Brewing a Dunkel Weissbier - Short and Shoddy

I'm brewing a couple of beers for a Brew Competition in a few months. They need to be German. And they need to be Wheat.
Hello Dunkel Weissbier.
I also brewed this short and shoddy style. Have a crack yourself and tell me what you think.
You can find the recipe here:
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