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Sorry about the length of this one, I think SLOBS is getting buggy for some reason. But I think I have enough to give a thorough critique of this game. Great Music, Art and Systems, just some errors with text and the Battling.
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[@AlAtOMI]

Listen to... THE VOICES WITHIN! >>> blackrosemii.itch.io/the-voices-within

[@johnbonebones1940]

I really like your critiques and your acting is not too shabby.
But in my honest opinion, I think you shouldn't correct people's script when the characters are speaking to one another.
Yes your grammar is correct but one thing I've learned from reading books from pros like Steven King. They do these improper ways of using some words because that's realistic. Some people talk too fast so instead of saying 'tonight' the person will accidentally say 'today'.
As silly as it sounds. It adds to the characters when some of them don't speak perfect English.

[@AlAtOMI]

"Peoples are Peoples", as they say.