Glad to see you earn enough to survive dispite not publishing a new book. Congratulation on completing your 8th doujin, I look forward to your livestream on sales night.
I had a look at your sample images and wanted to give my impression. Well it look very similar to your previous works in both a good and bad way. I like the hair on the Gal and there's an outdoor scene. The lips look slightly better along with the faces, especially the male, the lips are better. Now the bad, the H scene are too clean, there is not enough liquid and it look too clean and page seems too condense, would be better if you divided thing and made it bigger and increase the page count instead of cramming everything together. One thing I want to see is jagged skin, like they there is electric shock coming from the body where the is intense movement and small speed lines. You need more liquid like sweat drops and saliva. I also want to see the character move violently there is double vision effect, like on the chest and hip. There is a scene with a clock on 3 panels, this is my personal opinion but for me it would have been better to see the books knock over and the table flipped like it was hit by an earthquake. I was also disappointed you drew a girl with a singlet and hot pant again. If you're going to draw this please add some stripe, slogan or some pattern or image. It feels very plain and cheap. The same with the male, need more style than a plain white t-shirt. I was hoping for a seifuku since you had it in your sample model while drawing. That's my thought on the samples maybe I'm missing a lot of context but that's how I see your doujin before reading.
新作無しで計800本超えは凄いですね!
今月の新作、期待してます!!
過去作に助けられまくってます…🙌
Glad to see you earn enough to survive dispite not publishing a new book. Congratulation on completing your 8th doujin, I look forward to your livestream on sales night.
マシュマロへのリンクを動画概要欄とチャンネル概要欄に貼っておくのはどうでしょう
素晴らしい案です！
概要欄すっかり忘れていました
漫画で生活費稼いでると
趣味とはいえ赤字になるかもしれん漫画にリソース割けないすわ
非常にわかりみです
はじめまして。私も先月新刊を出したのですが、さとうさんとちょうど同じくらいの収益でした。今月が２ヶ月目になりますが、さとうさんと同じくらいじわじわ売れてくれるといいのですが…できれば今月後半に新刊を出して、起爆剤にしようという予定です。
コメントありがとうございます！
私クラスの収益帯は専業でできるかどうかの境界線みたいな帯域なので、ここからピョンっと抜け出せれば一安心できそうな感じです
お互いに頑張りましょう！
I had a look at your sample images and wanted to give my impression. Well it look very similar to your previous works in both a good and bad way. I like the hair on the Gal and there's an outdoor scene. The lips look slightly better along with the faces, especially the male, the lips are better. Now the bad, the H scene are too clean, there is not enough liquid and it look too clean and page seems too condense, would be better if you divided thing and made it bigger and increase the page count instead of cramming everything together. One thing I want to see is jagged skin, like they there is electric shock coming from the body where the is intense movement and small speed lines. You need more liquid like sweat drops and saliva. I also want to see the character move violently there is double vision effect, like on the chest and hip. There is a scene with a clock on 3 panels, this is my personal opinion but for me it would have been better to see the books knock over and the table flipped like it was hit by an earthquake. I was also disappointed you drew a girl with a singlet and hot pant again. If you're going to draw this please add some stripe, slogan or some pattern or image. It feels very plain and cheap. The same with the male, need more style than a plain white t-shirt. I was hoping for a seifuku since you had it in your sample model while drawing. That's my thought on the samples maybe I'm missing a lot of context but that's how I see your doujin before reading.