Success in life can be achieved in multiple ways. It varies from person to person and mostly depends upon one’s perception of success and how far would one go to achieve it. While the majority of people believe that success purely depends upon hard work, others believe that success can be achieved depending on various social circumstances. This essay will strongly argue that success can be achieved by hard work rather than social circumstances. Majority of the successful people in the world have achieved success purely by working hard for it. Famous personalities including Steve Jobs, Priyanka Chopra, and Selena Gomez have achieved success mainly by working hard, as the social circumstances that they were born into did not favour them. Another example could be of Bill Gates, who was not born into favourable circumstances but worked his way up only through sheer hard work to achieve success. The phrase “There is no substitute for hard work” strongly supports this idea. The idea of hard work being the only key to success can be strongly supported by these real-life examples, and therefore, I believe that success can be achieved by hard work rather and does not depend on various social circumstances.
Hi Jay. Thank you for the lovely tutorials and tips. I scored 80 in the exam after using your material for less than a week. The tips were really really useful. Keep up the good work.
Success is a controversial word that raises many questions. While many people argue that success is achieved by hard work, others think it's mainly influenced by social circumstances. This essay will discuss why success is determined by social status that people were born into. The socio-economic situation that a person was born into is a major reason for being successful. People who were born with a high economy and good social support can easily have the opportunities for further accomplishments. For instance, rich families are likely to own big companies which are labeled by success. The circumstances around individuals can determine the extent of one’s success. Working hard does not necessarily guarantee success. Hard work is not always rewarding as many people think, in fact it can be the opposite. For example, people can work hard through their lives in a dead-end job that pays minimum wage, achieving nothing in life. There are various factors In order to be successful, but working hard is not always the case. In conclusion, Social and economic status is the major factor that affects people's success. In my opinion, many people are defined as successful only because they are lucky enough to be born rich.
Hi Jay! I just had my exam and achieved my desired score. Thank you soooooo much! I wish to donate, it's not that big, but, it's from the bottom of my ♥ hehehe
copy to spare the pain :D Intro: s1 Rewrite General Statement s2 Briefly mention side 1 and 2 s3 Give your overall opinio P1 1 Restate side 1 2 Give reason/s 3 Give example/s 4 Conclude P2 1 Restate 2 2 Give reason/s 3 Give example/s 4 Conclude Conclusion 1 Rewrite gen statement 2 Give your overall Opinion
What if you wouldnt able to finish writing your essay on time, and a notification popped up says that timed run out, will you still be scored for that?
Hi Jay It was a great experience for me. there are thousands of videos but what you did made me to understand what is PTE great Job and may god bless you bro
Instructions ask to discuss both points. You clearly discussed hard work and briefly mention social circumstances. Is this the correct way to approach an opinion essay with two points of view? I thought that the way to write this would be: one paragraph for the social environment and one (a little larger) for hard work.
Hi Jay. This time you did not use our E2 structure. Will that be fine? "This essay will discuss...." Secondly, I have a question. When we decide to choose one side A and support that view point and say This essay will discuss ..(Side A)....., can the other side B be used in Second Paragraph. Because we already wrote Side A in statement This essay will discuss (Side A)..
Television serves many functions. Watching TV makes us relax. We can learn knowledge and information from TV programs. Besides, TV can also be seen as a companion. To what extent do you agree with this? How can i pick side1 and side2 from this jay can you plz help me , i have seen lot of this kind of questions ??
Dear Jay, thank you for your guidance on PTE. I prepared only 2 days before exam viewing all your videos. I got a score of 66 overall with a 78 in writing. Sufficient for my 58 cut off.
May I ask if is it okay to use "I believe" even though the question did not ask if you agree or disagree? Also, you did not use your template "this essay will discuss.." I'm a bit perplexed on how you did your essay here in this video. thank you :)
The other situation is how much your family status will helps you to become popular.Although its true your social status count which influences whether or not you will be successful ,I believe that your determination is highly appreciated.
Thank you again, Jay! This is not the first time I got a good mark for my PTE because of your youtube videos! I will definitely recommend you to my other uni friends! You are the best. I will tell them to sign-up and practice through E2language! 🙏🏽👩🏽💻🥳🥳🥳
Been watching your videos. It helped me a lot. Took PTE the third time yesterday, and still not happy with the result. My scores are going up and down. First, I struggled with oral fluency. Did a lot of practise on that. When I finally got the desired score in speaking, my writing went down. I’m only short by 1 point. I’m thinking of asking a rescore. But, I heard it’s not worth the try.
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this is very helpful for me. i have get a lot of techniques and ideas
Doing my PTE tomorrow... Wish me luck :)
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Watched a couple of PTE videos, and did some online free tests :)
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Success in life can be achieved in multiple ways. It varies from person to person and mostly depends upon one’s perception of success and how far would one go to achieve it. While the majority of people believe that success purely depends upon hard work, others believe that success can be achieved depending on various social circumstances. This essay will strongly argue that success can be achieved by hard work rather than social circumstances.
Majority of the successful people in the world have achieved success purely by working hard for it. Famous personalities including Steve Jobs, Priyanka Chopra, and Selena Gomez have achieved success mainly by working hard, as the social circumstances that they were born into did not favour them. Another example could be of Bill Gates, who was not born into favourable circumstances but worked his way up only through sheer hard work to achieve success. The phrase “There is no substitute for hard work” strongly supports this idea.
