FNAF: SB REWRITTEN - CH 24 (AO3 WRITTEN VERSION AVAILABLE!)
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- Опубліковано 13 лип 2023
- HERE IS CH 23’S CORRECTED LORE VID: • CORRECTED Ch 23’s Lore...
Yeah, things are not looking good for Vanessa in this chapter lol
Link to written version: archiveofourown.org/works/454... (currently updated with today’s chapter)
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HERE IS CH 23’S CORRECTED LORE VID: ua-cam.com/video/LCSe2lB_SLs/v-deo.html
Yeah, things are not looking good for Vanessa in this chapter lol
Link to written version: archiveofourown.org/works/45445291?view_full_work=true (currently updated with today’s chapter)
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Thanki you for touching on Disassociate Identity Disorder without portraying it as something scary and evil. That means more than you realize
GREGORY HE'S MOSTLY ALIVE HAUHHH HAOHGH AHH
Well, gregory did what no afton could.....he survived the bite...jesus this is fucking gut wrenching.
Thank you so much for making this
23:09-23:40 that's some of the best acting I've ever heard, and to think this did not became canon in FNAF:SB
Updated subject numbers from what I can gather:
Subject 1: DJ Music Man
Subject 2: Glamrock Bonnie
Subject 3: Roxanne Fox
Subject 4: Daycare Attendant
Subject 5: Either Freddy or Chica
Subject 6: Either Freddy or Chica
Subject 7: Montgomery Gator
The lore from last chapter confirmed it almost perfectly, and you are close.
1: DJ
2: Bonnie
3: Freddy
4: Sun/Moon
5: Chica
6: Roxy
Rewrite I’m listening to, answers=
I haven’t figured out yet if Monty is a subject yet. If so I guessing he’s subject
Subject 6=Roxy; incident. does not like to lose, talks back, and finds ways to not curse but find loop whole as substitute (September 14 2075)
Subject 5=Chica; incident. eating disorder (December 17 2078)
Subject 4=Sun and moon; incident. scared of unknown creature/animal: dog (April 7 2073) two people inside this subject
Subject 3=Freddie; incident. scared of the dark/ storms (June 20th 2074) (has stage fright) O.N.N. Comet
Subject 2=Bonnie; incident. didn’t clean the bowling alley on time (October 11th 2076) O.N.N. Bubblegum
Subject 1=Dj; incident. Stood up for Freddie (March 21 2082), but chapter 23’s cannon lore time stamp 6:33 through 6:47 said no connection to past self (there was nothing stating where in the timeline it was posted so it can not be confirmed, nor denied) O.N.N.Snowball
O.N.N. Means old nickname
Unknown codes?
1. P over 2
2. B over 4
3. M over 7
4. L over 13
It took me 4 days to catch up with everything and I just gotta say this is FANTASTIC. I’d love what you’ve done and you should feel very proud of yourself. 😁
Bro, I can't handle this. The James thing continues to freaking tear me apart every time it's mentioned and I LOVE THE ANGUISH I COULD SCREAM. ahem.
Me too. I still can't accept that the kid's actually dead. How is Gregory going to deal with that, once he's out of survival mode and he has a moment to sit down and think about the fact that HIS BROTHER IS DEAD?
@@ceinwenchandler4716 therapy 🗿. I just wonder what the workers are gonna think when they show up to work at a normal hour and just see the broken animatronics, a bloody child and a mutilated one
@@lithaline1726 Oh, yeah. That maintenance is going to take some serious explaining.
That's one thing I really like about this story. Unlike in the games, we're not going to walk out at the end with no sort of wrap-up. It's not going to be "yay, we survived the night, and we don't need any sort of epilogue." Not that there's anything wrong with that, but after seeing it so many times, this is way more interesting. Gregory's not going to get over what just happened in one night. What happened will take far longer than this story's duration for him to deal with... and the same goes for Bonnie. Gregory's whole family is going to be shattered by this, if they weren't already. Since for once, the killer can actually face consequences, Vanessa's probably going to be dealing with the justice system for a while - if she doesn't die by the end of the story, which frankly sounds better to me, considering how inept the justice system is. Then again, maybe it's better in the future. The other animatronics? They have YEARS of problems building up, and tonight might resolve some of them, but it'll definitely add more as well. There are so many long-term implications. And I find myself trusting that Kiwiqueen will wrap them up competently. The games almost NEVER made me think about what would happen to the characters after the game was over. (Except for game three. Springtrap should've died in that first fire. End of story.) This story is very... human, even though most of the characters are robots.
@@ceinwenchandler4716 dang that's a wall of text and a half (/lh). But I wholeheartedly agree and will die on the hill that stories should almost never have a happy "they're alive and totally not mentally scarred :D" sort if ending. ESPECIALLY for the Fnaf series. The closest thing is pizza sim's true ending where everyone is finally laid to rest. But just James' death alone is going to damage Gregory and the animatronics' mental health, especially the child's. The YOUNG CHILD'S. I think Kiwi said that they are going to expand on the aninatronics after the climax of the story, and I can't wait. Let Gregory nap, recover and get medical treatment. The poor kid. Even if it's horrible I love all the angst lol
@@lithaline1726 Haha. Yeah, I tend to ramble :) LIke you said, really looking forward to whatever Kiwi does next :)
That ending was so good and since Bonnie joined the party Vanny Is going to be screwed like to infinity and beyond levels of being screwed if she survives the story it’s going to take nothing short of a miracle
IM SO SCARED YET SO HYPED!!
