your “what is essential to understanding you” essay was so helpful because i was thinking of writing about journaling as well and you executed that prompt beautifully
this is the best channel for application advice!! Thank you so so so so so much for all of these tips and helpful samples of your amazing work that got you spots to top schools!
Its the summer going into my junior year, and I've been watching so many videos on advice, day in the life, etc of USC. The one thing that worries and scares me the most is the essay portion because I feel like I won't really show my interesting side when writing and I don't wanna risk my chances of my dream school, but the way you wrote gave me so many ideas and ways to represent myself through my writing! LOVE YOUR VIDEO SO MUCH AND THANK YOU FOR MAKING ME EASE UP LOL
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Thank you so much for posting! I used a lot of the advice especially relating to the website and using its main mottos. Accepted to Spring, class of 2028!
Do you believe it’s necessary to address both of your main careers in the essay? I think yours were artistic and computer sci. For mine, I have architecture and poli sci so I’d have to find a way in relating them to each other?
just subscribed! :) i’m currently in the process of writing my essay and supplements as a transfer student for USC, and this definitely helped! ❤️ do you proofread essays? I would love to get someone else’s perspective once I’m done!
I did not get the merit based scholarship and I don't think the program affects your chances. I did do an separate interview process for the program though!
Dyllen Nellis Thank you! One more question: what is the major you get out of the Iovine and Young Program? I was looking into it but kind of got confused
I watch this video a couple of months ago and it definitely helped me with my application. I got news yesterday that I was accepted! USC 2024!!
YAY!!! Congrats, I'm so happy for you!
omg goals
congrats
CONGRATSSSSS
your “what is essential to understanding you” essay was so helpful because i was thinking of writing about journaling as well and you executed that prompt beautifully
thank you!
this is the best channel for application advice!! Thank you so so so so so much for all of these tips and helpful samples of your amazing work that got you spots to top schools!
Thank you SO much!! I'm really glad I can help :)
@@DyllenNellis 🙂🙂💛💛😊💛
Its the summer going into my junior year, and I've been watching so many videos on advice, day in the life, etc of USC. The one thing that worries and scares me the most is the essay portion because I feel like I won't really show my interesting side when writing and I don't wanna risk my chances of my dream school, but the way you wrote gave me so many ideas and ways to represent myself through my writing! LOVE YOUR VIDEO SO MUCH AND THANK YOU FOR MAKING ME EASE UP LOL
Oh yay that is so great to hear!! I'm so glad you were able to generate new ideas :) Wishing you luck!
OMG I’m so glad Interstellar is getting the recognition it deserves.
Haha I know right
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**UPDATE** I have since learned SO MUCH about how to write a PERFECT "Why Us" essay and I honestly don't believe the one that I share in this video is the best it could've been. BUT THIS IS HOW YOU CAN WRITE AN AMAZING WHY US ESSAY!!! ua-cam.com/video/1-cK3SqDOg0/v-deo.html
Im feeling really stupid rn
Everyone is smart in a way. You just need to find it :)
I applied for the USC scholarship deadline! Wishing everyone else luck!
Me too
Wish you luck! Hopefully you get accepted. :)
@@JustinSusan good luck to you as well!
Thank you so much for this video is literally is such a life saver. If I get into USC, it’s all bc of u
did u get in chile
Let's get it, Dyllen! You're killing it with these videos. Go trees!
Thank you Brandon!! Go trees ;)
Thank you very much for this useful information; best I found on UA-cam.
OMG ONENOTE & QUIZLET!!! 😍
Thank you so much for posting! I used a lot of the advice especially relating to the website and using its main mottos. Accepted to Spring, class of 2028!
Wooo!!!
You are so amazing! Thank you for posting so many tips and tricks on getting into IYA. could you possibly post your IYA proposal video?
Thanks and you’re welcome! I might, but my dad doesn’t really want me to. 😬 We’ll see
great essay
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Do you believe it’s necessary to address both of your main careers in the essay?
I think yours were artistic and computer sci. For mine, I have architecture and poli sci so I’d have to find a way in relating them to each other?
Hi.. was this essay as a first time applicant or a transfer student?
First time undergrad applicant!
just subscribed! :) i’m currently in the process of writing my essay and supplements as a transfer student for USC, and this definitely helped! ❤️ do you proofread essays? I would love to get someone else’s perspective once I’m done!
Aw thank you! I absolutely proofread essays! Email me at dyllennellisbusiness@gmail.com
Dyllen Nellis great thanks! I will!
@@DyllenNellisare you still able to proof read essays by chance? I would love your opinion and feedback tremendously!!
yes! visit nextgenadmit.com/editing@@gabbyramsay8198
I need to write everything like really formal
For example: I will
Or can i write I’ll?
It’s best if you write “I will” instead of “I’ll”, but if you need to shorten it for word count purposes it shouldn’t be too big of a problem
@@DyllenNellis thank you I love you 💕❤️
Did you get called back for a scholarship? Did applying to the Iovine Young Program affect your change of getting a merit based scholarship?
I did not get the merit based scholarship and I don't think the program affects your chances. I did do an separate interview process for the program though!
Dyllen Nellis Thank you! One more question: what is the major you get out of the Iovine and Young Program? I was looking into it but kind of got confused
@@anikamistry8263 It's a combination of arts, technology, and business!
Awesome video! Btw what's your major?
Thank you! So at Stanford I am majoring in Art Practice and minoring in Symbolic Systems (which is like CS)
Interstellar is the best movie of all time, don't argue with me
The first man?
I am gonna argue with you on that
6th best
haha you're so cute