Fantasy Author Reacts to "Our Drawings"... What Went Wrong?

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  • @RinUsamaki
    @RinUsamaki 14 годин тому +8

    I can feel you melting as time goes by lol the brain-rot is taking hold!
    I did only watch through the whole vid because of your commentary, you made it bearable. Thanks for the hard work ^ ^

  • @hyliaphora-cecropia
    @hyliaphora-cecropia 20 годин тому +21

    I’m only halfway through this so far (listening to it while I draw funnily enough), but this is easily the most hilarious reaction to this film I’ve seen. Your commitment to analysis over just breaking down and making fun of it is admirable lmao

  • @coraz6825
    @coraz6825 22 години тому +14

    the perfect video to listen to for the last two hours of my shift 🥰

  • @iremainteague5653
    @iremainteague5653 День тому +26

    This is hurting my brain. I want to watch the whole video, but im exhausted after 30 minutes. This is wild.

  • @MakiaLink
    @MakiaLink 22 години тому +8

    I’ve got the worst headache after watching this with you, lol! It was definitely tough to sit through, but I learned a lot from both you and the film. It really shows the importance for writers to avoid letting personal messages come across as preachy, and the value of cutting scenes that might be personally meaningful to the writer but don’t ultimately serve the plot. I'd love to see you review/ give your insights of writing of the first episode of Avatar the Last Airbender in setting up your world, introducing characters, and starting the plot.

    • @JacobPenrodWrites
      @JacobPenrodWrites  21 годину тому +8

      OH I WOULD LOVE TO DO THAT! Ahhhh thats such an exciting idea!

  • @kevincarter4782
    @kevincarter4782 17 годин тому +4

    Found you because of Epic. Stayed because I really enjoy your work. Thanks for the fun content!

  • @marmar8392
    @marmar8392 День тому +23

    THIS IS WHERE BEATBOXING PUPPY CAMES FROM????? I THOUGTH IT WAS JUST A RANDOM VIDEO 😭😭😭

  • @fujisan-ji4567
    @fujisan-ji4567 День тому +13

    30++ minutes in and I'm having a great time watching you react. Your expression during the beatbox puppy scene got me laughing 😂😂

  • @coraz6825
    @coraz6825 22 години тому +4

    I appreciate the dedication to respecting the creators of the things you’re reacting to

  • @murloc_kingoxii4410
    @murloc_kingoxii4410 День тому +12

    A Serious analysis of films with dubious quality is just what i needed in my Life, thank you very much, hope you do more in the future with other bad movies lol

  • @EVH596
    @EVH596 18 годин тому +5

    Yeah this movie is certainly an…experience to say the least. I’m so sorry this won the poll 😆
    Also, would you ever consider analyzing songs by Yaelokre? The artist created a fictional world called Meadowlark in which they take place, with different characters and deities
    Their songs are chalk full of metaphors and imagery and I’d love to hear what you make of the lyrics and storytelling

    • @JacobPenrodWrites
      @JacobPenrodWrites  18 годин тому

      @@EVH596 I’ve never even heard of Yarlokre, but that sounds so interesting! Where is a good starting place?

  • @FlyMeUpSoHigh
    @FlyMeUpSoHigh День тому +3

    I feel like I'm going insane, but that beatboxing puppy is such a long scene I love it.
    "Oh thank God my kids are crying" 😂😂😂
    I'm going insane.

  • @madelinebogle7475
    @madelinebogle7475 17 годин тому +3

    My little brother has been having a great time listening to you talk about story structure. He is obsessed with Cats, the musical. The old one on VHS. And he keeps talking about all the rules you establish, and how many Cats breaks lmao

    • @JacobPenrodWrites
      @JacobPenrodWrites  16 годин тому +2

      I have never checked it out, but it’s on my list now! I am always fascinated by how stories play with rules. Writing rules are funny because they are both free to break and also exist there for a reason. But it’s so satisfying when something pulls it off well

    • @madelinebogle7475
      @madelinebogle7475 16 годин тому +1

      @ my little brother would be thrilled to see a video about his favorite musical, (if you take laid requests, I’d definitely send you whatever youd feel to be fair for that) he thinks your analysis is the coolest thing since sliced bread, lol

