Nice story, but you really need a good proofreader ! The storyline and the beginning scenario are very good , but there are numerous errors in words used !
greetings dreamers of stories are you going to make a next chapter take dingens and all the deaths of the children to their home planet thank you for the story...
greetings dreamer of stories well well man farewell i will miss your stories...
Nice story, but you really need a good proofreader ! The storyline and the beginning scenario are very good , but there are numerous errors in words used !
This is The A-Team on AI😂
greetings dreamers of stories are you going to make a next chapter take dingens and all the deaths of the children to their home planet thank you for the story...
Glad You Liked it ❤️
Can you sort out the subtitles next?
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Don’t waste your time. …. Ridiculous