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  • Опубліковано 25 лис 2024

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  • @MentalJanitor
    @MentalJanitor 2 місяці тому +128

    Bob the interstellar accountant here. I'm stuck on another world, full of beautiful alien women again you know the drill send help when you can or not.😅

    • @danielbenyair300
      @danielbenyair300 2 місяці тому +6

      you reminded me of Sanji being jealous of Luffy

    • @shivam3017
      @shivam3017 2 місяці тому +2

      ​@@danielbenyair300Apt analogy.

    • @stevenr6797
      @stevenr6797 26 днів тому +4

      Did they sentence you to death by snu snu?

    • @MentalJanitor
      @MentalJanitor 25 днів тому

      @stevenr6797 It's an honorable death 💀. Would you turn down the 3 breasted amazon snu snu warriors of Eda3 Prime?

    • @Bad-Karma
      @Bad-Karma 25 днів тому +6

      ​@@stevenr6797 "The Spirit Is Willing, But The Flesh Is Spongy And Bruised."

  • @rdtradecraft
    @rdtradecraft 25 днів тому +19

    Sir Robin to Lancelot: Can't I have just a little peril? --Monty Python and the Holy Grail.

  • @whtbear12
    @whtbear12 20 днів тому +10

    This story definitely needs a part 2. However this was a truly great story. Thank You...

  • @cyberwolf1772
    @cyberwolf1772 Місяць тому +15

    I hope you make a part two of this because this has the potential to be a great story!

  • @maxxcarver5502
    @maxxcarver5502 Місяць тому +14

    Sora challenges her supreme leader Five or Six times! in front of her own people AND in front of people they consider Weak. she would be Sorely Punished if I was her leader! United Front! never under cut your Leader in front of potential Enemies!!!!

  • @jackreisewitz6632
    @jackreisewitz6632 2 місяці тому +23

    Seems like they traveled a long way just to stroke their egos. Seems kinda lame to me.

    • @glennstinsonbookerjr.4824
      @glennstinsonbookerjr.4824 24 дні тому

      Let's see, every New Yorker is hiding an abject terror in their sellers. Except one lonely human he does a little dance after he talks to the commanding warrior of the strike force. And she decides to tell everybody to get back in the ship and when they return home, she tells her leaders the truth?
      Why didn't they lop off her head and then return to 🌎 to kill 99.99 percent of the population then take the rest of the population as trophy's.
      Well let's have another take on this storyline, say David is a training officer in Earth's not so flegling space force and after they leave he reports to his base and after tracking the ships to their home world they travel to the (space Amazon's) planet, with a fleet of space craft that dwarfs the tiny contingent that traveled to
      Earth. Only they have no intention of harming any of them. After they are held in a retraining camp for a year or two. Once they start to believe that Earth's space troops are the dominant force in the universe. These women will make excellent scouts for enlarging Earth's influence.
      Now take that and this tale that I ripped off from a couple of Rod Serlings Twilight Zone stories and maybe you can meet somewhere in the middle.

    • @frankcuoco1501
      @frankcuoco1501 21 день тому

      Why are they always blue😮👽huh

    • @maximilianoalcaraz7351
      @maximilianoalcaraz7351 19 днів тому

      Kings and Queens have done the same for centuries in our world. When you paek and everything seems trivial, everything is also boring. These encounters are "amusement" as they said. Entertainment. They probably done this in other planets just for fun. Plus "long way" for us might be a 15 min drive for them so...I don't see why the concept of showing pure strength for fun is so alien to you

    • @jackreisewitz6632
      @jackreisewitz6632 18 днів тому

      @maximilianoalcaraz7351 Very insightful comment !!
      But traveling that far for an ego trip is still lame. 😁

    • @TheAlexRhodes
      @TheAlexRhodes 5 днів тому

      @@jackreisewitz6632 It was more than that, you can see it in their approach, the way they paid attention to their surroundings, the descriptions.
      What happened in the story wasn't some random fluke, they were literally testing the local culture in a very direct way (though with a healthy dose of condescension)

  • @tioraytm
    @tioraytm 2 місяці тому +15

    Obviously these alien women have not encountered the human martial art called, the back hand.

  • @Bob.Jenkins
    @Bob.Jenkins 2 місяці тому +31

    They 'hovered over New York' and 'extended the ramp' - really? How long was the ramp? If the ship was at 550m (approx. height of tallest building in NY) and the ramp was set to 30 Degrees then the ramp length would be over 1.1km (3609 ft) long - that's a decent stretch of the legs !

    • @kikikintamasangrasshuepfer8954
      @kikikintamasangrasshuepfer8954 2 місяці тому +1

      Sounds legit. 😂😂😂 Whatever aliens like to waste their resources on, hardly dummer than us humans 😂😂😂

    • @paulmoffat9306
      @paulmoffat9306 2 місяці тому

      AND all uphill!

