i thought he's willing to change for yn but even after yn was hurt bcuz of the bet, he accepted yet another bet/dare,to act like someone's bf?? and he didnt even do something to prove his feelings?he needs a lil more punishment lol pls pt 2 but still happy ending. i wanna see him proving himself that he deserves yn
I'm sorry to say this but I don't like this ff and I hope you will re-write it or make bonus part where Y/n isn't so pathetic and have self-respect and where Jimin will really regret and suffer. After Y/n find out that she was just a bet I trough that Jimin really love her, that he will change and try to prove his love for her but what he did? He accepted another dare and had girlfriend in front of Y/n. It wasn't enough how much he hurted her so he did that to hurt her more?? If he really loved Y/n why the f*ck he would accept to be someone's boyfriend and hurt Y/n even more by seeing all of that? With his behavior I don't think he truly love Y/n, for him everything is just a game. Even when he took her book and called her to get it, it was in playfull, teasing way without any guiltiness, like he never did anything bad to her.
I agree, just another ff with pathetic Y/N. It's past time for people to understand that even though it's fiction, it still has an impact on the minors in our fandom or simply the person who reads this and is unable to understand some things and are naive.
I really appreciate your thoughts. It was very easy going.I didn't felt anything like love by Jimin's side. Also he wasn't even guilty as he was supposed to be.
He needed to feel and show true empathy for the damage done. Suffering isn’t the point, but rather a willingness and desire to change himself to be a loving equal partner. He comes across as narcissistic, acting to stroke his ego. What did he do support/love/appreciate her? Did he deeply regret his stupidity or just do it again? Hannah is pissed and would look to strike back against Yn.
Well I am gonna be honest....I didn't like jimin's character at all...the way he was trying to be close to yn...the way he touched her body(if i was in her place I would surely slap him right there & insult him) the way he intered her house without permission is way too much for me to be very honest. And he used yn's feelings in a very dirty way...he only realized that when she told him how lonely she was ,how much she loved him & he was her only family.. & then she knew about the bet & maybe avoided him for 2 weeks...I thought he would atleast apologise and regret & ask for forgiveness & try to prove himself for her but no....he went for another bet & dated some random girl infront of her eyes....what a shame...if he truly loved her he would never do that again or hurt her....but here comes pathetic yn again....LIKE BRUH I DON'T MEAN ANY HATE OR SOMETHING I REALLY LOVE AUTHOR AND HER WORK BUT BRO ARE U FOR REAL? EVEN IF IT'S A FF THERE ARE MANY YOUNG ARMY GIRLS HERE WHO WOULD BE AFFECTED BY THIS AND MAYBE DO THE SAME THING (I MEAN FORGIVING HIM ALREADY) & ALSO HAVE NO EXPERIENCE ABOUT THE WHOLE THING...THIS ISN'T RIGHT. Even if he is my fav Idol or someone whom I love like crazy I can't just forgive him like that....I can't...my self respect is above all & he just broke my trust & I am never gonna allow him to do that again...let karma hits him very hard when someday a girl will play with his heart & manipulate him the same way...only then he will realize how bad it is to play with someone's feelings...& the worst part was how he told her to get her book like bro WTH?? TELLING HER "LOOKING FOR THIS??" AND RUNNING TO HIS ROOM ONLY TO TRAP HER LIKE THIS?? I WOULD NEVER DO THAT EVEN IF HE HAD A VERY IMPO. THING ABOUT ME. This isn't how u treat a girl whom u already played with...this isn't how u show her that u r truly sorry...first prove her that u r a real man not an a$$hole who plays with girls & throws them afterwords. Even if she wants to forgive him give him a great punishment MAKE HIM SUFFER UGH. I am sorry for this long comment but I couldn't control myself anymore... Author I suggest you to think about it and maybe re-write the ff again if u want... I am sorry again.
How can anyone call this ending a masterpiece, bro? Are people truly this gullible, or do they simply accept anything in the name of their idol? First and foremost, if he truly loved her, why did he accept another bet? What could be the justification for this? Where did he prove that he loved Y/N? How can betting be more important to you than the person you love? Please don't do anything in the name of fiction. You could've at least made him prove himself and be a better version of himself instead of Y/N just giving into his stupid apology.
@@btstaetae5221 I'm chill don't worry And where is the hate? I can only see myself stating my opinion. That's why I used "could've" instead of "should've". I never said anything to the author. I said something about the people who liked that ending. For the author, I used please. The comment section is for opinions and criticism. I respect your perspective and concern. I don't want to continue this discussion, so please respect my perspective as well. Peace!
I felt like I was reading my own story... I'm an only child and felt so lonely and not many friends but had a childhood friend and had a small crush on him and suddenly one day he asked me out I was so happy but I he just used me. And at the end left with all the memories of us that are bittersweet.
