We are now in “phase two” of the climax, hope you guys enjoyed the drama :) Link to written version: archiveofourown.org/works/45445291?view_full_work=true (Currently updated with today’s chapter!) Link to next episode: ua-cam.com/video/dlEEupBflcg/v-deo.html Link to previous episode: ua-cam.com/video/b0sc_33hmN0/v-deo.html Link to full playlist: ua-cam.com/play/PLKMzqZUiHWUjzZj0jfJym1CTORp4rdEDD.html
[Spoilers] [NO SERIOUSLY, I DON’T MIND SPOILERS, BUT YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED] NOT MY FAVORITE CHARACTER. I saw this coming after you mentioned the loudest scream and the implications finally clicking in my mind because I am a pessimist, but I wasn’t expecting it the way my other special little boy got yeeted into the ether. Btw, don’t tell me how this is going to go. I am not my brother who RELIES on that. I’m also not reacting like everyone else, whose first instinct was the famous Markiplier quote. I guess I should get credit for that. But seriously, I got butterflies, which I never got until the climax of this series. GOLD STAR.
1. EXCUSE ME GREGORYS MOTHER DID WHAT??!?! OH NO JAILS NOT ENOUGH SHE NEEDS DEATH! 2. I'm so proud of Gregory for not falling to the dark side and killing Bonny. I understand him though, he's been through too much. 3. Oh god the comments... ITS ALL "IS THAT THE BITE OF 87??!!" 4. A part of me doesn't believe that Bonny will go back to normal, at least not completely. Since Vanessa knows that their chips have been removed, I highly doubt that she would use the same method of controlling him. Maybe the chip Gregory removed is a fake and she did something different to Bonny, maybe she's taking advantage of his insomnia. I hope thats not the case because I want him to be a part of the Gregory protection squad. 4. OK so I think Snowman, aka subject 1 is MMMMMMUUUUUSIC MMMMMMMMMAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNN. Bubblegum/subject 2 is Chica, and Comet/subject 3 is Freddy. My reasons for this is because MMMMMMUUUUUUSIC MMMMMMMMMAAAAAAANNNNNN has a white body and looks kinda like a snowman. Bubblegum for chica because of her pink colour scheme. Comet for Freddy because I swear I remember him being refer to as Comet, or a part of his body being referred to as a comet(his eyes I think???) 5. Oh boy I'm excited to see what will happen with Vanessa and Moon. Thinking back to the previous episode, it's interesting that moons reaction is the only one that scared Vanessa. I think it's because Moon essentially became a parent to Vanessa since her dad was busy with the pizzaplex, or its just the fact that she was really close to Moon in general. Her seeing him react like that must've really shocked her. 6. Are your vocal cords okay from all this screaming?? What a terrifying episode! Its one thing to be chased by an animatronic, it's a whole nother thing when it's chasing you with a BOWLING BALL. I feel so bad for Monty. The poor gator got his face wrecked by a bowling ball. Actually, now that I think about it, maybe it's just me but Bonny seems a bit more in control than the others were when they were chipped. The others were not opposed to hurting Freddy to reach their goal(unless I'm remembering wrong), but Bonny was actively holding back when he was so close to getting Gregory and Freddy. This kinda links back to point four where I think he may not go back to normal. Since he seems more in control than the others, this could hint that he might not be controlled by a chip. I'm so excited to see what happens in the next episode. But don't forget to take breaks when needed!
4: Actually, it’s stated that the eye color of the animatronic is what their name is based off of. So Bubblegum is not Chica :) (I don’t want this correction to come across as condescending or anything, I just wanted to prevent misinformation about the lore) Thanks for all the commentary, I love getting to read everyone’s reaction to what’s going on in the episode, it really makes me happy :D
Most people: WAS THAT THE BITE OF 87!!! Me: WAS THAT THE BITE OF 83!!!! ( u know, because the bite of 83 was the actual time when C.C. was bit by golden Freddy not 87 ) ( shows what u know about fnaf ) ( P.S. I love these videos. They are entertaining to listen to and incredibly LLLLOOOOORRRREEEEE friendly!!!!! ) I love lore. Any lore.
