Deserve//Jenlisa//Oneshot

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  • Опубліковано 5 лют 2025
  • Hey guy!! I’m back! I’m sorry for taking so much and sorry about my grammar. In this story i’m not puting a picture is that okey? I’m so lazy that why😅. Anyway enjoy❤️

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  • @zltzlt2433
    @zltzlt2433  3 роки тому +100

    Don’t worry my all beloved. I’ll do bonus soon❤️

    • @yatiroslan2155
      @yatiroslan2155 3 роки тому +5

      Hurry up

    • @yatiroslan2155
      @yatiroslan2155 3 роки тому +2

      Ok

    • @love-my9ei
      @love-my9ei 3 роки тому +5

      Author crying mess , Please hurry up and make perfect happy ending

    • @lisa_m2124
      @lisa_m2124 3 роки тому +3

      Take your time a/n :3

    • @simukparaytatusbatanes7906
      @simukparaytatusbatanes7906 3 роки тому +4

      And plsss, make lisa explain why she did that, thats not forgivable, after doing it the other day, then do it everyday... Then so on, I don't understand that behavior, but if lisa's sick that why she did that for jennie to make jennie hate her, then that's reasonable, but still lisa shouldn't do it realistic, she can just hire someone to pretend that she's cheating.... But as far as i know that's not the reason,this is not an excuse that it's just her behaviour... For me I won't accept someone who's already used.... Even you can't give her, her desire cause your waiting at the right time,that doesn't mean you can give your lust to others.... Thats means lisa doesn't love jennie...period I hope jennie give hanbin the chance and not lisa... Hanbin deserves it better..... I can sleep well if that happens in the next..... 😂 😂 ❤️ 💓

  • @kkd4929
    @kkd4929 3 роки тому +42

    I'm trying hard to hold back my tears because my family is here HAHAHAHAHA

    • @marvelyntantuazon663
      @marvelyntantuazon663 3 роки тому +1

      Same with me her

    • @fitared4738
      @fitared4738 3 роки тому +1

      were same hahahaahah

    • @blinkeu6693
      @blinkeu6693 3 роки тому +1

      You see i just watch this and were on the same situation 🤣 so i ran inside my room lock the door and burst in tear i mean crying silently.. Because if they heard it they ganno be like:hey why are you crying,are you crazy your just watching something in you phone then you cry,
      🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

  • @awexs6248
    @awexs6248 3 роки тому +7

    Oh my god! I cried a lot! Tomorrow my eyes will be swollen 😂
    Thank you for your good storyline. Keep writing author. Can’t wait for the Bonus!

  • @demonlucas7545
    @demonlucas7545 3 роки тому +17

    Plot twist:
    Jennie:"crying"
    Jisoo:what happend jen tell us
    Jennie:Lisa said she hates me
    Lisa:thats not what i said, i was telling you no more Dino nuggets
    Chaenie:thats literally the same thing!
    Jisoo:🤦‍♀️

  • @garfieldsiews
    @garfieldsiews 3 роки тому +25

    I don’t understand why would Lisa cheat on Jennie when Jennie is so perfect. In deed Lisa is a jerk. Whatever mistake Lisa had made, she already been punished. I guess it’s a sad choice to make letting Jennie go for her happiness. If I am in her shoe, I’ll do that too even it hurts me badly. Cos I deserved it. 🥺
    Thanks author for sharing 👍🏻
    JenLisa Forever ❤️❤️

    • @zltzlt2433
      @zltzlt2433  3 роки тому

      It’s fair right? Win -Win

    • @garfieldsiews
      @garfieldsiews 3 роки тому +2

      @@zltzlt2433 frankly speaking... Nothing in this world is fair. But for love, it is what you need to sacrifice. Wishfully it could be a happy ending. It's your creation. Thank you ❣️❣️

  • @Duati999
    @Duati999 Рік тому +1

    This is sooo good i like it but sad part are so sad for jennie

  • @LuminaryLifeWithSami
    @LuminaryLifeWithSami 3 роки тому +4

    I can’t wait for the bonus. I’m so excited. I hope that Jenlisa while be together at the end . Cause they deserve happiness ❤️💕🥺.

