ES!! - Dawning Angels - fine-O [KAM/ROM/ENG]

t/n: translation was done by me & liberties were taken
SONG DETAILS
Title: Dawning Angels
Artist: fine-O／青葉 つむぎ(CV.石川 界人)、天祥院 英智(CV.緑川 光)、乱 凪砂(CV.諏訪部 順一)、巴 日和(CV.花江 夏樹)
Album: ES Idol Song Extra: Altered & fine-O
Lyrics: Saori Kodama
Compositon: Kyohei Yamamoto
Arrangement: Kyohei Yamamoto
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[@AsiaBlossoms]

Great work! I would suggest for Eichi’s color (and any other who’s color is too bright or pale, like Sora or Aira for example) to be in a deeper shade for it to be easier on the eyes. Otherwise, you did great for your first lyric video, both editing and translation wise!

[@hibikiwatawho_]

Thank you so much!!! I’ll definitely keep that in mind for next time!! 🥰

[@senior_pouchino]

1:34 girls generation🥰

[@gblaze3259]

Reminds me of persona 5!