't want to wait for the next part, and I'm patient when it comes to stories, Novels, What-Ifs, or Fanfics. Great fucking job 👏 👏👏👏

  • @dantegarcia1312
    @dantegarcia1312 2 місяці тому +1

    Please make part 2

  • @joashmaynardpedrosa2913
    @joashmaynardpedrosa2913 Рік тому +3

    ahahah absolutely BEAUTIFUL!!!!! I LOVE PREDAKING

  • @jethrohenderson4968
    @jethrohenderson4968 Рік тому +1

    Release the BABY!!!

  • @kobyhanson883
    @kobyhanson883 Рік тому +3

    Oooooooooo I’m excited for this one please make episode 2 as quickly as possibly🤩I mean you don’t have to I’m just excited😅also this story is Shipless so no couple wow very interesting ok😌

  • @TimeKillerGuy
    @TimeKillerGuy Рік тому +1

    I do have a idea if you kill off endeavor or all might early on, you could turn one of them into a special nomu making them look like the boss know as type-0011 or more common code name “ death “ from house of the dead 3

  • @ginkobokussuprenicus9726
    @ginkobokussuprenicus9726 Рік тому +2

    I literally watched his predaking series yesterday bro ! This gon be good if its inspired by his one.

  • @fpsretribution920
    @fpsretribution920 Рік тому +1

    Pleas continue this I have been looking for a good predaking deku for so long

    • @mhastoryteller694
      @mhastoryteller694  Рік тому

      I recommend watching the Predaking Deku series I was inspired by, his channel is linked in the description

  • @pedropascoal1128
    @pedropascoal1128 Рік тому +1

    Excellent story, look forward for next part

  • @toycarsushiwriter3573
    @toycarsushiwriter3573 Рік тому +1

    Amazing Video.

  • @Antonio-dv8gw
    @Antonio-dv8gw Рік тому +1

    Inko " Oh no the Nomu failed how to make a comeback I know" then pulls up to the USJ with a f**king mecha dragon

    • @mhastoryteller694
      @mhastoryteller694  Рік тому +1

      Inko literally saw the USJ Nomu fail and was like “Oh no…anyway.”

  • @peterkulich7423
    @peterkulich7423 Рік тому +1

    nice work

  • @Reverse_slenderman
    @Reverse_slenderman Рік тому +2

    It’s good 🤩

  • @deltron2
    @deltron2 Рік тому +5

    Not bad, still wanna see your other transformers ideas continue but i can see this being a good story

  • @AnthonyBole-fw1sc
    @AnthonyBole-fw1sc Рік тому +1

    good jobe keep up more i cant wait more next ^^ i really love it !!!!

  • @HunterWhoLaughs
    @HunterWhoLaughs Рік тому +1

    Awesome down below are suggestions you could use if you want.
    Shipless Izuku's AU
    Izuku forms a rivalry with either mirio or ryuko.
    Izuku remains on lov's team because All For One,tomura and inko don't become Wrong Genre Savy after Izuku transform the first time.

  • @whowe7940
    @whowe7940 Рік тому +1

    Your vid was awesome and a cool looking story so far! Also I have a request. You don't have to do it at all but I hope you do cause I have not seen it anywhere. It is to make "Deku in Armored Core 6: Fires of Rubicon" or any variation of Armored core, be it in that universe or in the MHA universe would be awesome either way! I hope you can consider it.

  • @jellybeannicothomson7396
    @jellybeannicothomson7396 Рік тому +2

    It's so good. A cool idea of enclaves is skywarp deku but I think having a jet fire deku could be cool as well. So could you do one please?

  • @BCTextStories
    @BCTextStories Рік тому +2

    1:this is amazing
    2:if anyone says add a ship, imma throw hands
    3:i hope for more

  • @darkphantom2274
    @darkphantom2274 6 місяців тому +1

    When is part 2

  • @NefariousMasterMind11
    @NefariousMasterMind11 4 місяці тому +1

    Hands up
    If you think lamplighter (from the tv series) would be a better father to the todorokis then endevor
    If you know who lamplighter is good for you if you haven't look him up

  • @mariolasajkowska7080
    @mariolasajkowska7080 Рік тому +2

    I want ask do you still DOING SHOCKWAVE DEKU? IF YES I WAIT

    • @mhastoryteller694
      @mhastoryteller694  Рік тому +1

      If you mean Soundwave, then I definitely am

    • @mariolasajkowska7080
      @mariolasajkowska7080 Рік тому +1

      @@mhastoryteller694 ok i will wait and you make very good storys (master peace🙂🙂👍👍)

  • @joshruston678
    @joshruston678 Рік тому +1

    My add a wife predaking name Jane for the ship

  • @laleecookies1553
    @laleecookies1553 Рік тому +1

    Hm. 8:42

  • @phantom7069
    @phantom7069 Рік тому +3

    look bro am not hating or anything but how about you finish a story then start another

    • @mhastoryteller694
      @mhastoryteller694  Рік тому +1

      I apologise but I couldn’t stop myself from beginning this AU as Predaking is my second favourite Transformers Prime character, first obviously going to Megatron

    • @phantom7069
      @phantom7069 Рік тому +1

      @@mhastoryteller694 no no it’s okay but you have to finish one then start another that’s the best way to do it if you want

  • @jonielmercado4755
    @jonielmercado4755 Рік тому +1

    No ships!?!? I already don’t like it.

    • @AnimeLover-md1ev
      @AnimeLover-md1ev 9 місяців тому

      If you don't like it then why you watch it?? 🤨

  • @InvertedPerceptor
    @InvertedPerceptor Місяць тому +1

    Please episode 2