Is this a creepy version of adam and eve? Im not religious but I think I know the story... At 15 min I thought that was kinda what it was. Since Eve was made from his rib and god is the man talking through the vent.
Lethano hahah, I listened to too many creepypastas so I knew it when he woke up with a girl beside him. This style of writing is amazing, I listened to one about two plumbers that kill fungi where if left alone to grow enough, they become humanoid and talk, and if eaten at a early stage give you the power to be amazing at whatever you're doing, the older brother(former addict of the mushrooms) warns the little brother to not consume them but the little brother doesn't listen, hides a couple in his pocket. They sign up to a race and the big brother gets shot down by a blue flying turtle shell(this is the point where you realise it's Mario and Luigi, the humanoid mushrooms are toad's and they are on Mario kart)
And then punishes us for not understanding what he wanted from us all because he refused to help us in the way we actually needed. "Just tell us what is going on!!" Nope, nope, I gotta scare the crap out of you, make you feel like a prisoner, a slave, in your own existence. I portrayed myself as some kind of psychotic monster with who knows what intentions and expected you to blindly believe me that everything is fine while I refused to tell you where you were, who you were, how you got here, why you were here, why you couldn't remember, what was happening, why it was happening, when it would be over, all while basically keeping you held hostage in my basement. Fun fact, I'm gonna have to blame you and say that it's your fault that everything in my experiment went wrong because I made you think I was planing to slaughter you, brutalize that pretty young girl I made for you, maybe even eat the flesh of both of you, you don't know! Because I refused to tell you anything! I left you to the free will and wild imagination that I gave you and just let all of that run wild without truly reassuring you in any way. Yeah. I scared the shit out of you and refused to tell you anything, but it's your fault that my experiment failed. My experiment failed BECAUSE I did that to you, but it's YOUR fault... for being what I made you to be. And that's why I'm not religious.
Didn't say I wasn't spiritual... just not religious. I don't trust anyone or anything that expects those around it to blindly do as their told without question. During World War 2 and the holocaust there was a lot of blind trust and very little question asking going around and over 6 million people were tortured and murdered because of it. It's going on right now in the middle east on all sides. American soldiers are bombing buildings without thinking twice or asking questions... especially when they see obvious civilians just fleeing for their lives. The ISIS people are slaughtering everyone they can get their hands on that question anything... including the elderly and children! It's terrifying that almost none of them have even asked "Why are we actually doing this anymore?!"
I have a problem with this, though. If they had good intentions, why not tell them everything from the start, instead of being all mysterious and shady? A simple reply of, "Yo, it's shitty out there, you be livin' the good life here. Look, we even brought you a girl, and gave you a room with a view of the sky, yo!" But no, it was all so mysterious, so vague, and no answers, of course it's gonna be a prison.
Maybe that's the point. They already got a bad impression of humanity from the get go, with Adam being a bitch and all that, and escaping the sanctuary was the straw that broke the camels back. And their abandonment of humanity is simply time out in their eyes but to life on earth it's a cruelty among cruelties.
If that information was given from the start then it negates the idea of free will. They would live in comfort for fear of anything else. That isn't freedom.
@@nickweems3793 Being informed or obtaining knowledge for your safety does not violate free will when you aren't even told anything in the first place. Biblically, God told both everything they needed to know. The story tried to make sense, but left out so much of what made the source make sense, it didn't make sense. This is more alien planting humans, really dumb aliens.
It’s a prison because he can’t escape. That’s all it ever could be. If you were being kept there would you really believe your captures that they were actually treating you so well? That the world outside of this place sucks and you should just be grateful to be here? Yeah don’t think so.
@@Nik.No.K I think that was likely the fault of the author; terrible correlation. Terrible if in fact they were trying to equivalent it to the Garden of Eden, but a poor construct if the reader was supposed to see it as anything other than a prison. Information withheld, person continually in distress, psychological games. The outside area might as well have been a prison yard with free vending machine.
What the fuck. I was listening to "When God Blinks" and this autoplayed next. I thought this was part of the story. I swear the stories go perfectly together.
"Hey, you! You're finally awake. You were trying to cross the border, right? walked straight into that imperial ambush, same as us; and that theif over there."
Soooo... ALIENS! Still doesn't account for all the written text, paintings and ruins found that are over 10k years old when we were only supposed to be around for 6k years, but whateves. lol
And when he said he woke up with scars on his ribcage right before she appeared was almost a dead giveaway. God took a piece of adams ribcage to make eve :P
lol they had a paradise man if i was stuck in a small room and one day i was given a computer with all my game instead of the girl and food daily, done i literally would never complain and relax forever
+game fighter If you wanted to nit-pick, you could ask how Adam knows what a hospital or a prison is. If he was literally 'born yesterday' he'd have no point of comparison. But as a pasta, it's very enjoyable. Both writer and narrator are awesome! 🏆
+Fireball65091 I find it rude that you people judge athiesm,you're making pure assumptions they're a difference between an atheist and an uptight douchbag. If you were a physicist, you would believe in the big bang,or any other theory that has science to back it up,I respect your views on our existence but you being irrational to call out science and athiesm as a hole.