Me the entire time: wait where is moon? He can get the chip out! Oh wait, he’s fighting Vanessa… well that’s exciting! Crap, now we have to wait until 24 to see what happens with Gregory :( oh well, it will be entertaining to listen to Moon fight Vannessa
Is it just me, or do I notice that Bonnie has a lot of similarities with Aren Ryan from punch out on the wii. 1. Bonnie’s bowling ball attachment is used to make his physical blows hit harder, Aren loads his boxing gloves with horseshoes, also to harden his blows. 2. Bonnie’s bowling ball can disconnect from his wrist, to be used as a flail, in his title defence match, Aren decided to craft one of his old gloves into a flail. 3. I’m a little iffy about this one, but when Bonnie brings out his flail, Gregory thinks that, compared to the others, it makes subduing him an unfair fight, Aren has the most infractions out of every opponent in the game.
Was not expecting this, but that's the point of a good story. (Major Spoilers Below) (No seriously) (Last chance to turn back) WAS THAT THE BITE OF '87?!
I'm starting to have theories on what the censored emails are. I feel like it has something to do with the old research or the experiments on the original subjects.
I'm sorry, his mother did WHAT to him!? THATS IT, THAT WOMAN IS NOW DEAD! (Also, great Job greg for not giving into the hate) Now that I think about it, is Jermey the one reading these Emails or is it just some lord drops we get?
Hey. Random question that's totally definitely not important at all: what color were Roxy's eyes originally? I don't want to just look at an image of her from canon, cuz I'm not sure how much you changed.
Roxy’s original eye color was green, she kept the “star-eyes” the same color in hopes that nobody would notice. And the eye color clue in the lore is based on MY rewritten design’s eye colors, not the OG designs of the animatronics :)
@@kiwiqueen138 Green eyes, ok... And if this isn't too much of a spoiler or anything, what does the nickname "comet" represent? 'Cuz my assumption was black, but you didn't say that for certain, so I wanted to clarify.
In one of the texts aka messages from Vanessa it mention Bonnie has insomnia I personally don’t have it so some the stuff I met get wrong but is that the reason he’s gone insane or is the fact he’s been away from the others?
I feel so bad for Bonnie he doesn't want to do this He's conflicted I feel like partly it's the glitch partly it's his own feelings about himself and how he feels he hasn't slept in a while has he he sounds tired He wants all of this to be over he doesn't want to be here he doesn't want to be alive this is horrible I feel so bad
We are now in “phase two” of the climax, hope you guys enjoyed the drama :)
Link to written version: archiveofourown.org/works/45445291?view_full_work=true (Currently updated with today’s chapter!)
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You, did not, JUST CLIFFHANGER US ON THAT NOTE, WHAT THE-
Seriously though, Bonnie sounds terrifying from how he's described-
I'm glad Gregory is managing to keep a level head on his shoulders during these harrowing moments.
*-It would be a shame if he couldn't.-*
Girl I had a seizure the way you left us on a cliffhanger that was amazing
27:21 OH MY GOD THAT SCREAM (edit because I mixed up the 27 and 21)
If you are able, can you draw the new design of Bonnie for a ref?
I’m planning on it, it just might take a while because of my hands 😅
@@kiwiqueen138 take all the time you need
@@kiwiqueen138does Bonnie have multiple personalities?
@@camber_courtney5250 No, he’s just very unstable because of how long he spent in the scrap dump
i came back from making ramen, saw this, and went "oh dang"
(ps. gem experiment sounding ass bowling ball)
(pss. WAS THAT THE BITE OF 87?!)
Be me
Wake up
New rewrite chapter
Listen
WAS THAT THE BITE OF 87??
Can we talk about how Gregory sorta just tired to KILL HIMSELF?
BONNIES MENTAL
NO GREGORY NO NO NO NO MY BABY BOY NOOOOO
KIWI IM COMING FOR YOU 😭😭😭😭😭
[Spoilers]
[NO SERIOUSLY, I DON’T MIND SPOILERS, BUT YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED]
NOT MY FAVORITE CHARACTER. I saw this coming after you mentioned the loudest scream and the implications finally clicking in my mind because I am a pessimist, but I wasn’t expecting it the way my other special little boy got yeeted into the ether. Btw, don’t tell me how this is going to go. I am not my brother who RELIES on that.
I’m also not reacting like everyone else, whose first instinct was the famous Markiplier quote. I guess I should get credit for that. But seriously, I got butterflies, which I never got until the climax of this series. GOLD STAR.
1. EXCUSE ME GREGORYS MOTHER DID WHAT??!?! OH NO JAILS NOT ENOUGH SHE NEEDS DEATH!
2. I'm so proud of Gregory for not falling to the dark side and killing Bonny. I understand him though, he's been through too much.
