2 simple paraphrasing tricks - how to paraphrase ielts writing task 2
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In this video, I will show you 2 simple tricks ANYONE can use to write a band 7 IELTS introduction paragraph. These 2 tricks helped me get a Band 7 in my real test. They are super easy to use. You can master them as well.
I will use the writing task 2 questions below to show you what these 2 tricks are and how to use them.
1. Since most information about culture and history can be found on the Internet, museums are not needed anymore. Do you agree or disagree?
2. Some people think that children should be punished if they commit a crime. Other people believe that their parents are the ones that should be punished. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
"Around the world there has been increasing cultural similarities in recent times than ever before, this may be because the world is becoming more receptive to different cultures and beliefs. In my opinion this is a positive development"
There are so many similarities can be found all over the world than ever before. I think traveling is the main reason is for this and in this essay i will come up with evidence to support why this is a positive trend.
Hi, you forgot to mention "culture" in your first sentence. Also, you need to add "that": ... *that* can be found...
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In recent times, there is been a resemblance in cultures from different parts of the world.I believe this is due to advent of technologies and increase in world tourism .
It is a positive trend which would help to maintain good relationships.
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The similarities between the cultures around the world is growing more than ever before. The possible reason could be the inclination towards adopting a different culture. To my of thinking, it is a positive change.
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Hi! Lilie I've been watching your videos recently My exam is near please help me🤲. Is this paraphrase true down below
Children facing academic, social and commercial pressures. Causes and solutions
-some academic, social and commercial activities that make children feel pressure. There are some reasons why this is happening and steps to tackle them
In recent years, there has been ever increasing cultural similarities among countries relative to the past. This is probably due to the fact that people are more receptive to other cultures’ values and traditions. I hold the view that it is a good development as it will unite the world to form a more meaningful bonding.
You did a good job in terms of paraphrasing. Just delete 'relative to the past'.
There is a tendency around the world to have similarities with each other. This essay might discuss some reasons about the change and why is a positive movement to the earth.
Change the form of the verb is the best method, I have ever known.
Cultures around the world seem to become more familiar than ever before.As people travel more and more parts of the world , they get to experience about the cultural aspects of countries all over the globe. It is certainly a positive attitude since people gain more knowledge and can respect each other's religion.
Hi, "familiar" doesn't mean the same as "similar". Try "alike'.
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The akin between the cultures around the society is increasing than ever before. it is a positive development as it promote peace in the society
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Cultural similarities are becoming more evidently observed around the globe than they were before.
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Around the the world, cultures has now becomed more similar than it was before. Thank you for this video.
... have now become...
Has now become...Not becomed? Am I correct?
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In these world cultures have now become more similar than it was long ago
Cultures across the globe starting to look a like which wasn't a case. What is the reason? Do you think whether it is good or bad thing? Can we say it like that?
Nowadays, there are more alike cultures around the world than ever before. I think travelling and media play an important in this and believe it's a positive development.
It is universally accepted that the culture seems familiar in all nation nowdays .I strongly believe that it is positive change for the development
Around the globe, there are more similarities in cultural beliefs than ever before. Maybe one of the reasons is that, because of the technologies, for example, social media, we can easily adopt the cultures of other countries by watching them online. I think this is a positive development because we can transmit cultural ideas in just a few minutes of our time.
Cultural similarities are being apparent now than it was before. This has an overall positive impacts in our society, as we are becoming more inclusive and united.
Worldwide cultural activities have become almost the same than it is in the past. I personally believe this is a great change as it will bring more development and cooperation between nations.
In recent times,culture show many similarities on one another in diffrent corners of the world,because of increase in tourism,and in my opinion it is a positive sign of progress.
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Compared to the past, there are now increasing similarities among cultures in different parts of the world.
Hi, there are no errors but 'compared to' may be better than 'compared with' in this context: books.google.com/ngrams/graph?content=compared+to+the+past%2Ccompared+with+the+past%2C&year_start=1800&year_end=2019&corpus=en-2019&smoothing=3
@@LilieIELTS Yes, compared to is more appropriate. Thanks again. You're a blessing to us who are taking IELTS exam. Kudos to making brilliant videos!
@@LilieIELTS By the way, I have read somewhere that 'compared to' is used for dissimilar things while 'compared with' is used for similar things. Wishing you infinite success in your endeavors!
It is true that there is a growing number of culture in many countries' have been becoming show more similarity than ever before. I personally agree with these due to people are getting more attractive to others culture .
It is believed that the world cultures share more similarities than they used to be because of the growing of the Internet. I think this wide spread phenomenon would benefit intercultural working environment.
It is often argued that museums are not required to acquire historical as well as cultural Information as masses can get easily via internet .Co vessels,I opine that unlike places online information is way much better and I will articulate notions in forthcoming paragraphs
It seems different cultures from the world are becoming more alike than olden days.