Anyone else notice the biblical references? Adam and Eve, tree of knowledge, etc. EDIT: I just finished the video, didn't know they'd be so upfront with the allusions.
Spirit of slumber to fall upon Adam, God created Eve out of the pierce in his rib. Jesus would die on the cross and have his side pierced (Roman soldier/spear of destiny legend) and the church created from his death. See the parallel there...
if you think you would be safe in the comment section then yes you would be safe the only thing you will encounter in the comment section are there things called spoilers they are really deadly and when you come across one...run....run as fast as you can
That would be an awesome creepy pasta! Someone remembers all of their past minds and finds out something strange. Something none of us could ever know...
What if this is what happens when we die. When we die lie in an empty white room with our memories erased. And if we take into account that this is what happens when we die then it can explain why the room is white and why the saying goes that we see a bright light when we die. It's us coming into this room. This is heaven. Now stick with me when we die we are to be united with God and essentially being in this white room is just that. We are with god at all times as he sees over us, feeds us, heals us we are beside him. But it also marks the beginning of something new. And by new I mean the cycle will repeat itself (story of Adam and Eve). We will be tested to see if we have changed from our past life and see if we can accept and stay with God. Only for the cycle to repeat itself. Each one of us will be taken down this road.
Itsforbiddensoul so people who naturally want freedom just keep going back and fourth sounds stupid to me. The big difference between the actual story and this one is that they where not happy being trapped so they escaped to find aliens. In the actual story they are happy and they know what's going on they just decide to do the one thing they where told not to do and they got punished.
If I have to live forever it would be forever boring if I die and never come back like everything is lost then that is scary and sad. Seems like whatever we do we're fucked. If we wake up when we die then return (reincarnated) maby not as human and even on a whole other planet or galaxy heck a whole other universe with different laws and new ways to live or maby not even live but just exist for a while as something then that makes more sense to me. Feels like life is just a game to pass the eternal existence so you have something to do
Pause at 3:13 - I'm going to predict this is about the white-room tourture meathod, and if it is, that'd be really cool, I haven't heard any creepypastas about white-room torture yet.
It might not actually be called that, but it's where they put you in a white room and they feed you white rice on a white plate and white milk in a white cup, and literally everything is white. They say it drives you insane, makes you hallucinate but not in a fun way. And people who have expirienced it say they'd rather be physically tourtured than have to go through white room tourture.
Alright I'm only at the beginning but the narrating so far is even more incredible than usual. The nonchalant way of speaking coming from doubt of the situation mixed with little hints of panic. Really making me feel this story. Great job.
creeps: I wake up me: ALARM CLOCK SCREAMIN' ITS SPRING AND HAILIES OUTSIDE SWINGING I WALK RIGHT UP TO KIM AND KISS HER TELL HER I MISS HER HAILIE JUST SMILES AND WINKS AT HER LITTLE SISTER ALMOST AS IF THERE SAYIN...
'Is this like, a story of Adam and Eve' I think when the girl shows up. 'Gosh, this was a story on Adam and Eve. How depressing was that. Nope. Not showing this to my religious family'😂😂
Nah this isn't better than the Bible because the Bible is about 1,000,000x deeper. I'm talking about hidden things 99.99% of people miss within the first few sentences of the book. No human can fully comprehend it
I know this is a story about adam and eve but this reminds me of myself. I had strict parents so life was a torture back then, 2 hours tv was allowed. I had a girlfriend at age 14, we were in the same situation. At around 15 we wanted to get out, live together only. We made love and basically spent most of the day trying to figure out how to live alone. When we were finally 18, we left home and bought a new place with the money we had. Both of us understood how hard life is after a week. No one who gives food, no one who washes our clothes, no one who cares about us, nothing. At first we didn't want to go back so we wanted to stay for a few months, then go back. My mom had a car accident. I kept crying for weeks. My dad jumped off a bridge, probably he couldnt take the pain. Her parents left the country, so basically we were by ourself, alone, just like we wanted. the next years were torture but then I needed to go to the army. She didn't want me to go but I had no other option. She was staying at her friends house while I was gone, after my service we went to our usual lives, I got a job. Now I am where I am. I don't know why I am typing this but I just had a flashback. Nice story!
him: describes the other people and the wall me:ATTACK ON TITANS comments: it's Adam and eve me:waiting for the video to say it's Adam and eve video:hasn't said it yet me:stops typing
interesting twist on Adam and eve. However, why this "God" refused to tell them anything or let them know anything until after their instinct for freedom succeeded, then left is beyond me.