  • @hoppiegrey1868
    @hoppiegrey1868 2 роки тому +2

    Crying toward the end of the story, so sad. JenLisa is my bias and no matter what, I don’t want them separated, especially after Lisa learned her lessons and was remorseful. She paid dearly for what she did to Jennie and every one deserves a second chance. JenLisa together forever. Okay, now, I’ll move on to the bonus. Thanks, author!

  • @jaysonramirez7430
    @jaysonramirez7430 3 роки тому

    Omg..sad ako sa jenlisa sna cla pa din hanggang sa huli..sad ako ky lisa manofoot kya mo yan fighting..ang ganda ng story bgo po ako d2 author at ngandahan po dna po mkpgantay sa bonus slmat po author❤❤

  • @littlekids3015
    @littlekids3015 3 роки тому

    I cried so hard.. How creative editor😭 Can't wait for the bonus soon😭

  • @mizpahteodosio8497
    @mizpahteodosio8497 3 роки тому +1

    Omg!!! Welcome back author it’s been so long. Thank you for this wonderful oneshot

  • @gl6430
    @gl6430 3 роки тому +1

    Welcome back author, Thank you for this ❤️😍

  • @azeygabriel3057
    @azeygabriel3057 3 роки тому +1

    I dont wanna cry so im holding it but in the end it only left me a heavy feeling in my chest.damn author how could you made me feel this pain. arghhh.btw tnx for a tear-jerker long one shot! Looking forward to that bonus episode!

  • @demeroselumocso9027
    @demeroselumocso9027 3 роки тому

    Yah authornim😏 You made me cry😢 thanks for the beautiful story

  • @lucydyanna3922
    @lucydyanna3922 3 роки тому +2

    Omg.. Author you make me cry a lot😭😭 hope jenlisa together again and happy ending😘

  • @marsdanao9372
    @marsdanao9372 3 роки тому +3

    Do it soon as possible hehebe...✌✌
    I love this story i wish lisa can walk and back to gather jennie and lisa

  • @kazylenealquigue9530
    @kazylenealquigue9530 3 роки тому +1

    OMG! This oneshot made me mad at lisa haha and i feel sad for jennie cuz she don't deserve the pain but when lisa try to risk her life and give everything just for jennie, i feel sorry to lisa cuz i judged her😔 because i just realized how much lisa loved jennie and i hope for the bonus is they can live a happy life together because they deserve it. 💛👍thank you author💛

  • @liamsmith1236
    @liamsmith1236 3 роки тому

    I was gonna cry and then the add came😂 BTW new subscriber

  • @malougonzales9360
    @malougonzales9360 3 роки тому

    I cried a lot in your story author. You got me there nice move. Im waiting to your bonus. 👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

  • @viji3422
    @viji3422 3 роки тому

    My playboy Lisa ❤️😘 wow nice story

  • @jlt3525
    @jlt3525 3 роки тому

    Hayts 😭😭😭 author it was amazing 👏❤

  • @nayanjadhav2683
    @nayanjadhav2683 3 роки тому

    😢😢why authorrr you do thisssss . . Please make a sweet bonus . . 😍😍

  • @sammy.22
    @sammy.22 3 роки тому +2

    My tears is falling none stop... My parents asking me why..And goshhhh!!...I don't know what to say... 😫😫😂😂

    • @sammy.22
      @sammy.22 3 роки тому +1

      Waiting for next episode make it 1 hour pls pls 😩😂

    • @zltzlt2433
      @zltzlt2433  3 роки тому

      @@sammy.22 Nah...10min is enough 😂

    • @ChaeLiamKimJ
      @ChaeLiamKimJ 3 роки тому

      @@zltzlt2433 when will you upload bonus?🥺🥺 I can’t wait anymore 😭 make Jenlisa together again 😭 please make a happy ending..

