IELTS Writing Task 2 Transformation | From Band 6.5 To Band 8.0

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  • @Shamasdin22222
    @Shamasdin22222 Рік тому +11

    Mashalah your a good teacher may Allah grant you lots of more success

  • @liacross1184
    @liacross1184 Рік тому +10

    Hello ma'am! I'm from India and I took my IELTS test and got 8 overall in my first attempt. I followed your tips and got my desired results. Thank you so much and God bless you!
    Reading - 8.5
    Writing - 7
    Listening - 8.5
    Speaking - 8.5

    • @manrajmand338
      @manrajmand338 Рік тому

      Hey i have my paper tomorrow any tips ?

    • @mynganpham4199
      @mynganpham4199 Місяць тому

      OMG how could you do that? Your score's awesome!

  • @bubkubkubjkyvjh5694
    @bubkubkubjkyvjh5694 Рік тому +15

    A brilliant channel and Asiya has been my life saviour for over 6 years now. Around 5 years ago I participated in your contest for a free Lingoda access and won it, but with exams coming forward never left feedback. I aways felt guilt for not doing it, but thought that it’s too late! Now I’m preparing for IELTS with you and don’t want to miss an opportunity to say thank you for your huge work! You’re a wonderful teacher and a brilliant person🙏

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  Рік тому +4

      Wow, that was ages ago! I hope it was useful and good luck with your exam!!!

  • @babygirlfxrlife
    @babygirlfxrlife Рік тому +4

    Watched a couple of your videos and I really appreciate. I had a good band score in my writing

  • @HandrickAMBT
    @HandrickAMBT Рік тому +9

    I got a 6.5 from my previous practice test this is going to help me a lot thank you teacher!

  • @nancy8202
    @nancy8202 Рік тому +3

    So much informative. Thanks a lot.

  • @Tupibrazuka
    @Tupibrazuka Рік тому +4

    I strongly advise all of you students to purchase her course for it proved to be a necessary improvement on my preparation and certainly the decisive factor the exceptional band score that I got. Huge thanks from Brasil, Asia. 💐

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  Рік тому +2

      Thank you for much! I'm so happy to hear you've passed your exam and my courses have helped you along the way. All the best with your future endeavours!

  • @pharmclare
    @pharmclare Місяць тому

    Very helpful, thank you

  • @ДинараБейсекбаева

    A marvelous explanation,thanks a lot for giving an unsurpassed knowledge 👍🏻

  • @ahmedeltayfy717
    @ahmedeltayfy717 Рік тому +2

    Am proud of you Asia❤

  • @inspectioner_0
    @inspectioner_0 Рік тому +3

    Mam plsss i have exam on 10 make some about writing task 1 comparison between bar graphs and bar with pie chrt🙏🙏🙏🙏

  • @shriyasharma4784
    @shriyasharma4784 Рік тому

    Today on 11 august my results declared and with ur help i got 6.5 bands thanks for enlightening me

  • @eustaquiozambrano2974
    @eustaquiozambrano2974 Рік тому

    Thank you so much. Have a good Night 👍

  • @BLIND.EMOTIONS3
    @BLIND.EMOTIONS3 Рік тому +35

    Love from Nepal 🇳🇵🇳🇵🇳🇵🇳🇵

  • @NoilaAbduljalolova-lp8qq
    @NoilaAbduljalolova-lp8qq Рік тому +1

    Love from Uzbekistan😍🥰

  • @quanghungpham269
    @quanghungpham269 Рік тому +1

    I have a test in August 12th, wish me luck guys. I aim for 7.0.

  • @aromatermini
    @aromatermini Рік тому

    Its 'towards', not 'toward' in the sentence. Thank you for your great channel, Asiya.

  • @mariacamilaalzatevelasquez8893
    @mariacamilaalzatevelasquez8893 3 місяці тому

    I watched your videos and went from 6.5 to 6.0. I honestly don't know what to do

  • @Sam_Shaikh07
    @Sam_Shaikh07 Рік тому

    Thanks Mam, love from India ❤

  • @mohammadidhrisidris6856
    @mohammadidhrisidris6856 Рік тому +1

    Thank you mam 😅

  • @shruthikarimbil3651
    @shruthikarimbil3651 Рік тому +1

    Which exam should be taken for a job?? Academics or general training??