UPDATE: OHMYGOD. BONNY???? WAS RESPONSIBLE FOR WHAT HAPPENED TO????????? OH MY GOD???????? I WONDER IF GREG IS WILLING TO FORGIVE HIM :0
EDIT 2:"SHE CHANGED TACTICS AT BREAKNECK SPEEDS"
THIS MADE ME GIGGLE HSHSBDJD
This has been amazing I am literally in tears.
YIPPEE
Edit: question
Kiwi, will you release a reference sheet for Bonnie? I wanted to try to write the fight scene from the 22nd chapter but I don’t wanna get his design wrong-
Right now, my hands are still sore from editing this chapter, BUT in five days or so once they’re better, I’ll make a video displaying the reference sheets that i use for the rewrite’s designs :)
Update: Sorry, I had a three day long migraine after my hands were healed, so that wasted a lot of time, and now I’m just busy trying to finalize chapter 25, so I’ll probably have to put the reference sheet video on hold. Sorry
@@kiwiqueen138 you don’t have to apologize 😭 you work at your own pace! There no rush or anything I didn’t even realize you saw my comment-
37:22 I love moments like this
YESS IM SO EXCITED
Omg no GREGORY 😭
NO BONNIE 😭😭
OMG JAMES
IM GOING TO CRY
IM SO EEEEEEE
WAS THAT THE BITE OF 87!?
I was going to say it was the bite of 83 instead but Gregory survived so actually yes 👍
I love this so far Bonnie has clearly been manipulated his grief and pain of being abandoned is well all coming upon him
It's clear that the chip was just enhancing his anger getting rid of his sympathy and just erasing his apathy towards everybody That's the reason he's so confused All of his true emotions are coming up to him The fact that he misses his family
The fact that he feels horrible how guilty he feels for what he was trying to do
Just like with everyone else the chip brings out your worst traits and it's clear that Bonnie's worst trait was anger and abandonment
Oh my god hearing Bonnie realizing what he had done is horrible 30:10-34:44
I'm getting mother knows best from Vanessa and Bonnie's relationship
Oh! I’ve been waiting for this masterpiece to rear its beautiful head!
Hey kiwi? Remember when you finished the steven universe rewrite you said youd never do this again?
LOL you still remember that ? 😂
@@Kit_the_bip I mean... I do watch it like... once every 1 or 2 months.... it's good!!! I am a really big fan of the original series... and I crave content!
Im cross faded and im so stoked. Its going to be awesome
NO VANNY YOU BCSJAGASH LET MY BOY GO GRGRGRGRRR
WOOOO LETS GOOOO!!
I wish there were some comic images in it. It is still col any way.
This whole rewrite made me paranoid....AND I'M LOVING IT!!!!!!💖😅😨🥰❤
I figured out sun and moon:
Rewrite I’m listening to, answers=
I haven’t figured out yet if Monty is a subject yet. If so I guessing he’s subject 7
Subject 6=Roxy; incident. does not like to lose, talks back, and finds ways to not curse but find loop whole as substitute (September 14 2075)
Subject 5=Chica; incident. eating disorder (December 17 2078)
Subject 4=Sun and moon; incident. scared of unknown creature/animal: dog (April 7 2073) two people inside this subject
Subject 3=Freddie; incident. scared of the dark/ storms (June 20th 2074) (has stage fright) O.N.N. Comet
Subject 2=Bonnie; incident. didn’t clean the bowling alley on time (October 11th 2076) O.N.N. Bubblegum
Subject 1=Dj; incident. Stood up for Freddie (March 21 2082), but chapter 23’s cannon lore time stamp 6:33 through 6:47 said no connection to past self (there was nothing stating where in the timeline it was posted so it can not be confirmed, nor denied) O.N.N.Snowball
O.N.N. Means old nickname
Unknown codes?
1. P over 2
2. B over 4
3. M over 7
4. L over 13
I love your rewrite!!!
You clearly like the lore as much as I do. And so, I feel like you would quite like this lore document I've been working on! I have every chapter's lore laid out clearly, with an analysis of it when there's anything worth talking about, as well a timeline, short character bios, and lingering questions down at the bottom.
docs.google.com/document/d/13cv5vH3MLErtsKX_7d_D6WB4ZJBWIHDYqvvpW-eNXkg/edit
the twins are sun and moon omg
waaaaaaaaait this just clicked in my brain
32:24 *W H A T!?*
I was just about to ask when act 4 would be lol
Quick question (if this isn't too spoilery):
Will we ever hear the full, unredacted version of Victor's journal?
Eventually :)
@@kiwiqueen138 Sweet
YAY HUGS!
i want to squeeze bonnie hes a little guys hes just a little guy grgrgrgrhgr
Vanny is so screwed right now 😈
yess 🎉🎉🎉
i wonder if bonnie will forgive monty🤔 i would if i was bonnie!
Lets go
Yay
So i've binge watched this whole thing in about a week. I think I have a problem...
I'm not the same person I was before seeing this
Headcanon voice for Glamrock Bonnie: Michael McKean ( Chuck McGill )
kiwi i wonder if peepaw willy will come bac-
She said he’s permanently rotting in hell
THANK GOD
YOOOO
What’s music man doing
DJ can’t follow them because he’s too big, he can’t hear what’s going on, and he can’t go outside to warn anyone, so all DJ can do is just sit in the lobby and worry about his friends.
@@kiwiqueen138 just finished all of the videos that you uploaded so far and I got to say what Gregory does in the end is genius because now moon can see vanny
@@kiwiqueen138 also I loved Steven universe future rewritten
Annnnnnnd i am here 🦥
I have a new idea for you
first
Nuh uhhh
Nuh uh