The idea of hard work being the only key to success can be strongly supported by these real-life examples, and therefore, I believe that success can be achieved by hard work rather and does not depend on various social circumstances.
Can we repeat the words more than two times?
Hi Jay. Thank you for the lovely tutorials and tips. I scored 80 in the exam after using your material for less than a week. The tips were really really useful. Keep up the good work.
Success is a controversial word that raises many questions. While many people argue that success is achieved by hard work, others think it's mainly influenced by social circumstances. This essay will discuss why success is determined by social status that people were born into.
The socio-economic situation that a person was born into is a major reason for being successful. People who were born with a high economy and good social support can easily have the opportunities for further accomplishments. For instance, rich families are likely to own big companies which are labeled by success. The circumstances around individuals can determine the extent of one’s success.
Working hard does not necessarily guarantee success. Hard work is not always rewarding as many people think, in fact it can be the opposite. For example, people can work hard through their lives in a dead-end job that pays minimum wage, achieving nothing in life. There are various factors In order to be successful, but working hard is not always the case.
In conclusion, Social and economic status is the major factor that affects people's success. In my opinion, many people are defined as successful only because they are lucky enough to be born rich.
I have an exam on Saturday wish me a luck please, so stress and anxiety
Hi Jay! I just had my exam and achieved my desired score. Thank you soooooo much! I wish to donate, it's not that big, but, it's from the bottom of my ♥ hehehe
copy to spare the pain :D
Intro:
s1 Rewrite General Statement
s2 Briefly mention side 1 and 2
s3 Give your overall opinio
P1
1 Restate side 1
2 Give reason/s
3 Give example/s
4 Conclude
P2
1 Restate 2
2 Give reason/s
3 Give example/s
4 Conclude
Conclusion
1 Rewrite gen statement
2 Give your overall Opinion
Jay! Thanks a lot for your tips and tutorials. Got my PTE score today, and it was great. Overall: 76. Thanks a lot!
Jay,
You did not use your "template" for essay this time. This way it will be confusing for us .
Hi farheen
What if you wouldnt able to finish writing your essay on time, and a notification popped up says that timed run out, will you still be scored for that?
Hi Jay
It was a great experience for me.
there are thousands of videos but what you did made me to understand what is PTE
great Job and may god bless you bro
Very helpful, thanks Jay!
Thank you for your help I got 90-L S-90 W-81 R -84 after watching your videos
Instructions ask to discuss both points. You clearly discussed hard work and briefly mention social circumstances. Is this the correct way to approach an opinion essay with two points of view? I thought that the way to write this would be: one paragraph for the social environment and one (a little larger) for hard work.
Hi Jay. This time you did not use our E2 structure. Will that be fine? "This essay will discuss...."
Secondly, I have a question. When we decide to choose one side A and support that view point and say This essay will discuss ..(Side A)....., can the other side B be used in Second Paragraph. Because we already wrote Side A in statement This essay will discuss (Side A)..
Television serves many functions. Watching TV makes us relax. We can learn knowledge and information from TV programs. Besides, TV can also be seen as a companion. To what extent do you agree with this?
How can i pick side1 and side2 from this jay can you plz help me , i have seen lot of this kind of questions ??
Dear Jay, thank you for your guidance on PTE. I prepared only 2 days before exam viewing all your videos. I got a score of 66 overall with a 78 in writing. Sufficient for my 58 cut off.
Success of anyone depends upon two circumstances.The first is your way of using the life ,or how is your background socially sounds.
It's difficult
Very Difficult for me to think and write an essay in few minutes
May I ask if is it okay to use "I believe" even though the question did not ask if you agree or disagree? Also, you did not use your template "this essay will discuss.." I'm a bit perplexed on how you did your essay here in this video. thank you :)
Hi Jay, what will happen if I run out of time and couldn’t press next button. Will whatever I written down for the essay be marked? Thanks.
Can't we use the same words while writing essay..?? Even in different paragraphs..?
The other situation is how much your family status will helps you to become popular.Although its true your social status count which influences whether or not you will be successful ,I believe that your determination is highly appreciated.
Thank you again, Jay! This is not the first time I got a good mark for my PTE because of your youtube videos! I will definitely recommend you to my other uni friends! You are the best. I will tell them to sign-up and practice through E2language! 🙏🏽👩🏽💻🥳🥳🥳
Hi, Jay. I would like a personal session on how to teach PTE to students as a faculty?.
How about perseverance or diligence when synonyms of hard work are required?
to get 79 plus do we have to VERY GOOD VOC in summary?
Nice teaching I really enjoy myself today learning from you thank you jay
Jay thanks for all your helpful videos hope all the best for you
Do we have to observe paragraphing during real PTE?
Great stuff. Thank you very much for the effort you put into it.
I'd to learn more about how to write fastly please😭
Can I use template for PTE essay
Dear sir,
Can I use writing essay template pte exam.
Been watching your videos. It helped me a lot. Took PTE the third time yesterday, and still not happy with the result. My scores are going up and down. First, I struggled with oral fluency. Did a lot of practise on that. When I finally got the desired score in speaking, my writing went down. I’m only short by 1 point. I’m thinking of asking a rescore. But, I heard it’s not worth the try.
When we do our PTE are we allowed to use our mobile
nope
Thank you Jay.
Hlo
Hlo sir
“Money can not but success”
Is better?