3. Oh god the comments... ITS ALL "IS THAT THE BITE OF 87??!!"
4. A part of me doesn't believe that Bonny will go back to normal, at least not completely. Since Vanessa knows that their chips have been removed, I highly doubt that she would use the same method of controlling him. Maybe the chip Gregory removed is a fake and she did something different to Bonny, maybe she's taking advantage of his insomnia. I hope thats not the case because I want him to be a part of the Gregory protection squad.
4. OK so I think Snowman, aka subject 1 is MMMMMMUUUUUSIC MMMMMMMMMAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNN. Bubblegum/subject 2 is Chica, and Comet/subject 3 is Freddy. My reasons for this is because MMMMMMUUUUUUSIC MMMMMMMMMAAAAAAANNNNNN has a white body and looks kinda like a snowman. Bubblegum for chica because of her pink colour scheme. Comet for Freddy because I swear I remember him being refer to as Comet, or a part of his body being referred to as a comet(his eyes I think???)
5. Oh boy I'm excited to see what will happen with Vanessa and Moon. Thinking back to the previous episode, it's interesting that moons reaction is the only one that scared Vanessa. I think it's because Moon essentially became a parent to Vanessa since her dad was busy with the pizzaplex, or its just the fact that she was really close to Moon in general. Her seeing him react like that must've really shocked her.
6. Are your vocal cords okay from all this screaming??
What a terrifying episode! Its one thing to be chased by an animatronic, it's a whole nother thing when it's chasing you with a BOWLING BALL. I feel so bad for Monty. The poor gator got his face wrecked by a bowling ball. Actually, now that I think about it, maybe it's just me but Bonny seems a bit more in control than the others were when they were chipped. The others were not opposed to hurting Freddy to reach their goal(unless I'm remembering wrong), but Bonny was actively holding back when he was so close to getting Gregory and Freddy. This kinda links back to point four where I think he may not go back to normal. Since he seems more in control than the others, this could hint that he might not be controlled by a chip.
I'm so excited to see what happens in the next episode. But don't forget to take breaks when needed!
4: Actually, it’s stated that the eye color of the animatronic is what their name is based off of. So Bubblegum is not Chica :) (I don’t want this correction to come across as condescending or anything, I just wanted to prevent misinformation about the lore)
Thanks for all the commentary, I love getting to read everyone’s reaction to what’s going on in the episode, it really makes me happy :D
@@kiwiqueen138 oooh ok. Then that must mean bubblegum is Bonny!
1.
I may be deaf but I have been rewatching and still can’t find out what Gregory’s mom did 😭😭 can you give me a time stamp sorry
@@intothewoodsatdark it's at 35:40. It's implied his mother physically abuses him when she's mad.
@@repeatedecho OH MY GOSH IM HOINH TO KILL HER
This deranged Bonnie reminds me of Watership Down.
Most people: WAS THAT THE BITE OF 87!!!
Me: WAS THAT THE BITE OF 83!!!!
( u know, because the bite of 83 was the actual time when C.C. was bit by golden Freddy not 87 )
( shows what u know about fnaf )
( P.S. I love these videos. They are entertaining to listen to and incredibly LLLLOOOOORRRREEEEE friendly!!!!! )
I love lore. Any lore.
Me the entire time: wait where is moon? He can get the chip out! Oh wait, he’s fighting Vanessa… well that’s exciting!
Crap, now we have to wait until 24 to see what happens with Gregory :( oh well, it will be entertaining to listen to Moon fight Vannessa
Boney look so deranged your art is so good it’s insane!!
I cannot wait two goddamn weeks for the next part I’m seriously gonna go insane
KIWIIIIII.
OH MY GOD WHAY THE ACTUAL FUCK ITS SO GOOD IM LOOSING MY MIND HOLY SHIT
Meanwhile, Music Man is like:
✌️👏👌 👆👌👌👇 ✌️👈👌🙌 👋👌 🖖👋☝️✌️👇🤛👍🤙 🤜✌️👇🤙🖖🖖✌️ 😬💦
This made me almost laugh and wake up my mom you criminal
If this is in 2087 we can make the joke "WAS THAT THE BITE OF '87!?!?"