    • @JacobPenrodWrites
      @JacobPenrodWrites  16 годин тому +1

      @@madelinebogle7475I can at least commit to a few songs! Probably after I finish Hamilton. :) Would he be interested in an old vs new where I explore how the new Cats movie and old movie handle things differently (and why one is so hated) or just keeping things to the old movie? I also might have to work with animatics depending on how copyright claim is with the musical

    • @madelinebogle7475
      @madelinebogle7475 16 годин тому +1

      @@JacobPenrodWrites He would love you to see act 1 and tell us what you think of it. He calls it a “fever dream”. Apparently it’s his favorite! And while 1998 is his favorite, he wouldn’t mind seeing comparisons between the two movies, if that’s something you think you’d find enjoyable :)

    • @JacobPenrodWrites
      @JacobPenrodWrites  16 годин тому

      @ noted!

  • @MulletMonk
    @MulletMonk День тому +4

    Im having a blast at the 12 minute mark.
    Im an hour in now. I laughed maniacally when you mentioned it being midnight there.
    The villain copying his monologue was horrendous.
    Feels like having a scene with the teacher in the school could have been good.

    • @MulletMonk
      @MulletMonk 23 години тому +1

      Ok I’m fisnished well thanks for the watch.
      Biggest issues I had narratively are the insane amount of redundant and conflicting back stories, it felt like he had the restart the project a few times and refused not to use the animations and performances he had already made.
      We needed a scene establishing the art teacher, and the students.
      Also more beatboxing dog less no sailor.

    • @JacobPenrodWrites
      @JacobPenrodWrites  19 годин тому +1

      @@MulletMonk that’s EXACTLY what it feels like! Well said!

  • @jdvred9210
    @jdvred9210 День тому +7

    BEATBOXING PUPPY‼️🗣️🔥🔥

  • @hyliaphora-cecropia
    @hyliaphora-cecropia 20 годин тому +3

    "I HAVE MORE ART DEGREES THAN YOU CAN EVEN IMAGINE."

  • @tigerred1298
    @tigerred1298 23 години тому +3

    I have no evidence to support this, but it feels like this was meant to be a show with multiple episodes but at some point they realized that was unachievable. But they still had all this footage from different episodes already made so tried to splice it together into one movie.

  • @IRLghostyTrickster
    @IRLghostyTrickster День тому +4

    Beatboxing puppy is actually the best

  • @frauelpeh1105
    @frauelpeh1105 День тому +6

    i've never heard of that movie and 15 minutes into your video - i'm here for the ride and i honestly wanna stick with it for the whole thing just because this is so ridiculous

    • @frauelpeh1105
      @frauelpeh1105 7 годин тому

      yes I had to take a break and come back today/ the next day

  • @backpack_hermit25
    @backpack_hermit25 День тому +11

    Oh god I had the biggest traumatic flashback… as awful as this movie is… beatboxing puppy is the greatest thing made in this lifetime. I felt my brain rotting from the story changes… just… what..

  • @lyn_cei
    @lyn_cei 23 години тому +2

    "as long as they dont start monologuing"

  • @Howlssss
    @Howlssss День тому +5

    BEATBOXING PUPPY

  • @Kase_K
    @Kase_K 2 години тому

    I am begging you to make "We've got a theme, baby" your catchphrase.

  • @that_morrigan6184
    @that_morrigan6184 50 хвилин тому

    Some random guy in Colorado with a sick kid, watching this movie at midnight - who will be showing this video to his mother on her deathbed - has more establishment, narrative cohesion, character arc and internal consistency than the video he's watching.
    Tonal whiplash, the movie! It has more art degrees than you can even imagine

    • @that_morrigan6184
      @that_morrigan6184 46 хвилин тому

      Also some very salient points at the end there!

  • @freshcupofangst
    @freshcupofangst 19 годин тому +2

    35:41 Genuinely what did she MEAN by this??? How are bodybuilders cheaters just because they're "unnatural'? They still put in WORK to look the way they do.
    This movie is going to be the end of me.