  • @meaynaestrada8286
    @meaynaestrada8286 3 роки тому

    I cry a lot author 😭😭😭 it's a nice story so I will subscribed to your channel☺️

  • @andreaclaire4
    @andreaclaire4 3 роки тому

    Welcome back author i will wait for the bonus 😁😁❤❤

  • @MhieLisa
    @MhieLisa 3 роки тому +1

    Do a bonus and please put pictures of them...
    It good to watch you ff if put pictures

  • @Blackpink_Panther
    @Blackpink_Panther 3 роки тому +1

    My very first Jenlisa ff was your Cast kill love 😁 since then I can't sleep without reading Jenlisa ffs

  • @khairunnisa1087
    @khairunnisa1087 3 роки тому +2

    Ohhh.. God.Good story..next episode pleassseee...

  • @jennyvandijk9465
    @jennyvandijk9465 2 роки тому

    Woohhh that was sad & hurt so much..i even cant hold my tears to keep falling...oh my god.......

  • @trollingnood4450
    @trollingnood4450 3 роки тому +1

    You make me cry 😭😭😭

  • @idcwhatefjnk
    @idcwhatefjnk 3 роки тому +1

    Wow finally you made me cry harder
    Thanks for giving this ff episodes.
    And haan. Bonus make it fast PlZz.
    💜This is for you author 💖 💜

  • @themyaoningshen3916
    @themyaoningshen3916 3 роки тому

    thnq author for your nice story....me here seriously alert for the upcoming bonus...excited and eagerly waiting😍😍😍

  • @jewelurbano2209
    @jewelurbano2209 3 роки тому

    Good morning Thanks author 🌼❤️❤️ bonus please 😭😭

  • @imeeicaro8059
    @imeeicaro8059 3 роки тому

    Are you mocking us in the end? 😢😂 I spent an hour for this story! Please give us the ending we wanted! Make it fast cause I am (or we are) so hurt by this. Hahaha Thanks for sharing your idea.

  • @ChaeLiamKimJ
    @ChaeLiamKimJ 3 роки тому +1

    Oh No😭 it’s sad ending 😭 make bonus and make Jenlisa together and happy ending please 😭

  • @lolbitseye3551
    @lolbitseye3551 3 роки тому +1

    This story almost made me cry😢 but I still love it 🥺💕

  • @marizjeysettelilam9009
    @marizjeysettelilam9009 3 роки тому +1

    Bonus author💜🥺

  • @shinongsiang3451
    @shinongsiang3451 3 роки тому +1

    I really love it author thank you for this one .....waiting for the bonus

  • @twcymn7111
    @twcymn7111 3 роки тому +6

    author dont leave me hanging upload the bonus asap

  • @ericabayangbang9266
    @ericabayangbang9266 Рік тому

    I'm crying so hard bc this story relates to my parents situation when I was little 😥😭

  • @젠리사-z1v
    @젠리사-z1v 3 роки тому

    Thank you for this author 🖤💓 and sorry im late 😞

  • @LuminaryLifeWithSami
    @LuminaryLifeWithSami 3 роки тому +1

    I cry while watching this . It was so emotional 😭

  • @heisselysqt
    @heisselysqt 3 роки тому

    I love all your stories 😭

  • @nynameissky
    @nynameissky 3 роки тому +1

    Gurl I swear if Irene’s men touched Jennie I will flip them to mars, Lisa tried to stand for Jennie just to save her, Lmao ❤️

  • @laramurillo3672
    @laramurillo3672 3 роки тому

    Can’t wyt the bonus ohhgod I’m crying lol😭

  • @erleennelmida4307
    @erleennelmida4307 3 роки тому

    Author I'm so confused what will happen next!! Can you make a bunos now,, it's a good Oneshot tho💕

  • @b_vrlie
    @b_vrlie 3 роки тому

    Can't wait to the BUNOS EPISODE, your the best author ✨👍

  • @gilberdynderama7143
    @gilberdynderama7143 3 роки тому

    Woah!!!! I really love your story..
    you got me author, you make me cry😢..
    Make it fast author

  • @kameibichui3148
    @kameibichui3148 3 роки тому

    The curiosity is killing me...I can't wait any longer

  • @kimgichtann4437
    @kimgichtann4437 3 роки тому +1

    When is the part 2 coming I can’t wait to read it
    But don’t be to rush you need to rest too ☺️

