If i were naruto and found out jeraja keept it a secret i wold snap ans become cold and no matter how thy begg for me if i were to be naruto to go back to the happy moments i would off refuse so badly that all i ma saying
And u think it's gonna be easy to edit and put the voice in actually its really hard. I'm just commenting on someone who is just gonna u sub just cause a part didn't come out
Thanks for putting the link in the description now I now where I can find the rest of the story
Part 2 plz end next after deat
Whoever made that needs to make a story of their own. It was amazing!!!
If i were naruto and found out jeraja keept it a secret i wold snap ans become cold and no matter how thy begg for me if i were to be naruto to go back to the happy moments i would off refuse so badly that all i ma saying
Larjjroe
Nexts part this is good.
Next part
🔥🔥🔥needs a second part if not I would stop posting
I'm either easy to tears or the scene where he finds out that Sasuke is dead is very well written.
so is tenten stronger than jiraiya too wtf?
I just got on this what is it good
How is it so far?
Good
Stronger then Jiraya my ass got one shot by tenten then had to use Kyubbi so shit.
I thought he would be stronger
Bro people that are hearing the village 😳
Can you please do what if beautiful fem naruto had power of Lucy harem❤❤❤❤❤
Yo awesome
I can't take this bullcrap canon shippuden naruto would've straight knocked her out with a neck chop
Part 2 please
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So does Naruto get sasukes eyes
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So he’s supposed to be stronger than Jiraiya but ten ten hurts him come on.
not only that but EVERY character seems to be bipolar as fuck... just changing how they act at the drop of a hat
I stop watching this because u made naruto and pinky sleep in the forest together
If this doesnt get a part 2 i am unsubbing
Me too
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Dude, on this we can agree.
Me to
Me also
WTH is wrong with tenten and why is she that strong it doesn’t make sense
Wow, ur gonna unsub if there's not a part two. Give this person a break from the job like these. it takes forever to make
You don't understand they just put a robot to read the fanfic.
And u think it's gonna be easy to edit and put the voice in actually its really hard. I'm just commenting on someone who is just gonna u sub just cause a part didn't come out
@@walterperkins7496it isn’t hard at all😂 they use AI all they do is give it the script and let it work itself
Worst fanfic
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Part 2
Next part please 🙏
part 2
Part 2 please
Part 2 plzzz