Many years ago, Cybertron been the war, the story of the war between Autobots and Decepticons. The battle between Optimus Prime and Megatron. 2 brothers became swore enemies but let go back to the beginning. Optimus also was name Orion Pax he was a clerk in the whole record he had learned Cybertron past and the story of their creator Primus and created the primes for eons and Primus created the matrix of leader ships. Orion Pax learn the corruption so he became inspired words and ideas of a gladiator one who he worshipped Megatronus Prime, Megatron was name D-16. D-16 vows to challenge Cybertron leaders and demand all Cybertronian live as equals, so he turn a revolution and gather his followers, Starscream, Shockwave and Soundwave Orion Began corresponding with D-16 who began a mentor to him and until one day, Orion Pax and D-16 found out the truth of the primes die and lost the matrix until they found the truth. Sentinel the betrayer, D-16 was shatter by his own rage and suffering because of Sentinel betrayal, so in that day D-16 became Megatron and kill sentinel. Orion Pax try to help Megatron but Megatron betray Orion and he fell to the pit and so the Decepticons were born and began the war of Cybertron But Orion pax has travel to Primus core and the 13 Primes has chose him, they gave him the matrix of leadership and became Optimus Prime, The last Primes
This feels too similar to mine, but it's an okay attempt. I think you need a bit more flow between some scenes. And if you want to export in higher quality, you could use kdenlive (free editing software) if you have a PC.
Many years ago, Cybertron been the war, the story of the war between Autobots and Decepticons. The battle between Optimus Prime and Megatron. 2 brothers became swore enemies but let go back to the beginning.
Optimus also was name Orion Pax he was a clerk in the whole record he had learned Cybertron past and the story of their creator Primus and created the primes for eons and Primus created the matrix of leader ships. Orion Pax learn the corruption so he became inspired words and ideas of a gladiator one who he worshipped Megatronus Prime, Megatron was name D-16. D-16 vows to challenge Cybertron leaders and demand all Cybertronian live as equals, so he turn a revolution and gather his followers, Starscream, Shockwave and Soundwave
Orion Began corresponding with D-16 who began a mentor to him and until one day, Orion Pax and D-16 found out the truth of the primes die and lost the matrix until they found the truth.
Sentinel the betrayer, D-16 was shatter by his own rage and suffering because of Sentinel betrayal, so in that day D-16 became Megatron and kill sentinel.
Orion Pax try to help Megatron but Megatron betray Orion and he fell to the pit and so the Decepticons were born and began the war of Cybertron
But Orion pax has travel to Primus core and the 13 Primes has chose him, they gave him the matrix of leadership and became Optimus Prime, The last Primes
If transformers one had a sequel, this would have been useful.
If there is a sequel, this would be a perfect epilogue
This feels too similar to mine, but it's an okay attempt.
I think you need a bit more flow between some scenes. And if you want to export in higher quality, you could use kdenlive (free editing software) if you have a PC.
Thanks man, I’ll take it into account 👍