I KNEW IT
I KNEW I SAW SOMETHING BONNIE-SHAPED BEHIND VANESSA
HOLY SHIT-
Same😂😂😂😂 when act 3 began I noticed the sillouette and thought it was either pewpaw or Bonnie
I saw him behind Vanny but I couldn't figure out who it was
I just got here but im so hyped for this chapters
Is it just me, or do I notice that Bonnie has a lot of similarities with Aren Ryan from punch out on the wii.
1. Bonnie’s bowling ball attachment is used to make his physical blows hit harder, Aren loads his boxing gloves with horseshoes, also to harden his blows.
2. Bonnie’s bowling ball can disconnect from his wrist, to be used as a flail, in his title defence match, Aren decided to craft one of his old gloves into a flail.
3. I’m a little iffy about this one, but when Bonnie brings out his flail, Gregory thinks that, compared to the others, it makes subduing him an unfair fight, Aren has the most infractions out of every opponent in the game.
I WAS FUCKING RIGHT IT WAS BONNIE LETS GO OGOOGOGOGOOOGOOO
IM GONNA EXPLODE I KNEW IT KIWI UR FORESHADOWING IS SO GOOD
Was not expecting this, but that's the point of a good story. (Major Spoilers Below)
(No seriously)
(Last chance to turn back)
WAS THAT THE BITE OF '87?!
WAS THAT THE BITE OF '87?!
I freaking KNEW someone was going to make that joke lmao
@@kiwiqueen138 I'm sorry. I had to. It's Fnaf fan law.
@@Thebluemamott - Thanks for making me smile- cx
I'm starting to have theories on what the censored emails are.
I feel like it has something to do with the old research or the experiments on the original subjects.
I'm sorry, his mother did WHAT to him!? THATS IT, THAT WOMAN IS NOW DEAD! (Also, great Job greg for not giving into the hate)
Now that I think about it, is Jermey the one reading these Emails or is it just some lord drops we get?
You can’t end this in a cliffhanger
WAS THAT THE BITE OF 87⁉️⁉️⁉️
NAH
Hey. Random question that's totally definitely not important at all: what color were Roxy's eyes originally? I don't want to just look at an image of her from canon, cuz I'm not sure how much you changed.
Roxy’s original eye color was green, she kept the “star-eyes” the same color in hopes that nobody would notice. And the eye color clue in the lore is based on MY rewritten design’s eye colors, not the OG designs of the animatronics :)
@@kiwiqueen138 Green eyes, ok...
And if this isn't too much of a spoiler or anything, what does the nickname "comet" represent? 'Cuz my assumption was black, but you didn't say that for certain, so I wanted to clarify.
A “comet” is light blue :) (A comet is a shooting star made of ice)
@@kiwiqueen138 Ok, thanks. I don't know enough astronomy to know comets from asteroids from whatever else is up in the sky and moves lol.
WAS THAT THE BITE OF 87?!??
(was listening to chapter 24 and suddenly realized I hadn't made that joke yet lol)
In one of the texts aka messages from Vanessa it mention Bonnie has insomnia I personally don’t have it so some the stuff I met get wrong but is that the reason he’s gone insane or is the fact he’s been away from the others?
Hdjsjdjdjdjjdjdjdjd
WAS THAT THE BITE OF 87!?!??!?!??
I’m sorry I had to
I feel so bad for Bonnie he doesn't want to do this He's conflicted I feel like partly it's the glitch partly it's his own feelings about himself and how he feels he hasn't slept in a while has he he sounds tired
He wants all of this to be over he doesn't want to be here he doesn't want to be alive this is horrible I feel so bad
I JUST GOT TO THE END NO NO YOU DON'T DO THAT TO ME YOU CAN'T JUST SAY THAT GREGORY JUST GOT 83d NO!!!
Oh no the last qord said jaws closed around his head does thing mean he bit his head off plase tell me no
NOT THE CLIFHANGER!! BUT I LOVE IT. take your time making another chapter. you need the time
GREGORY GREGORY GREGORY NOO NOO NOOOOOOOOOOOO NOOOOOOOOOO
Me: *guets notification* it episode 22 of rewrite fnaf!! Im so exi-HAAAAA WHAT THE FUCK IS THAT RABIT!!
W-what
k-k-k-kiwigueen
Uhhhhh-im a kiwi-
Wait did you add music to this one? :0
JAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMEEESSSSSSSSSS NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!
NO PLEASE NOT GREGORY PLEASE! IT CAN'T END THERE-
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