Yah in the real story he told them the consiquences before they chose to disobey. In this I don't think the Adam and eve deserved to be exiled this time, they weren't told anything at all. Masterful story I loved it
It's because God ultimately will give freewill to them if they seek it, however they will not be let back in to paradise and must face the consequences and perils of life on Earth. It's like children with their parent, you eventually have to let them go, you can't protect them forever.
@@fhuuraliulfr5756 well, God is going to rebuild this world, in the end the spiritual church/bride of Christ will experience paradise and be in the presence of The Lord. Dead saints have the pleasure of already being with Jesus, id call that paradise in itself 😊
Free of what? Free to do what? They had everything they could ask for and wanted for nothing, now they have nothing and their support and help is gone. What is there to rejoice about?
"I hope that what I just told her is true." I'm no creationist but this line scared the piss out of me for some reason. Great storytelling and getting the listener wrapped up deep in the tale. I was able to fully put myself in their shoes and when I heard God/the aliens may not actually love us like we think and hope, coupled by if there is a creator we've most likely been abandoned by what we see today, my heart dropped hard.
this makes me so sad every time I listen to it. I'm a Christian and although this is obviously an inaccurate story I can get behind the emotions and thoughts. I wonder if this is how the real adam and eve thought
So why is Adam introduced as some lucid intelligent man and Eve as some barely coherent unintelligent teenager? These pasta authors really need to keep up with these overused tropes. "Born Sexy Yesterday" is so fucking tired.
ö I think it's written this way to show how much Adam needs Eve's soft, innocence. She isn't born an idiot, just young and soft. She learns everything with him and they help each other stay strong. After all, she was born yesterday, literally.
-WAKE ME UP INSIDE-
CANT WAKE UP
SAVE ME
Hello darkness my friend
Nice joke XD
Lel
Is this a creepy version of adam and eve? Im not religious but I think I know the story... At 15 min I thought that was kinda what it was. Since Eve was made from his rib and god is the man talking through the vent.
Ok nvm I know at the end what it is
Yes, It is about Adam and Eve.
It's pretty obvious
+Daisy Grace yeah yeah I said nvm I got it
+LpsphysixX i wrote the comment half way in . I know, stupid idea
"It's just me and Eve now."
OOOOOOOHHHHH-
Lethano hahah, I listened to too many creepypastas so I knew it when he woke up with a girl beside him. This style of writing is amazing, I listened to one about two plumbers that kill fungi where if left alone to grow enough, they become humanoid and talk, and if eaten at a early stage give you the power to be amazing at whatever you're doing, the older brother(former addict of the mushrooms) warns the little brother to not consume them but the little brother doesn't listen, hides a couple in his pocket. They sign up to a race and the big brother gets shot down by a blue flying turtle shell(this is the point where you realise it's Mario and Luigi, the humanoid mushrooms are toad's and they are on Mario kart)
lol exactly how i reacted
I reacted the same way lol
Lethano literally me like noooooo
Really? Cmon guys I realized it as soon as he woke up in the garden. Way too many plots points for it to take that long to figure out.
Am i the only one who uses these stories as "adult bedtime stories"?
Same
Me 2
Diddo.
+Perfect Rhyme me too 😂
i sleep to them tol yalls not alone adult bed story's
I just realized this was Adam and eve the scar on his ribs is the bone god took from Adams rib cage to create Eve
Hell yes!
Wow, you just, wow. I would've never guessed.
+philip bayly 😒🙈🙉🙊
Lol, sorry that seemed sarcastic now that I read it. Really though I was watching the video and read your comment and was honestly surprised.
+philip bayly its OK I'm gonna go subscribe to your channel now
Did they take fall damage?
⛷️
OOF
Fall-damage was patched in in Version 1.0.00.002, not 1.0.00.001
Just BEN the DM forgot to have them do a check against Dex and Str
oof
as soon as the girl entered the story, I was like, "They're gonna have sex."
Vanellope'sCorner These male creepy pasta authors never pass up a chance to add a generic plot device girl to fuck their self-inserts.
as soon as he said "there was a girl in the nude. she was beautiful" i got a half-boner lmao.
Same..
Vanellope'sCorner IKR HAHAHA
the cave dweller I think most of us did
I can only listen while playing games anybody relate??
Yes
I get board without doing enything
Skyrim
I do!
+Stephen Mckeighen
Fallout 4
Narrator: She looks seventeen, we’ve made love multiple times
Chris Hansen: Take a seat over there
He could have been 15 who knows
17 is not prepubescent so it’s no chris hansen...😑
Its a joke guys
Chris Hansen isn't real until a few billion years into the future
😂😂😂
10:57 "did they cut me open just to take out my crap? why would they do that"
im dying i just spilled my drink
steal your turds i will, sell them for ketamine i will. deliver the ketamine to allah i must, run over a family of five with my honda civic i must.
Yeah same XD
@@user-kq1zh4io7o I had a 1984 honda civic!! It was one of the best cars ever!!
