The constant repeating of the planet’s designation is totally unnecessary and detracts from the story. The setting for the story was established early and the audience does not need to be clubbed repeatedly with it.
(Sarcastically said) I like how when they retreat to beyond the Ort Cloud, the Captain watches the stars streak by...as they move at a slow pace, not FTL or someth9ng & within a system. How many stars does that system have? Are th9se stars racing around like they are in a NASCAR race? AI minds want to know...heh.
Maybe, just mayve you should not use an automated subtitle system beceause it keeps displaying worlds incorrect, i seen gliese 581G at least 20 times spelled wrong.
The constant repeating of the planet’s designation is totally unnecessary and detracts from the story. The setting for the story was established early and the audience does not need to be clubbed repeatedly with it.
(Sarcastically said) I like how when they retreat to beyond the Ort Cloud, the Captain watches the stars streak by...as they move at a slow pace, not FTL or someth9ng & within a system. How many stars does that system have? Are th9se stars racing around like they are in a NASCAR race? AI minds want to know...heh.
Once again AI shows why it is better to be well read instead of being read well to.
The lack of switching perspectives is making this story less fun.
Maybe, just mayve you should not use an automated subtitle system beceause it keeps displaying worlds incorrect, i seen gliese 581G at least 20 times spelled wrong.
A lot of harsh critics in the comments here. I rather enjoyed this story...
Don't make sense .repetitive.