Naive Apprentice - Director's cut【 Hololive Fan Animation｜TAKAMORI 】
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- Опубліковано 16 вер 2024
- YAY ! My first animation is finally complete, although I'm basically an amateur at every category, so the editing and just animation as a whole is... amateur, and English is not even my main language, but I still hope you like it.
(If you want to support me, I have a patreon now.)
/ handikaied
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[Mori Calliope]
/ @moricalliope
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[Takanashi Kiara]
/ @takanashikiara
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[Ouro Kronii]
/ @ourokronii
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[Hakos Baelz]
/ @hakosbaelz
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Music used:
Smokey's Lounge - TrackTribe
Underwater Exploration - Godmode
Baka Mitai (ばかみたい) [Jazz Version] - Yakuza OST
Amber - VYEN
As You Prevent Do - pATCHES
ピアノ41 - 森田交一 / 魔王魂
#hololive #hololiveen #ホロライブ #callillust #ArtsOfAshes #TAKAMORI #kronillust #illustrayBAE #holomyth #animation
![Coco and Suisei interrupts TakaMori at Usaken Summer Fest [Hololive/Eng sub]](/img/n.gif)
Man this the most underrated Hololive animation series I have ever seen. Aside from a few spelling mistakes, which are pretty minor and don't take away from the quality of the series, these are pretty much flawless in every other regard. Can't wait to see your future work and I hope this blows up in the algorithm soon.
Thank you for your long-time support! I really hope this will get The Blessing by the Algorithm, because it takes a lot of time to make.
And about the spelling, I just gonna straight up no dialogue, my dude.👍(Now that's a new challenge)
@@Handikaied I'm sure some English natives would be glad to help proofreading dialogues. Keep up the good work!
This is so beautiful. It's a shame the algorithm hasn't caught it yet.
*Algorithm* : I'm sorry little one.
Reddit : So there's this little thing....
Calli - "I'm here to take you out!"
Kiara - "On a date?!?!"
The real Takamori need to see this, their lores are matching perfectly together the way you did it
Thanks for the compliment!
HoloEN have some my favorite settings and characters, but they barely have any stories!
And I just happens to have some ideas.
(Of course, not everything I wrote is in line with the actual lore, so just see it as an individual story.)
*Life is Drawn to death, and so death is drawn to life. Two Opposites that can never truly be together, yet still..... They Meet in the Crossways, that line between life and death..... Purgatory.*
I swear was baka mitai playing?
Can I just share my gratitude- not only is it a beautiful story line and have beautiful art work, YOU ACTUALLY FINISHED IT! Most series creators don’t finish their beautiful art and you did! This is beautiful and brought a tear to my eye 🥹 I used this for my “hololive anime playlist” and the playlist wouldn’t be the same with out it
Honestly, don’t know How this video is so underrated. Really well done man!
Thanks I really appreciate.
Is really hilarious that basically every comment is about how underrated rated my video is.
I'm still waiting for my 500 subs UA-cam !😂
@@Handikaied In my opinion your work is on par or even better that some of the best holo content our there, so keep it coming. There is some grammar issues, yes, but animation in general looks really good. Hope you get noticed by any of the talents or be blessed by the algoritm.
It's so lovely to find a Takamori thing even now in these "new" times where is lost already but never forgotten, VIVA EL TAKAMORI osiosi UwU
for a first animation, even pixel animation, this is beyound incredible
only 13k views on this after a year is CRIMINAL. get it together, UA-cams.
God-fucking-damn it, dude, I'm about to start sobbing right before bed. How dare.
10/10, sub'd.
This was nice.
omg how does this have such low views... the algorithm is bonkers! This got me sobbing in the middle of the night, so beautiful. Kiara gave in to experience death over and over again just for her beloved 😢
Well, it just amazing, one of the best pixel art animation i've seen so far. Seriously, i don't know if you want to continue, but in case, you have gain a subscriber.
Yo, thanks for the compliment.
I definitely gonna make more, but not this one, this one is already over.
But, maybe I'll come back for more some day, you know, her life isn't fully over yet.
Incredibly touching. A simple story that still includes friendship, responsibilities, life and death. Yet attached to a grander narrative. Framed with a passion of caring towards our Hololive Talents! Loved it.
Can't believe I just found this a whole year after it got uploaded, this is amazing!
yeah the animation is really good! And the story is fitting.
This is so beautiful gosh ;;
You should post this on fan communities
This will blow up with views
I don't really know where to post.
So feel free to share it around !
This would be great as a point and click game.. i can just imagine it and i want it now
It took me so long to find this channel. You did such a great job! I need to watch all your animation
🥰
I love pixel...that why i really like this animation..nice 👍
THATT WASS SOO GOOD AHH, I CAN'T BELIEVE I JUST FOUND THIS 2 YEARS LATE
im not surprised if right now you are hired/working into some kind of pixel programs/games related, i feel each scene and the narrative is just, perfect to the lore.