    • @gregchrist5090
      @gregchrist5090 2 місяці тому +1

      Well, you are assuming the shape of the ship to be flat on the bottom. It could be shaped like an inverted water droplet.

    • @NortiusMaximus
      @NortiusMaximus Місяць тому

      They can skip leg day for the next week or two

    • @ozramblue117
      @ozramblue117 3 дні тому

      It was the blackzilla ramp. It even penetrated deep into the dirt from orbit.

  • @senacht
    @senacht 2 місяці тому +7

    I’m stuck on a strange planet populated by nothing other than beautiful women. Please send vitamin pills.

  • @garylint6714
    @garylint6714 Місяць тому +5

    I have always felt that I am the last earthling and when the mother ship comes for the rest of you I will have my planet back.

  • @amaree9732
    @amaree9732 25 днів тому +3

    Okay, okay... We know she had glowing violet eyes.

  • @jimanonymous113
    @jimanonymous113 26 днів тому +6

    He never used his most powerful tool ...

    • @sejah9065
      @sejah9065 13 днів тому

      Nahh💀 bro is down bad

  • @indy5624
    @indy5624 Місяць тому +2

    I was waiting for the story teller to say they just met clark kent, lol

  • @MaxwellMoore-d1u
    @MaxwellMoore-d1u 2 місяці тому +10

    In away it Reminds me of the largest Empire on Earth the British When they up against the Gurkar in Nepal .The British percieved them as primitive Mountain people. But quickly found an high Respect for the Nepalese warriors. And invited them to join the
    British Empire .The Gurker Soldiers have gained the Full Respect of the British People.

    • @johnfenter4729
      @johnfenter4729 2 місяці тому +2

      Gurkha...

    • @MaxwellMoore-d1u
      @MaxwellMoore-d1u 2 місяці тому

      @johnfenter4729 Yes I knew I'd Spelt wrong. Should have stopped. But if I'd Stopped I would have Forgot.

    • @petergaskin1811
      @petergaskin1811 2 місяці тому +2

      Mate of mine, Pete Smith, was a First Lieutenant in one of the Gurkha Regiments. Even after retirement from the Army, he wore his crossed kukri badge with pride.

  • @IsmaelMeech
    @IsmaelMeech 5 днів тому

    Please come out with a part 2 love story between the former seal and general lol

  • @gavinnewton8227
    @gavinnewton8227 Місяць тому +3

    17:22 and that’s when he pulled out the Beretta

  • @RonaldMyers-oz3pk
    @RonaldMyers-oz3pk 2 місяці тому +9

    Question when these Amazon wmen came to NY was it pride day?

  • @ANGRYWOLVERINE2060-ft2nc
    @ANGRYWOLVERINE2060-ft2nc 2 місяці тому +7

    Earth is in the Milky Way not Andromeda.
    Too much repetition in these stories.

    • @petergaskin1811
      @petergaskin1811 2 місяці тому +1

      That's the problem with the Mills and Boon Chat GPT library of sci-fi plots. Bit repetitive here and there. that's the problem with Mills and Boon (primary source of Romantic Fiction in the UK - look it up).

  • @avmelidor
    @avmelidor 15 днів тому

    There should be more to this one.

  • @oilygr1n
    @oilygr1n 2 місяці тому +28

    I’m not denying that there exists strong determined people on this planet but after discussions with Biden, Starmer, Trudeau etc? They’d blast the f**k out us!

    • @myristicanz
      @myristicanz 2 місяці тому

      😂😂😂

    • @Raz.C
      @Raz.C 2 місяці тому

      Yeah, discussions with ANYONE on the planet would likely lead to them blasting the fuck out of America.
      This is just one of the many situations in which it pays to not be globally despised...

    • @RolandAdams-h4m
      @RolandAdams-h4m Місяць тому +2

      They'd make a deal first. Traitors would give them all the good stuff before the Earth destruction.

    • @johnskipper2619
      @johnskipper2619 17 днів тому

      If they would have first met and dealt with Biden/Harris, they would have left believeing the only way humans would be friendly with them was if everyone took turns inserting things into each other's rectums.. 😅 They would have left crying and laughing. Discussing how huge the object was that the smallest one could willing insert and live through it.

    • @alexcampbell4297
      @alexcampbell4297 13 днів тому +1

      Bro why did you have to bring politics into this?

  • @Double_D989
    @Double_D989 6 днів тому

    15:11 What is the US military doing, taking naps with Biden?
    >Alien vessel lands on earth.
    >Alien vessel threatens national security.
    >US Military: 😴🛌🏻😪

    • @TheAlexRhodes
      @TheAlexRhodes 5 днів тому

      But they did mention the jets flying around and the soldiers forming a perimiter?
      A small flying city appears out of nowhere, giants come out and mock you in your own language, as if they had already taken the measure of your entire planet...
      For once the US military was doing the smart thing, holding fire.