  • @sakenasani8249
    @sakenasani8249 3 роки тому

    Author,u really make me crying...my heart just like 💔...but i like ur story..👍

  • @ssuptann
    @ssuptann 3 роки тому +1

    Thank you for this author❤️, we miss you so much

  • @bpstanot4204
    @bpstanot4204 3 роки тому

    I love this I am so late to read this but thank you author ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

  • @lunatisayvendido5614
    @lunatisayvendido5614 3 роки тому +1

    hi author when is the release of bonus part. we want some😍

  • @hyperjhay2151
    @hyperjhay2151 Рік тому

    Now!!! Where is the bonus author?! I want ittttt please.....😢

  • @jaahnavikaran8816
    @jaahnavikaran8816 3 роки тому

    You made me cry now I need the BONOUS to make me HAPPY NOW GIVE US THE BONOUS

  • @lailajardin9088
    @lailajardin9088 3 роки тому

    Ok 👌 I'll wait for the next episode 😉

  • @ginadelapuerta8297
    @ginadelapuerta8297 3 роки тому

    I'm crying since their break up in this story 💔💔😭😭😭 and it's 3am in the morning when I watch it huhuhu author I hope the bonus ep I'm smiling and less crying

  • @nadingabriel5989
    @nadingabriel5989 3 роки тому

    First

  • @jenneegallegos2653
    @jenneegallegos2653 3 роки тому

    Why u making me cry huhuhu 😩😭🥺

  • @jezescara2219
    @jezescara2219 3 роки тому

    Hewooo im new 👉🥺👈
    Can u make a story of jennie as mistress and in the end they will be happy and before ending there wil be alittle problems and fight..thank you ❤️❤️make it 1hr and a honus thanks author ❤️ hoping you make it
    Saranghae♥️♥️👉👈

  • @lisyeuxnini
    @lisyeuxnini 2 роки тому

    It’s been a year since I’m not dare to watch this because I saw a lot comments are saying that they cried oh geeze

  • @jenlisaship1001
    @jenlisaship1001 3 роки тому

    Where's the bonus author? I already watch this 3x🥺 but still there's no bonus😭

  • @lynbaquilid4441
    @lynbaquilid4441 3 роки тому

    I cant wait the bunos part😭😭😭

  • @marvelyntantuazon663
    @marvelyntantuazon663 3 роки тому

    Bonus please I'm excited to read a bonus.. I'm crying louder now 😭😭😭😭😭😭 bonus na po please author

  • @phoebezhenrosello282
    @phoebezhenrosello282 3 роки тому

    Part 2😟 please im very excited ☺️

  • @hannahmarasigan8514
    @hannahmarasigan8514 3 роки тому

    When you will upload the bonus part 😳

  • @naur1462
    @naur1462 3 роки тому +1

    Ahhh totally worth it

  • @rindumamidebby1275
    @rindumamidebby1275 3 роки тому

    when will the bonus come up, author??

  • @arbiebdescartin6367
    @arbiebdescartin6367 3 роки тому +1

    Please make it fast a bonus part please 😭 please make a happy ending please please 😭

  • @blueshadow987
    @blueshadow987 Рік тому

    I cry alone 😢😢😢😢😢 anyways story is nice 🙂

  • @CALEB_XN
    @CALEB_XN Рік тому

    Yess i'am crying its so hurttt and i dont want to feel that way that gonna cheat me with my bsff

  • @ecleowendyh.8454
    @ecleowendyh.8454 3 роки тому

    Can't wait for the bonus 🥺

  • @elenadelasanta6942
    @elenadelasanta6942 3 роки тому

    Where the continue bonus episode? We still waiting

  • @rindumamidebby1275
    @rindumamidebby1275 3 роки тому

    Just please dont make us wait too long. Authorrr ❤❤

  • @merisonta3668
    @merisonta3668 3 роки тому +1

    Just give happy ending to jenlisa 👌👌👌

  • @ruthlyngdoh6446
    @ruthlyngdoh6446 Рік тому

    where is the bonus of this??
    we need a happy ending for this

  • @MhanZ0301
    @MhanZ0301 3 роки тому

    This shot made me 😭

  • @khaingkokosoung5092
    @khaingkokosoung5092 2 роки тому

    I was seriously almost crying but there is someone next to me

  • @chickenwings722
    @chickenwings722 3 роки тому

    this was so sad I need to watch the next one im literally crying

  • @Janesmart-gd2qc
    @Janesmart-gd2qc 4 місяці тому

    Am here in 2024 😪
    I love your stories 😢
    Please make Lisa a cheater in more stories 😢

