Not a half-bad story but it needs a lot more fleshing out and greater detail. The moving text is laughably terrible at spelling things, and even the AI voice has flaws, especially with timing and pacing. It's kind of like listening to a middle schooler read a section from a book out loud. Keep working on this, it has potential, but it's not quite ready yet.
Not a half-bad story but it needs a lot more fleshing out and greater detail. The moving text is laughably terrible at spelling things, and even the AI voice has flaws, especially with timing and pacing. It's kind of like listening to a middle schooler read a section from a book out loud.
Keep working on this, it has potential, but it's not quite ready yet.