  • @ElsaLouiseSinger
    @ElsaLouiseSinger 15 годин тому

    NO WAY, THAT'S WHERE THE BEAT BOXING PUPPY COMES FROM??

  • @Smootiful
    @Smootiful День тому +2

    I wish we could offer you some retro-active Excedrin and a neck-brace. And the "Oh thank God, my kids are crying...I'm gonna take a break" at 1:20:14? 😂

  • @lyn_cei
    @lyn_cei День тому +3

    for the record i am seeing this and i can tell youre not okay.
    immediately afterwards the weird tricorne hat baby has a stroke halfway through his dialogue

  • @that_morrigan6184
    @that_morrigan6184 Годину тому

    We are here to learn, from Moisty!

  • @SoulonFire13
    @SoulonFire13 22 години тому

    Decided to listen to this while working, and boy oh boy the movie is such a hard listen ajdudndjfjjfjdjjejdjfjf.
    Am gonna stay strong for the analysis and writing advice 😤

  • @nitrogenfixed
    @nitrogenfixed 30 хвилин тому

    This video is so damn funny lmao
    Taking it seriously! I think the animation is pretty solid with the context of how it was made and the fact that it's an amateur work. It seems like a passion project in terms of the visual work, so I can at least appreciate that the themes of the artist's struggle and all that feel sincere because the animation is sincere. It's badly written and structured, but I do think the people involved should continue working to improve their craft.
    Also, a lot of the dialogue lines are weirdly well-delivered imo? Like, not fabulous or anything because the stuff they were given to work with was bad, but they did their best. Even the annoying wizard was like...well, that dude was playing to the part!
    I think people who are making fun of it would have been less put off and less mocking if the film took itself and them a little more seriously. No need to pad runtime with repeated scenes or three intros. If it were just the 20 minute mark onward with some tweaks, most of it would have been...still bad, but clearly a passion project and not a baffling disconnected series of words as everyone's first impression of the film. Feeling the need to pad the runtime and include utter nonsense makes it harder to take seriously or see as a work that has something to say.
    Hope your kid is feeling better!

  • @isaiahminott
    @isaiahminott День тому +14

    Im here to suffer with you buddy

    • @JacobPenrodWrites
      @JacobPenrodWrites  День тому +7

      I had no idea what I was getting myself into lol

    • @isaiahminott
      @isaiahminott День тому

      Im 30 minutes in and i have instant regerts but ill make it through ​@@JacobPenrodWrites

  • @pelaxix
    @pelaxix День тому +3

    i give it a month until we get a Skibidi toilet react from a fantasy author perspective.

  • @mailysablubb9207
    @mailysablubb9207 День тому

    I’ve been just having you on while I was tidying up just feeling the cringe and existential crisis with ya xD but it’s fun!
    Without knocking this and on the fear that I’m overstepping I’d like to make you a little list of what I would absolutely love to see your reaction and input on!
    You’ve already started with musicals so maybe Twisted, Hamilton and six.
    I would also be over the moon with some animated series like the amazing digital circus, vox Machina or helluva boss/hazbin hotel. I would understand if you wouldn’t want the community of the latter on your channel but I’d love to hear you weigh in as there’s a lot of split opinion on the writing.

  • @freshcupofangst
    @freshcupofangst 19 годин тому +1

    I'm 15 minutes into this video, which is 2 minutes into the actual movie, and I'm trying. I'm trying so hard to treat this fairly and keep an open mind, but I'm also feeling /so/ incredibly upset by everything that's happening in this movie so far. Why did we get three different introductory monologues? Why did all of those monologues keep repeating the same exact points? Why did they abruptly change topics multiple times in each monologue? Why was the language used in said monologues so stilted and robotic? And /why/ am I still talking about the monologues? There shouldn't be /this/ much to say about them, especially not so much to *critique* right off the bat.
    edit: 21 minutes into this video now, a bit further into this movie, WHY IS THERE ANOTHER INTRO???? I'm gonna cry. I'm actually gonna cry, I don't know if I can do this.

  • @groggydoggy
    @groggydoggy День тому +2

    hell yes

  • @jessethecomet
    @jessethecomet 18 годин тому

    BEATBOXING PUPPY