I knew it. Funny thing is... the whole thing could have been avoided if 'the voice in the vent' had just answered at least one of their questions.
And then punishes us for not understanding what he wanted from us all because he refused to help us in the way we actually needed.
"Just tell us what is going on!!"
Nope, nope, I gotta scare the crap out of you, make you feel like a prisoner, a slave, in your own existence. I portrayed myself as some kind of psychotic monster with who knows what intentions and expected you to blindly believe me that everything is fine while I refused to tell you where you were, who you were, how you got here, why you were here, why you couldn't remember, what was happening, why it was happening, when it would be over, all while basically keeping you held hostage in my basement. Fun fact, I'm gonna have to blame you and say that it's your fault that everything in my experiment went wrong because I made you think I was planing to slaughter you, brutalize that pretty young girl I made for you, maybe even eat the flesh of both of you, you don't know! Because I refused to tell you anything! I left you to the free will and wild imagination that I gave you and just let all of that run wild without truly reassuring you in any way. Yeah. I scared the shit out of you and refused to tell you anything, but it's your fault that my experiment failed. My experiment failed BECAUSE I did that to you, but it's YOUR fault... for being what I made you to be.
And that's why I'm not religious.
+Jessy Dupre Fuck religion.
WOW , Good point....I`m spiritual but gotta say...you gave me food for thought. Thank You
Didn't say I wasn't spiritual... just not religious.
I don't trust anyone or anything that expects those around it to blindly do as their told without question. During World War 2 and the holocaust there was a lot of blind trust and very little question asking going around and over 6 million people were tortured and murdered because of it. It's going on right now in the middle east on all sides. American soldiers are bombing buildings without thinking twice or asking questions... especially when they see obvious civilians just fleeing for their lives. The ISIS people are slaughtering everyone they can get their hands on that question anything... including the elderly and children! It's terrifying that almost none of them have even asked "Why are we actually doing this anymore?!"
Jessy Dupre WOW, Your a vary wise person, inspiring response :)
Im not saying it was aliens.. But...
Aliens.
I wake up and roll over then go back to sleep.
XDDDDDDDDDDDD
Relatable
This story is Nightmare Fuel! Very Spoopy...
+Am i original hi jen
+Zachary Dockstader sp00py
I knew it I knew it was a twist on Adam and eve
From 12:30 i knew it too
Same here, as soon as he mention a scar on the ribcage. Great creepy pasta.
+GODsaveTHEcat why does that have to do with Adam and Eve I'm Christian I just don't know a lot
+Mr.bliTzZ 3o3 in the book, God removes one of Adam's ribs and uses it to construct Eve.
+LeHuit おちんちん (Caelum) were the pepole aliens or God
wow this is Adam ad eve in horror form XD
coolmanabdul if ya think about it, the whole first tenement of the Bible should be a thriller XD
HLXD oh my this is a old comment
0
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Duh
this needs to be turned in to a movie.
YESSSSSSS, I`D PAY TO WATCH IT
This is pretty much Adam and Eve except high tech
i think it was meant to be adam and eve but not god, aliens
ikr
ancient aliens.
Creepy pasta logic: Can't remember name but can remember the English language.
different areas of the brain
just what i was thinking. if you dont know anything your mute or hes a robot lol XD
+Angie Chang are you agreeing with me or him lmfao
+Amy Freudigman both I guess
+Angie Chang and he has intense knowledge of the Bible or is in the bible
I have a problem with this, though. If they had good intentions, why not tell them everything from the start, instead of being all mysterious and shady? A simple reply of, "Yo, it's shitty out there, you be livin' the good life here. Look, we even brought you a girl, and gave you a room with a view of the sky, yo!"
But no, it was all so mysterious, so vague, and no answers, of course it's gonna be a prison.
Maybe that's the point. They already got a bad impression of humanity from the get go, with Adam being a bitch and all that, and escaping the sanctuary was the straw that broke the camels back. And their abandonment of humanity is simply time out in their eyes but to life on earth it's a cruelty among cruelties.
If that information was given from the start then it negates the idea of free will. They would live in comfort for fear of anything else. That isn't freedom.
@@nickweems3793 Being informed or obtaining knowledge for your safety does not violate free will when you aren't even told anything in the first place. Biblically, God told both everything they needed to know. The story tried to make sense, but left out so much of what made the source make sense, it didn't make sense. This is more alien planting humans, really dumb aliens.
It’s a prison because he can’t escape. That’s all it ever could be. If you were being kept there would you really believe your captures that they were actually treating you so well? That the world outside of this place sucks and you should just be grateful to be here?
Yeah don’t think so.
@@Nik.No.K I think that was likely the fault of the author; terrible correlation. Terrible if in fact they were trying to equivalent it to the Garden of Eden, but a poor construct if the reader was supposed to see it as anything other than a prison. Information withheld, person continually in distress, psychological games. The outside area might as well have been a prison yard with free vending machine.