I hope you're better without him. If you feel upset remember that sometimes good things falls apart but that means that better things can fall together. *I make no sense but I hope you're overall alright*
I'm for it too, but I'd like to see him officially together during school time in front of students who give bad talkers and YN's behaviors seem good to him. The way jimin bumped into her and said in accepted words. "like be mine" and be my official" give me goosebumps inside of me hearing him say that.loll part2 please s'ils vous plaît 제발
CAN Y'ALL JUST STOP? It's just a fan fiction you don't have to take it seriously just watch it as a fictional characters and story only also it's a oneshot so freaking stop asking for bonus alright
Author you are so good in jimin ff please make jimin ff movie with happy ending plzzzzzzzzzzzz and please anyone if you don't like it than don't write hate comment and don't hate author plz and don't called it trash don't take it seriously this is just a fanfiction author you are great I am your new subscriber 💜♥️
Wow!!! I absolutely loved this FF Unnie!!!! You come up with so many creative scenarios and stories your the best author Unnie!!! Also can you please try to make a part 2 Unnie cause I really loved this FF!! Saranghae and Borahae Unnie!!!😊☺🤗😘😍🥰💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
Unnie~ I am big fan of your work. If it's possible for you. can I collab with you in oneshot? Please unnie ... but it's okay if it's not comfortable with you. Please reply to my comment! thank you. Love you unnie keep going~
first please pin
i thought he's willing to change for yn but even after yn was hurt bcuz of the bet, he accepted yet another bet/dare,to act like someone's bf?? and he didnt even do something to prove his feelings?he needs a lil more punishment lol pls pt 2 but still happy ending. i wanna see him proving himself that he deserves yn
i agreed
I agree
Not being rude but it's a oneshot
I agree
I too agree;):)
I didn't like that she forgave him way too fast. She should have let him suffer a bit... Also I wanted to know what was in that paper....
Me too i also want to know that what is in that paper 🤣
I'm sorry to say this but I don't like this ff and I hope you will re-write it or make bonus part where Y/n isn't so pathetic and have self-respect and where Jimin will really regret and suffer. After Y/n find out that she was just a bet I trough that Jimin really love her, that he will change and try to prove his love for her but what he did? He accepted another dare and had girlfriend in front of Y/n. It wasn't enough how much he hurted her so he did that to hurt her more?? If he really loved Y/n why the f*ck he would accept to be someone's boyfriend and hurt Y/n even more by seeing all of that? With his behavior I don't think he truly love Y/n, for him everything is just a game. Even when he took her book and called her to get it, it was in playfull, teasing way without any guiltiness, like he never did anything bad to her.
I agree, just another ff with pathetic Y/N. It's past time for people to understand that even though it's fiction, it still has an impact on the minors in our fandom or simply the person who reads this and is unable to understand some things and are naive.
I really appreciate your thoughts. It was very easy going.I didn't felt anything like love by Jimin's side.
Also he wasn't even guilty as he was supposed to be.
He needed to feel and show true empathy for the damage done. Suffering isn’t the point, but rather a willingness and desire to change himself to be a loving equal partner. He comes across as narcissistic, acting to stroke his ego. What did he do support/love/appreciate her? Did he deeply regret his stupidity or just do it again? Hannah is pissed and would look to strike back against Yn.
Well I am gonna be honest....I didn't like jimin's character at all...the way he was trying to be close to yn...the way he touched her body(if i was in her place I would surely slap him right there & insult him) the way he intered her house without permission is way too much for me to be very honest. And
he used yn's feelings in a very dirty way...he only realized that when she told him how lonely she was ,how much she loved him & he was her only family.. & then she knew about the bet & maybe avoided him for 2 weeks...I thought he would atleast apologise and regret & ask for forgiveness & try to prove himself for her but no....he went for another bet & dated some random girl infront of her eyes....what a shame...if he truly loved her he would never do that again or hurt her....but here comes pathetic yn again....LIKE BRUH I DON'T MEAN ANY HATE OR SOMETHING I REALLY LOVE AUTHOR AND HER WORK BUT BRO ARE U FOR REAL? EVEN IF IT'S A FF THERE ARE MANY YOUNG ARMY GIRLS HERE WHO WOULD BE AFFECTED BY THIS AND MAYBE DO THE SAME THING (I MEAN FORGIVING HIM ALREADY) & ALSO HAVE NO EXPERIENCE ABOUT THE WHOLE THING...THIS ISN'T RIGHT.
