0:54 - describe how you have taken advantage of a significant educational opportunity or worked to overcome an educational barrier you have faced. 4:12 - describe challenges you've faced and steps you've taken to overcome 7:26 - think about academic subject that inspires you 10:25 - what have you done to make your school a better place
I had such a hard time finding your video again, but thank you!!! your more emotional essay helped me a lot on mine, and I honestly think it was one of the more important essays of the 4 I wrote to get me into UCI! Thank you so so so much
omg this makes me so happy to hear, thank you so much 🥺 and CONGRATS!!! that’s such a huge accomplishment, uci is an amazing school you’re gonna do great
These are really good essays and really brings out a lot of emotion in the reader/listener. Thanks for sharing! It was also really funny to see you being real and cringe on some cheesy parts of the essay, because, if we are being honest, there are parts of the essay where we write overdramtically and more cheesy than real life lol
this vid randomly popped up in my recommended even tho i'm done w apps but your essays were really good! also i realized we're mutuals on insta haha maybe i'll see you around once we get on campus :)
hey ur video was incredibly helpful!!! i have a question for the one that asks what academic subject inspires you. I wanted to talk ab how bio inspired me to also become a derm hehe but i’m majoring in anthropology. So do you think it would work??
i’m glad this was helpful for you!! and in all honesty, it was pretty hard for me to focus in class for a little while. i had to study the content outside of class more than i ever had to because i was very distracted in class. nonetheless, i still tried my best to keep pushing forward. a majority of my teachers were very accommodating and understanding of the situation. i am grateful that i had a great support system around me (family, friends, certain staff members at my school) and that definitely helped me move forward from what happened and got me back on my feet!
I’m literally crying in my room stressed but this helped me out so much! You’re an amazing writer!
lmao same girl
Same T_T
0:54 - describe how you have taken advantage of a significant educational opportunity or worked to overcome an educational barrier you have faced.
4:12 - describe challenges you've faced and steps you've taken to overcome
7:26 - think about academic subject that inspires you
10:25 - what have you done to make your school a better place
This is probably THE most helpful video in regards to college essay tips/ideas so far!
Thanks so much for sharing :)
Evelyn Pan wow your comment means so much to me 🥺 thank you!!!!! 🤍
You're a really great essay writer. I loved your essays so much and they inspired me! Thanks for sharing :)
Anshika Ojha you’re the sweetest!!! i’m happy you found them helpful
Cheesy?! Gurl they were so freakin good!! Thanks for the inspiration!! Those essays were phenomenal 👏🏾👏🏾❤️❤️
ur so sweet 🥺
your tip to just freewrite using the prompts is so helpful!! i had no idea how to start but this literally saves me. THANK YOU!!
I don't even know how I could write my essays close to how good yours are.
Right!
I had such a hard time finding your video again, but thank you!!! your more emotional essay helped me a lot on mine, and I honestly think it was one of the more important essays of the 4 I wrote to get me into UCI! Thank you so so so much
omg this makes me so happy to hear, thank you so much 🥺 and CONGRATS!!! that’s such a huge accomplishment, uci is an amazing school you’re gonna do great
These are really good essays and really brings out a lot of emotion in the reader/listener.
Thanks for sharing! It was also really funny to see you being real and cringe on some cheesy parts of the essay, because, if we are being honest, there are parts of the essay where we write overdramtically and more cheesy than real life lol
the paintings in the back go hard
thank you so much for this video! i'm going to start journaling to help me write these essays!!!
great video!!! :) and love your paintings/decorations in the back hahah
omg these were so genuine and personal (and your essays were beautifully crafted). thank you so much for sharing despite that!!
Thank u for posting this!!!
I like how humble you are thank you!!!
arieanne for president!!
thank you for this! this was super helpful this really helped me!!
your skin looks awesome queen😉
BESTIE, thank you so much for your reading you piqs! I was literally struggling:)
this vid randomly popped up in my recommended even tho i'm done w apps but your essays were really good! also i realized we're mutuals on insta haha maybe i'll see you around once we get on campus :)
omg yay!! hopefully next year 😔😔
i loveeee!
Your voice is sooo soothing
actually thanks a lot:)
I will try to make my messy life better
I LOVE UR MINION IN THE BACK HAHA
i call her mona minion LMAOOO
@@arieanne i love it omg and how funny is it that you respond when i'm literally writing UC essays hahaha
wow this video was actually so helpful. Thanks :)
you inspired me to start my essays thank you 💓
Can you make a pdf version so we can read it?
Right?!
omg we did the same prompts
This was super helpful! I was wondering what major did you pick for each uc school? :)
hey ur video was incredibly helpful!!! i have a question for the one that asks what academic subject inspires you. I wanted to talk ab how bio inspired me to also become a derm hehe but i’m majoring in anthropology. So do you think it would work??
I dont want say but starting lines are similar from my situation 😔
I was worried about my essays till i saw this video lol
The video was helpful! Just one question: How has the shooting affected your academic achievement?
i’m glad this was helpful for you!! and in all honesty, it was pretty hard for me to focus in class for a little while. i had to study the content outside of class more than i ever had to because i was very distracted in class. nonetheless, i still tried my best to keep pushing forward. a majority of my teachers were very accommodating and understanding of the situation. i am grateful that i had a great support system around me (family, friends, certain staff members at my school) and that definitely helped me move forward from what happened and got me back on my feet!
Thank you.
have you ever join the uc berleley streaker ...i come from hong kong
I love your top
american eagle!!
Did you put a title on your essays?
Do you have a personal email? I would like to ask questions
slayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
7:37
why do some of these sound fake like the shooting one
abc7.com/teen-detained-in-shooting-that-injured-1-at-palmdale-school/3459983/ does this news report sound fake too?
@@arieanne chill it wasn't a insult i thought you were making an example since how rare they happen
@@m3mhwa-ilikesoggycereal-665 it would'nt be wise to lie about such experiences because google exsits lol
that’s literally so insensitive. pls stfu
@@m3mhwa-ilikesoggycereal-665 do you live in america? they are not very rare here