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  • @fredericocuerdo1205
    @fredericocuerdo1205 5 років тому +31

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  • @faithavila5046
    @faithavila5046 5 років тому +49

    Wow this actually helped me a lot.
    I have a news writing contest tomorrow and this helped a lot.
    Well.....thank you and wish me luck😊

  • @stephen-zu7nl
    @stephen-zu7nl 4 роки тому +2

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  • @noelmayol2490
    @noelmayol2490 5 років тому +13

    I'm a news journalist I watched this so I can know, BTW thanks 😊👍!

  • @biancapuzon8443
    @biancapuzon8443 4 роки тому +3

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  • @uwy6110
    @uwy6110 4 роки тому +4

    It's been a while since my last training and competition.Im competing so I'll watch this the information is very clear thanks

  • @abdulmalekalem3455
    @abdulmalekalem3455 4 роки тому +1

    The Bob Ross of English! Thank you kind sir for this video, as it helped me alot in my English Journalism Essay!

  • @drivhenaltre2637
    @drivhenaltre2637 3 роки тому +2

    Im actually a feature writer but my teacher needed me to write a news article for our school paper cuz she can't contact our news guy so this helped

  • @jaggergege7791
    @jaggergege7791 6 років тому +5

    Thank you this will help me with my Historical investigation essay. Really appreciate you taking the time to do this video.

  • @MrKebry
    @MrKebry 3 роки тому +3

    This man is great at explaining.

  • @anamiealfonso6963
    @anamiealfonso6963 4 роки тому +3

    thanks sir!..This is a good presentation that we are needing in class.

  • @mastkwestani8387
    @mastkwestani8387 7 років тому +13

    You helped me so much I got 90% on my news letter report test

  • @CanCanElf16
    @CanCanElf16 5 років тому +3

    Thank you so much for creating this video! I'm working on my news writing skills.

  • @kristy2716
    @kristy2716 3 роки тому +3

    Great Job!!!! Really helped me with my assement! Thank you again, Sir!

  • @johnnyragadoo2414
    @johnnyragadoo2414 3 роки тому +8

    Nice advice. The old-schooler in me wants to point out the lead is actually the lede, but that looks confusing to the modern eye.
    - 30 -

    • @VelocityWriting
      @VelocityWriting  3 роки тому +3

      I'm with you 100%. I'm torn every time I write it. We know that "lede" is the proper professional term today. However, when I use it, people criticize equally and insist it is "lead."
      You have to keep in mind that "lede" only came into the language in the 1970s and didn't show up in dictionaries until 2008. "Old school" is thus a relative term. www.merriam-webster.com/words-at-play/bury-the-lede-versus-lead
      Software like Word and other major writing tools still mark "lede" as a misspelled word. In recent years I have started referring to it as the "hook" because it defines the function of the first paragraph.

  • @lfdeftonesbae86
    @lfdeftonesbae86 5 років тому +12

    Thanks for the tips i love your explanation and voice and later will be my journalism contest

  • @Faithspective
    @Faithspective 3 роки тому

    Thank you for creating this video. I will show it to our incoming student writers this semester as we prepare for the Spring issue of our periodical.

  • @kimchi8361
    @kimchi8361 4 роки тому +1

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    @oofinggoofingflaming00fs92 5 років тому +3

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    Needed this for my assignment.

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    @nyachiangboldieu6299 3 роки тому +5

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  • @brandonliu777
    @brandonliu777 2 роки тому +6

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    @annisaandriana9179 5 років тому

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  • @franceslandicho5135
    @franceslandicho5135 5 років тому +1

    I am a News paper school journalist, I watched this video to improve my skills.

    • @VelocityWriting
      @VelocityWriting  5 років тому +2

      Thank you for watching. Journalism is an important career and I hope you pursue it.