  • @taichimashima3723
    @taichimashima3723 3 роки тому +1

    This is stupid. Lisa dont want to see jen cry but she cheat many time. What a nonsense

  • @lalitasarkar3957
    @lalitasarkar3957 Рік тому

    I am cry when I see the story.really make me cry 😭😭😭😭😭

  • @RejuanaIslam-n5s
    @RejuanaIslam-n5s 3 місяці тому

    Well, after watching this vedio I wanna share my thoughts to everyone that if you made a mistake then ask for forgive,, after forgiven by this person don't fool her/him again....
    Because she/he trusted you that you will change for them....!!!

  • @kylabarcenilla8471
    @kylabarcenilla8471 3 роки тому +4

    It's not happy ending 😔😢😭, Author can you do a bunos jenlisa will be back 😭🙏,plss author I'm begging you 😭🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😭😭😭😭

  • @eldlcrz
    @eldlcrz 3 роки тому

    HI AUTHOR NEWS SUBSCRIBER HERE!!!!! BUT CAN I HAVE A REQUEST CAN YOU DO JENNIE ONESHOT FOR FANGIRL AND THE TITLE IS "making my cold girlfriend jealous" please🙏please🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 love you❤

    • @zltzlt2433
      @zltzlt2433  3 роки тому

      I’ll try.

    • @eldlcrz
      @eldlcrz 3 роки тому

      @@zltzlt2433 yess tenchuu author keep safe and love you

  • @jesxiee_h
    @jesxiee_h 3 роки тому

    Author are you khmer ? I heard the song ហួសព្រំដែន in this vid XD

  • @tulexia8841
    @tulexia8841 3 роки тому

    36:02 I had a heart attack when I heard it omg please 😭

  • @lheaisrael8434
    @lheaisrael8434 3 роки тому +1

    Uhm nice story, a story of a marter wife who love her wife even thou she's a complete cheater., lisa deserve on that wheelchair. So that she cant cheat anymore...😂

    • @zltzlt2433
      @zltzlt2433  3 роки тому

      Lol, it’s fair right? Win Win🤣

  • @zeinakurtlete5350
    @zeinakurtlete5350 3 роки тому

    hahaha iknow theres a bonus kekekeke

  • @lenahan6096
    @lenahan6096 3 роки тому

    Cannot wait for the bonus ep

  • @lesyeuxdenini1421
    @lesyeuxdenini1421 3 роки тому

    Don't leave us hanging here Author🤧😭

  • @niniandpoopoo467
    @niniandpoopoo467 3 роки тому

    BONUS AUTHORIM

  • @louissedelacruz9657
    @louissedelacruz9657 3 роки тому

    everyday im always waiting this bonus episode..

  • @little_bro_kim3131
    @little_bro_kim3131 3 роки тому

    Waiting for the next bonus ☺️..

  • @daninnie
    @daninnie 3 роки тому +1

    Oh my it really so sad i cried a lot 😭😭😭😭

  • @russelnisnisan2991
    @russelnisnisan2991 3 роки тому

    Ahhh why its so hurt author 😭😭😭

  • @samanthanava6315
    @samanthanava6315 3 роки тому +1

    pls make them back together happy ending plss

  • @tulexia8841
    @tulexia8841 3 роки тому

    Ash sh8t why don't lisa wake up when jennei said I wanted to take a shower woth you ro when she denied hanbins offer to start again argh life is unfairrr

  • @elenadelasanta6942
    @elenadelasanta6942 3 роки тому

    Where is the next episode???