  • @mikecarter8440
    @mikecarter8440 2 місяці тому +6

    Good story

  • @ForeverYoung-g3n
    @ForeverYoung-g3n Місяць тому +2

    We were born to inherit the stars

  • @raven1462
    @raven1462 Місяць тому +1

    She fell in love with him.

  • @tcskeels2744
    @tcskeels2744 Місяць тому +1

    After all that, he didn’t ask her out to dinner?

  • @carinabritz806
    @carinabritz806 2 місяці тому +3

    WOW, Amazing!😂😂
    1: Aliens SPEAKING/UNDERSTANDING English when many a nation on earth have a hard time speaking/pronouncing/understanding English !!
    2: And yet AGAIN America are invaded by Aliens!!

    • @darkraiderph4739
      @darkraiderph4739 18 днів тому +1

      My guess they were monerting our communication and use a translation device

  • @WolfgangThammsj
    @WolfgangThammsj 2 місяці тому +3

    As usual the picture bears little relation to the story

  • @stevelau7694
    @stevelau7694 Місяць тому +1

    How likely would convergent evolution lead intelligent alien species to be bipedal and generally close in size and shape? Based on physics, it seems very possible.

  • @Vin-yo3ig
    @Vin-yo3ig 2 місяці тому +2

    Just how many times do you need to repeat the same phrase? How many times can you actually encircle two beings.

  • @mystudent11
    @mystudent11 2 місяці тому +1

    The narration of this video is outstanding I'm glad I like listening to this series.

  • @davidnicholson71
    @davidnicholson71 Місяць тому +1

    Great syfy

  • @kennethabagis8392
    @kennethabagis8392 2 місяці тому +2

    Sorry we could have sent another CLONE CHEN, instead of you.

  • @davidbolls4850
    @davidbolls4850 2 місяці тому +5

    You haven’t used the word “palpable” yet.

    • @stephenater9687
      @stephenater9687 2 місяці тому +1

      The lack of the is palpable.

    • @stephenater9687
      @stephenater9687 2 місяці тому

      Word

    • @oilygr1n
      @oilygr1n 2 місяці тому

      The absence of an over used adjective was almost palpable. :)

  • @frederickwentz4729
    @frederickwentz4729 2 місяці тому +4

    the story gets off track like its repeating itself it's almost like the story repeats itself just for filer.

    • @MrJoel9679
      @MrJoel9679 День тому

      I wondered when I’d see a comment like this. Theses language models do that. They default a lot to opening middle end and summary. They look to reinforce the theme to satisfy the client criteria.

  • @Tenright77
    @Tenright77 2 місяці тому +3

    Does General Arena date?

  • @davidbrandenburg8029
    @davidbrandenburg8029 2 місяці тому

    with these adjustable glasses you too can look like a Nerd from the 60's!.

  • @artmiller4481
    @artmiller4481 2 місяці тому

    Please another part to this story 😊😊😊

  • @brian770
    @brian770 2 місяці тому +3

    gleamed like a jewel... yet pic shows a desert wasteland...

  • @jasondrew5768
    @jasondrew5768 2 місяці тому +4

    lol, give your warriors women some muscles, not skinny models!

  • @KalobBurnett
    @KalobBurnett 3 дні тому

    What's the name of their planet they're from?

  • @GunnersRange
    @GunnersRange 2 місяці тому +1

    Too damn many Ads! every two minutes...

  • @wait4dl
    @wait4dl 2 місяці тому

    the first stop have been DC that would rattle GOVT> what we have of it!

  • @randomdoomer8549
    @randomdoomer8549 6 днів тому

    Death by Snu Snu alien edition

  • @flikflak24
    @flikflak24 5 днів тому

    i think the general want's his child. the valkyra's are strong female warriors and value strang mate's to get strong/mighty offsprings above all else. and he defeated her in hand to hand combat profe to her that he's strong. therfore wants his as a mate to have strong offsprings with ( in hope that they are physically compatteble to make offsprings )
    i bet she even wanted to gab him by the arm/caller to drag him on to there ship for that very reason. but didnt out of curtasy/pride or fear of him seeing her as desporate and therefore not be interrested in mating with her

  • @noneyabusiness1701
    @noneyabusiness1701 Місяць тому +2

    He was tall for a human 6ft lol this definitely wasn’t written by a white or black guy

    • @stacycarlton2056
      @stacycarlton2056 Місяць тому

      I mean average human height is 5'6/5'7

    • @AwoudeX
      @AwoudeX Місяць тому +1

      @@stacycarlton2056 average height in the tallest nation on this planet is 6ft1, so a 6ft guy anywhere else is most likely to stand out a bit, given that the USA is 2-3 inch shorter on average... Now imagine they landed in chinatown on top of that xd

    • @noneyabusiness1701
      @noneyabusiness1701 Місяць тому

      @@stacycarlton2056 Yes in countries that don’t matter

    • @maximilianoalcaraz7351
      @maximilianoalcaraz7351 19 днів тому

      @@noneyabusiness1701 lil bro is def 5'9.