This is Adam and Eve the man In the vent is God and when they jumped over they sinned against him and had to work for themselves
Deep AF lad
u high ?
+Vojta Hamala hell ya
+Detective Fat Weedington Rex?
+LeHuit おちんちん (Caelum) Whitfield is rex
Who thought of the KFC guy when he said something about the guy on the vent
Same
I did, an image flashed through my mind, idk why lmfao.
Fhuura Liulfr sane lmao
Are we just animals locked in a cage? Do we even exist?
Damn that's deep bro...
No, We don’t exist
Give man a wall and he will waste his life trying to get to the other side. Build man into a wall and his spirit will haunt it for eternity.
D e e p b r o
When I was a kid, like 4/5, I remember asking if we were someone else's T.V show....
Still a better love story than twilight
Everything is a better love story than twilight.
+Alex the Mookie that is so true!!! XD
+Alex the Mookie hahaha it's so true...
+Alex the Mookie my little pony?
i could jack off to a rock and it would be a better love story than twighlight
wake me up
wake me up inside
can't wake up
wake me up inside
(save me)
no thx
I was think of that XD
+Mrgriffinpanda86 lol
I'm waking up I feel it in my bones! Wake me up! Before you go go!
+Axcel nice pfp
Behind the wall is ............................ another wall 😂😂😂😂
I haven't finished this yet but is it like an Adam and Eve thing but in a more modern setting or...?
Welp.
+That One Guy The 69th Same exact thoughts.
I was just going to say the same thing
EXACTLY
That why its so awesome
What the fuck. I was listening to "When God Blinks" and this autoplayed next. I thought this was part of the story. I swear the stories go perfectly together.
"Hey, you! You're finally awake. You were trying to cross the border, right? walked straight into that imperial ambush, same as us; and that theif over there."
Not gonna lie I thought they were zombies or dogs
I thought they were dogs too sort of!
what? XD
wtf
There was one creepypasta that took on the perspective of a dog, but you didn't find out until the end. I thought it would be like that.
McGumba yeah, that's what I thought too. I was waiting for some sort of twist, but it didn't happen
"the voice" : god
in the building the 2 dozen of people where angels
man & women : adam & eve
eve kids : cane & abel 😬
duh
Soooo... ALIENS! Still doesn't account for all the written text, paintings and ruins found that are over 10k years old when we were only supposed to be around for 6k years, but whateves. lol
+dieCG what does that have to do with wat i said ? 😂😂
+Andrew Stagliano i put that for whoever didnt know 😒 your slick comment is highly unnecessary
+Phantom hunter ??
The start of humanity
Adam and eve
The enclosure was the garden of Eden
They define there creators and the gods left
There names are Adam and eve
Hey there .... How are memes killing you btw ??
Interesting way of telling the biblical Adam and Eve story.
That was my first thought too.
Thanks for spoiling it lil bitch
+Purple Bunz thanks for reading the comments lil bitch.
Guitar Cinema Nope.
+Kameron Dula ok I'll respect your opinion
this creepyPasta was well made, I knew what it was about as soon as she appeared :P
bs
+Tanner Richardson I recognised it as the Adam and Eve story when he woke up with the scars on his ribs.
+Tanner Richardson well... I wasn't 100% sure but when they jumped over the fence that pretty much solidified it
And when he said he woke up with scars on his ribcage right before she appeared was almost a dead giveaway. God took a piece of adams ribcage to make eve :P
Same
lol they had a paradise man if i was stuck in a small room and one day i was given a computer with all my game instead of the girl and food daily, done i literally would never complain and relax forever
I fucking knew it! It was an iteration of Adam and Eve!
I knew it as well........
good job, you found out something everyone else got too
+game fighter If you wanted to nit-pick, you could ask how Adam knows what a hospital or a prison is. If he was literally 'born yesterday' he'd have no point of comparison. But as a pasta, it's very enjoyable. Both writer and narrator are awesome! 🏆
+Mo K maybe its some people who are trying to reanact Adam and eve with prisoners that the captured
Same
does anyone else find his voice with the music and the picture on the screen peaceful?
If he finds out what he is, he technically would still not be free
Ok, so he doesn't know he name, where she came from, or what she's doing there but she knows that she's exactly 17? Ok.
she doesn't speak his language. He assumed she looked 17.
"It be a hell of a drop, but it would be worth it. Just to get to the bottom of this"
nice pun. "to get to the bottom of this"
Maybe the old man is Donald trump, and the story is about Mexicans invading America.
+The True Dmitry This bitch don't need no respect tf?
Maybe the old man is Your dad telling you to get a job
Omg 😂😂😂
The fuck does this story have to do with Fuhrer Wannabe Trump?
+dieCG It was a joke
I bet this shit's a twisted version of Adam and Eve
Omg you sooo smart!!!1!!1!eleven!!