Even if he is my fav Idol or someone whom I love like crazy I can't just forgive him like that....I can't...my self respect is above all & he just broke my trust & I am never gonna allow him to do that again...let karma hits him very hard when someday a girl will play with his heart & manipulate him the same way...only then he will realize how bad it is to play with someone's feelings...& the worst part was how he told her to get her book like bro WTH?? TELLING HER "LOOKING FOR THIS??" AND RUNNING TO HIS ROOM ONLY TO TRAP HER LIKE THIS?? I WOULD NEVER DO THAT EVEN IF HE HAD A VERY IMPO. THING ABOUT ME.
This isn't how u treat a girl whom u already played with...this isn't how u show her that u r truly sorry...first prove her that u r a real man not an
a$$hole who plays with girls & throws them afterwords.
Even if she wants to forgive him give him a great punishment MAKE HIM SUFFER UGH.
I am sorry for this long comment but I couldn't control myself anymore...
Author I suggest you to think about it and maybe re-write the ff again if u want...
I am sorry again.
This is just a Story
I know but still...ahh nevermind
I was literally crying while watching this
And my mom be like "what happened now l am not giving you onions to cut them"🥲🥲😅😭
16:26 didn't y/n say jimin is family friend since childhood then how come jimin had no idea about anything in y/n's life?
How can anyone call this ending a masterpiece, bro? Are people truly this gullible, or do they simply accept anything in the name of their idol? First and foremost, if he truly loved her, why did he accept another bet? What could be the justification for this? Where did he prove that he loved Y/N? How can betting be more important to you than the person you love? Please don't do anything in the name of fiction. You could've at least made him prove himself and be a better version of himself instead of Y/N just giving into his stupid apology.
Chill
Its just fiction dont hate!!
@@btstaetae5221 I'm chill don't worry
And where is the hate? I can only see myself stating my opinion. That's why I used "could've" instead of "should've". I never said anything to the author. I said something about the people who liked that ending. For the author, I used please. The comment section is for opinions and criticism. I respect your perspective and concern. I don't want to continue this discussion, so please respect my perspective as well. Peace!
@@Crystal14325 im sorry
It was just a misunderstanding
Sorry 😞
@@btstaetae5221 It's fine love
@@Crystal14325 thanku❤️❤️☺️☺️
I felt like I was reading my own story... I'm an only child and felt so lonely and not many friends but had a childhood friend and had a small crush on him and suddenly one day he asked me out I was so happy but I he just used me. And at the end left with all the memories of us that are bittersweet.
I hope you are fine now❤
I hope you're better without him. If you feel upset remember that sometimes good things falls apart but that means that better things can fall together. *I make no sense but I hope you're overall alright*
Happy birthday Jungkook and I’m support for you
I'm for it too, but I'd like to see him officially together during school time in front of students who give bad talkers and YN's behaviors seem good to him. The way jimin bumped into her and said in accepted words. "like be mine" and be my official" give me goosebumps inside of me hearing him say that.loll part2 please s'ils vous plaît 제발
28:54 that's literally harassment.
This need a part 2 or a bonus please
This is so nice ! I need part 2
CAN Y'ALL JUST STOP?
It's just a fan fiction you don't have to take it seriously just watch it as a fictional characters and story only also it's a oneshot so freaking stop asking for bonus alright
Thank you 😊
wow it's so good 🥰 really like ♥
love you ff i have been a fan for a year now
😙😙
Can something be more worse ? Than having your real enemy's name Hannah?
Luv u jiminssi🥰🥰🥰
I love your FF please make a part 2💜💜💜💜💜
Author you are so good in jimin ff please make jimin ff movie with happy ending plzzzzzzzzzzzz and please anyone if you don't like it than don't write hate comment and don't hate author plz and don't called it trash don't take it seriously this is just a fanfiction author you are great I am your new subscriber 💜♥️
This was so beautiful I loved it 😍😍
I’m not really happy with the story I would be fine if he didn’t take another bet while he still had feelings for yn
Nailed it❤️❤️❤️
I wish I can find right words but my dictionary is....idk 🥲
like always...no self respect
Can you make a series
pls can you make a bouns part i will love to see lil bady mochi
Please make bonus part
Sis I'm addicted with your ff's 😩🖤...You're nice keep going 😗🫶🏻
Brooo i was about to sleep but now THERE IS NO SLEEPPP
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Wow!!! I absolutely loved this FF Unnie!!!! You come up with so many creative scenarios and stories your the best author Unnie!!! Also can you please try to make a part 2 Unnie cause I really loved this FF!! Saranghae and Borahae Unnie!!!😊☺🤗😘😍🥰💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
Can you do bonus part please…it was amazing 😻
Unnie~ I am big fan of your work. If it's possible for you. can I collab with you in oneshot? Please unnie ... but it's okay if it's not comfortable with you. Please reply to my comment! thank you. Love you unnie keep going~
Next part pls ??
S2
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trash 🙂