  • @maximusmeridius3380
    @maximusmeridius3380 2 місяці тому +1

    My name is Caine. I'm here to help....

  • @glennbrymer4065
    @glennbrymer4065 14 днів тому

    So, who are you writers? Are you a small group of young writers?
    Are you an AI?
    The story is ok, it is interesting.
    I'm just curious.

  • @B3thym0nst3r
    @B3thym0nst3r 2 місяці тому +1

    There is no way punk as gang bangers in New York wouldn't be firing handguns at a ship. And most ppl would be more curious than afraid. This story is dumb.

    • @TheAlexRhodes
      @TheAlexRhodes 5 днів тому

      No, no...
      (me watching the bang and the gang drain from their faces as the flying city casts a shadow over their sagging pants, instilling an instinctual dread that completely overrides any cultural notion of badassery)

  • @lesperez1989
    @lesperez1989 2 місяці тому

    Mmmmmm all the possibilities are now in play.

  • @unni6230
    @unni6230 Місяць тому

    Haa everything happened to America 😂😂😂😂

  • @pineapplestudios8309
    @pineapplestudios8309 5 днів тому

    Story kinda sucks ngl. Like they arrive on earth to "remind" humanity that they are insignificant in the grand scheme of the universe, but at the same time I am 90% sure humans already know that.
    Not to mention even the story says the aliens are only limited to a "sector" without mention as to how large a sector is, so it is very likely that they too are also insignificant to the grand scheme of things.

  • @brianvannorman1465
    @brianvannorman1465 2 місяці тому

    Valkyries?

  • @ozramblue117
    @ozramblue117 3 дні тому

    It’s been just under 8 minutes and I’m already bored. This 100% ai or was there some editing involved? Interesting times.

  • @Dave-un4oe
    @Dave-un4oe Місяць тому

    I love SciFi stories. The problem with most stories that are published on UA-cam is that they are entirely produced by AI, and they all sound the same. Uninspired, boring, bland with the same style and vocabulary.

  • @frank88ster
    @frank88ster Місяць тому

    So?? No mamas? Test tube babies huh?

  • @Sarah-gw3ng
    @Sarah-gw3ng 2 місяці тому

    Looks like an array with a Calvin Klein underwear model with a Calvin and Philips authority center in the source...maybe a gay ~Philippino Tin Man type.

  • @remingtontucker9364
    @remingtontucker9364 2 місяці тому +1

    Sensible a woman warrior race would behave as any warrior would see the value power hungry and tyranny would ignore them being women from a different culture would not have the same psychological and behavioral aspects as human women

    • @jackreisewitz6632
      @jackreisewitz6632 21 день тому

      @remingtontucker9364 heard ever you punctuation ?? sentence of structure and

  • @MonroeAlva-f7r
    @MonroeAlva-f7r 2 місяці тому +1

    Walker Charles Jackson Nancy Taylor Barbara

  • @jonathanbartron3658
    @jonathanbartron3658 12 днів тому

    Is it required that you use the word "palpable" in every story? Sure seems like it. Anyway, you've WAY over-used it. It's thesaurus time boys.

  • @RCTPatriot75
    @RCTPatriot75 Місяць тому +1

    These are all so repetitive.

  • @jacobytes8720
    @jacobytes8720 День тому

    15 min in and it’s just yapping nonsense

  • @antsquirly7654
    @antsquirly7654 2 місяці тому +2

    Not difficult to visualize what the author was doing while thinking up this plot. Talk about early adolescent fantasies.

  • @u.w.sunitedwestand2117
    @u.w.sunitedwestand2117 2 місяці тому

    When doctor Miami started to get famous down here. Imagine how we felt! And then came the cubans!

  • @davidandrew1078
    @davidandrew1078 27 днів тому

    Snu Snu.

  • @andrewham1397
    @andrewham1397 Місяць тому +1

    This is absolutely garbage. Incredibly uncompelling

  • @scottphillips2870
    @scottphillips2870 Місяць тому +1

    Just bad.

  • @stevenfranklin7060
    @stevenfranklin7060 2 місяці тому +1

    Trash

  • @odinfireful
    @odinfireful 15 днів тому

    good story

  • @kennethabagis8392
    @kennethabagis8392 2 місяці тому

    Sorry we could have sent another CLONE CHEN, instead of you.

  • @kennethabagis8392
    @kennethabagis8392 2 місяці тому

    Sorry we could have sent another CLONE CHEN, instead of you.