The presentation in the second half is good though, although the first half needs alot of work. If you are looking to educate your hook needs to look good. Also try and find a smoother way to transition to real life. Also title your transitions... (I am an editor lol, I was taught by a teacher who went to a film school if your wondering what my qulifications are.)
Sorry about the numerous comments, but overall when it comes to actually making a video for a "educational" enviroment try and keep it more organized and profesional so people can tell what is going on.
Ai thumbnaisl aren't very atractive, aslo the SFX/VFX sorta take away from the learning experiance.... Id also recomend finding a better method to highlight stuff like bringing it to the front. Kid's these days tend to not enjoy all these flashy looks when watching videos. Simplicity is more fun in some situations... also your contrasting is quite bad, I'd recomend keeping a style and sticking to it. The graphic design is not consistant, and the choice in stock image/video does not really help reinforce the ideas being taught.
Interesting video...the sound effects are a bit too loud and kind of distracting though.
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The sound effects are too loud.
The presentation in the second half is good though, although the first half needs alot of work. If you are looking to educate your hook needs to look good. Also try and find a smoother way to transition to real life. Also title your transitions... (I am an editor lol, I was taught by a teacher who went to a film school if your wondering what my qulifications are.)
Sorry about the numerous comments, but overall when it comes to actually making a video for a "educational" enviroment try and keep it more organized and profesional so people can tell what is going on.
Thank you for your warm feedback.
Ai thumbnaisl aren't very atractive, aslo the SFX/VFX sorta take away from the learning experiance.... Id also recomend finding a better method to highlight stuff like bringing it to the front. Kid's these days tend to not enjoy all these flashy looks when watching videos. Simplicity is more fun in some situations... also your contrasting is quite bad, I'd recomend keeping a style and sticking to it. The graphic design is not consistant, and the choice in stock image/video does not really help reinforce the ideas being taught.