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    @ngunitv 3 роки тому +6

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  • @rhobot75
    @rhobot75 4 роки тому +1

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    @proahnaf6393 2 роки тому

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    @cesaraugustocavazzolajunio7438 3 роки тому +5

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    @naimanawaz7007 7 років тому +9

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    @deep_jaybabasahebstudio754 6 років тому +5

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    @weeeams831 5 років тому +2

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    @makuojinanwa 5 років тому +6

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  • @horacesiu
    @horacesiu 2 роки тому +3

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    @sbarr10 5 років тому +1

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  • @BOCETOMEDIA
    @BOCETOMEDIA 6 років тому +1

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  • @noahrigney549
    @noahrigney549 3 роки тому +3

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    @jennifersaraceno2308 6 років тому +1

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    @mint_feather7446 6 років тому +2

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  • @dipuomalema95
    @dipuomalema95 6 років тому +2

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  • @fadis903
    @fadis903 6 років тому +4

    Very useful for my upcoming Basic News Exam , 102 , scheduled for tomorrow. I got it simple and precised. Thank you!

  • @daniellahopkins7976
    @daniellahopkins7976 4 роки тому +1

    this helped thank u!

  • @bluemoon3726
    @bluemoon3726 2 роки тому +2

    Does the who? What? When? How can be written in different order and also after writing those, do I need to add a sentence

  • @ROCEMPOWERMENT
    @ROCEMPOWERMENT 7 років тому +3

    great video thank you

  • @uzsid0880
    @uzsid0880 6 років тому +3

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  • @imdsaladondfreeza1301
    @imdsaladondfreeza1301 2 роки тому +1

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  • @thisisaprettylongname
    @thisisaprettylongname 5 років тому

    Are news story’s and newspaper 📰 report the same

  • @amrita6267
    @amrita6267 4 роки тому +1

    What do you write in the first paragraph to make it catchy

    • @VelocityWriting
      @VelocityWriting  4 роки тому

      I offer some tips that apply to all writers (book authors and bloggers) here. velocitywriting.com/write-blog-posts-that-influence-people/#2_Your_Introduction

  • @DuaneHHLyon
    @DuaneHHLyon 4 роки тому

    Thank you!

  • @vhannealcala8155
    @vhannealcala8155 6 років тому +2

    Hi may i ask a question why we cant use I in making a news report

    • @VelocityWriting
      @VelocityWriting  6 років тому +4

      Historically, news reporting has been objective. The news person did not inject themselves or their views into the story. News people reported facts and readers, listeners or viewers came to their own conclusions. The news person was the unbiased observer who just "reported" the facts of the situation, so there was never a reason for them to use the personal pronoun, "I."
      Sadly, this has changed in the last few years, and, as a former journalist, I think it is a bad thing. Objective reporting has been replaced by subjective commentary. Commentary on the news used to be relegated to the Editorial (Opinion) Page. No longer. Every reporter seems to be a pundit now, and that damages journalism. Reporters are not providing the facts for us to evaluate, they are feeding us their ideology and bias.
      Anytime the reporter (or the news agency) becomes the story, rather than reporting the story, then you have journalistic corruption in my view.

    • @jaggergege7791
      @jaggergege7791 6 років тому +3

      "I" turns the report into a bias opinion or personal opinion on the subject you're writing about

  • @SamaAhmed-nx9tt
    @SamaAhmed-nx9tt 3 роки тому +1

    Best video🙂🙃

  • @FilmNFire
    @FilmNFire 2 роки тому +1

    Great! Thanks!!

  • @Islamosophia2024
    @Islamosophia2024 5 років тому +1

    You are amazing. Thank you.

  • @drbandanagaurav
    @drbandanagaurav 5 років тому

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  • @qine6559
    @qine6559 4 роки тому

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  • @venketrithvik9167
    @venketrithvik9167 4 роки тому +1

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  • @runbabyrun1203
    @runbabyrun1203 Рік тому

    thanks for the information i am making a story report

  • @ainamaesebarios2388
    @ainamaesebarios2388 5 років тому

    Thanks for the information.

  • @dizuko3241
    @dizuko3241 2 роки тому +1

    May I ask if news writing is much better than editorial writing?