I hope I have a job, man. But my skill is still half-ass(compare to others), even worse, this is the only skill I have.😔(I do play games╮(╯_╰)╭)
This deserves more love. It's amazing!
This was a really nice bitter-sweet story. You used good visuals and the pixel art was well made. I do agree about the text issue, but as my friend once said, “never a failure, always a lesson”
And don’t let low views get you down. You created something wonderful out of your passion for the subject, and that’s was truly matters.
I forgot this is animation and not playing VN with pixel art animation sheeesh you did an AMAZING work and even nailed it every Calli and Kiara vibe hope more people can find this and appreciate the effort and ingenuity for passion you know
Damn I just found this and this is really good! Its so underrated
bro this is god level animation, and the pixelart is brutal too
This is absolutely amazing 🔥🔥🔥
This must’ve taken so long, it’s amazing
Very cool animation style!
that was absolutely beautiful, love the pixel art animation a lot. subbed.
WTF BRO THIS IS SO UNDERRATED
Really it's amazing, everything just aaaaaaaa
Thank you very much! 😊
This appeared in my recommended list... It may be time 😅
Holy Matsuri in heavens, this is amazing! 😮👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻❤️🧡
Woah, that is some stellar animation!
how this such a good animation plus making me feel nostalgic like playing with pixel graphic game ... i hope the holo company will verified you❤
Beautiful stuff!
Such a great animation
This is so good. The animation and dialogue lines moving give it so much character. Hope more ppl see it.
The animation and the visuals are still fucking amazing, you did a splendid job with the pixelart and I love it
OH BRO please tell me, although I can't change the problem within the video (unless I delete and re-upload the video, that worthless UA-cam editor😢) but please do.
@@Handikaied Honestly this is one of the best serious Hololive animations on UA-cam...
From what I see there are only 2 things that could be improved.
1- Obviously the spelling mistakes, I really don't think anyone minds. It doesn't add any difficulty to reading and honestly for not being your main language is pretty good.
2- This is just a preference. The scene where the camera is behind Calli and Kiara is talking at (4:37). For around a second I didn't know I was reading a line from Kiara until I actually finished reading what she said. It's nothing bad but normally you want to try and avoid any type of confusion even if it's brief.
- Since it's mainly just text and no voices. People normally work around this with color text or change in font.
(Kiara having orange text green borders) and (Calli having black text with red borders) could work.
Other than that the animation is great and the art is gorgeous. Everything I mentioned is just something I would personally find easier to read but don't change anything with this video.
It's just only something to think about if your going to do more in the future.
@Handikaied (ZERO) There are a few typos, and some grammar mistakes, but they are not really that bad, we can easily understand what's going on, so don't worry too much :P
0:13
The sentence is missing "what" is over.
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8:12
"has" is used when speaking in the third person singular (he/she/it).
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8:37
@@bloodcrow1962 Agreed with making the text for Kiara/Calli different somehow, for easier understanding of who's talking.
Another option besides the ones mentioned, is using a different font, perhaps.
@@Foede WOW HOLYSHIT! My English is really that bad huh.
And thank you for telling me this, you must have spent a lot of time typing all of this.🙏
Maybe I'll just gonna go make some new animation without any lines, for experiments.😅
Extremely well made 12/10
Wow. Loved it all around, great job!
Absolutely incredible!!
Just came here for the “It begins: Directors Cut” and seriously how have I not seen or heard of these before. Everything is perfecr
Well, at least you don't need to wait for these to come out.😁
This was lovely!
You've improved a lot, in Oddity your style seems more settled in to and consistent to your intent.
Please keep at this, I can't wait to see your body of work in a few years time.
this look like a game ?? hmm
Only 14k views? Extremely underrated
This is so amazing!
This is really underrated! This needs more views honestly ❤
nice animation.
The quality of this animation is crazy good
I'll be back, someday.
This feels so depressing since Calli has to do her job and kill Kiara over and over again, carrying the weight while Kiara doesn't remember. Also J-Chad being a boss as always.
when death meet life. Hello baby~~.
It's a shame that this isn't more popular, since it's obvious that you put a lot of work into this to make it so good. Hopefully the algorithm eventually picks you up.
3:50 do i hear baka mitai in the background?
IT IS based on the bar ~
@@Handikaied you know what, fair.
How is this not further up
J-Chad is always a win
Hmm, is this implying that Calli can't become a full fledged reaper because she can't actually kill Kiara?
Hiiii! This is really amazing! I'm wondering if you can let me borrow some of the parts here to do a fandub or practice voice acting? Please let me know! I can't message you on Twitter.
Well, if you want to do some practices, then go ahead.
@@Handikaied Thanks, man! 😁