    • @Idont8225
      @Idont8225 Рік тому

      General training . Academics when you plan to study abroad

  • @JenelynPadua
    @JenelynPadua Рік тому

    Thank you ❤

  • @MuhammadAmeerHamza-sg7rc
    @MuhammadAmeerHamza-sg7rc 10 місяців тому +1

    Mam , Can we add quotes in writing task 2 ???

  • @Merey-r8x
    @Merey-r8x Рік тому

    Асия оте керемет

  • @jigneshsavaliya4703
    @jigneshsavaliya4703 2 місяці тому

    Is templates are working in computer ielts?

  • @kamran5911
    @kamran5911 Рік тому

    Mam I have a question. Is it necessary to mention the world count at the end of the essay

  • @Trendz__just
    @Trendz__just Рік тому +7

    10 August academic exam guide me please left only 2 days

  • @himanshi_26
    @himanshi_26 Рік тому +1

    👀Are you from Nepal? And all the time when I see you I always think you are Japanese 😛🌸🌷

  • @Anung2018
    @Anung2018 Рік тому

    Love from India

  • @vithukaran7452
    @vithukaran7452 Рік тому

    If we wrote essay wrong topic what about band score?

  • @kaustavchatterjee129
    @kaustavchatterjee129 3 місяці тому

    Hi Asiya. Im facing an issue when I put the timer of 40 mins and practice, I often end up writing a lot of content, means overloading the essay. Usually it becomes 440 words. Because I try to justify my statements and add sufficient examples. As a result towards the end, Im rapidly ending the essay and not getting time to proofread. Thus, resulting in lot of grammatical errors and punctuation errors. How to handle this issue?

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  3 місяці тому

      Hi! I don't remember who said this: "Sorry for the long letter. I didn't have time to make it short." The essays you see in the videos are written and then meticulously shortened to get the word count down. My suggestion is to continue working on your practice essay after your 40-minute allowance is up and shorten it. Learn how you structure arguments and what you leave out. This can help write more succinctly. Planning in more detail can help too. Good luck!

  • @Engrhashim000
    @Engrhashim000 Рік тому +1

    Your are making very good video but every time i confuse bcz there is no order for video

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  Рік тому

      That's where my step-by-step courses come alone... ;) For free lessons, you can follow the study plan here: fastrackielts.com/ielts-study-plan

  • @KyawSoeOo-w8s
    @KyawSoeOo-w8s Рік тому +1

    Hello, Miss,
    I am from Myanmar. I am trying my best to sit for the IELTS EXAM. Is there any sample essays book that you have published? If so, I just want to buy it in order to promote my writing and thinking skills. On the other hand, I want to mimic them so as to sharpen my writing skill.

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  Рік тому +2

      Hi! I have step-by-step IELTS Writing courses here learn.fastrackielts.com These courses include sample answers for each task of task, but also explanations of how to write your essays. Good luck with your exam!

  • @margoleb7906
    @margoleb7906 Рік тому

    Love youuu

  • @sandeeps5793
    @sandeeps5793 Рік тому

    My ielts trainer is asking us to add max numb of adverbs adjectives relative pronouns passive voice etc in writing
    does that actually matter? I dont think he is caring about the points mentioning in the essay

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  Рік тому

      Check out the IELTS Band Descriptors to see what examiners care about. In short, what I've said in this video ;)

    • @sandeeps5793
      @sandeeps5793 Рік тому

      @@FasTrackIELTS can i know what all will I get when I purchase your writing task 1 nd 2 course of 25$ and 18$.. will u review the essays that i write

    • @sandeeps5793
      @sandeeps5793 Рік тому

      Pls reply asiya

  • @sumedhasharma5788
    @sumedhasharma5788 Рік тому

    Hi asiya I booked my exam in October,, watching your video since long ,, hope to make good,, wish me luck 🙏

  • @rafsanayan7443
    @rafsanayan7443 Рік тому +1

    Love from Bangladesh 😘🥰🇧🇩

  • @IELTSExplorerwithEnkan
    @IELTSExplorerwithEnkan Рік тому

    👍👍

  • @suriyapriya-s
    @suriyapriya-s Рік тому +1

    Hey Asiya! Is it okay to write around 250 words for task 1 and 350 words for task 2, with a moderate usage of vocabulary?
    Certain essays need clear explanation and i feel truncating them diminishes the coherence of the paragraph.