There are many cultures around the world which seems to be more familiar with each other in recent days.
There have been more similarities than ever before in terms of cultres across the globe. I believe that this is a positive advancement
It's better to be concise. How about: globally, there have been more cultural similarities than ever before?
It is believed that culture around the globe are becoming more alike than ever before the question is, is it positive or negative development.
There are many cultures around the globe which has now become homogeneous compared to before. In my view, it's a great way of positive growth in people's thoughts.
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There is no denying the fact that there is a significant growing in the similarties among the cultures around the world. While it is commonly held belif that it is a negative trend, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider it as an unhelpful trend that may lead to negative consequenses.
Cultures of countries around the world are sharing more similarities than ever before.
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Cultures around the world are...
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Answer to the task provided:
Cultures worldwide are increasingly becoming more alike than they have ever been in the past. What's going on? What is your opinion on whether this is a good or bad change?
Compared with the past time, there are more similarities in cultures around the world.
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compared with the past (not 'the past time').......among cultures (not 'in'.....)
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Nowadays we can observe the similarities between the cultural believes around the world, which has never seen in past eras. According to my opinion it due to influence of social media and other platforms which has helped traditons to reach to everyone and it is a huge positive for humanity.
There is a growing similarities among diverse cultural values across countries
Nowadays, there are more similarities between cultures globally than there used to be. This is happening because there has been marriage between people of different cultural history leading to a blend of different cultures and traditions. This is a positive development as it reduces tribal wars.
Similarity of cultures around nations are increasing rapidly.
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Nowadays, worldwide similarity between different cultures is increasing. Globalization and rise of internet are most plausible reasons behind this prevailing phenomenon. However, in my perception it has negative consequences,in terms of loss of culture and traditions.
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All over the world, there can be seen more similarities among different cultures than ever before.
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There is an increasing cultural similarity between nations of the world. Does it work?
There are so many similarities can be found in cultural events around the world, which could not seen before.
In recent years, cultural similarities have been increasing in various countries. It is in my opinion that this is a positive development because people are beginning to accept different cultures in their regions.
Hi, "various countries" don't mean the same as "around the world". You don't need to change every single word. If you're not sure how to rewrite a phrase, it's okay to use the original wording.
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Local cultures surrounding us become more globalized and more synchronized with foreign cultures than past. is it better?
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Cultural understanding around the globe are showing vast similarities now a days ,to my view bonding with different culture can lead to better outcome in our society
Presently the cultural of around the world are becoming now more familiar than the before!!
I just try it coz m really bad at paraphrasing
Try this: cultures around the world are becoming more alike now than ever before.
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In the contemporary era,cultural similarities is widely seen in most countries of the world.The reason behind this event has several positive and negatives.This will be explained in further paragraphs
There is cultural similarity around the globe than in the past.
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Cultures among the world are becoming more similar ever before.. In my opinion there are people who are trying to adopt others culture... This is the reason for it.................. Lilie mam is there any problem?
Cultures from different Nation has become much similar than it was back then. Which is quite unbelievable because the world is very diverse.
Cultures of different nations are becoming more alike than they were previously.
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Nowadays, similarities among cultures, globally, are significant
In recent years, cultural have been changing around the world. The reason behind is that people follow there tradition. According to my view there is caused by positive growth.
Recently, there be similarities in cultural activities around the globe. This era of technology, such as internet contributes to the cultural diversity, am in support of the positivity that this has brought, by creating a bond between developed and undeveloped country.
Recently, there have been more cultural similarities around the globe.
In recent times, there seem to be increase in similarities between the cultural aspect around the world.
In recent years, there have been more similarities increasing between cultures all around the globe than ever in the past.
In my opinion, it is completely a positive development, and its reasons will be articulated in upcoming paragraphs along with the conclusion.
In recent years, there have been more similarities among cultures around the globe than ever before.
Hi lilie
It is irrefutable that these days , cultures are similar and it can be seen more common among people everwhere.This is happening for many reasons , mainly people are curious and have an interest to explore them.However,i strongly believe that seeking abd practising new culture would give a way to unite people.
An increasing similarity between cultures is witnessed these dags across the world
Hey Lilie!! Thank you so much for these tips. I hope you read my paraphrase. xoxo
There are many similarities with cultures around the world. This is happening because of the increase in migration that causes a mixture of traditions.
It is acknowledged that there will be have more similarities about cultures among the nations all around the globe than in the past.
It is said that Cultures among the globe are becoming same than ever before, in my point of view this is positive development because similar cultures lead to world connected with each other and people understanding norms well if they will go to foreign countries.
... are becoming MORE ALIKE than....
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Lol, I paraphrased the question exactly like you. Guess I was influenced too much 😵💫
Compared to the past, there are more and more similarities between the worldwide cultures. This may be due to the growths of tourism and the internet. I believe this is a positive sign since it strengthen the bonds between people.
