What an intense and emotional journey. I can’t imagine the pain of dealing with betrayal, but it’s inspiring to see you put your daughter’s well-being first. Truly heroic!
That was an excellent story! A man who behaved as a man. Protecting his child by whatever means necessary. Some might say that the consequences of the treacherous couple’s actions were too severe. I think the punishment befit the crime.
@johnecrouch2671….t;wasn’t a crime John. It was simply justice that served 2 purposes. 1, saving his daughter’s life. 2, taking out the trash and making soup with it. 😅
Do a serious investigation about tooics befor writing. Pozokero is the man who disolves corps on acid and not a cooking. That isue spoiled the narratiin
What an intense and emotional journey. I can’t imagine the pain of dealing with betrayal, but it’s inspiring to see you put your daughter’s well-being first. Truly heroic!
Good story. Happy ending.
Bringing in the Soup maker was a fantastic plot twist. Who could think of a more fitting end to the evil pair.
Thats was a good story. A great mix of ruthlessness, betrayal, revenge and the darkness of the soul. Good job!
Glad you enjoyed it!
OP stood on fatherly business.
Strange story however, somehow enjoyable.
That was an excellent story! A man who behaved as a man. Protecting his child by whatever means necessary. Some might say that the consequences of the treacherous couple’s actions were too severe. I think the punishment befit the crime.
@johnecrouch2671….t;wasn’t a crime John. It was simply justice that served 2 purposes. 1, saving his daughter’s life. 2, taking out the trash and making soup with it. 😅
Sorry I hate when the husband turns to illegal means of getting his justice.
HOW ABOUT GOING TO THE HOSPITAL BOARD
Do a serious investigation about tooics befor writing.
Pozokero is the man who disolves corps on acid and not a cooking.
That isue spoiled the narratiin
Women like this don't exist .
Not her own child , come on. This is sick
Oh, but they DO exist.
Susan Smith killed her 4 small children so that she would be unencumbered when she went to her new lover.
Worse woman like this exist in this world, don't be naive