It's sad and scary, you know? When you die so suddenly or horribly that you don't even know that you died. It's a scary thought. It's like the movie "sixth sense" where there's a boy who can see dead people and the guy that was trying to help him through out the movie didn't even know that he was dead until the end. But poor apple bloom didn't even know, the poor thing.
I think that's really what the author intended. It was too predictable for that to be the end game for the author, so I think the buildup to the realization was really the big thing the author was going for. Take it from me, seeing I've written a few stories with twists, twists are not easy to write cleanly.
@@Sparrow9642 I have no issue with it. I think they did a good job with it. After all. It seamed to be about when apple bloom pieced it together. And you did good narrating it. The sound effects really added to the story well too. I can't think of the word I'm looking for since I'm half asleep.
I just wanted to say that I myself am a big fan of AppleBloom mostly because she's the Leader of the Cutie Mark Crusaders and I love 😘💖💝💞💓💗💋💘😍❤️🥰❣️❤️ Her because she is Beautiful, Gorgeous and Cute at the same time.
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Great reading. Top notch as always, Sparrow. Thank you so much for reading this story.
It's sad and scary, you know? When you die so suddenly or horribly that you don't even know that you died. It's a scary thought.
It's like the movie "sixth sense" where there's a boy who can see dead people and the guy that was trying to help him through out the movie didn't even know that he was dead until the end. But poor apple bloom didn't even know, the poor thing.
Never thought of it that way! It does resemble that movie a ton! Good catch!
@@Sparrow9642 thanks, you know how to pick a good story and read them so well by the way!
@@bethanyhaffey975 Appreciated 🙂
Poor Apple Bloom this is sad and heartbreaking.
I figured it out the moment Big Mac didn’t respond, and I let out the loudest gasp in I’ve ever done
Ditto
Like a pinkie pie gasp tbh
Winona looking at her is what made me realize the truth. Applejack didn’t say anything when applebloom was in her sight line.
Aw this is really sad
maaaan I havent seen this story in years! still a great lil gem
Wow deep dude
i really liked it, i didnt even realize who it was till the end. good job on this one, hope your day goes well
I could tell who it was just by reading the description
A few minutes in and I already know what happened. I just want to know when they will find out.
Ok... I was crying a bit
I think that's really what the author intended. It was too predictable for that to be the end game for the author, so I think the buildup to the realization was really the big thing the author was going for. Take it from me, seeing I've written a few stories with twists, twists are not easy to write cleanly.
@@Sparrow9642 I have no issue with it. I think they did a good job with it. After all. It seamed to be about when apple bloom pieced it together. And you did good narrating it. The sound effects really added to the story well too. I can't think of the word I'm looking for since I'm half asleep.
Never said you did 🙂 I'm glad you enjoyed it
@@Twinklethefox9022 JMJ here, you got it right. It was about when Apple Bloom realized it.
Yeeee!
I realized what was actually going on at 10:22 haven’t finished yet, actively listening as typing this. This is very well written.
Damn, that was a great, and tasteful, build up!
Fantastic job Sparrow amazing reading
I love when you narrate stories.
Really excited about this!
I think I know what this is about
Hope you are well Sparrow
Oh my f-ing gods, she's f-ing dead-
Quoting a meme if you couldn't tell
I just wanted to say that I myself am a big fan of AppleBloom mostly because she's the Leader of the Cutie Mark Crusaders and I love 😘💖💝💞💓💗💋💘😍❤️🥰❣️❤️ Her because she is Beautiful, Gorgeous and Cute at the same time.
Cant wait
It was amazing I really enjoyed this story and I haven't heard much like this nice job!
When i listened to this for the first few seconds i thought it was describing applebloom and halfway through i was proven right
Fantastic video sparrow 😄
The first 14 minutes into this and I realized she’s dead SMH
The moment i realized.....
Apple bloom is dead I called it I knew it
Noice
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