Angel you forgot a one
It is
The only reason you knew is because you were hiding in the comments scared and you seen everyone else saying it.
I was thinking that 😂😂
34:00 Teens leaving for college be like...
Midwest Siren Productions lol
This made my day 😂
This is a slap in Christianity's face.
*whispers* I like it
Dang dude xDDD 😝😝✌🏼😂
+Wesley Cannon You believe a fairy tale over science?
Lol even science doesn't know wtf they talkin about
+Wesley Cannon u believe a guy died and came back to life and walked on water. u probably shouldnt questions others beliefs
+Fireball65091
I find it rude that you people judge athiesm,you're making pure assumptions they're a difference between an atheist and an uptight douchbag.
If you were a physicist, you would believe in the big bang,or any other theory that has science to back it up,I respect your views on our existence but you being irrational to call out science and athiesm as a hole.
The whole comments section is just a mix of "I knew it was Adam and Eve" and "WAKE ME UP INSIDDDEEEE"
James Lynn still is a year later.
*Starts To Feel Tired While Watching And Starts To Close Eyes* WAIT A SECOND HELL NO!!!
I wake up to see this fml
XD BRAVO
"She looked to be about 17"
Oof
I 100 percent didn't see that coming lol I feel dumb
yuukichan12 it's ok, neither did I, but I loved it in the end.
basically Adam and Eve?
Edit: just got to the end
And this, this is why aliens dont come back to visit us :(
E-vent-ually ahahahahahaha
God damn it.
OMFG XD
Eve-entually
This is a magnificent E VENT
Anyone else notice the biblical references? Adam and Eve, tree of knowledge, etc.
EDIT: I just finished the video, didn't know they'd be so upfront with the allusions.
that makes sense but what represents the apple
Yeah I started picking up on it, when they jumped over the fence and said that they felt different.
Anyone else drawing parallels between this and the story of Adam and Eve?
Before they revealed it I mean
Yes lol as soon as they spoke about the tree.
Spirit of slumber to fall upon Adam, God created Eve out of the pierce in his rib. Jesus would die on the cross and have his side pierced (Roman soldier/spear of destiny legend) and the church created from his death. See the parallel there...
I do
Glad im not alone there.
˙˙˙˙˙˙uʍop ǝpᴉsdn ǝɯ ǝʞɐʍ
How the fuck
How the fuck did you do that?😮
How the fuck?!?! PLEASE someone answer this!!
Figured it out... jerks.. lol
"" Yeah... life sucks mate.. X'D
(When they talk about the dispenser and stuff... I think of Adam and Eve as human hamsters... )
*Watches the whole video*
"It's just me and Eve now"
WAIT A GOD DAMN SECOND-
"I'll ignore him like he ignores me" sums up my relationship
is this the real life
Is this just a fantasy
😕
caught in a landslide
no escape from reality
No escape from reality~
+Luthic Corpse open your eeeeyes ~
+MyWarriorInHiding look up to the skies
if you think you would be safe in the comment section then yes you would be safe the only thing you will encounter in the comment section are there things called spoilers they are really deadly and when you come across one...run....run as fast as you can
Exactly
You picked the wrong comment fool
Thanks pop pop
If you see this things, they can see you and will see you. Running won´t help, it´s already in your head.
Ur behind Trump's wall
the unknown knight and you’re a Mexican 🤣
you mean the imgaginary line where the third metal-meshfence layer should go?
There over the wall into America
lol I woke up like 30 mind ago
*mins
That would be an awesome creepypasta, the sentence with the typo that is.
That would be an awesome creepy pasta! Someone remembers all of their past minds and finds out something strange. Something none of us could ever know...
+Galvanized Dreamer it was the spoopy munster
I'm triggered. This video reminds me of my daily struggle.
triggered
I wake up I'm triggered
Tiggered
Am I the only single guy who feels jealous listening to this?
Nah man
We are all Bros, and remember. If you're wearing socks, it's not naked. And if it's not naked, it's not gay
Agreed.
Karl Hoffmann nah u cool
Nah, like this guy Adam just gets given a free gf.
SOMEONE MAKE THIS INTO A BOOK, MOVIE, ANYTHING!!! THIS IS BEAUTIFUL AND CONTINUE THE STORY!!!!!
Um, It's called the Bible. This is a different alternative story to Adam and Eve. But yes I agree, this should be made into a movie.
+Hayden Jameson .................fuck, I didn't make that realization...............
+Arnar your a fucking idiot then I am not even religious and I knew it was an alternative version of Adam and Eve plus their names are Adam and Eve
+Ben Anderson Stfu. This is one video. You were probably waiting 10 fucking years to correct someone.I was just expecting something creepy...
And you didn't have to come across so rude.