    • @VelocityWriting
      @VelocityWriting  2 роки тому +5

      Better? Historically, they have been considered two completely different types of writing. News writing is an objective report. It provides the the "who, what, and when" of an event, and the reader draws his or her conclusions from these objective facts.
      Editorial writing is subjective, not objective. The writer is interpreting the news for the reader. The writer filters it though their own ideological lens. The writer is saying the reader in incapable of thinking independently, and most be told what to think. This approach has contributed to the sharp polarization of views in recent times.
      There is a place for news (the front page) and there is a place for opinion (the editorial page). However, when news and commentary are mixed, as we too often see today, it is nothing more than propaganda.

  • @MsrMcTwisted
    @MsrMcTwisted 4 роки тому

    Thank u this helped me with writing my essay for class

    • @VelocityWriting
      @VelocityWriting  4 роки тому

      I'm happy I could be of service to you. Good luck!

  • @aprilmauricio9975
    @aprilmauricio9975 6 років тому +1

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  • @ambertilley2368
    @ambertilley2368 5 років тому

    Excellent!

  • @LiveIt-YouRLife
    @LiveIt-YouRLife 2 роки тому +1

    thank you very much for all the tips sir!

  • @chadmolligan5418
    @chadmolligan5418 4 роки тому +1

    Thanks

    • @VelocityWriting
      @VelocityWriting  4 роки тому +1

      I'm glad this was helpful to you and that you took a moment to say so. A word of thanks now and then is appreciated.

  • @womenwhorockwithsuccessmed2519
    @womenwhorockwithsuccessmed2519 4 роки тому

    Great Tutorial

  • @ngengenancy3354
    @ngengenancy3354 2 роки тому +3

    Can a shy/introverted person be a good journalist??

    • @VelocityWriting
      @VelocityWriting  2 роки тому +20

      Being shy and introverted are not good characteristics for any job where you deal with people. And journalists always take the lead in engaging with people. Being shy and introverted is a learned behavior. Yet, in reality, It does not protect you from anything.
      I was shy until I was a teenager, but learned some communication skills. Later, I served as a journalist in 31 different countries interviewing maybe a thousand people over the years.
      You can and should unlearn your bad social skills. View YT videos on "How to start a conversation," practice those skills for three weeks with new people, and you'll have a new outlook on life. You can do it!

    • @ngengenancy3354
      @ngengenancy3354 2 роки тому +1

      @@VelocityWriting Thank you very much

  • @imanidlamini8499
    @imanidlamini8499 6 років тому +5

    Great explaining ☺ thank you Sir

  • @Doddydzia
    @Doddydzia 5 років тому

    Thank you for the tips and the explanation, it is help me to develop a news..salam hormat dari Indonesia

  • @taniapriyam3529
    @taniapriyam3529 7 років тому +3

    Thank sir

  • @jeskvell3254
    @jeskvell3254 3 роки тому +1

    thank you so much, sir

  • @ohwoavwosemine6532
    @ohwoavwosemine6532 2 роки тому

    Thanks sir

  • @zachsastrillas6072
    @zachsastrillas6072 6 років тому +1

    Thank You Sir .. It helps me a lot 😊

  • @sharannbray6513
    @sharannbray6513 3 роки тому +3

    Just do the opposite as CNN and you can’t fail!

  • @franpolyphemus4496
    @franpolyphemus4496 4 роки тому +1

    The angle you take in writing the article is influenced by your personal biases. For me, I don't think saying that news articles merely state the fact is entirely correct. Our biases must always tend towards the people and the common good.

    • @VelocityWriting
      @VelocityWriting  4 роки тому +3

      Sorry, Fran, as a journalist in past years who covered stories in over 30 countries, I completely reject your perspective. I hope people who read what you said will reject it too. What you say is unethical in my experience.
      News is an objective, unbiased reporting of facts. Readers/viewers/listeners independently make up their mind based on the facts, not the tainted bias injected by a reporter. Opinion belongs on the Editorial Page, never the news page or newscast. Biased news reporting is just propaganda. Propaganda NEVER serves the common good.