The Personal Statement That Got Me Into EVERY IVY LEAGUE
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- Опубліковано 15 чер 2024
- The Personal Statement That Got Me Into EVERY IVY LEAGUE
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In this video, I'm going to be revealing the exact personal statement that got me no Ivy League rejections and giving you a step by step outline on how to craft your own unique personal statement so you can stand out to admission officers.
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0:06 - Introduction: Challenges of College Admissions
0:16 - Misconceptions about College Essays
0:29 - Revealing a Successful Personal Statement
0:35 - Offer of Full-Length Course Giveaway
0:43 - Sharing the Personal Statement
0:59 - Reading the Personal Statement
1:07 - Breakdown of the Personal Statement
1:19 - Common Application Prompts Overview
1:27 - Tips on What to Avoid in Personal Statements
3:02 - Step 1: Self-Reflection and Exploration
3:08 - Identifying Key Themes
4:03 - Core Values and Beliefs
5:20 - Understanding Different Essay Approaches
6:34 - Considerations for Using Metaphors
7:01 - Example of Using a Metaphor in an Essay
8:39 - Crafting an Effective Introduction and Hook
9:49 - Different Approaches to Writing Hooks
10:51 - Building the Introduction
12:51 - Structuring Body Paragraphs
16:20 - Outline of Body Paragraphs
18:16 - Tips for Seamless Body Paragraph Transitions
21:34 - Example: Personal Statement Body Paragraphs
23:43 - Writing an Effective Conclusion
24:54 - Key Elements of a Conclusion
This is just a very tiny snippet of my story. I’ve been gate-keeping this for years, but I want to do my best to help all of you❤
P.S. Watch until the end to learn how to access my FULL guide on How To Get Into Your Dream School for FREE! 😊✅
I love your videos so much and was wondering if you could share your common app application with your classes, extracurriculars, etc.
Girl u are seriously the best love u!!!
What advice would you give to any Central American students trying to get into an Ivy League
Do. Not. Delete. This. Ever.
Nah she needs to delete this before anyone else sees
@@dylandoggettgames8017 why?
@@emiomg_ so we can beat everyone :)
your personal statement was sooo beautiful, i was actually with my mouth open by the time i read the last sentence 😮😮 you're so talented girlll
coming from an incoming harvard student: this video is so insightful!
i literally had the exact same approach with my own personal statement and our themes were identical as well! (perseverance through adversity + love for learning) great vid!
Thanks to you I got into Oxford University ❤ thank you
I’m SO proud of you❤
Really?? Congratulations to you!
That's my dream schoooooll :))
@@severussnapeytp715 if you need any advice on what to do that helps you get in let me know :)
Omg can't believe you actually posted a video like this, really helpful thanks Elise 😭😭
This was so helpful, especially my upcoming junior year! Thank you! :)
Thank you so much for posting this!! ❤
I love you advice. You are so underrated, I swear! Your tips actually work
Your mom would be so proud of you ❤ God bless you for these tips!
Really a great help. Keep up the good work 👍
You are so inspiring! I’m already an undergrad in my home country but hopefully I can apply to an Ivy League college for my masters! Thank you!
thank you so so much for this video, it's so helpful!!!
This video is very helpful, thank you for posting it!!!!
You have helped me out a lot, thank you so much!
Thank you!! This helped a lot!
im forever thabkful for this. thank you
Superb. Appreciate you share this. May you filled with joy ❤
Usefulll and amazing tips thank you so much u really helped me throughout my ADmission process, super happy and grateful cause I found you🥺🥺🥺🥺
i love everything about you man you're an icon 💗
you know that you motivate me so much
Thankyouuu soo much elise for your this incredible efforts to get this amazing information to us I'm soo thankful to you ....harvard is my dream university and i genuinely want to go there which is nearly a impossible dream to become true from where i belong to but thats okay i believe on myself and my lord nothing is impossible...again thankyouu my girll thankyouu soo much ...😭❤️🌷🧸🎀🙌🏻
i love your videos!
*Highlight only the important points*
Me: Highlights everything.
Thank you so much ma'am. It was super explicit. ❤
Thank youu, I love you
" personally in my personal statement "
even though i'd love for her to stay lowkey because i'm not an altruist at all SHE DESERVES SO MUCH MORE AUDIENCE BECAUSE GIRL? you're amazing ❤
This is just what I need
Could you make a video on your study methods and how realistic we should set our goals based on how much we study?
Bet that the admission officers cried as much as I did while reading her essay.
I cried as well
she said not to use a sob story, but she did a sob story....
@@r22gamer54 yes, but she also noted how she overcame that situation which is more important
@@r22gamer54 She is one of the strongest women I have ever seen
@@artsymie7231 Exactly
I might get into Stanford or Harvard because of you
Alternate title: How to Commodify Your Personal Values and Sell Your Soul to Academia feat. English Composition
exactly
Elise can you help me an example if my theme is the passing of my grandma and music (ps. She thought me karnitick music
Why am I watching this if I’m not a student anymore 😂
Hi Elise, is it necessary for us to take the most rigorous academic subjects even if some don't align with our passion?
Can it be used for uk unis?
Is it possible to incorporate 2 metaphors instead of 1?
i did the survey but i still didn't get the written course
You mind if I ask what A levels you took?
For step one, I really recommend Berne Browns list of values!!
What’s that? Pls Explain!!
@@kaaviyaminumoorthi if you look it up, it’s pretty much a list of morals/valies of yourself that you want admissions officers to know. So, what I saw people do and what I’m doing now, is underlining the one that fit w m the most and that I want them to see about me, without mentioning them ofc
@@emmasophpi ohh kk
tysm!!!
How to write an essay as a renaissance person 😭😭😭plzzzz
I absolutely appreciate you and i love watching your videos , but there's a question i would love to get answered that how did u figured it out yourself was it natural that u wrote or do u know something only few poeple know ?
I wrote this at 2am while I was in bed. Late night thoughts
Hey, I just discovered you through a YT recommendation. Awesome video. You're also very attractive. Awesome! Hope we meet in irl one day 😎
Hi Elise! Really sorry if this is an intrusive request but would we be able to see some more monthly income transparency vids? The newest ones that you made went down recently!
hi! i removed them because I want my focus to be more on impacting others rather than personal income
@@ultimateivyleagueguide That makes a lot of sense I understand! Sorry again for the request :)
girl's a organic super computer lmao
Stats reveal pls 😭
tips on freshman year of high school??
do the very best in your classes, and try to take challenging ones if you can. if your school offers honors/advanced classes, take those! also join extracurriculars (sports, school clubs, some outside of school things like volunteering). overall just take school seriously but have fun too :)
don't take advice
the personal statement is blurry… so i can’t read it
What if somebody copies her personal statement??
Admissions will detect it
The personal statement is really blurry so I don't have the opportunity to see it like everyone else in the comments 😥
Screenshot and amplify
Why don’t you show use your common app🤦🏾♀️
stats
Buttt your personal statement is not visible clearly
use 720 resolution
w personal statement🤌🤌🤌🤌😭😭😭👏👏👏👏