What if this is what happens when we die. When we die lie in an empty white room with our memories erased. And if we take into account that this is what happens when we die then it can explain why the room is white and why the saying goes that we see a bright light when we die. It's us coming into this room. This is heaven. Now stick with me when we die we are to be united with God and essentially being in this white room is just that. We are with god at all times as he sees over us, feeds us, heals us we are beside him. But it also marks the beginning of something new. And by new I mean the cycle will repeat itself (story of Adam and Eve). We will be tested to see if we have changed from our past life and see if we can accept and stay with God. Only for the cycle to repeat itself. Each one of us will be taken down this road.
Nah, I think you either go to Heaven or Hell but hey that's just me.
wow. that was deep
Itsforbiddensoul so people who naturally want freedom just keep going back and fourth sounds stupid to me. The big difference between the actual story and this one is that they where not happy being trapped so they escaped to find aliens. In the actual story they are happy and they know what's going on they just decide to do the one thing they where told not to do and they got punished.
Itsforbiddensoul I prefer that over anything
If I have to live forever it would be forever boring if I die and never come back like everything is lost then that is scary and sad. Seems like whatever we do we're fucked. If we wake up when we die then return (reincarnated) maby not as human and even on a whole other planet or galaxy heck a whole other universe with different laws and new ways to live or maby not even live but just exist for a while as something then that makes more sense to me. Feels like life is just a game to pass the eternal existence so you have something to do
hmmmm....this is Adam and Eve right?? This is litterally the best creepypasta i've ever heard. Kudos to the writer.
i agree, this one is one of my new favorites. my favorite (as well as many others') is penpal
in the beginning (poor choice of words) I was getting creepy Adam and Eve vibes, so glad I was right
It's like Frankenstein combined with the Bible, and alien experiement all at once. How creepy.i loved it. Thank you.
I like how it kinda seems like a more futuristic type post apocalypse Adam and eve.
wake me up inside
You can sleep inside
+Shenna638 I can't wake up!
Cringe
+iNiNj5 SAAAAVE MEEE
(Can't wake up)
Pause at 3:13 - I'm going to predict this is about the white-room tourture meathod, and if it is, that'd be really cool, I haven't heard any creepypastas about white-room torture yet.
Guess not, but it was still really interesting.
What is white room torture?
It might not actually be called that, but it's where they put you in a white room and they feed you white rice on a white plate and white milk in a white cup, and literally everything is white. They say it drives you insane, makes you hallucinate but not in a fun way. And people who have expirienced it say they'd rather be physically tourtured than have to go through white room tourture.
TheGame Boxer9 ,, lol what pissed you off to make you comment that?
TheGame Boxer9 :,( oh nooo
Alright I'm only at the beginning but the narrating so far is even more incredible than usual.
The nonchalant way of speaking coming from doubt of the situation mixed with little hints of panic. Really making me feel this story. Great job.
so the large scar was adam's rib taken to make eve?
creeps: I wake up
me: ALARM CLOCK SCREAMIN' ITS SPRING AND HAILIES OUTSIDE SWINGING I WALK RIGHT UP TO KIM AND KISS HER TELL HER I MISS HER HAILIE JUST SMILES AND WINKS AT HER LITTLE SISTER ALMOST AS IF THERE SAYIN...
and when I'm gone just carry on. don't long rejoice.
ever time you hear the sound of my voice. just know that... I'm looking down on you smilingly. ignite it and fell the flame, so baby just smile back
I wish we can turn back time to the good old days when the man would talk and live in luxury but now we're stressed out
'Is this like, a story of Adam and Eve' I think when the girl shows up. 'Gosh, this was a story on Adam and Eve. How depressing was that. Nope. Not showing this to my religious family'😂😂
Adam and Eve, this is brilliant. This is better than the bible.
I really thought of Adam and Eve during the middle of this.
Nah this isn't better than the Bible because the Bible is about 1,000,000x deeper. I'm talking about hidden things 99.99% of people miss within the first few sentences of the book. No human can fully comprehend it
+Unlimited TARDIS me 2
Me too about the point when he said "we made love to eachother various times"
Wait in the end her name is Eve so it could be Adam and eve scince they ARE naked like in the bible...
I could make a theory out of this...
Um... didnt you use this picture for that sentient tree story?
Yes he did I was thinking the same thing! :P
Also the title of that story is: I am tree.
Yup.
I know this is a story about adam and eve but this reminds me of myself. I had strict parents so life was a torture back then, 2 hours tv was allowed. I had a girlfriend at age 14, we were in the same situation. At around 15 we wanted to get out, live together only. We made love and basically spent most of the day trying to figure out how to live alone. When we were finally 18, we left home and bought a new place with the money we had. Both of us understood how hard life is after a week. No one who gives food, no one who washes our clothes, no one who cares about us, nothing. At first we didn't want to go back so we wanted to stay for a few months, then go back. My mom had a car accident. I kept crying for weeks. My dad jumped off a bridge, probably he couldnt take the pain. Her parents left the country, so basically we were by ourself, alone, just like we wanted. the next years were torture but then I needed to go to the army. She didn't want me to go but I had no other option. She was staying at her friends house while I was gone, after my service we went to our usual lives, I got a job. Now I am where I am. I don't know why I am typing this but I just had a flashback. Nice story!