There is a similarity of cultures across the world which has become highly common than ever before.
Someone tell me if that's correct
There is a change in culture which become much more similar around the world.
As the whole world is changing into a small global village, there seems to be more similarity in culture all around the world than it was before
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I don't think u need the first clause.
All over the world, cultures have become more similar than ever before.
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Cultural similarities all over the world are increasing each day.
It is my first time paraphrasing a sentence and I really need your opinion about it. Moreover, thank you for this video.
Perhaps, not "each day": Cultural similarities all over the world have been increasing.
There is a belief that cultural activities are trending to be the same than before. I think this development is occurring because people are imitating other cultures.
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Nowadays, cultures all over the world are become more similar than never before.The reason behind this event has several postive and negative.
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It has recently been observed that there is a similarity of cultures across the globe.I believe fast modes of travel and internet are the two predominant factors behind the cultural homogeneity and certainly it is a negative development as it will adversely affect the tourism and economy of many nations.
It is a fact that recently we have been seeing more similarities than ever before among cultures. There are many reasons for this, mainly globalisation. I think this is a negative development for traditions of a culture but a positive one for the unity of humanity
we have been seeing more similarities among world cultures than ever before
In recent years, cultural similarity has been increasingly common all over the globe. This essay will discuss the primary reasons for this trends and state the writer’s opinions about beneficial and detrimental impacts on these belief-- “ Here is my paraphrash of this introduction. Hope it helps a little 😅
Similarity of cultures increase more and more these days than in the past.
'Cultural similarities' is better.
In recent years , there are so many similarities in cultural activities throughout the world. In my personal view this consequences creating good relationship among the people world wide.
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Hi, 'so many' and 'cultural activities' are not accurate paraphrases. There are INCREASING/MORE AND MORE similarities AMONG WORLD CULTURES. Hope it helps.
in the contemporary era, the cultural activitis are being alike between the countries from different part of world.
Some people believe that cultures worldwide are becoming increasingly similar, and they question the reasons behind this trend. They also debate whether this cultural convergence is a positive or negative development.
A similar culture is shared globally now unlike the past.
Similar cultures are ...
Is my approach an acceptable way of paraphrasing the statement given in the video ?
There are notable simlarities among cultures around the globe unlike any previous time.
It can be seen that similar culture becoming more common in many counties than before.
... similar cultureS ARE becoming ...
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there is much similarities between cultures over the world than before
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There *are increasing similarities among* cultures...
It is certainly true that world wide there are a number of similarities with regard to culture now than ever before.
1) There are lots of comperative Cultural activities becoming around the Universe than ever before.
2) There had been ever before lost of comperative cultural activities replacing around the Universe.
In the contemporary world, the culture widespread similarity becoming more common than in the ancient times
In the present days the cultural similarities are more than the past days. The reason for this is the people's invention of technology. It is positive for those who love to be the same or similar but for the people who seek and want a variety of spices in their life will take it negatively.
Nowadays, the similarity of cultures can be found around the world than it used to be in past times.
Nowadays people are following similar culture throughout the world.what may be the cause?whether this change is causing positive or negative impact?
In this modern era, it is considered that, culture and history promotes more information and finding on the internet Therefore, museums are not highly necessary, to gain knowledge.
A mixture of cultures is becoming a phenomenon nowadays. One reason is due to migration which I believe will have a positive impact on everybody.
Similarities between cultures of the world are increasing than ever before.
Globalization could be the main reason behind this trend since it is the key factor at minimizing the distance between countries. In my opinion, i think it is a positive development because it could bring unity within the people around the globe.
To use "than", you need to add "more". There are increasingly MORE similarities among world cultures THAN ever before.
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It is more often argued that similarities in different cultures are increasing at an alarming rate but in my opinion it is a positive development as advanced technology is getting introduced like Robotics, Machine Learning, Artificial Intelligence, Digital Banking etc. With this development it has changed the life of everyone. Nowadays with the help of AI you can operate a machinery while sitting at your home, you can transfer your money by a single click from your cell phone etc…
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At the present time, there is a significant increment in cultural similarities more than ever before between different countries on the planet earth.
It is currently still becoming more common in cultural stereotypes comparing to previous one.
In the contemporary era, people are being habitual to adopt numerous culture than the past. This positive aspect show the similarity in culture of different countries which help to maintain good bonding between develop and development countries.
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Nowadays technology made a lot easier too access over the pictures of historical and cultural sites. While, deu to high cost and difficulty to get tickets museum is losing its popularity. I partially agree with this statement and provide my own relevant example.
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Today there is a huge similarity between countries and it is more developing compare to the past!❤
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There are more similarities among world cultures today compared to the past.
There will be increasing more similarities among cultures in the future all over the world than past
We can pharaphase like using in the future?