I liked it, aside from the audio desync of course. But, I do feel you missed a massive portion, unless I missed it. You didn't include any of the trading with the villagers, which sorta takes away the feel of this being a Desire montage. Or maybe you did and I wasn't paying enough attention. Either way, the group greatly appreciates your work, good job silver!
Subjective criticism: for a lot of damage/kills, I don't like seeing both perspectives. It's essentially the same thing twice, so it takes up extra time that could've been devoted elsewhere. For instance, you show Jake reducing Tommy to 3 hearts, then show Tommy's perspective. imo, you should've just had a bit from Jake and then switch to Tommy's POV for the rest of the damage or vice versa. Also in the cluster fight, I feel like showing all of those kind of interrupted the flow of the fight. Craft's POV in his death wasn't really adding anything, and for me detracted a bit from the action when you've already shown that he got shot. That said, I know some viewers prefer both parts, but I feel like that could've cut down your montage/ allotted time for other pieces. Edit 1: A couple of other things were a bit rushed/abrupt. Zenniker's death probably would've been best shown in the killer's POV(he's just thrown in there). Also the very final fight, may have been better to slow it down a tad since it was a clutch win. And that's probably one of the few times I would have both perspectives since they'd have much more to add content wise, and it's easier to fade out with a smooth end. Next time, try that over the "I won" *cut to the intro. This took away from it for me at least. Edit 2: This one's also a bit subjective. iirc, you have one guy get diamonds, and one guy get enchants, and little of the rest of the caving. Might've been a bit better to have a little bit of the montage showing how people geared up(not every gold/diamond/enchant, but maybe their final anvils/enchants). Otherwise I liked it , nicely done. Music choice was cool, you got all the good bits of action in there. Looking forward to more :D
Great job, loved it
cool
I liked it, aside from the audio desync of course. But, I do feel you missed a massive portion, unless I missed it. You didn't include any of the trading with the villagers, which sorta takes away the feel of this being a Desire montage. Or maybe you did and I wasn't paying enough attention. Either way, the group greatly appreciates your work, good job silver!
I thought no one traded with villagers since it wasnt shown here XD
nice job :)
if the audio wasn't desynced this would be a lot better, but still really good either way
the audio de=sync was a bit annoying but good job otherwise
Jakub, too much Bowspam at the End.......................
_What else was he supposed to do at half a heart? just die?_
Subjective criticism: for a lot of damage/kills, I don't like seeing both perspectives. It's essentially the same thing twice, so it takes up extra time that could've been devoted elsewhere. For instance, you show Jake reducing Tommy to 3 hearts, then show Tommy's perspective. imo, you should've just had a bit from Jake and then switch to Tommy's POV for the rest of the damage or vice versa. Also in the cluster fight, I feel like showing all of those kind of interrupted the flow of the fight. Craft's POV in his death wasn't really adding anything, and for me detracted a bit from the action when you've already shown that he got shot.
That said, I know some viewers prefer both parts, but I feel like that could've cut down your montage/ allotted time for other pieces.
Edit 1: A couple of other things were a bit rushed/abrupt. Zenniker's death probably would've been best shown in the killer's POV(he's just thrown in there). Also the very final fight, may have been better to slow it down a tad since it was a clutch win. And that's probably one of the few times I would have both perspectives since they'd have much more to add content wise, and it's easier to fade out with a smooth end. Next time, try that over the "I won" *cut to the intro. This took away from it for me at least.
Edit 2: This one's also a bit subjective. iirc, you have one guy get diamonds, and one guy get enchants, and little of the rest of the caving. Might've been a bit better to have a little bit of the montage showing how people geared up(not every gold/diamond/enchant, but maybe their final anvils/enchants).
Otherwise I liked it , nicely done. Music choice was cool, you got all the good bits of action in there. Looking forward to more :D
OMG
I aint reading this
Komuzen Thank you for the pointless response, please leave 5 more :D
nice one ratchet