Author you don't have to make a bonus part! It's a twoshot and the ending is so cute y'all don't get or something what a oneshot or twoshot means if the following author wants to make a bonus they will confirm it by themselves y'all shouldn't be pressurising them!!!
I really enjoyed it. You have a good writing style and the plot is good enough that if you fleshed out some of the details and improved the grammar it would make a great book. Thanks for the read!
Uniee I have a request that can you make a ff of jimin on this topic "when you die but come back as a ghost" I also have a story line (you and jimin are arguing and you left but face a accident and did in his arms and he was so depressed but after a month you come back as a ghost you meet him and get a lot because you can't touch him and he also don't but one there's happen a miracle that you became a human and but him tightly and cry like a baby he was also crying but silently because God see your both love is really strong) you can also add by yours by your skills but please make a stroy on this please I'm begging you please uniee😟 I love your ffs❤
Why......why......why.....your ffs are the best . And also i wanted to know that do your parents know that you write ffs and have a UA-cam channel. Please tell!😅😅
But here all done very fast...like they are past lovers but they talk happily and like they forgot their past like nothing happen and he love another girl and again don't care about that and quickly accept him and doing ****thing him so fastly .....friends become lovers but lovers never became friends after they break up ....I am not the story is not good but here they take all thing so fast ....they meet only 2 day but start do moans,kiss thing so fastly like they desperate want their body and have to do thing ...he literally broke up with his ex 2 before but he already saying he missed and loved her but had a gf ...but if his gf didn't a gold digger wat will he do?y always y/n will melt by him?y always agre to do all thing he said ....
Are you serious? This is just a story not a series which will go slowly baby this is just a twoshot story that's why it's fast what do you expect from just Twoshot and it's just a fanfiction not a real life story to worry about 🤷
Awwwww this is cute I need a bonus episode
yeaasss
Oh my damn!! Adding it to my most favourite ff's list 😭💜
💖💖
Author nim this was so cute😍 and yes I agree with the others we need a bonus episode😘🙏
Im veryyy happyyyy. Thank you....
Good job.
A bonus part will be very good.
Where there married &have kids.
😍😍😍😘😘😘
Author you don't have to make a bonus part! It's a twoshot and the ending is so cute y'all don't get or something what a oneshot or twoshot means if the following author wants to make a bonus they will confirm it by themselves y'all shouldn't be pressurising them!!!
The author had already confirmed she was doing a two shot in the first part
@@김채영-v3y ik! but i am talking about bonus part you don't get it?
@@Jay_2252 but did the Author say she was going make a bonus part, no, so there was no need to tell her not to make a bonus part, it's her decision.
@@김채영-v3y that's what my comment was about that she doesn't has to make a bonus part aghh
@@Jay_2252 ok fine, but why are you so tensed up about my comment??
I really enjoyed it. You have a good writing style and the plot is good enough that if you fleshed out some of the details and improved the grammar it would make a great book. Thanks for the read!
Another masterpiece keep up the good work looking forward to your ffs love you so much ❤❤❤❤❤❤💜💜💜💜💜💜
I love you so much author, i am head over heels for you and your ffs , what can I say it's outstanding asusual i love ittttttttttttttt 💜💜😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
Thank you ☺️
@@lovelyjams95 wels , keep it up 😄😄😄😄💜😄💜😄
BROOO ITS AMAZING 😭💜
wow i hv no words to say i luv it
Uniee I have a request that can you make a ff of jimin on this topic "when you die but come back as a ghost" I also have a story line (you and jimin are arguing and you left but face a accident and did in his arms and he was so depressed but after a month you come back as a ghost you meet him and get a lot because you can't touch him and he also don't but one there's happen a miracle that you became a human and but him tightly and cry like a baby he was also crying but silently because God see your both love is really strong) you can also add by yours by your skills but please make a stroy on this please I'm begging you please uniee😟 I love your ffs❤
Bonus part plsssssssss🙏🙏🙏
Aww...such a cute story🥺😘😘💜💜💜
Btw I love this one👍💜
So freaking good
First 💜can't wait to watch it
did hwasa and the others heard them lol😉😉
Finally!!!!💜
Very nice please make a bonus part
Its a masterpiece
Its was soooooo good!!!
Can you make a bonus if u are free?
Like them after few years and getting married and having kids?
I am free but can't make bonus part 😅 I'm sorry
@@lovelyjams95 its totally okay dw 💜💜💜💜
@@RakeshKumar-cx9mo huh?
Youre the best in ff ❤️❤️❤️
Why......why......why.....your ffs are the best .
And also i wanted to know that do your parents know that you write ffs and have a UA-cam channel. Please tell!😅😅
Bonus!!!!!!!
FIRST UWU 🐥✨
omggg iloveit.
Okay but whats the reason behind their breakup??
fighting and arguments
Unnie i love ot
First 💜💜
But here all done very fast...like they are past lovers but they talk happily and like they forgot their past like nothing happen and he love another girl and again don't care about that and quickly accept him and doing ****thing him so fastly .....friends become lovers but lovers never became friends after they break up ....I am not the story is not good but here they take all thing so fast ....they meet only 2 day but start do moans,kiss thing so fastly like they desperate want their body and have to do thing ...he literally broke up with his ex 2 before but he already saying he missed and loved her but had a gf ...but if his gf didn't a gold digger wat will he do?y always y/n will melt by him?y always agre to do all thing he said ....
Are you serious? This is just a story not a series which will go slowly baby this is just a twoshot story that's why it's fast what do you expect from just Twoshot and it's just a fanfiction not a real life story to worry about 🤷
@@lovelyjams95 author I am not saying this is worst ..even in one shots maybe u can refer months pass or years but ............
Yes I know but the point is I don't wanted to I wanted them do it fast lol