He should acted like he slept then when the people come he could of attack them
I don't think they'd fall for it.
bro theyre aliens, i dont even think they come in person. i think they use soem next mechanical device to do it
But he can grab the device and go up
I can only listen while playing games anybody relate??
I listen while going to sleep
yup
+ShadowWolf same
Yupp
i feel ya
Incredible take on the Adam and Eve story I love these kinds of stories, ones about god but slightly different
when you reach 1 million subscribers will you do a face reveal? :D
WHO?
+caho19 o I was referring to creeps
I'VE BECOME SO NUMB
I can't... feel you... there?
Become so tired, so much more aware...
By becoming this, all I want to do
Is be more like Harambe and be less like you.
i cant feel you there
+Mark Ausburg holding to tightly afraid to lose control
him: describes the other people and the wall
me:ATTACK ON TITANS
comments: it's Adam and eve
me:waiting for the video to say it's Adam and eve
video:hasn't said it yet
me:stops typing
me: IT IS ADAM AND EVE
"Oh. I must be in a mental asylum. I must be insane. Oh well."
Called it! Adam and Eve in the garden of Eden. And I'm not even religious.
WAKE ME UP INSIDE
no you can sleep inside
+Axcel can't wake up
+ElementalFalcon (SAVE ME)
lol
interesting twist on Adam and eve. However, why this "God" refused to tell them anything or let them know anything until after their instinct for freedom succeeded, then left is beyond me.
TheYeller7 at least they even heard a voice. People spend their lives searching of proof of a higher power.
Yah in the real story he told them the consiquences before they chose to disobey.
In this I don't think the Adam and eve deserved to be exiled this time, they weren't told anything at all.
Masterful story I loved it
They climb over the wall. "You've ruined everything!"
Not so all powerful, are you?
It's because God ultimately will give freewill to them if they seek it, however they will not be let back in to paradise and must face the consequences and perils of life on Earth. It's like children with their parent, you eventually have to let them go, you can't protect them forever.
@@fhuuraliulfr5756 well, God is going to rebuild this world, in the end the spiritual church/bride of Christ will experience paradise and be in the presence of The Lord. Dead saints have the pleasure of already being with Jesus, id call that paradise in itself 😊
*when eve is mentioned* ...!! s-shut up, seriously!! o3o
*when adam is mentioned* OMLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!! I WAS RIGHT *flips table*
That was a good twist! It's definitely a change from the real event in the bible but it was very awesome.
They may be dirty and struggling, but they're FREE. That alone is reason to rejoice.
April Yates Easter egg:they realized their shame as they saw their skins are dirty
They’re still in the confines it’s just bigger. And they are in pain all the time. 🤔
perspective...all about perspective
Free of what? Free to do what? They had everything they could ask for and wanted for nothing, now they have nothing and their support and help is gone. What is there to rejoice about?
surviving in wild, barely surviving, somehow has laptop or computer with internet
wow
It took me 25 minutes to realize this was a retelling of adam and eve. Oml
"I hope that what I just told her is true."
I'm no creationist but this line scared the piss out of me for some reason. Great storytelling and getting the listener wrapped up deep in the tale. I was able to fully put myself in their shoes and when I heard God/the aliens may not actually love us like we think and hope, coupled by if there is a creator we've most likely been abandoned by what we see today, my heart dropped hard.
this makes me so sad every time I listen to it. I'm a Christian and although this is obviously an inaccurate story I can get behind the emotions and thoughts. I wonder if this is how the real adam and eve thought
Xavier Ford exactly but i doubt Adam and eve were the only ones
Phil's Eyelash they were never real.
If they were real I doubt they would even have language let alone talk to eachother
+Zachary Brazeau mabye god did some crazy shit and made them understand eachother and stuff
i mean he made someone with fucking bones
of fuck i assumed gods gender
"Did they cut me open and steal my crap?" -what evil madman would do that?
I predicted the twist as soon as they saw the tree but it's still very well written
I feel it in my bones enough to make my system blow
Pokemon Go addiction gone to far.
XD.
Johnny Doe LEL
kek
by 35:55 I was expecting human and alien smut
So why is Adam introduced as some lucid intelligent man and Eve as some barely coherent unintelligent teenager? These pasta authors really need to keep up with these overused tropes. "Born Sexy Yesterday" is so fucking tired.
ö I think it's written this way to show how much Adam needs Eve's soft, innocence. She isn't born an idiot, just young and soft. She learns everything with him and they help each other stay strong. After all, she was born yesterday, literally.
She was taken from Adam's ribs, not his brain.
right when the girl came into the story i knew it was a twist on the Christian story of atom and eve