    • @Idont8225
      @Idont8225 Рік тому

      Task one should be 150 to 180 words

    • @FasTrackIELTS
      @FasTrackIELTS  Рік тому +1

      Yes, that's fine as long as you can finish both. That's what I usually write in exam conditions

  • @anitadaniels2613
    @anitadaniels2613 Рік тому

    I’m finding it difficult on the essay type ,please can you help me .l have exam to write on Tuesday

  • @PRD-mr4uo
    @PRD-mr4uo Рік тому

    Hi

  • @tedfederox875
    @tedfederox875 8 місяців тому

    🥰🥰👏👏👏👏

  • @ronakrathod2170
    @ronakrathod2170 Рік тому

    My exam is day after tomorrow

    • @toluoyinloye707
      @toluoyinloye707 Рік тому

      All the best in your exams. Where are you writing from?

  • @Donokhonenglish
    @Donokhonenglish 11 місяців тому

    Join please

  • @ayeshanavy
    @ayeshanavy Рік тому

    Love from Bangladesh

  • @kui9993
    @kui9993 Рік тому +1

    I've got an exam tomorrow

  • @npnekrishna8
    @npnekrishna8 9 місяців тому

    🇳🇵 🇳🇵

  • @masomahjalili-qy5xc
    @masomahjalili-qy5xc Рік тому

    Is it incorrect to support our ideas with imaginary examples that don't have any base? For example, research conducted in London University showed that unemployment has increased considerably over the recent 5 years.

  • @Raufle1
    @Raufle1 Рік тому

    What should I do changes in this essay? How much band score can I get at this fluency.
    question - "
    The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
    Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
    Write at least 250 words.
    "
    my answer (322 words) - "
    Nowadays, people's health is likely to be lower in the future has become a major discussion among youth. It is argued that average standard of people's health will suffer more than this generation. Even though some believe it's rational to assume, average standard of people will improve, but I do not agree due to the fact that in recent years people's health has been degrading.
    One of the major reasons for lower health is today's common meal and lifestyle. Lately, the people's food attraction has been moving to junk food, due to which their health is suffering. Most of the youth are eating processed food at least once a day which is very unhealthy, and their parents also overlook because they're consuming it too. Considering the fact that people are becoming obese rapidly in past years, they're putting their lives to risk and there seems no stop as the charts are uniformly growing. Moreover, the prices of fast food are comparatively less than healthy and nutritious food, this is also the reason why obesity has increased significantly.
    Secondly, there has also been drastic impact on graphs of people who exercise. It has become lower than ever as young generation is more attracted to playing video games than hitting gym. Most parents aren't much aware of their children lifestyle, as they're focused on their own growth in which they sacrifice their nutritious lifestyle too.
    I believe some of the people who are arguing that people's health will become better than now, are the ones who are unaware of present situation of meal consumption. These people are less educated and also have less knowledge of health and nutrition, which makes them believe obesity is healthy.
    If we globally take a look to all the parameters regarding health, it is striking that people's health will be degraded in next generations. However, it is unclear that who's responsible for unhealthy habits, maybe, parents, society or government.
    "

  • @GauravMahara-k2j
    @GauravMahara-k2j Рік тому

    🇳🇵🇳🇵🇳🇵🇳🇵🇳🇵

  • @dark.angel22
    @dark.angel22 Рік тому

    thank you for all your tutorials. I've learned a lot and it helps me during my ielts. thank you🤍♥️

  • @Chintashil
    @Chintashil Рік тому

    Love from Bangladesh